Hello there Drakes sorry for my bad inglish, I loved your vn and I love Gran, he is a great company and his personality is very nice, and he is cute xd.
I'm liking the story and I'm really enjoying reading it and thanks for correcting the lyrics for the android version, now it's much easier to read, by the way the girl is worth gold, the end left me: what did I do now to be you now hmm... spoiler sorry, and for him To top it off, I'm going to cut it here and bingo xd, I hope you continue with this, I'll be waiting for the next update.
Don't worry about your English bud, I can understand it just fine. It's the thought that matters right? Glad that you enjoyed reading through the VN and that I was able to help you!
I love it! Your art is cool, and about nsfw I want this vn to have it. That would be nice! and..I want it to have gallery in the main menu so I can watch them anytime. >:D
I already spellchecked as much as I could, although some might have slipped the crack. Could you list me the ones that you've spotted if you can? It'd be a great help. (This novel is written in UK English so there are a couple of spelling differences.)
Well, I don't exactly have a fixed schedule although my aim is to at least upload an update every month. More than that really depends on my mood and time ^^.
First of all, when Dave is bringing breakfast there is an error that almost made me choke, lmao, there's like a " Happy dave image not found " that just flies up and down on the left side of the screen, it's silly but it was so funny idk why. Next, when the MC said " A serious and gentle dragon " I WAS LIKE " INDEEEEED " and he's so cute cleaning i want to help him moooooore, and i would very much appreciate nsfw, the backgrounds ? Beautiful !! The animations ? Purrrrfect !! Kinda sad about the ending of the update though, I'M TOO YOUNG, I DIDN'T EVEN GOT TO CHOOSE DAVE'S ROUTE DIRECTLY ; -;, *cough cough* Tell him... I liked the eggons.... Aaaaaanyway, wonderful update, bravo, will be waiting for more and more.
AND ONE DAY, IT MAY NOT BE TODAY, MAY NOT BE TOMORROW, BUT ONE DAY MY GREEN ORB WILL SHINE.
Keep up the amazing work <3
Oh, of course, the new characters are just nhaaa, like, i want to hug every single one of them, sally is cute, Norman is, he he, Norman, and Jacob & Steve what a cute couple. My god this is taking long, but for a good reason, it was a good update after all u.u, now i have to farm coins in fall guys CAUSE I NEED THAT DRAGON SKIN.
Really good work so far, can't wait to see what's next! And honestly, your English is really good for it being (what I presume is) your 2nd language, kudos to you :). Just some really minor things here and there, If you ever make a typo sheet I would love to help by submitting the errors I find there.
Well looks like you're in luck, I've just released a new update ^^. English is my second language and I'll consider creating a typo sheet if it would help everyone be able to enjoy the VN more.
I really love it so far! You've got absolutely the perfect pacing without the two-hour information dump that other games have. I'm always eager to see what's next.
I really like this game! The dialogue is charming, the assets all look great and Gran is the cutest! I'm looking forward to the next update!
(Just a heads up, when selecting Gran's meal and deciding to pick something else instead, I first got an error message when picking eggs and bacon. I was able to pick pancakes instead, but then when I got the order it was what Gran had and not pancakes.)
That's strange... Mine seems to be working just fine. Would you mind telling me which version were you playing it on? (PC, android or Mac) and if you could also attach a picture of the error.
I was playing PC 1.0.1! I'll go ahead and get a screenshot of the error message, although I don't know if that error is related to the other bug since I selected rollback instead of ignore.
This is the bug in question I tried it again and when I selected pancakes I still got Gran's order. I went back and picked the pancakes to begin with and that caused no issue, it seems to be just when selecting Gran's order first.
Ah! I see where it went wrong now. Looks like I miss-typed one of the variable by accident... Thanks for pointing out! It should be fixed in the next update! (Which is soon ;))
Thank you for your time, cheers and have a great day!
I have a question for the author, can you tell us about the orb, because so far we only know that it is and nothing else? Also I can't wait for the new update. Last one was awesome.
