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A jam submission

The Mitsubishi Bank Heist SuspectView project page

A heist character that I made for the 2019 Rising Star challenge.
Submitted by Ben_Smith99 — 1 hour, 20 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Documentation#183.0003.000
Research & Development#222.7502.750
Overall#242.5002.500
Presentation#252.2502.250
Technical#262.2502.250
Creative#272.2502.250

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

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  • Character is looking good! Considering a suit is a very difficult thing to make you have done quite a good job on it.

    I think the thing that could be improved on this character is the overall proportions and anatomy, as they feel a little off to me, which i think has had the knock on effect of making the suit a little too fitting.

    Materials are looking good, id maybe try adding a little more contrast in the roughness (more shiny latex gloves, same on the the tie to make it read as a different material and the nylon on bullet proof vests is usually slightly more shiny). Id also tile the weave on the suit a bit more as it looks a little big. 

    Great character work though, real big improvements over your first round entry!

  • nice uvs and texturing, but could use some work on anatomy.  A anaatomy figure is always a good buy in the future, but simply keep practising, you have all the nuts and bolts and doing well.  

Challenge Tier

Sumo Digital Rising Star

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