Thank you so much for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed the update 😊
Irus has most of the players fighting over him and considering this was originally a story opposed to an IF idea, Irus was the main RO so he is the most fleshed out in the game 😅
I'm glad you're enjoying the romance! I love romance games, but there's never enough romance for my tastes so I was eager to include as much romance as I could 😅 You can expect smooches in almost every romantic interaction going forward.
Thank you again for your lovely comment and support 🌼💖 It really does put a smile on my face 😊
I adore how our MC found remnants of their family after so long. Its such a nice event considering the rampant themes of loss and abandonment in most adventure stories <3
I'm glad you thought so! I knew that I wanted the MC to get some happiness during their journey, especially considering the life they've led so far 😊 Thank you for playing and for your support! 💖
I really love this story. The character development ist great. The MC is very well built, I love the fact that we're able to play them as children. Not many IF I've encountered did that, which is a real treat :)
I really like the building trust between the MC and Irus. Can't wait for chapter 5 ! :)
am i doing something wrong? i can't put my custom name because there's nowhere to click to confirm. i end up having to choose the 4 given names. i'm on phone :(
When playing on mobile, you'll need to hit the enter button after typing in your character's name. You can also open the game on desktop mode in your browser and hit the enter button.
That's very weird 🤔 are you using the apk version or browser version? I haven't tested out the apk version properly so it might be an issue with that. But on the browser version, it should work because that's what I tested it on. If you are able to, I'd suggest using a pc/desktop to play and I'll try to figure out how to make a confirm button by the next update so the issue doesn't persist 😊
Thank you for playing and I'm so glad you liked it!
Crown wasn't mentioned because I left out a few scenes at the end of the chapter to keep with a monthly update schedule. He will be mentioned again in Chapter 5, but rest assured that he is quite safe and well. I'll likely go back to add in those scrapped scenes when I start edits 😊
The romance scenes are my favourite parts to write 😅 I'm so glad you're enjoying both of the guys' routes! Hopefully chapter 5 will come by early Feb if all goes to plan 😊 Thank you for playing!
Glad you're excited! Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the android version - it's my first time compiling a game into an apk file 😂 Do have fun and enjoy!
Thank you for playing 😊 And I'm super glad that you loved Irus! He's possibly my favourite out if the ROs if you can't already tell 😅 Thanks for supporting me! It means a lot to me 💖
this. i'm not even done yet with all of the chapters so far and i know it's amazing hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i have so much respect for you because i can't even make a good enough sentence with at least 15 words for my english homework. and if i do, it looks like an elementary kid did it
um spoilers below
and i don't really know how long this has to be
so i'll just put random sh lol
i have a folder dedicated to finding typos and weird english stuff for this game and i'm using a 2nd character for this
hee hee 🥰
and then it isn't long enough and this is just an annoyingly long comment
ok anyways
not my problem (well actually it is)
"Where are we going?" you ask, your voice small.
cirlces. CIRLCES??????? nah but it's ok i guess circles*
"I am not staying with this man," you declare.
well it's missing the pronoun/noun. could be "Mama says softly." or "she says softly."
"Alright, Mama," you agree.
not cirlce again 😭😭 encircle*
"What's is to you?" you snarl.
- choice - the result or whatever well.... technically you just said "What is is to you?" it*
"Bring the knives, [insert name]," Ahlf commands.
"...as to Ahlf was." what. it's missing a "who" as to who Ahlf was.*
stall man merchant
"It fits neatly into your palm, a small and detailed." 'a' should not be there. even grammarly agrees "It fits neatly into your palm, small and detailed."*
do you want to learn more about the Ancient Ones
"What say you?" wth happened here. i don't know if it's meant to be like that "What do you say?"*
yeah i wanna learn more
"You eyes the idols." a "You eye the idols."*
But instead of finding the worn book, you find a closed box
"...you reach out for the first folded, page." remove the comma after 'first folded' you reach out for the first folded page.*
"I was just watching from the cottage," you snap in anger.