The orb's use will be revealed more later on. For the time being, it'll only affect the player's name colour. All I can say that it might play a bigger role later down the story. (If things are going according to plan ^^')
Ooh, this game is intriguing and it's very enticing but. I do have to ask, is there / will there be a Dave route ?. I sure hope so but i wont be surprised if not...
Yes, there will be a Dave route. (And more others! ;)). Gran is like the main mascot of the VN but right now, the MC isn't exactly on any route specifically, just 'testing the water' so to say. Later on, the player gets to decide who they'd like to spend more time with (Atleast that's what I have in my head.). I'd say more, but I don't want to spoil the story out just yet.
First of all. Wow that was a quick reply.......and second, Thanks for the imput and i'm thrilled with the answer ,you've done a great job so far. I'm sure this project will go far. So much appreciated and, until next time.
This is an amazing VN! I absolutely love the music/art/ and characters so far! I already have some theories about some of the stuff in this VN too and I think I might be right about one of them. Keep up the amazing work for this VN as I will definitely be wait for more! =^-^=
Well, hey Drakes, (First, my english may not be the best, so please forgive any mistake)
I just played the last update, my first playthrough of the VN and I must say that, I’m so amused right now, I’m in love with the way you’re leading the story, I know, it’s not much, but the fact that everything is flowing with no rush at all, makes me kinda feel relaxed while playing it, Gran has such a charismatic persona, he’s silly, funny, good company, but what did it for me was Dave, I loved him (maybe too much), he’s serious but know when to humor things, kind, I mean, these are all merely impressions of what I saw, and I’m eager for more, so eager, in fact, that I conviced myself to write this comment, the first for a visual novel if my memory don’t fail me.
Getting some vibes of other comments, I would love to help translate it into other languages, I can’t imagine how charming would it be to play it in my mother language.
What can I say if not, good job, not only are you doing something beautiful, but you are improving a lot of people's lives with this, in fact, it made my day, I will not stretch this any longer, keep up the good work and thank you.
I'm glad that you were able to enjoy it as much as I was creating! I'm also flattered that this little project ended up becoming the first VN that you've ever commented on. Thank you!
As for the translation, I'd love to have some help but right now isn't really the best time considering that this project is still in a pretty early stage. Perhaps later on?
First of all I've got to say that I love your art style and the story so far and am really thrilled to see that you've decided to continue the project. I've been following it ever since it first came out but wasn't sure you were going with it until now.
I'm wondering if there's some social media (other than itch.io) to follow you on, such as patreon or twitter?
I'm really looking forward to the potentials of this game and wonder about your thought on getting it localized into another language (if it doesn't happen to be your first language by change of course), as myself is a member of one such group who does the translations.
Thank you for the kind words. As a matter of fact I do have other social medias, although they're mostly for private use so I can't really share them... Sorry!
In regards to Patreon... It's not really something that I've thought a lot about, but who knows? Life works in a mysterious way!
I've thought about having the novel to be localised into different languages... It's a really nice idea but I figured that I should add more contents into the novel before getting them translated. Since this project is still in a pretty early stage, there is a high chance that a good chunk of texts will be changed, added or removed. I don't want to hassle translators for every update... Hope you understand!
I played it on my phone (android) and you might wanna make the fonts a little bigger, they're kinda small to read. Overall good game, story seems interesting, might also need to do some grammar fixes here and there some sentences don't sound ever natural (understandable cus English is your second language) but you can improve the writing overtime and rewrite some old stuff in the future.
Hey, Drakes is here. Just letting you know the next update should be up within the next week or so. If it's still not up, I give you guys the permission to slap my wrist. :^)
Thanks for all the support! It gave me the motivation to further develop this passion project of mine.
This game is so good, I like the simple design of the characters, the music. I like the small details(the scenery when riding the bike) you do but it a bit too long for me and the font style is kinda hard to read. I hope there is some nsfw cuz Gran look so HOT. Anyway, love your game <3
Thanks for the input, I'll be sure to consider it. As I have said previously, the font might stick around. If it really hampers a lot of people, I'll replace it.
