That Marrow beatdown was something I needed personally. I sincerely appreciate the words pummelled over me. It will help me a lot. Cheers to this fun story!
(Note: %s must be caught in a string. I'm sure others have pointed out that text error)
honestly some times ago when there was just the first day I was like "yeah this vn is ok nothing exceptional but ok" though the start is a lil slow but when it comes to the fighting ring part and forward character starts to be really seen in every aspect and I was like screaming and gasping or laughing for all the time this is a wonderful work at the moment I'm writing this is my favorite vn
im not sure but maybe the fact is that he act a bit like an authoritary mom so I can understand why he is not really fine with him... or maybe there is more to be told?
Why i have the sense that the Polar bear will be an Antagonist And/or that Marrow will die sometime? I think that that could be a 'boom' to Artemi and Cole Development
honestly i think you are wrong i found her really nice and I don't think people dislike her at all
anyway the trio is perfect because they are a trio it's all so good because anyone does "his part" i think it's kinda stupid to underrate anyone of the protagonist it would means the other too are bad or this is what I think at least
I know romance isn't the main focus of the game, but I was still wondering if there will be multiple romantic endings for Cole? (please..) - a colexclyde shipper
I agree and hope there is too and I def ship cole and clyde as the pairing tho I'd be happy with more story too. Shirokoi is def an amazing artist but his writing is what keeps me hooked its kinda a shame he's not just an author on fictionpress or anything he's super talented.
Every. Single. Update. I swear every single update you manage to captivate me and make me laugh out loud with your amazing writing style. that in combination with the music,the good placed sounds and the fine art makes these one of my favorit Visual novels of all time. And Malus is a great addition to the story.
Hello! Sorry for the delay, but I got sick and was bedridden for a week, so I need some time to catch up on some work before the update is ready for release. Sorry for the inconvenience! ;w;/
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That Marrow beatdown was something I needed personally. I sincerely appreciate the words pummelled over me. It will help me a lot. Cheers to this fun story!
(Note: %s must be caught in a string. I'm sure others have pointed out that text error)
Does anyone know when there is gonna be a new update?
Shiro just recently switched his focus back to Repeat his other Visual Novel for about 6 months.
Wait really??? Omg I've been waiting for so long;-;
Yeah his schedule for his Builds are Repeat for half a year then Temptations ballad for the other half
Ohh, didn't know! Thank you!
I was unable to update my game with the Dropbox APK file (android) from patreon. It just won't open after I've downloaded it. Anyone else?
It's not an issue with trusting unknown Sources I've already turned that off.
I can translate your game into Spanish, if you wish.
Found a bug! Chapter 2, Sidd talking to his mom.
Uhhhh is this a bug or is he cryptically triggered-
Lol I saw that too.
Sidd is secretly a robot. Explains how his parents are birds. They must have built him.. out of cheese.
Hahahah indeed
honestly some times ago when there was just the first day I was like "yeah this vn is ok nothing exceptional but ok" though the start is a lil slow but when it comes to the fighting ring part and forward character starts to be really seen in every aspect and I was like screaming and gasping or laughing for all the time this is a wonderful work at the moment I'm writing this is my favorite vn
Did I miss some dialogue? Why is Cole always at Hamish's throat? Great work guys gj!
im not sure but maybe the fact is that he act a bit like an authoritary mom so I can understand why he is not really fine with him... or maybe there is more to be told?
I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship turns out
birb mom is best mom.
and Yeen dads are good dads.
nuff said.
^this, all of this
Wait wait wait sooo we have to wait two months for an update thats just rude and playing with my emotions😶😱😱😱😭
Jeez, have some patience.
i agree and at the same time agree with the other one too omg it's all too great
Bro I wanna see more Cole a Clyde like wut haopend between them, but I slowly want to know when the next update is
Awww, I love Hamish so much! I hope Cole gives him a break.
omfg i am losing my shit with sidd and his mom talk XD
Thank you so much shiro <3
I don't think this is supposed to happen.