"...and the look his gaze becomes hard." well it's missing an 'in' and the look in his gaze becomes hard.*
"I don't have to obey your every command," you hiss.
"...before he looks way." well it is certainly missing an 'a' before he looks away.*
anyways at this point my itch.io is breaking but it's okay since i'm done with everything i've found so far idk if some of them are intentional since.... maybe it's just ancient grammar or something. i mean, it is the 500s 🤷♀️ nOW MY LAPTOP IS BREAKING .
Thank you so much for playing and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Some of these errors were fixed, it's just not posted yet in the public demo 😊 It'll be posted with Chapter 4's update - there's quite a few new scenes added to Part One as well.
What a great read! You're really talented, author; the writing got me hooked the entire time, the characters and lore are so interesting and the romance part gave me butterflies 💞 hope to see more of this one, good luck with your work and thank you for letting us read something with so much quality for free💜
Thank you so much for your kind words and support! 💖😊 I'm so glad you enjoyed the game and my writing! It's hard to think anyone actually enjoys my ideas so it's really nice when players tell me they did. Thanks for playing!
Yup, it's unfortunately an issue that happens. When it does - you'll need to use the back arrow on the top left side of the side-bar in order to get back 😊
I'm really enjoying writing after a long time of not writing so it's been a blast 😆 if you're keen on more info on the game while you wait for the update, check out my Tumblr because there's tons of content there and information on the next RO 👀
Has work begun on Chapter 4? I'm very excited for what is coming next in the story! Keep up the great work, I'm sure I speak for most of us when I say I am at the edge of my seat in anticipation.
I'm currently working in Chapter 4 as we speak 😊 I have a Patreon with exclusive content and sneak peeks of Chapter 4 but you can also follow me on Tumblr for writing progress updates and other fun stuff 🙂
Please don't feel any pressure to become a Patron 😊 The public demo will still be updated with the same content, albeit a week later. I'm hoping for an end of the month update if not early January, so not too much longer 😅
Thank you so much for playing and for leaving a comment! I really appreciate your support 💖If you play your cards right, you can become Irus' consort down the line 😋
Now for my review this story is so well writing my goodness where would I even start without accidentally going on a rant in these here comments everything down to the dialogue and characters is just chef's kiss I simply couldn't help but go back and click other answers just so I could read what they said as you can imagine it took me over six hours of reading but it was all truly worth it and I can highly recommend this story to any fantasy, romancers and journey lovers out there trust me it'll be really good now I must end this comment since it's 5:20 am but I can't help but anxiously wait for the next chapter like my life depends on it because it does really depend on it anyways thank you author for writing this beautiful magnificent story so far you're doing great and I can't wait to see more in the future to come!
Thank you so much for taking time to write this wonderful review 😊💖 I'm so grateful that you played the game and appreciate your support!
It warms my heart to know that you enjoyed my writing and I'm in awe that you went to choose the different options given. Thank you again and know that your comment made my day! 💖💖💖
Everyone in favor of punching Virion in his slimy backstabbing arrogant dusty musty crusty face, say "I". In other news, Queen Elora is special and beautiful and perfect and I love her.
Wow. I didn't know why I hadn't encountered this one till now. I loved what you wrote, and the ROs are all likeable. I do have a few gripes, though... like the interaction between MCs and their family; it was short and abrupt and to the point. I mean, it's hard for me to care much for the mom and especially the dad when there's so little interaction between them.
I also feel like MC's background(from childhood to young adult) seems... lacklustre. Probably because of the dad being a barely active father. It does seem odd though... like the dad wants to be better, yet he was written differently. His behaviour doesn't make sense.
Other than that, everything else seems good. I went for the prince(highest romance points) but flirted with the captain guard whenever I could and noticed a jealousy scene(the outing to the food stalls). Do others also have these jealous scenes? I haven't played other routes hence the question.
