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A jam submission

The Architect - SfaS 2022 CharacterView game page

Character created for Search for a Star 2022 - World Builder
Submitted by Matthew Mallinson — 19 minutes, 6 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creative Development#134.0004.000
Technical / Workflow#362.5002.500
Overall#382.8002.800
Research + Development#413.0003.000
Project Documentation#432.5002.500
Final Presentation#552.0002.000

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Nice work! First of all I want to tell you that you've achieved the stylized look. I must commend the creativity of using certain tools to help you sort of generate a character, I found that to be quite interesting and perhaps something I will use in the future. The anatomy and feel of your character is solid and it works for what you intended to do. I would have wanted to see perhaps more work gone into texturing, if anything you could have at least colored the different pieces very easily in zbrush to enhance the look of your character. You have a very solid base for a character but it feels a little bit incomplete unfortunately. However the good news is that you have an appealing looking character that you can continue to work on and I'm sure you will. I would also suggest to put a bit more time and effort into researching what you're going to do and how you're going to present your character and documentation. I understand perhaps you were running out of time and I can tell you put a lot of work into the sculpting aspect of your project; and in that regard as far as I'm concerned you have succeeded! Keep up the good work and I would love to see a more finished product that will surely look great!

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Search For A Star

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