My game isn't not perfect, the sprite is blur because i made a too big of a sprite and a background. If there any criticism to give any lists what you had an mind. On November 8th when i released it i didn't really understand or know much about renpy it was my first time creating a game. Hopefully if there more anything what i can do that be apricate and hopfully while to test it out remake it soon an a future or an short vn coming soon and other chapter's a secret form i be pretty much will do continue but first i have to take a break off with a story and try to learn coding. I'm not an 100% know about coding but just an artist. 

If you have some tips for me or advice what i can look it over that be very much appreciate again.

Honest criticism i can take it but an a harsh criticism i don't really take it i'm pretty sensitive but please just be honest with me and what do you think.