Thank you so much for playing! I am currently revising Part 1 (prologue and chapters 1 - 3), so there is a few more scenes with the MC's father. The idea is that the MC's father doesn't know how to be a good father - the curt way he treats the MC is because he doesn't know how to show emotion.
The family scenes are short - because it's written this way. The parents aren't happy-go-lucky parents and Ahlf will never change his ways, regardless of how much he wants to. He's a stoic person and is bad at showing emotions. The scene with the mother is short because of plot reasons- she left the MC and that's the basis of the MC's memories of her. It's more to show that the MC has no choice on how everything happens especially with their parents. The new scenes should give a better read for childhood to teen years since it comes between them.
The others don't have jealousy scenes because it's still too early in the relationship 😊 Either way, Prince Irus is the most jealous and the others aren't really jealous, so there might not be much jealousy scenes with them.
I see. I loved family interactions a lot, and I was pleased to see that there are surviving members of MC's family that she could still interact with(the uncle, grandma, and cousin), hoping there would be more interactions between them. It's why I felt like there should be more interactions between MC and the father, IMO-- regardless of whether the player chose to be antagonistic or wanted the father to be a dad. I guess I could understand regarding the mother part having less interaction.
I could totally see the queen and the captain guard being the least jealous type, though(lol). It would be hard to write jealous scenes for them unless MC does something outrageous 😅
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter(and the revision)!
I keep liking it more whenever there's an update. It keeps getting better and make me to get excited for the next update. I keep choosing the queen and I don't know why. She's just so adorable for me. And the prince is more like a best friend type for me ^.^ I don't know maybe because It's too common to be coupled with someone who's the plot or something. Keep up the good work and stay healthy and happy!
Thank you so much for your kind words and I am so happy that you enjoyed the game! I truly appreciate your support 😊 Elora is quite fun to write and I'm happy to see that she's getting love from players. Thank you again for playing!
I have been thoroughly enjoying this story, I discovered it about a month ago and have been looking forward to this latest update. Your writing is amazing and the characters are remarkably well done. The decisions feel like they have real meaning. You are doing remarkable work and I look forward to update 4, it can't come soon enough!
Thank you so much for playing and for your kind words! 😊 I'm so happy to know that you're enjoying the game and the characters and can't wait to share the rest with you. Thank you ❤️️
I absolutely love the update! Thank youuuu. And Sir Oren is just so—AAAAAAH, imma fangirl really hard. Now I have to wait again. I'm gonna busy myself with school works until then T^T.... And perhaps reading those answered asks, too. They're really interesting
Thank you so much for playing and I am so glad you enjoyed the update! Sir Oren is an absolute sweetheart 😂 I'm hoping to start with Chapter 4 in late December (once I finish edits of part 1) so stay tuned 😉
I don't normally like fantasy as a genre, but this is quite well written. But the game somehow assumes the MC is a lot closer to the prince than they are when I play anything other than straight up hostile. The out of character moments are completely bringing me out of the game. I was playing a detached and reserved character who blames the prince for being part of the oppression and murder. But because I didn't choose anything overly emotional, the prince suddenly acts like they're besties once they arrive at Vinia. Which wouldn't be an issue; it'd be fun if he's being presumptuous. But the problem is that the MC acts like it's true. Hoping you'll look into this issue.
Hi, thank you for your comment! Unfortunately, as the game is quite character focussed, I spent most of it writing close reactions with Irus opposed to the hostile relationships. If your relationship is hostile (under 50), it will be coded in when I start edits 😊 So it's not an issue, rather that I didn't code in the necessary hostile reactions because of time constraints.