As for the NSFW part, quoting what I've written above. "Who knows where the wind will blow?" ;)
Sr, I saw the quote put I want to make sure xD What do you think abt add some animation to the characters? And when the character turn around, they look odd, like I was talking with the 2d cardboard, hope u fix that, or not I still love your game UwU
Since you were wondering, i downloaded it on my mac and yup, it works. Then out of curiosity, i tried out the other choices. Personally, i prefer when this type of game has a little bit more choices, so i hope you'll put a bit more in there eventually :) like, maybe we could choose between punching or just poking Gran lol. Also, it seems no matter what orb we pick, when we find it after it's always glowing blue and then when it fades it's the color we picked.
Also there's a few mistakes in the text. Nothing horrible but one thing did bug me; it's "first of all", not "first able" :)
Thank you for letting me know! I've also noticed the description for the orbs to be wrong. I fixed it, so it should show the correct path in the next update. Just smack me if it's still not though!
Even tho it was really short i got pretty intrigued by the story. Like someone else said on a phone the text font is really small. Anyway i hope i can play this one day :) if theres like pics with the characters and mc, will the mc have a set appearance? It's always fun to be able to customize a mc appearance a little bit, even if it's just skin/hair/eye color :) anyway good luck! I wish i could hug Gran and snuggle my face on his belly fur xD the other guy seem cool too :)
I haven't thought about the MC having its own appearance, let alone allowing to be customisable. It is however, something that is worth considering as it would add more flavour into the VN. I'm mostly concerned about writing the story at the moment but who knows? Maybe in the future.
Really like this visually. Would definitely like to see more of Gran ;)
I think you've made some really interesting choices for your characters so far, so it would be good to see them built on in future scenes and/or in reworking the current scenes.
e.g. there is erotic tension between the main character and Gran in the first scene, but then on the motorbike ride there is no mention of this.
e.g. the main character is the kind of person who punches a ripped tiger man in order to check whether he is dreaming or not (rather than just, for example, touching the tiger man's abs). What kind of person does this? What else would we see this character do? (to be clear, I am not saying this is a wrong choice, but if you've made that choice, what other choices follow from it?)
I like it, the story is interesting and the characters are good from afar, I already want to see how you develop the story, the character and story of the characters, only one thing you could change the style of the letter, the android cell text is difficult to read when you italicize it pixelated a lot that the letter looks blurred and is difficult to read, if you could make it a little bigger and / or change the style of the letter it should improve that, except for that the rest I like I hope to see how this advance this project
I'll try increasing the size of the letters for the android version. I have thought about replacing it, but the font itself has stuck on me... Of course, if it really needs to be done, I'll replace it. Cheers
So I streamed this with my discord friends and it was fun.
Some criticism that I'd give is that some of the scenes felt way too stretched out with details and dialogue. That's part of the reason why I cut out a lot of dialogue in the video.
Otherwise, I can see a lot of potential in the story.
It gives me a Blackgate kind of vibe (minus the fact that game is never gonna be finished) where the Human Protagonist unexpectedly appears in another world full of anthros and humans are rare. It's those kinds of plots that I love so much.
Minus the overly stretched scenes, I like this Visual Novel and I hope that this game goes further in story.
Oh man, wasn't expecting someone to upload their playthrough this early in development. Hope you had a decent time testing it out with your friends!
Are some scenes really too stretched out? Personally, I've always liked novels that contain extra details although I do understand where you're coming from so I'll keep that in mind!
My writing could use some work but I'll see what I can do. ^^
Regardless,thanks for spending your time testing the Demo and for creating that video. I've learned a couple of things to keep in mind for further developments that I might not be able to get otherwise.
Interesting beginning of the story, can't wait to find out more about the story and the characters. Liked Gran a lot, can't wait to see more of him. Keep up the good work! :)
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Hello there Drakes sorry for my bad inglish, I loved your vn and I love Gran, he is a great company and his personality is very nice, and he is cute xd.
