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A jam submission

Hollie Whitehouse Search for a Star Games Animation SubmissionView project page

My submission for the Rising Star animation brief.
Submitted by holliewhitehouse — 1 hour, 28 minutes before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Research & development#53.6003.600
Presentation#63.4003.400
Creative#73.4003.400
Overall#103.2803.280
Technical#103.2003.200
Documentation#132.8002.800

Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • Overall some good animation here. It does get a little clunky in areas though, especially when the hands are placed on the floor...Maybe this is the IK/FK switching?

  • The animation cicles are good, have a good timing and are appealing,  but they are almost at blocking detail level.  The information provided is minimal but correct, with references,  drawings and  some planning.


    Personally I like the run cycle, it's at blocking detail but I think that matches the character's attitude. 

    When the character lifts the trunk over his head at the attack cycle, the extreme pose should be a bit more extreme , and the body should draw an arc from feet to top, also a longer pause  at this point might  improve the animation.  When he puts the trunk on his back there's no weight, I think this part needs more work.

Name
Hollie Whitehouse

Challenge tier

Search For A Star

Final Year & Masters students

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