The dialogue options where it's a link-reveal (you click a link to reveal text) will always be treated as if you've asked them and gotten answers because it's really just a lore/info dump that is necessary for the plot but also can be skipped for replays. So if there's a link with 'End your questions' it means that it's assumed you've asked those questions. However, if this happens elsewhere, please let me know 🙂
i'm fond of all the characters, while i'm not entirely interested in romancing Oren or Irus (cos i'm very sapphic) i really liked them as friends and characters, i also am crushing hardcore on Elora so i'm excited to see where this goes ^_^
I'm really glad you enjoyed the characters and I'm really happy to know that Elora is getting some love 😊 I am also planning on a fourth female RO who will be introduced in Chapter 4, so stay tuned 👀 Thank you playing! 💖
Literally decided to just go to work late because I was so enraptured by the novel. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE!!!! thank you so much for this wonderful piece of work.
Well, as long as you didn't get into any trouble. Thank you again for your support! I really appreciate it 😊If you are interested in more about the game, do check out my Tumblr if you haven't already. It has a lot more information and fun facts about the characters and world lore.
So glad you liked it! I decided to redo the art style since the game's already nearing the end of Part 1. The new chapter will be put in a few more hours 😊
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THIS IS SO CUTE!!!! i love it so much, you are such a talented writer and i am literally Dying. it's so adorable and i love this IF soooo much
Thank you so much for playing and I'm so grateful for your support 🌼😊 Glad you're enjoying the game!
The update was truly wonderful! Currently, the plot is taking some intriguing turns.
Once again.... Irus, you have my entire heart 😮💨✨.
Dear author, You have such a gift for creating romantic scenes <3 and You have such a beautiful game cover, I must say.
I enjoy reading everything you write, and I admire your efforts!
Thank you so much for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed the update 😊
Irus has most of the players fighting over him and considering this was originally a story opposed to an IF idea, Irus was the main RO so he is the most fleshed out in the game 😅
I'm glad you're enjoying the romance! I love romance games, but there's never enough romance for my tastes so I was eager to include as much romance as I could 😅 You can expect smooches in almost every romantic interaction going forward.
Thank you again for your lovely comment and support 🌼💖 It really does put a smile on my face 😊
I adore how our MC found remnants of their family after so long. Its such a nice event considering the rampant themes of loss and abandonment in most adventure stories <3
I'm glad you thought so! I knew that I wanted the MC to get some happiness during their journey, especially considering the life they've led so far 😊 Thank you for playing and for your support! 💖
I really love this story. The character development ist great. The MC is very well built, I love the fact that we're able to play them as children. Not many IF I've encountered did that, which is a real treat :)
I really like the building trust between the MC and Irus. Can't wait for chapter 5 ! :)
Thank you so much for playing and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 💖😊
It's good to know that you liked the MC's childhood - it was a necessary part of the game, so it's good to know you enjoyed it.
Thank you for your support!
am i doing something wrong? i can't put my custom name because there's nowhere to click to confirm. i end up having to choose the 4 given names. i'm on phone :(
When playing on mobile, you'll need to hit the enter button after typing in your character's name. You can also open the game on desktop mode in your browser and hit the enter button.
Type your character's name first:
Then, hit enter:
i did! multiple times, even. but it just stays on that screen, nothing hapens :(
That's very weird 🤔 are you using the apk version or browser version? I haven't tested out the apk version properly so it might be an issue with that. But on the browser version, it should work because that's what I tested it on. If you are able to, I'd suggest using a pc/desktop to play and I'll try to figure out how to make a confirm button by the next update so the issue doesn't persist 😊
Yes I'm having this problem too on the browser version via my phone :( I guess I'll go with Aena :D
That's very strange because it works on my phone fine 🤔 I'll have to get a confirm button working
i have this problem on both apk and browser version.
I'll hopefully can get a confirm button for the next update so you won't have this problem 😊
Thank you very much for brightning up my whole week with this wonderful story.. Thank you so much lady..
Thank you for playing and I'm glad that the update could brighten your week 💖😊
I loved this! however, I noticed that (SPOILER) in escaping the barge, Crown wasn't mentioned? was he left behind or was it just accidentally omitted?
Thank you for playing and I'm so glad you liked it!
