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I just found an error in the vn that takes place on day 9. My character had the wet dream of John, but when he wakes up he talks about it saying it was one of Seth and then continues down the thought trail of liking Seth.

did you mess around with the special code entry by chance?

Not even sure how to. It didnt ask me to type anything yet other than the name.

I see. Then the problem seems to be that you got 5 points for Seth some how.

Opening it on Android prompts a "Tooth keeps stopping" error.

Did you retry downloading?

Several times. Same problem, unfortunately.

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then idk

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update and now it won't let me open the game and that I already deleted all the data so there would be no conflict help :'3

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redownload it again idk too little info

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There seems to be an issue with the android version. I did the download and installation process correctly as usual but once I opened the game from my home screen, it boots up and immediately closes and this error message pops up.

Two of the routes overlapped and it caused me to miss some of the bear route so kind of messed up for me

can you explain more please ? 

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The 11th overlapped with Seth and the 12th went back to John(I restarted everything and it seems fine now if you get any questions just let me know I’ll try my best to answer them)

what options did you choose on the first day?

sure and the seth

assuming you didn't pick yes for the teacher?

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Damn, there hasn't been an update lately. That's not cash money

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haha yeah coming soon

Rad.

poug chammpers

Secret codes?

"bonus" and "Love"

Dont remember if I updated bonus yet but love will come next update :)

O jogo na versão Android não está funcionando

De que forma

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EI58CIZPpU_6KJLjyq5SQWe_4hRKLqPG/view?usp=drivesdk

que?

eu baixei e instalei o jogo mais quando eu apertei ele o jogo não abriu e isso aparece

I downloaded the Android version and this same thing was happening to me.

Não sei por quê?

Seth rulez :)

Glad you like him :)

Gostei muito do jogo arte bem feita espero que continue^^

Fico feliz que você goste e espero que eu possa continuar a fazer valer a pena selvagem

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hello i wanted to say that your vn is very interesting but i personally think that there is not enough save slot and it would be nicer to have transitions between each scene change

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Thank you, glad you like it. Might add some more save slots. Didn't think about not re-writing save files since I usually use one slot per route lol. What do you mean by scene transitions tho?

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Well, for example, when our character leaves the house or goes to another room, instead of having a fade to black (or other transition effect) we have a direct image of the following scene, as if we were watching a slideshow

Yeah. That's cauz the transitions would be too slow. They'd get annoying after a while. A transition would take an extra second oppose to the millisecond it takes to click to the next image. Which doesn't sound like much, but theirs about 100 scene changes in a day 

Also update on that save thing, added more slots. Or well pages. 8 pages of 8 slots so now 64 save slots. 

I understand what you mean but personally I find it odd not to have a transition between each scene. But hey, I respect your choice and it's already cool that you're going to add save slots.

Is it just me or is there an entire scene missing between the player and Andrew? On day 8 it is referenced that you went to his house and played games? But that never happened? Also he tells you he is gay? Also something that doesn't happen?

Yeah. On Saterday, after the tennis match, you go to a pizza place. Named God's Pizza or something. There you meet Andrew's gay friend, Ryan, who outs him and embarrasses him infront of player. He confirms his sexuality by asking you if you're comfortable with him being gay. Then you go home and play MineCraft (MyShaft). So, it wouldn't be that a scene was missing. That'd mean an entire day was missing. What was Saturday like for you then?

I just did a quick play through. The scene is there. So, I don't know what happened. Also I found a bug on sunday night beware lol

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geez this vn has come so far. I need more big bear

Hehehe. Mm yeah it has. I hope it'll go further. Can never get enough of big bear!!

Help.... I'm severely in love with Seth  ಥ‿ಥ

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Hehe aww, good. We all need a demon daddy heh

Question: does Jake's route involve a lot of drug use, or is it a bit different? I'm curious into going through his route, but I want to know a bit first.

spoiler : depends on what you mean. He grows/sells weed 247 but doesnt really "use" it. Y'know, the whole "never smoke your own supply" whole thing. He cares about money more then getting high.

 I'm sure there will be a scene or two of Jake and pn smoking though

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I hope things get better for you, Blu3. I am really enjoying this VN and the different routes. I am also looking forward to graduation and the MC's possible magical potential.

You are talented. I don't know how to code, and admire those who can - I've even pondered about writing a script and creating sprites and CG art, then commissioning someone on itch.io to help me assemble it.

it is a bit. I'm getting there. And thanks. If people like it then it means that it's all worth it in the end.

