Hey!~ Hana-mo here-

I've been working on this for some time – designing characters, making lore, learning how to code, how to write, and how to improve my 3D renders as much as possible- I'll try to cover some of that in this post!

Media and Technical Improvements:

I learned about both Photoshop and Premiere Pro. Well, enough to at least be able to make the very basic things I needed for the media in this.

The lighting and rendering quality overall that you'll see in this update is probably the peak I can reach both with this software... And hardware. My graphics card is actually starting to briefly show black-and-white square artifacts from time to time around the screen because I took it too far lol! The screen froze a lot while using the studio too, it would seem like my PC is too old for this~

The pacing of the script:

I've tried to make as many poses/3D renders as I could, to improve the flow of the reading and make it easier for someone not interested to follow along, but a mistake I made in the past, is explaining things to me. What I mean by that is writing as if the reader knows everything I was talking about in the script first-hand. In this update, I tried to explain a lot. Maybe too much actually~ I'll work on refining these explanations, making them more accessible without sacrificing the depth of the narrative, as the pacing of the script gets hurt in some manner from it, so expect a patch to this version-

I have no idea of anything else in writing, but I do have experience making the background lore, and flowchart of what happens overall (What you would probably define as the overarching idea of a story, not how it happens but what) But you should notice a quality improvement of the dialogue itself too. Hopefully, my English got better as well!

That's the post!

Thanks to everyone reading~ When the update goes public, please do give some feedback- I like this part of the script and I want it to be comprehensible and fun to read~

There's a video at the end of the update too, be sure to watch it!  That's everything for today, have a good day! Hana-mo out~  ❤