Crown wasn't mentioned because I left out a few scenes at the end of the chapter to keep with a monthly update schedule. He will be mentioned again in Chapter 5, but rest assured that he is quite safe and well. I'll likely go back to add in those scrapped scenes when I start edits 😊
Oh thank god i was so worried!!! ;-; My sweet baby Crown...
Don't worry, I never include any animal harm in my writing 😋 So Crown will get his happily ever after regardless of what happens.
Amazing! Love this one. Thanks for the chapter 💜
Thank you for playing and glad you enjoyed it! 😊
Omgg, i loved chapter 4!! I'm playing Irus's and Oren's route and i just can't- the romance!!--
*Faints*
I can't wait for the next update ^_^
The romance scenes are my favourite parts to write 😅 I'm so glad you're enjoying both of the guys' routes! Hopefully chapter 5 will come by early Feb if all goes to plan 😊 Thank you for playing!
I am inlove with this so far. Thank you for great writing. And lovable characters.
I'm so glad you're enjoying the game 💖 And thank you for playing!
Chapter 4!!! Thank you for the food!!! ;w; Irus my beloved... don't worry. My goblin of an MC refuses to abandon you! You're stuck with him now...
Never disappointed when theres an update. ^^ Can't wait for the next one!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed the update! 💖😊 Irus is honestly the best 👌 Thank you so much for playing and leaving a comment! It means so much to me 💖🌼
Oh..Queen Elora...*faint*
😆😆 Wait for chapter 5. More romance scenes ahead 😋
Oh yes!..*faint again*
😂
Dear Lord!!!! Chp 4 is here ✨
I can't wait to read it all now 🙊🤍
Tysm for the update and the android version, dear author! :)
Glad you're excited! Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the android version - it's my first time compiling a game into an apk file 😂 Do have fun and enjoy!
I am SO in love with Irus! I was instantly hooked into the story. I love your writing so much! Never lose your talent!!
Thank you for playing 😊 And I'm super glad that you loved Irus! He's possibly my favourite out if the ROs if you can't already tell 😅 Thanks for supporting me! It means a lot to me 💖
this. i'm not even done yet with all of the chapters so far and i know it's amazing hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i have so much respect for you because i can't even make a good enough sentence with at least 15 words for my english homework. and if i do, it looks like an elementary kid did it
um spoilers below
and i don't really know how long this has to be
so i'll just put random sh lol
i have a folder dedicated to finding typos and
weird
english stuff
for this game
and i'm using a 2nd character for this
hee hee 🥰
and then it isn't long enough and
this is just an annoyingly long
comment
ok anyways
not my problem (well actually it is)
"Where are we going?" you ask, your voice small.
circles*
"I am not staying with this man," you declare.
well it's missing the pronoun/noun. could be "Mama says softly." or "she says softly."
"Alright, Mama," you agree.
not cirlce again 😭😭
encircle*
"What's is to you?" you snarl.
well.... technically you just said "What is is to you?"
it*
"Bring the knives, [insert name]," Ahlf commands.
"...as to Ahlf was." what. it's missing a "who"
as to who Ahlf was.*
stall man merchant
"It fits neatly into your palm, a small and detailed." 'a' should not be there. even grammarly agrees
"It fits neatly into your palm, small and detailed."*
do you want to learn more about the Ancient Ones
"What say you?" wth happened here. i don't know if it's meant to be like that
"What do you say?"*
yeah i wanna learn more
"You eyes the idols." a
"You eye the idols."*
But instead of finding the worn book, you find a closed box
"...you reach out for the first folded, page." remove the comma after 'first folded'
you reach out for the first folded page.*
"I was just watching from the cottage," you snap in anger.
"...and the look his gaze becomes hard." well it's missing an 'in'
and the look in his gaze becomes hard.*
"I don't have to obey your every command," you hiss.
"...before he looks way." well it is certainly missing an 'a'
before he looks away.*
anyways at this point my itch.io is breaking but it's okay since i'm done with everything i've found so far
idk if some of them are intentional since.... maybe it's just ancient grammar or something. i mean, it is the 500s 🤷♀️
nOW MY LAPTOP IS BREAKING .
