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Bar Environment's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Overall | #1 | 4.533 | 4.533 |
Final Presentation | #1 | 4.667 | 4.667 |
Creative Development | #1 | 4.667 | 4.667 |
Technical / Workflow | #3 | 4.667 | 4.667 |
Project Documentation | #6 | 4.333 | 4.333 |
Research + Development | #6 | 4.333 | 4.333 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous.
- Hi Felix, great job on completing this neon bar environment! From the start the lighting is captivating and well balanced, the choice of props and materials gives enough character to the room to make it unique and different from the strong cyberpunk influence, telling a story that leaves you wanting to see more of this world. Reading through your project document I was happy to see references from other games that you enjoyed playing and see how quickly your blockout started to achieve the goals that you had set for your scene. All throughout the process you have shown interest in making this an opportunity to learn new techniques and developed a strong, compelling mood in the scene. Your “final thoughts” sum up very well the kind of feedback I would give for your next challenge or to refine your neon bar, especially using real-life reference and researching the environment in more depth would help solidify your visual storytelling (for example how neon-lights are built and how they light up with different intensities along the tube). Overall you are on the right track, keep going and keep making great art.
Challenge Tier
Rising Star
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