Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

• I enjoyed reading the text adventure and writing was good. Heres what I think that game would improve a lot, by a lot, lot more: Add vague colored background, that changes based on setting, location, etc. It would immense the reader a lot more. Add some royalty free background ambience noises, sounds or vague music. Would also add lot more to the immersion. Tailored UI would be just right, current one feels like a prototype.