I don't know either. That's why I use renpy, it's basically just English. Assembling it is the easiest part. And you should if you're really thinking about it. In the beginning it may be hard but as you go on it becomes more and more easier. So long as you plan everything out from the beggining, you'll be good

Thank you! I am seriously considering it as one of my goals for 2022. How are you feeling lately?

You should. And if you ever decide to, come over to the discord and I'll give you tips n shit. But good enough, you?

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You too^^

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Christ don't quit! Your vn is good in its own way. Those f ers who posted hate comments don't have a life and don't know anything. You're doing a great job. Just ignore them and like bullies they'll get tired

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Awee thanks. I wouldn't ever quit. That'd be throwing away all the effort and time I spent on it. I know it'll be worth it when I can finally teach people with it. And yeah why it'd be easy to dismiss them like that, the problem is that they're not 100 percent wrong. I'm not going to let them get to me anymore. But yeah. Thank you, and I hope you're doing okay.

should it work that way?

[code]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "game/Day 10.rpy", line 1982, in script

    if puma_points >= 5:

SyntaxError: invalid syntax (Day 10.rpy, line 1986)

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "game/Day 10.rpy", line 1982, in script

    if puma_points >= 5:

  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1852, in execute

    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):

  File "renpy/python.py", line 2247, in py_eval

    code = py_compile(code, 'eval')

  File "renpy/python.py", line 835, in py_compile

    raise e

SyntaxError: invalid syntax (Day 10.rpy, line 1986)

Windows-10-10.0.19041

Ren'Py 7.4.4.1439

Tooth 20.00

Sun Nov 21 23:42:20 2021

[/code]

No it shouldn't. Thank you for submiting this to me. I'll get it fixed soon

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I can't say I know what's been going on since I just discovered this vn but I absolutely love it, screw those hate comments

Thank you. So long as you like it, it means it wasn't all for nothing.

theres only one page to save...? oh no

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He's more top if you don't have dom unlocked (if you killed the 3 bullies or not). But he doesn't have any characters of a top

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I can't explain why (Without spoiling it) but not really. Andrew needs someone to save him and show him what to do.

the game is lagging a lot to me

Don't know how that's even possible, in the menus or actual game?

I already solved the problem, I restarted the game and the lag stopped

okay^

I just finish the latest build, the story is very interesting and I love this VN!❤ 

Goodness! Seth is my favorite, I want to cuddle him more!!

Thanks for your hardwork, I'm looking forward for the next update.. XD

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Heh thanks, Glad you like it so far. And thank you for playing

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Alot of people complaining about not being able to access the route and blaming the dev. I have currenly completed 4 out of 5 of the routes with no issues what so ever. The problem isn't the dev, the problem is from the people complaining who don't seem to understand how this route system works. 

In order to access each invidual route, you have to focus only on the characters whose route you want to do. 

You want to do the lion's route? Simply just pick every option that involves him and decline everyone else. It's not rocket science. So stop blaming the dev and accusing him of being a piece of shit when you are the reason you can't access the routes.

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Thank you haha. It's not that big of a deal. But yeah. The route pathing is decided on Monday. If you choose to stay with Owen in class then you get put on his route. If not, then you choose a route at the gym class where you pick a partner for dodgeball. Thank you though, I don't remember if I mentioned it^^ 

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Good stories 😍 especially Seth i love his story the most. And i can see some of the word are writing it wrong like vanilla you write vinilla (in the ice-cream select section at day 8 i think) love ur game and waiting for more 🥰 

I see. Thank you

Just finished playing this VN and I LOVE IT. Owen is the best, this is fact!but a have a small problem with the dream sequence! I was enjoying the slow pace of the owen route and the dream sequence kinda felt out of place in my opinion. I ended up ignoring it because i really like the slow progression you get with the interactions that happen with owen and the dream made it weird kinda like it was forced!

But then again this just  my opinion, i really enjoyed this VN and i hope the updates keep coming.