Yes. I have the same thing.
sidd's gay panic is so great it broke the fourth wall
Homeboy's gay freakout is so powerful that it broke the VN's coding
as i said in another comment i honestly find it pretty fitting even if it's a mistake I would prefer it this way
Oh I was late with the screenshot lol.
Honestly even though it wasn't supposed to happen it still worked.
That's usually how I react lol
wait is prince cassius the same cassius as in adastra
Why i have the sense that the Polar bear will be an Antagonist And/or that Marrow will die sometime? I think that that could be a 'boom' to Artemi and Cole Development
nOnnononono if shiro fucking hurts marrow im gonna cry so hard
this is a threat
>w> ño
i'll join in with this threat
oof pls noooooooooooooooodon't do thaaaaaaat it will be a boom to my development too XD
Ok is it just me or does anyone else think Artemi is the most underrated character of the story so far. She do be an absolute beast
We don't underrate her she's the best
honestly i think you are wrong i found her really nice and I don't think people dislike her at all
anyway the trio is perfect because they are a trio it's all so good because anyone does "his part" i think it's kinda stupid to underrate anyone of the protagonist it would means the other too are bad or this is what I think at least
any news?
If I become a Patreon, will I get the updates to this game earlier?
Yes
I know romance isn't the main focus of the game, but I was still wondering if there will be multiple romantic endings for Cole? (please..)
- a colexclyde shipper
I agree and hope there is too and I def ship cole and clyde as the pairing tho I'd be happy with more story too. Shirokoi is def an amazing artist but his writing is what keeps me hooked its kinda a shame he's not just an author on fictionpress or anything he's super talented.
i don't see lot's of choices maybe it's a linear story (an amazing one)
Every. Single. Update.
I swear every single update you manage to captivate me and make me laugh out loud with your amazing writing style. that in combination with the music,the good placed sounds and the fine art makes these one of my favorit Visual novels of all time. And Malus is a great addition to the story.
YES FOR REAL MAN i even went around the page to write comment come on!
the things marrow says make my heart melt! Beautifully written
Thank you for your great work! Greetings from Russia!
The writing is super well done. I don't really care for the art style but Cole really grew on me!
Once I realized how much influence 5e had on this, I really had fun contextualizing it like that.
I simply adore Malus~
I love this VN so far but I'm confused about one thing, is Cole's mom dead or missing?
Dos anyone even talk about his mom in this state of the game?
Dosen't his father like men? If so I would assume that's why his mother is not in the picture.
Yes, but she must exist, or have existed at least.
Even Sidd has a memento of his birth mother.
LOL I was a sweet summer child.... 😅
TBH I just assumed she was dead
Maybe dead? I'm theorizing she might be the reason Marrow doesn't like magic.
Hello I love this VN but when I download the update it tells me that app not installed. I'm not sure what wrong.
it happened to me too... I considered uninstall the old version but that means i have to start a new game..
Yea it still doesn't work does it with you?
It works now but i uninstalled last version and lost all process but it's cool, i can replay it
ahh alright ill try it thanks
Cole new friend is so cute
This is just so cute and the characters are really good too. I will be looking forward for some more.
there is a dialogue hide function if you are on pc or mac, just hit the 'h' key :)
That's sad.....
What date is the next update?
Hello! Sorry for the delay, but I got sick and was bedridden for a week, so I need some time to catch up on some work before the update is ready for release. Sorry for the inconvenience! ;w;/
Then I guess the update will be moved temporarily to December 25th?
Hope you're feeling better! Take as long as you need, we're loving what you're making!
What kind of frogs are they, dear? Bro I died XD
When will the next update be? I'm so excited and, mark my words, I WILL be the first to read it once it updates.
Is that KSP music in the fighting arena?
I thought I was the only one who noticedXD
I love this~! I feel bad for Artemis, I hope she gets better outcomes in the future chapters~
And~ I look forward to future updates~!
I know that Bishop Kat is a mother and all but I would gladly bitch slap her that even the creator will say "daaammmn." To the impact.
SAME HEREXD!!!