Bittersweet but fun! i noticed a roof that had textures i could walk through but other than that the game was nice and solid. thank you very much for this game. i really enjoyed it!
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A quick, but mysteriously fun indie game. Loving the low-poly look, but wish there were more sounds to set a larger mood for the story behind this planet. Cool voice acting too!
I just Lumps Played this, and I quite liked it! It was a really good quickie, perfect for a break from mediocre horror games and whatnot. The plot was simple but it was great for how short the game was, and I can't help but imagine how awesome it would be to play a full 30-60 minutes of this exploring different villages on different planets! Hmm? *hint hint* :D Thanks for the game, and keep it up, the hard work payed off!
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Despite how short the game was, I actually enjoyed it. There was an air of mystery leading up to the big reveal at the end. And I felt myself wanting to learn more about these people and their world. The whole experience left me with more questions than I had answers, and I wish there had been more world like this to explore. I hope you consider expanding on this game in the future. Thank you for making it! I uploaded a playthough of my experience, and I hope you enjoy watching! :)
I like this game, aside from the issues, there's good story building here, and a nice, crisp Stanley Parable narration going on. The open ended story is fun, it leaves room for imagination which some games nowadays lack. But if you want to take your game to the next level, there are just a few things I'd recommend.
1: Door sounds. Very, loud, repetitive door sounds. Lower the volume on them just a tad, and make it so that once a door opens, it won't close for at least two seconds. An opening animation would be nice, but not necessary.
2: The telepad whirring. It's deafeningly loud, kicked off my tinnitus into overdrive, PLEASE decrease it to about half.
3: An intro sequence with a data screen showing an objective would be nice contextualization, something along the lines of:
Location == O A R Facility 177903 : 13 ____________________________________________
Welcome to the Osiris Archetype Research program
Current objective == Determine condition of indigenous life on surface // Full investigation necessary // Return when complete
Mission status == Debriefed, ready to deploy
Thank you for participating in the Osiris Archetype Research program
- Beginning transport ____________________________________________
4. If you want to take this to a full scale game, I'd suggest having multiple maps, with different layouts, some at night, some in ruins, maybe. Spice it up a little and it will go a long way. Another cool feature would be to have an item system where you can get flashlights, or tools that help you get into certain rooms. I'm thinking a shop mechanic where, in between maps, you can sell the artifacts you collected from the planet's surface in exchange for a currency that can get you the helpful items I already mentioned. Finding a companion would be REALLY cool.
All in all, just fix the sounds, and I won't have a problem with this game. The other stuff I mentioned is just to take the game from "like it" to "love it."
This game was pretty alright. I liked how the mystery of the whole game kept me wanting to play until the end. There were moments when I did feel a bit creeped out but it's for lame reasons haha. The length was good considering how there wasn't much for the game to move forward. However, I was disappointed with how the game ended because it left me wanting more. If you're wanting to play the game, get ready for a pretty disappointing ending. Also, if you're not a fan of short games, this game is not for you.
If you want, you can check out the playthrough I did of this game below:
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The game left a good mark on my mind and the artstyle was fantastic. It was too short but I guess it is normal for a indie game. Only thing annoyed me was the sounds of the doors. But it is nothing important for a good indie game like this. Nice job.
I' am an absolute sucker for these kinds of artstyles and this looks so nice. I really enjoyed playing it, and had fun exploring the different houses. :)
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Bittersweet but fun! i noticed a roof that had textures i could walk through but other than that the game was nice and solid. thank you very much for this game. i really enjoyed it!
This was kind of sad but really nice. Thanks for making it and letting us play it :)
Cool little game with an interesting story. Nicely done and runs smoothly with no problems. Good job... :)
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Random place, much sadness.
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A quick, but mysteriously fun indie game. Loving the low-poly look, but wish there were more sounds to set a larger mood for the story behind this planet. Cool voice acting too!
I really enjoyed this short game, the voice acting was a good add-on, not many indie games have that :)
Nice game made a lets play of it im still curious where they go after they run out of food 100,000 yrs ago
I just Lumps Played this, and I quite liked it! It was a really good quickie, perfect for a break from mediocre horror games and whatnot. The plot was simple but it was great for how short the game was, and I can't help but imagine how awesome it would be to play a full 30-60 minutes of this exploring different villages on different planets! Hmm? *hint hint* :D Thanks for the game, and keep it up, the hard work payed off!
Lumps Plays is pop-up commentary, me (Lumps!) commenting witty remarks and opinions vis-a-vis unique pop-ups a la Vh1's Pop-up videos from back in the day. Check it out, you'll love it :D
played the game a while back
don't remember if I gave my thoughts on it tho
Despite how short the game was, I actually enjoyed it. There was an air of mystery leading up to the big reveal at the end. And I felt myself wanting to learn more about these people and their world. The whole experience left me with more questions than I had answers, and I wish there had been more world like this to explore. I hope you consider expanding on this game in the future. Thank you for making it! I uploaded a playthough of my experience, and I hope you enjoy watching! :)
I like this game, aside from the issues, there's good story building here, and a nice, crisp Stanley Parable narration going on. The open ended story is fun, it leaves room for imagination which some games nowadays lack. But if you want to take your game to the next level, there are just a few things I'd recommend.
1: Door sounds. Very, loud, repetitive door sounds. Lower the volume on them just a tad, and make it so that once a door opens, it won't close for at least two seconds. An opening animation would be nice, but not necessary.
2: The telepad whirring. It's deafeningly loud, kicked off my tinnitus into overdrive, PLEASE decrease it to about half.
3: An intro sequence with a data screen showing an objective would be nice contextualization, something along the lines of:
____________________________________________
- Initiating boot sequence ____________________________________________
D/T == 8 / 17 / 49XX // 11 : 17 AM
Clearance == Research : Exploration : Type A
Location == O A R Facility 177903 : 13 ____________________________________________
Welcome to the Osiris Archetype Research program
Current objective == Determine condition of indigenous life on surface // Full investigation necessary // Return when complete
Mission status == Debriefed, ready to deploy
Thank you for participating in the Osiris Archetype Research program
- Beginning transport ____________________________________________
4. If you want to take this to a full scale game, I'd suggest having multiple maps, with different layouts, some at night, some in ruins, maybe. Spice it up a little and it will go a long way. Another cool feature would be to have an item system where you can get flashlights, or tools that help you get into certain rooms. I'm thinking a shop mechanic where, in between maps, you can sell the artifacts you collected from the planet's surface in exchange for a currency that can get you the helpful items I already mentioned. Finding a companion would be REALLY cool.
All in all, just fix the sounds, and I won't have a problem with this game. The other stuff I mentioned is just to take the game from "like it" to "love it."
4 minute game? Sorry man, I'd rather see a movie
This game was pretty alright. I liked how the mystery of the whole game kept me wanting to play until the end. There were moments when I did feel a bit creeped out but it's for lame reasons haha. The length was good considering how there wasn't much for the game to move forward. However, I was disappointed with how the game ended because it left me wanting more. If you're wanting to play the game, get ready for a pretty disappointing ending. Also, if you're not a fan of short games, this game is not for you.
If you want, you can check out the playthrough I did of this game below:
If you liked what you saw, come check out my channel for more videos like this by clicking on the link:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCOV9fchBNTrCAzZpW...
The game left a good mark on my mind and the artstyle was fantastic. It was too short but I guess it is normal for a indie game. Only thing annoyed me was the sounds of the doors. But it is nothing important for a good indie game like this. Nice job.
I' am an absolute sucker for these kinds of artstyles and this looks so nice.
I really enjoyed playing it, and had fun exploring the different houses. :)