Thanks glad you like it. The dream scene isn't involved in the pace at all so Idk what you mean. And Owen's route isn't slow. Since they've already been friends for a few years, it's a lot faster then the rest. As for it happening too soon, a week is plenty of time to a sexual intrest. Most  people have same day sex-dreams about people they meet. You play as a teenager, so, horny times are bound to happen a lot too

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I really enjoyed the story😆💙💙 and loved this visual novel🥰. Thank you for your hard work and excited for the next updates❤️🏃🏽‍♂️🏃🏽‍♂️

Heh. Glad you like it so far, they'll be here soon I think

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Hm. I'm not sure if this is a bug or I just missed something, but I thought I was supposed to have breakfast with Andrew and that never happened? I don't recall even being given an option to do so or skip it. It just... didn't happen, and it's been multiple days since then.

Also, I don't really even know if I'm on a route or not. It feels like I'm simultaneously on Seth route and Owen route, but I could just not be on a route at all, or I could be on Owen route with Seth just being the major character that he is. Is there a way to tell which route I'm on? Would it be obvious?

What did you pick on first day? And what day does Andrew talk about having breakfast?

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I don't know? I don't think I have any saves from back then. I could try to restart and figure it out.

I do know that whatever path I'm on ends on Day 8, and it's a dream sequence with Owen. Which makes very little sense to me, since that implies I'm on Owen's path, but your update notes imply there's supposedly a Day 9 for Owen.

EDIT: I restarted and there aren't any choices on Day 1? I don't really know what you're asking there. Andrew asks about breakfast on Day 2, scheduled for Day 3.

There is no day 9 yet, I'm working on that right now. In day 1 there is the choice to stay with Owen after class. Then later the choice to choose someone to play dodge ball with

Checked with the breakfast, its there but short. Since they don't talk much.

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That's... most definitely not Day 1. That's Day 2. Do I have an old version somehow? I *just* downloaded it a few days ago.

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Yeah I know. I said "first day" meaning like the first actual day. I don't really count day 1 as the first since nothing really happens. Sorry. But yes what did you pick and it is the newest version

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hi :3

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hi 

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YES, I'm the Frist one here! can't wait to play

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Wdym?

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I was the first one to comment about the update that day

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I see

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Put Seth inside me, I need moar of Seth route. Seth appreciation, Seth simping. Seth and Zero nsfw

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working on his sex scene rn bud ;)

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Thanks and I'm glad you like it

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Hehe yeah glad you like it, the world isnt that elaborate but thanks. We all dwiddled into chaos magik it seems lol. Yeah hopefully it'll come soon, finsishing the 2nd to last sex scene rn

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One bad gloop and she do what I yoinky

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mow

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Dev is a piece of shit, who only likes to trash talk and degrade everyone, yet can't take the heat himself.  A real fucking coward with no balls.

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I hope you can learn how to become a more decent person. What you are displaying here doesn't make you appear mature nor smart.

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im not trying to display either dumbass

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cope harder

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Hadn't had any contact with him before, but yeah, now I see it. I attempt to give him the benefit of the doubt and he assumes I'm an idiot because I imply I may possibly have made a mistake, when I know full well that the only mistake was his terrible coding ability.

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Heres a walkthrough

The discord is invalid can someone send me a new link... Please and Thank you!

https://discord.gg/Qb2XE8r3

Are there any NSFW?

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yes.

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how we are hide GUI, I want to see full kinky scene. My android have nothing to do that.

Is there bottom?

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No clue how to hide it on Android. Do you mean will there be a bottom scene? If so, then yes. This scene is just a dream scene. Offical scene will have top and bottom

thank for about bottom scene, I just want hide UI but if no clue then lol

Please make gallery that has scene and photo, it should allow full scene appear.

can I get a discord inv, the inv on here isn't working

https://discord.gg/2PzyqFtF

thanks

wtf it won't allow me to join :<

are you not forte.exe?

hmm?

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This game is keep getting better and better am happy you still making it good luck 💙

And I gotta say Owen new spirit look amazing we love a daddy 🤤

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Hehehehe yes ty I'm glad you like him. He a big fat bear and he loves hugs tehe

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Hope he like more than just hugs

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Heh UwU who knows? You'll find out soon 

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Can't wait 😭😭 he is my MC in the story 😂 best character

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Heheheh facts tho, me too

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Awesome nice all the charaters have updated sprites and I love every single one of them keep up the swell work dude and as alwasy stay determined dude 

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Thanks man I'm glad they're getting better, and I hope yer having a good day

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Yeah they are getting cooler and cooler as well! Also I am having a good day so far

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Hehe thank you and I hope so, heh good thats good glad to hear it

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Yeah no problem Blue looking forward to playing your VN on Youtube 

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Ohhhh heyyy lol. Yeah me too can't wait for that

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