I am truly every so grateful I found this masterpiece. It's just too great. The world building and storytelling is simply stellar. You have no idea how many times I caught my breath quickens, because of the anticipation while reading. The tensions, the frustrations, the feelings were truly raw... it was written splendidly.
Spoiler.
There was this part for Kiha's path in the other ship... I laughed so hard that was brilliant.
Of course I will replay and see other paths.. I am so seated for this. You are such a talented writer omg.
Also, I noticed a little typo here for your attention! Rocks bite as your knees as you drop...
Anyways. I feel like the best part about this whole masterpiece is the imagery. I'm not good with the body hurt parts, but you wrote it so well that I could imagine everything. Feels deep to my bones. Dang. Thank god I don't have to experience all that for real.
This is one of my absolute FAVVVORITE Wips, the writing the achievements are SOO satisfying I literally cannot wait for more updates I'm shaking this is so good 😭
Can you maybe make it possible to install with itch.io? Most of the if's I play can be installed on the app and it makes it way easier. Also I love your story and characters :)
The number of possible outcomes is so impressive and provides a lot of cool replayability, and 5 chapters feels like a blessing. The writing is also really good, and I really like how diverse the cast of characters are. Not too many that I lose track, but enough to give a lot of different interactions and conversations.
The characters feel so alive too, I've grown to like all of them and am especially attached to Joia (of course) and unexpectedly for me, Rhaxa? And Rohan gives me such intensely conflicted feelings of irritation that I can't help but appreciate her character all the more, even with the number of times she's stabbed my MC in the back.
Thank you for making this! Patiently awaiting the next chapter 😊
This is so good omg! I will replay this as many times as I have to, to get that Besties achievement. Joia my little angel, we will be besties. I have died trying, so nothin is goin to stop me 😭🤧✊🏾
thank youu<3 the besties achievement isn't actually achievable yet so don't die! it'll be in there soon💕 there's an achievement guide here which mentions which ones are achievable thus far, but be aware of spoilers:)
Wow I'm so stupid, lmao...let's just pretend that I didn't spend the last few hours trying to get that achievement 💀😂 But hey, at least I got to play through every possible combination of choices and it was amazing to see the different outcomes! Thank you so much for your hard work! 💞
Also, I just have to mention cos it definitely deserves it's own post and to be mentioned - our MC is fecking awesome. THIS is how you write an MC! Can't wait to see more of our MC kicking the universe's ass, proving just why they were chosen as the operative to receive IVI, and of course taking their revenge on Scytha (with or without IVI, tho I do like having her about!). Also, Joia (btw, how do you pronounce her name?) is a sweetie. Hope we continue to bond with her (maybe even adopt her in the far future), tho I know it will take time considering her trauma and likely trust issues. I really like the Found Family trope, especially with a tough, egotistical, selfish MC having to explore the side of themselves they've been distinctly ignoring. lol
Fantastic update - I've played this game to death since I first came across it, so every new update is a blessing. Love Rohan. Very intrigued about this new alien!
Figured I'd mention a bug. Okay, a bug AND something that I found a bit weird. If you choose to contact Scytha instead of Rohan's "person", when you come onboard Lance scans all the ID's, then you get a video call from the Director, right? Well there's a bug where, if you didn't kill Rohan (like in my case), and you lie to the director and say you did, MC will recall Rohan's dead body in the text as if he'd killed him, when Rohan is actually fine and well and on the ship. The other thing I found really weird was speaking about Rohan with the Director after lying about killing him, she describes what he look like, etc. However, considering this is the director, and Lance literally just scanned Rohan's ID when he came on board, AND found IVI with him, surely the lie would completely fail as she'd already know Rohan was on the ship? I mean, the Director would surely have already been informed, by Lance, of the fact that someone who was NOT a Scytha operative had IVI in their possession, and the ID of that individual was that of Rohan. Unless Rohan is using a fake ID, which is pretty probable (although the MC could probably speculate or come to that conclusion, to make it clear to the player), but that still wouldn't stop the Director from being informed of, and wanting to know the reason for, IVI being in the possession of someone in your entourage, rather than in your head.
Anyway, on tenterhooks for what comes next. More sexual tension with Rohan, and maybe some payoff for it? :D
so - something I could definitely make clearer in the writing - the Project is a sub-operation within Scytha, and a lot of the wider company aren't aware of it. Lance wouldn't have clearance to know about specific projects, especially not one like Hadea, so he wouldn't know IVI exists - all he knows is that Rohan's got something high-tech and shady and xe's cagey about what it is. as far as he's concerned, his job is to take you all into custody. and yes, Rohan's very much using a fake ID👀
as for the dead body bug, I'll try to hunt that down, thank you! and I'm glad you enjoyed the game<3
In the chapter 4, if you decide to call to your organization and lie about R, you describe R's name and appearance in details. Is that a bug or that's what suppose to happen?
Also, if you get a "vaccine shot", you get an "Unexpected token" error.
yes, that's supposed to happen - if you killed Rohan and lied about it, there's no reason to lie about xir appearance; if you left xem alive and lied about it, the operative is basically fishing for information about xem from the director, and not really planning ahead.
I swear to God you are trying to kill me with these endings to updates. Nooooo like come on man. I hated this so much.. not really i loved it but fuck it. Lmao this is too good and now i got cliffhangers on cliffhangers. It's so sad 😭🤣
The update was fantastic! I cannot wait for more! One thing I did notice is when coming back to the shuttle after choosing not to go after the sniper the text seemed a bit confused. Came back with Ki-Ha and Joia but then the next page had me asking where they were. And when asking where Raxha was on the page after that the response to that question was "yes we should get Skylar..."
