-Good use of materials especially for areas such as the metal plateing – nice touch with the worn detail to the pants and gauntlet.

-Good color choice over all and value separations , perhaps  add a tertiary color  e.g. a cream or orange to help push contrast and reduce mudyness  This can be added through the lighting or on accents on the amour.

-Watch out for anatomical detail such as the size of the legs and waists. Increase the size will add more weight to the pice and give the character more ‘character’.