I'm liking the story and I'm really enjoying reading it and thanks for correcting the lyrics for the android version, now it's much easier to read, by the way the girl is worth gold, the end left me: what did I do now to be you now hmm... spoiler sorry, and for him To top it off, I'm going to cut it here and bingo xd, I hope you continue with this, I'll be waiting for the next update.
PD: and yes SNFW plis, don't think bad of me xd
Don't worry about your English bud, I can understand it just fine. It's the thought that matters right? Glad that you enjoyed reading through the VN and that I was able to help you!
Cheers and have a nice day.
-D
I love it! Your art is cool, and about nsfw I want this vn to have it. That would be nice! and..I want it to have gallery in the main menu so I can watch them anytime. >:D
Haha, Thanks for playing.
-D
OMG I love this! Gran is such a lovable goof. To answer the question on the afterword of the current build, yes. Adult scenes please OwO
Thank you for playing!
-D
one word: spellcheck
I already spellchecked as much as I could, although some might have slipped the crack. Could you list me the ones that you've spotted if you can? It'd be a great help. (This novel is written in UK English so there are a couple of spelling differences.)
Thanks for checking the VN out.
-D
Demm, The Freakin' Cliff Hanger Tho huhu. NICE NICE NICE Work!!! Looking forward for an update :>
Thanks for playing! ^^
-D
Hey just wanted to ask if you have an update schedule
Well, I don't exactly have a fixed schedule although my aim is to at least upload an update every month. More than that really depends on my mood and time ^^.
i love the new characters in the update !
keep up the good work d !! <333
Thank you. I'll try to keep it up ^^
-D
Wow, really enjoyed this! I love all the characters introduced so far, Gran most of all!
Very intrigued to see what the orb means and where the story's going next
Also, do you have a social media we can follow?
Thank you for playing! Yes, I do have socials but they're for private use so I can't really share them. Sorry!
-D
That's no worries, I just like following authors on twitter so they can post updates and progress so I'm not always checking itch
Can't wait to see the next update!
love this game
Thanks for playing!
-D
Oh yeah, the new update is amaaaaazing
First of all, when Dave is bringing breakfast there is an error that almost made me choke, lmao, there's like a " Happy dave image not found " that just flies up and down on the left side of the screen, it's silly but it was so funny idk why. Next, when the MC said " A serious and gentle dragon " I WAS LIKE " INDEEEEED " and he's so cute cleaning i want to help him moooooore, and i would very much appreciate nsfw, the backgrounds ? Beautiful !! The animations ? Purrrrfect !! Kinda sad about the ending of the update though, I'M TOO YOUNG, I DIDN'T EVEN GOT TO CHOOSE DAVE'S ROUTE DIRECTLY ; -;, *cough cough* Tell him... I liked the eggons.... Aaaaaanyway, wonderful update, bravo, will be waiting for more and more.
AND ONE DAY, IT MAY NOT BE TODAY, MAY NOT BE TOMORROW, BUT ONE DAY MY GREEN ORB WILL SHINE.
Keep up the amazing work <3
Oh, of course, the new characters are just nhaaa, like, i want to hug every single one of them, sally is cute, Norman is, he he, Norman, and Jacob & Steve what a cute couple. My god this is taking long, but for a good reason, it was a good update after all u.u, now i have to farm coins in fall guys CAUSE I NEED THAT DRAGON SKIN.
Ah dang, looks like I overlooked that bit... Thanks for mentioning to me, I'm gonna go ahead and re-upload the files before I forget.
Thank you for your continued support, I hope you had a fun time playing!
Stay safe and cheers.
-D
Drakes feeding us more content TwT
Y'all should stan Drakes!!!!!
Enjoy and thanks for playing!
-D
Really good work so far, can't wait to see what's next! And honestly, your
English is really good for it being (what I presume is) your 2nd language, kudos to you :). Just some really minor things here and there, If you ever make a typo sheet I would love to help by submitting the errors I find there.
