Bell Mountain
I ran into two story issues, which forced some minor rewrites.
First, I wrote the same scene three times. Why did I write the same scene three times, you might ask? My brain is full of potato soup, and I forgot I wrote it three times. Ultimately, I collected the three versions and combined them.
Second, I found myself in a situation where two characters were performing the same action for the climax of the story. Typically, I would have merged their roles, but both these characters are crucial for the final action scene. This necessity not only forced me to rewrite their storylines but also to rework some of the story. I believe this rewrite significantly improves both characters' motivation for their actions at the end of the story.
Below is the raw render of the team assembled to save Laura.
I have updated the website with the progress for "Bell Mountain" (v.0.04a)
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August's UHD wallpaper is Laura Garnet from, "Bell Mountain."
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Until next month.
-Aaron
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