(Sorry English is not my first language, so I might phrase things a bit off here and there.)
I think the character art is really good already, to me it looks like it was hand drawn on paper, which I think looks pretty cool, and it gives the VN a unique look. I also like the different lighting colors for each character (Maxewell - red, Eddie - blue, etc.), it gives them a certain mood. The one thing I would say is that the character art clashes with the current background images. I think even raw, black and white sketches would be enough as backgrounds, it would blend much better, and the characters would stand out even more.
(I personally do not think detailed background images add much to a VN, and often it might do more "harm" than good.)
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(Sorry English is not my first language, so I might phrase things a bit off here and there.)
I think the character art is really good already, to me it looks like it was hand drawn on paper, which I think looks pretty cool, and it gives the VN a unique look. I also like the different lighting colors for each character (Maxewell - red, Eddie - blue, etc.), it gives them a certain mood. The one thing I would say is that the character art clashes with the current background images. I think even raw, black and white sketches would be enough as backgrounds, it would blend much better, and the characters would stand out even more.
(I personally do not think detailed background images add much to a VN, and often it might do more "harm" than good.)
I couldn鈥檛 agree more that鈥檚 why I鈥檒l be making my own backgrounds in the future!
Hmm I'm not really an expert/pro in this but you can try to redesign your character like make it better in 4K HD xD but you know what I mean
with facial changes like angry happy sad you know what I'm talking about?
oh yeah! They will definitely be more silly expression in the future!