Well looks like you're in luck, I've just released a new update ^^. English is my second language and I'll consider creating a typo sheet if it would help everyone be able to enjoy the VN more.
Thanks for playing, have a nice day!
-D
I really love it so far! You've got absolutely the perfect pacing without the two-hour information dump that other games have. I'm always eager to see what's next.
Thank you for your compliments!
Stay safe and have a nice day!
-D
good game, can't wait to become a water bender xD
Who said anything about bending? :^)
Thanks for playing.
-D
I really like this game! The dialogue is charming, the assets all look great and Gran is the cutest!
I'm looking forward to the next update!
(Just a heads up, when selecting Gran's meal and deciding to pick something else instead, I first got an error message when picking eggs and bacon. I was able to pick pancakes instead, but then when I got the order it was what Gran had and not pancakes.)
That's strange... Mine seems to be working just fine. Would you mind telling me which version were you playing it on? (PC, android or Mac) and if you could also attach a picture of the error.
Please and thank you.
-D
I was playing PC 1.0.1! I'll go ahead and get a screenshot of the error message, although I don't know if that error is related to the other bug since I selected rollback instead of ignore.
This is the bug in question
I tried it again and when I selected pancakes I still got Gran's order.
I went back and picked the pancakes to begin with and that caused no issue, it seems to be just when selecting Gran's order first.
Ah! I see where it went wrong now. Looks like I miss-typed one of the variable by accident... Thanks for pointing out! It should be fixed in the next update! (Which is soon ;))
Thank you for your time, cheers and have a great day!
-D
Looking forward to it! Cheers!
I have a question for the author, can you tell us about the orb, because so far we only know that it is and nothing else? Also I can't wait for the new update. Last one was awesome.
The orb's use will be revealed more later on. For the time being, it'll only affect the player's name colour. All I can say that it might play a bigger role later down the story. (If things are going according to plan ^^')
Thank you for playing,
-D
Ooh, this game is intriguing and it's very enticing but. I do have to ask, is there / will there be a Dave route ?. I sure hope so but i wont be surprised if not...
Yes, there will be a Dave route. (And more others! ;)). Gran is like the main mascot of the VN but right now, the MC isn't exactly on any route specifically, just 'testing the water' so to say. Later on, the player gets to decide who they'd like to spend more time with (Atleast that's what I have in my head.). I'd say more, but I don't want to spoil the story out just yet.
Thanks for playing, cheers.
-D
First of all. Wow that was a quick reply.......and second, Thanks for the imput and i'm thrilled with the answer ,you've done a great job so far. I'm sure this project will go far. So much appreciated and, until next time.
-H
Usually I'm not this quick, but I happened to see your reply popup while I was checking the page. ^^'
Ah, well that makes sense, thanks anyways :)
i'm really liking this visual novel so far ! is there any social media we could keep up with you at ?
I do, but they're mostly for private use, so I can't really share them. Sorry. Glad that you're liking the novel so far though!
Thanks for visiting,
-D
i'm super excited for future updates !! keep up the good work !!
Thank u for new update. I love it❤️❤️
Thank you for playing!
-D
Thanks for playing!
-D
This is an amazing VN! I absolutely love the music/art/ and characters so far! I already have some theories about some of the stuff in this VN too and I think I might be right about one of them. Keep up the amazing work for this VN as I will definitely be wait for more! =^-^=
Theories already huh? ;) Do let me know later on if you happened to be right!
Thank you for playing,
-D
I will 😊
something about this game feels very nostalgic. nice work
How so? I'm quite curious... ^^
Thanks for playing,
-D
not sure exactly. something about Gran's personality or the vibe in the diner. it's good tho! i'm excited to see more
Well, hey Drakes, (First, my english may not be the best, so please forgive any mistake)
I just played the last update, my first playthrough of the VN and I must say that, I’m so amused right now, I’m in love with the way you’re leading the story, I know, it’s not much, but the fact that everything is flowing with no rush at all, makes me kinda feel relaxed while playing it, Gran has such a charismatic persona, he’s silly, funny, good company, but what did it for me was Dave, I loved him (maybe too much), he’s serious but know when to humor things, kind, I mean, these are all merely impressions of what I saw, and I’m eager for more, so eager, in fact, that I conviced myself to write this comment, the first for a visual novel if my memory don’t fail me.
