It's good as it is, but the scenario in chapter 2 feels kinda contrived imo. The game also isn't where the actual story should start so that also sucks. And another thing; being a whiny kid is just so boring. Like I get that I'm five, but I should have the opportunity to talk back to my mom or I don't know, try to beat her or something.
I mean, it's both dead at this point, and it really isn't that interesting to begin with in my opinion.
Man, the typos and missing words increase way too much after the prologue that it saps all the desire to play the game.
I didn't really read this one tbf. It's just that the writing style kinda put me off. No comment on whether the story is good or bad though.
I mean it's good, but my problem is that it both has too many POVs that ruin the element of mystery that the game tries to present for certain characters, and, this one bothering me a little less, nothing much happens in the story. As of now, at least (first two chapters)
Though the story is cool, each RO having their multiple POV sections genuinely ruins all the mystery about them, which becomes unbearable even while the story has only so little amount published for now