Thank you so much for playing and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Some of these errors were fixed, it's just not posted yet in the public demo 😊 It'll be posted with Chapter 4's update - there's quite a few new scenes added to Part One as well.
What a great read! You're really talented, author; the writing got me hooked the entire time, the characters and lore are so interesting and the romance part gave me butterflies 💞 hope to see more of this one, good luck with your work and thank you for letting us read something with so much quality for free💜
Thank you so much for your kind words and support! 💖😊 I'm so glad you enjoyed the game and my writing! It's hard to think anyone actually enjoys my ideas so it's really nice when players tell me they did. Thanks for playing!
I soft locked myself by clicking on multiple menus without closing them.
1-Click on Bio
2-Click on Relationships
3-Click on "Return", you will be returned to Bio.
4-Click on "Return", you will be "returned" to Relationships.
5-See step 3.
Yup, it's unfortunately an issue that happens. When it does - you'll need to use the back arrow on the top left side of the side-bar in order to get back 😊
gotta post again to just say that i check this for updates daily💀 your writing has me hooked asjoajw
Thank you so much for playing! 💖 Chapter 4 is currently being tested so if all goes to plan, the update will be live by next week for the public 😀
Thank YOU for working so hard to bring us all these updates so quickly!!! ;w; You're the best and amazing and please don't overwork yourself!!!
I'm really enjoying writing after a long time of not writing so it's been a blast 😆 if you're keen on more info on the game while you wait for the update, check out my Tumblr because there's tons of content there and information on the next RO 👀
omg not me doing the same thing
Soon 👀😋
Let me slap that smug smirk off the uncle face lol but I loved it nothing less keep up the good work 😸
Haha! Thank you for playing and glad you enjoyed it 😊
Your welcome can't wait for more of this game I'm already wandering about what next in there adavender 😸
Chapter 4 is done and will be tested soon so keep an eye out for an update 😊
Has work begun on Chapter 4? I'm very excited for what is coming next in the story! Keep up the great work, I'm sure I speak for most of us when I say I am at the edge of my seat in anticipation.
I'm currently working in Chapter 4 as we speak 😊 I have a Patreon with exclusive content and sneak peeks of Chapter 4 but you can also follow me on Tumblr for writing progress updates and other fun stuff 🙂
Thank you so much for playing!
I will be more than happy to become a patreon member. Just after christmas. Darn these holiday gifts cleaning me out haha.
Please don't feel any pressure to become a Patron 😊 The public demo will still be updated with the same content, albeit a week later. I'm hoping for an end of the month update if not early January, so not too much longer 😅
this is beautiful, the interaction with Ll is wholesome and I'm here for it. Keep it up!!<3
Thank you so much for playing 💖 I'm glad you're enjoying the character interactions! Your support means a lot 😊😊
i love the prince so much. maybe part of me want to be queen who has power over people that hate part of yourself so much.
Thank you so much for playing and for leaving a comment! I really appreciate your support 💖If you play your cards right, you can become Irus' consort down the line 😋
irus is my bro and I want to climb oren like a tree
Fun fact, Oren would let your MC do that 😂 Thank you for playing!
irus and elora my loves <3
not into interactive stories that much but i fell deeply in love with this one !! can't wait for more :)
Thank you so much for playing and I'm so glad to know that you enjoyed Crown of Exile!
irus my beloved <3
very good game ! can't wait for the following chapter
Irus is a fan fave 😂 Thank you so much for playing and taking the time to leave a comment. I really appreciate your support 💖
Virion you rat how dare you interrupt my smoocharoo with Irus I've never wanted to smack a old guy before but I sure do now😭💔
Now for my review this story is so well writing my goodness where would I even start without accidentally going on a rant in these here comments everything down to the dialogue and characters is just chef's kiss I simply couldn't help but go back and click other answers just so I could read what they said as you can imagine it took me over six hours of reading but it was all truly worth it and I can highly recommend this story to any fantasy, romancers and journey lovers out there trust me it'll be really good now I must end this comment since it's 5:20 am but I can't help but anxiously wait for the next chapter like my life depends on it because it does really depend on it anyways thank you author for writing this beautiful magnificent story so far you're doing great and I can't wait to see more in the future to come!