Getting some vibes of other comments, I would love to help translate it into other languages, I can’t imagine how charming would it be to play it in my mother language.
What can I say if not, good job, not only are you doing something beautiful, but you are improving a lot of people's lives with this, in fact, it made my day, I will not stretch this any longer, keep up the good work and thank you.
Oh, and GREEN ORB FOR THE WIN.
I'm glad that you were able to enjoy it as much as I was creating! I'm also flattered that this little project ended up becoming the first VN that you've ever commented on. Thank you!
As for the translation, I'd love to have some help but right now isn't really the best time considering that this project is still in a pretty early stage. Perhaps later on?
Cheers, have a good day.
-D
Hi Drakes,
First of all I've got to say that I love your art style and the story so far and am really thrilled to see that you've decided to continue the project. I've been following it ever since it first came out but wasn't sure you were going with it until now.
I'm wondering if there's some social media (other than itch.io) to follow you on, such as patreon or twitter?
I'm really looking forward to the potentials of this game and wonder about your thought on getting it localized into another language (if it doesn't happen to be your first language by change of course), as myself is a member of one such group who does the translations.
Thank you for the kind words. As a matter of fact I do have other social medias, although they're mostly for private use so I can't really share them... Sorry!
In regards to Patreon... It's not really something that I've thought a lot about, but who knows? Life works in a mysterious way!
I've thought about having the novel to be localised into different languages... It's a really nice idea but I figured that I should add more contents into the novel before getting them translated. Since this project is still in a pretty early stage, there is a high chance that a good chunk of texts will be changed, added or removed. I don't want to hassle translators for every update... Hope you understand!
Thanks for playing,
-D
Awesome update! Just as I expected! I really like how Gran is such a nice lovely guy ❤️ amazing work! Keep it up!
I'm super happy that you have decided to continue with the visual novel ^^
Thanks for the support bud. I hope I didn't disappoint!
Cheers,
-D
Thanks for the update, your art are wonderful hope to see more form the game.
Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the new update!
Cheers,
-D
I played it on my phone (android) and you might wanna make the fonts a little bigger, they're kinda small to read. Overall good game, story seems interesting, might also need to do some grammar fixes here and there some sentences don't sound ever natural (understandable cus English is your second language) but you can improve the writing overtime and rewrite some old stuff in the future.
Hey, Drakes is here. Just letting you know the next update should be up within the next week or so. If it's still not up, I give you guys the permission to slap my wrist. :^)
Thanks for all the support! It gave me the motivation to further develop this passion project of mine.
Thanks again and stay safe!
-D
I'm so looking forward for the update ^^
This game is so good, I like the simple design of the characters, the music. I like the small details(the scenery when riding the bike) you do but it a bit too long for me and the font style is kinda hard to read. I hope there is some nsfw cuz Gran look so HOT. Anyway, love your game <3
Thanks for the input, I'll be sure to consider it. As I have said previously, the font might stick around. If it really hampers a lot of people, I'll replace it.
As for the NSFW part, quoting what I've written above. "Who knows where the wind will blow?" ;)
Thanks for playing,
-D
Sr, I saw the quote put I want to make sure xD What do you think abt add some animation to the characters? And when the character turn around, they look odd, like I was talking with the 2d cardboard, hope u fix that, or not I still love your game UwU
Since you were wondering, i downloaded it on my mac and yup, it works. Then out of curiosity, i tried out the other choices. Personally, i prefer when this type of game has a little bit more choices, so i hope you'll put a bit more in there eventually :) like, maybe we could choose between punching or just poking Gran lol. Also, it seems no matter what orb we pick, when we find it after it's always glowing blue and then when it fades it's the color we picked.
