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A jam submission

character model stage 2 search for starView project page

Submitted by wilczysmok — 2 hours, 35 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creative#173.2664.000
Technical#172.8583.500
Presentation#222.4493.000
Overall#232.5313.100
Research & Development#262.0412.500
Documentation#272.0412.500

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

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  • Cool piece, i like the design and colour scheme. Posing and primary forms could use a little work, it's just a little bit stiff

  • beautiful sculpt through to finished character.  I would consider the particles being more 3d.  i wished the document was more substantial.  A superb character non the less!!!!! 

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Comments

Interesting piece over all, and good choice in concept, caught my eye!

-Good color and value separation translated from concept to 3d, especially in the cloths.

-Nice addition of particles and pose to add life to the character – base could be of a darker value as to not distract from the pice.

-Be careful with areas such as hair flow , hand scale and also face stiffness.

-It would be nice to see a tail to add more flow to the right hand side of the piece : )