Thank you so much for taking time to write this wonderful review 😊💖 I'm so grateful that you played the game and appreciate your support!
It warms my heart to know that you enjoyed my writing and I'm in awe that you went to choose the different options given. Thank you again and know that your comment made my day! 💖💖💖
Ywww! I'm happy my comment made you happy :D
irus is a lil shit (affectionate) i adore him
gonna punch virion for being a cockblock too tbhGlad you liked him 😋 Virion is there to ruin moments for everyone 😅
This is simply wonderful, I fell in love. I can't wait for more.
Thank you so much 😊 I really appreciate you playing the game and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Everyone in favor of punching Virion in his slimy backstabbing arrogant dusty musty crusty face, say "I". In other news, Queen Elora is special and beautiful and perfect and I love her.
Virion does need a good punch 😂 And I'm glad you like Elora! Thank you for playing 💖
This is my favorite IF I've come across, ever. I love it so much!
Thank you so much! I'm so honoured that you consider it as your favourite 💖
Wow. I didn't know why I hadn't encountered this one till now. I loved what you wrote, and the ROs are all likeable. I do have a few gripes, though... like the interaction between MCs and their family; it was short and abrupt and to the point. I mean, it's hard for me to care much for the mom and especially the dad when there's so little interaction between them.
I also feel like MC's background(from childhood to young adult) seems... lacklustre. Probably because of the dad being a barely active father. It does seem odd though... like the dad wants to be better, yet he was written differently. His behaviour doesn't make sense.
Other than that, everything else seems good. I went for the prince(highest romance points) but flirted with the captain guard whenever I could and noticed a jealousy scene(the outing to the food stalls). Do others also have these jealous scenes? I haven't played other routes hence the question.
Thank you so much for playing! I am currently revising Part 1 (prologue and chapters 1 - 3), so there is a few more scenes with the MC's father. The idea is that the MC's father doesn't know how to be a good father - the curt way he treats the MC is because he doesn't know how to show emotion.
The family scenes are short - because it's written this way. The parents aren't happy-go-lucky parents and Ahlf will never change his ways, regardless of how much he wants to. He's a stoic person and is bad at showing emotions. The scene with the mother is short because of plot reasons- she left the MC and that's the basis of the MC's memories of her. It's more to show that the MC has no choice on how everything happens especially with their parents. The new scenes should give a better read for childhood to teen years since it comes between them.
The others don't have jealousy scenes because it's still too early in the relationship 😊 Either way, Prince Irus is the most jealous and the others aren't really jealous, so there might not be much jealousy scenes with them.
I see. I loved family interactions a lot, and I was pleased to see that there are surviving members of MC's family that she could still interact with(the uncle, grandma, and cousin), hoping there would be more interactions between them. It's why I felt like there should be more interactions between MC and the father, IMO-- regardless of whether the player chose to be antagonistic or wanted the father to be a dad. I guess I could understand regarding the mother part having less interaction.
I could totally see the queen and the captain guard being the least jealous type, though(lol). It would be hard to write jealous scenes for them unless MC does something outrageous 😅
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter(and the revision)!
I keep liking it more whenever there's an update. It keeps getting better and make me to get excited for the next update. I keep choosing the queen and I don't know why. She's just so adorable for me. And the prince is more like a best friend type for me ^.^ I don't know maybe because It's too common to be coupled with someone who's the plot or something. Keep up the good work and stay healthy and happy!
Thank you so much for your kind words and I am so happy that you enjoyed the game! I truly appreciate your support 😊 Elora is quite fun to write and I'm happy to see that she's getting love from players. Thank you again for playing!