Also there's a few mistakes in the text. Nothing horrible but one thing did bug me; it's "first of all", not "first able" :)
Thank you for letting me know! I've also noticed the description for the orbs to be wrong. I fixed it, so it should show the correct path in the next update. Just smack me if it's still not though!
Cheers,
-D
Even tho it was really short i got pretty intrigued by the story. Like someone else said on a phone the text font is really small. Anyway i hope i can play this one day :) if theres like pics with the characters and mc, will the mc have a set appearance? It's always fun to be able to customize a mc appearance a little bit, even if it's just skin/hair/eye color :) anyway good luck! I wish i could hug Gran and snuggle my face on his belly fur xD the other guy seem cool too :)
I haven't thought about the MC having its own appearance, let alone allowing to be customisable. It is however, something that is worth considering as it would add more flavour into the VN. I'm mostly concerned about writing the story at the moment but who knows? Maybe in the future.
Thanks for visiting!
-D
Really like this visually. Would definitely like to see more of Gran ;)
I think you've made some really interesting choices for your characters so far, so it would be good to see them built on in future scenes and/or in reworking the current scenes.
e.g. there is erotic tension between the main character and Gran in the first scene, but then on the motorbike ride there is no mention of this.
e.g. the main character is the kind of person who punches a ripped tiger man in order to check whether he is dreaming or not (rather than just, for example, touching the tiger man's abs). What kind of person does this? What else would we see this character do? (to be clear, I am not saying this is a wrong choice, but if you've made that choice, what other choices follow from it?)
I look forward to seeing/reading more!
Who wouldn't want to see more of Gran? Heh, thanks for checking out the demo!
-D
I like it, the story is interesting and the characters are good from afar, I already want to see how you develop the story, the character and story of the characters, only one thing you could change the style of the letter, the android cell text is difficult to read when you italicize it pixelated a lot that the letter looks blurred and is difficult to read, if you could make it a little bigger and / or change the style of the letter it should improve that, except for that the rest I like I hope to see how this advance this project
I'll try increasing the size of the letters for the android version. I have thought about replacing it, but the font itself has stuck on me... Of course, if it really needs to be done, I'll replace it. Cheers
-D
I liked a lot this demo! I can't wait to see more in the next update!
Thanks for playing!
-D
Some criticism that I'd give is that some of the scenes felt way too stretched out with details and dialogue. That's part of the reason why I cut out a lot of dialogue in the video.
Otherwise, I can see a lot of potential in the story.
It gives me a Blackgate kind of vibe (minus the fact that game is never gonna be finished) where the Human Protagonist unexpectedly appears in another world full of anthros and humans are rare. It's those kinds of plots that I love so much.
Minus the overly stretched scenes, I like this Visual Novel and I hope that this game goes further in story.
Oh man, wasn't expecting someone to upload their playthrough this early in development. Hope you had a decent time testing it out with your friends!
Are some scenes really too stretched out? Personally, I've always liked novels that contain extra details although I do understand where you're coming from so I'll keep that in mind!
My writing could use some work but I'll see what I can do. ^^
Regardless,thanks for spending your time testing the Demo and for creating that video. I've learned a couple of things to keep in mind for further developments that I might not be able to get otherwise.
Cheers,
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Im down for the get down hope this one continues in work.
I'm already working on some new contents, new update should be coming soon. ;)
Thanks for playing.
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I absolutely love it! I like Gran a lot! And the story is so interesting! Amazing work :3
Thank you!
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I'm in love with this demo, I can't wait to see more of this! :3
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Glad you liked it, thanks for visiting!
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Just played it and enjoyed it really curious about the world, what the orbs are and just what is an orb user?
Only time will tell!
Thanks for checking the project out.
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Interesting beginning of the story, can't wait to find out more about the story and the characters. Liked Gran a lot, can't wait to see more of him. Keep up the good work! :)
Gran's nice isn't he?
Thanks for visiting!
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