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A jam submission

Slim Jim JimmysonView project page

Submitted by Kieran Mann — 2 days, 5 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concept Potential​#72.6672.667
Character Performance(s)​#73.0003.000
Resourcefulness#92.1672.167
Appeal / Visual Style​#92.3332.333
Overall#92.5422.542

Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • great film!
  • Very sleek design and concept, storyline was very clear. Lip sync was well animated. However the dialogue used seemed slight robotic, try to used more natural voices by changing the pitch.
  • Very stylised aesthetic to the project, simple bright colours along with single thin line weight. Great work on the lip sync, clean work that reads very well. Character animation was simple and linear mostly but with a clean execution. A nice touch was the use of inbetweens that added the motion blur feel. Some shots suffered from a use of lower resolution backgrounds that showed individual pixels. This felt detached from the clean lines of the characters. Could definitly see this used for educational purposes or childrens animated shows. Story was nice, and told very well. Good use of sound effects and good voice acting.
  • Nice idea, and a complete story. Simple characters nicely designed, a shame the backgrounds were a bit basic, and some had artefacting. Demonstrated decent lip sync, some nice character poses. Light blue leg swirls didn't show up clearly against a light blue sky. Nice to hear composed music.
  • A really nice finished project. Made me laugh and told the story well. Congratulations. All the best for your future in animation.

Student Username
Kieran Mann - m017166h

Portfolio Website
https://vimeo.com/kieranmann

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