And thank you for writing this IF! You gave us a wonderful one! Hope there would be a lots to come! Stay healthy and happy always! <3
I have been thoroughly enjoying this story, I discovered it about a month ago and have been looking forward to this latest update. Your writing is amazing and the characters are remarkably well done. The decisions feel like they have real meaning. You are doing remarkable work and I look forward to update 4, it can't come soon enough!
Thank you so much for playing and for your kind words! 😊 I'm so happy to know that you're enjoying the game and the characters and can't wait to share the rest with you. Thank you ❤️️
I absolutely love the update! Thank youuuu. And Sir Oren is just so—AAAAAAH, imma fangirl really hard. Now I have to wait again. I'm gonna busy myself with school works until then T^T.... And perhaps reading those answered asks, too. They're really interesting
Thank you so much for playing and I am so glad you enjoyed the update! Sir Oren is an absolute sweetheart 😂 I'm hoping to start with Chapter 4 in late December (once I finish edits of part 1) so stay tuned 😉
Asbsvdfghdhukshj chapter three did not dissapoint. I love irus and the teasing he does with a shy mc. i can't wait for the next update :))))
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it 😊 Irus and a shy MC are my favourite scenes to write. Thank you for playing 🌼
I don't normally like fantasy as a genre, but this is quite well written. But the game somehow assumes the MC is a lot closer to the prince than they are when I play anything other than straight up hostile. The out of character moments are completely bringing me out of the game. I was playing a detached and reserved character who blames the prince for being part of the oppression and murder. But because I didn't choose anything overly emotional, the prince suddenly acts like they're besties once they arrive at Vinia. Which wouldn't be an issue; it'd be fun if he's being presumptuous. But the problem is that the MC acts like it's true. Hoping you'll look into this issue.
Oh, also the issue of choosing not to ask questions and the game treating as if all questions were asked.
Hi, thank you for your comment! Unfortunately, as the game is quite character focussed, I spent most of it writing close reactions with Irus opposed to the hostile relationships. If your relationship is hostile (under 50), it will be coded in when I start edits 😊 So it's not an issue, rather that I didn't code in the necessary hostile reactions because of time constraints.
The dialogue options where it's a link-reveal (you click a link to reveal text) will always be treated as if you've asked them and gotten answers because it's really just a lore/info dump that is necessary for the plot but also can be skipped for replays. So if there's a link with 'End your questions' it means that it's assumed you've asked those questions. However, if this happens elsewhere, please let me know 🙂
i'm fond of all the characters, while i'm not entirely interested in romancing Oren or Irus (cos i'm very sapphic) i really liked them as friends and characters, i also am crushing hardcore on Elora so i'm excited to see where this goes ^_^
I'm really glad you enjoyed the characters and I'm really happy to know that Elora is getting some love 😊 I am also planning on a fourth female RO who will be introduced in Chapter 4, so stay tuned 👀 Thank you playing! 💖
Literally decided to just go to work late because I was so enraptured by the novel. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE!!!! thank you so much for this wonderful piece of work.
Thank you so much for playing and I am so glad you enjoyed it! 💖😊 I hope you didn't get too late for work! 😅
Heh, I was 10 minutes late, but it was so worth it. Thinking of this novel brought a smile to face every time during work.
Well, as long as you didn't get into any trouble. Thank you again for your support! I really appreciate it 😊If you are interested in more about the game, do check out my Tumblr if you haven't already. It has a lot more information and fun facts about the characters and world lore.
Just finished Chapter 3, it's soo good!! Can't wait to see what happens next :))
Thank you so much for playing and I'm so glad that you enjoyed Chapter Three! ❤️️
aGGHH just saw the pages new redesign, and it's really gooood! Can't wait for the upcoming chapter!
So glad you liked it! I decided to redo the art style since the game's already nearing the end of Part 1. The new chapter will be put in a few more hours 😊