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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Demonstration of Technical Ability | #16 | 2.469 | 2.667 |
Overall | #19 | 2.469 | 2.667 |
General Visual Appeal | #19 | 2.469 | 2.667 |
Concept/Idea Realisation | #20 | 2.469 | 2.667 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- The technical work on the materials using emissive and creating animated rain particles is nice to see. If you are making environments with lots of text and 2D graphics like advertising, I'd recommend you look into graphic design to help make the graphics look authentic. You should work on your fundamental environment art techniques - work on small props, textures and materials and lighting scenes.
- The lighting work in this work is really really good - I especially loved your flyby video! It feels like a slice of a full game, awesome. There's some really nice verticality in this scene as well - it feels very satisfying to look at. Only thing I would consider is to add a touch more dirt and grime to your building - it's very clean! One of the things I'm impressed with is how warm the whole environment feels - it's welcoming and it's drawing me in. You've got great depth and the colours are great. Nice work!
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