Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

• The level of effort is clear and the premise of the piece is solid however the binary or sometimes complete lack of choice felt limiting for a text based medium.
• Documentation is a list - with sprawling narrative stuff like this tracking it via a flow chart or something more visual would help show where intersects occur or what choices knock on to the player further down the line etc. Game itself - very wordy with no audio support - like even just a background track or some royalty free "battle sounds" would add some ambience.