Spoilers below! Probably....and might be a long ass comment sooo prepare yourselves!
First of all, i enjoyed the update a lot , your writing is great like always, and i enjoy reading it a lot.
I enjoyed the scenes with Rhaxa a lot, whether i chose to be a dick or not, and found interacting with him very amusing.
I really enjoyed how you made keeping R alive rewarding, by making them suffer, and Nash gained a lot of points in my book for using them as bait! And R Can bet their butt I'm not taking pity on them in the slightest. I tried to be nice to them but it didn't sit well with pretty much any fiber of my being......guess I'm not the forgiving type of person.....oh well!!!👀
And all the bravado R keeps, telling us to kill them, seemed to have gone out the window but that's understandable, what isn't is them thinking that Nash would care enough about their safety, considering they ruined their friends life and possibly ended it, along with theirs no matter who we choose to call.
And I'm starting to believe more and more that IVI might have become a permanent part of our fooked up brain, in an attempt to stay sentient? Or to stop her self from being separated from us by R. Either that or we're having phantom feelings and are too used to having her in our heads
Oh and i found a typo, after the choice to lunge at R when we get on the ship at the last few, it says "more to more" i forgot what was being said to be honest....
In conclusion great update, and keep up the great work bud!👍👀
GOD DAMN IT. CLIFF HANGERS. WE GET CRUMBS OF PAIN AND SUFFERING AND THEN WE GET A CLIFF HANGER. I HATE IT HERE. (I don’t I love this If I’m just way too emotionally invested at this point.)
The ROs are Nash, Rohan, Leanna, Ki-Ha, Rhaxa, and Imxa (who hasn't been introduced yet - she appears in the coming update!). Leanna is only romanceable by female or nonbinary operatives, and Ki-Ha is only romanceable by male operatives :)
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this game is really really awesome. I hope it will be continued :)
I am truly every so grateful I found this masterpiece. It's just too great. The world building and storytelling is simply stellar. You have no idea how many times I caught my breath quickens, because of the anticipation while reading. The tensions, the frustrations, the feelings were truly raw... it was written splendidly.
Spoiler.
There was this part for Kiha's path in the other ship... I laughed so hard that was brilliant.
Of course I will replay and see other paths.. I am so seated for this. You are such a talented writer omg.
Also, I noticed a little typo here for your attention! Rocks bite as your knees as you drop...
Anyways. I feel like the best part about this whole masterpiece is the imagery. I'm not good with the body hurt parts, but you wrote it so well that I could imagine everything. Feels deep to my bones. Dang. Thank god I don't have to experience all that for real.
Without offending can I just ask what the sex of the nbs are?
Bloody brilliant, my favourite is Captain Lee. Can't wait for more.
This is one of my absolute FAVVVORITE Wips, the writing the achievements are SOO satisfying I literally cannot wait for more updates I'm shaking this is so good 😭
Can you maybe make it possible to install with itch.io? Most of the if's I play can be installed on the app and it makes it way easier. Also I love your story and characters :)
i feel like i should get like three more achievements for horrible taste. i am still unfortunately in love with rohan, despite his everything
This is absolutely amazing!!
The number of possible outcomes is so impressive and provides a lot of cool replayability, and 5 chapters feels like a blessing. The writing is also really good, and I really like how diverse the cast of characters are. Not too many that I lose track, but enough to give a lot of different interactions and conversations.
The characters feel so alive too, I've grown to like all of them and am especially attached to Joia (of course) and unexpectedly for me, Rhaxa? And Rohan gives me such intensely conflicted feelings of irritation that I can't help but appreciate her character all the more, even with the number of times she's stabbed my MC in the back.
Thank you for making this! Patiently awaiting the next chapter 😊
This is so good omg! I will replay this as many times as I have to, to get that Besties achievement. Joia my little angel, we will be besties. I have died trying, so nothin is goin to stop me 😭🤧✊🏾
thank youu<3 the besties achievement isn't actually achievable yet so don't die! it'll be in there soon💕 there's an achievement guide here which mentions which ones are achievable thus far, but be aware of spoilers:)
Wow I'm so stupid, lmao...let's just pretend that I didn't spend the last few hours trying to get that achievement 💀😂 But hey, at least I got to play through every possible combination of choices and it was amazing to see the different outcomes! Thank you so much for your hard work! 💞
I don't know if it's on purpose, but this doesn't seem to work with the itch app
What's the total word count as of now?
I think it's around 390k words! not 100% sure, but that's my guess:)
Nahhh you can't do this to me. Can't leave me on this cliffhanger... :crying: another AMAZING update. Love ya...
Also, I just have to mention cos it definitely deserves it's own post and to be mentioned - our MC is fecking awesome. THIS is how you write an MC!
Can't wait to see more of our MC kicking the universe's ass, proving just why they were chosen as the operative to receive IVI, and of course taking their revenge on Scytha (with or without IVI, tho I do like having her about!).
Also, Joia (btw, how do you pronounce her name?) is a sweetie. Hope we continue to bond with her (maybe even adopt her in the far future), tho I know it will take time considering her trauma and likely trust issues. I really like the Found Family trope, especially with a tough, egotistical, selfish MC having to explore the side of themselves they've been distinctly ignoring. lol
Fantastic update - I've played this game to death since I first came across it, so every new update is a blessing. Love Rohan. Very intrigued about this new alien!
Figured I'd mention a bug. Okay, a bug AND something that I found a bit weird. If you choose to contact Scytha instead of Rohan's "person", when you come onboard Lance scans all the ID's, then you get a video call from the Director, right? Well there's a bug where, if you didn't kill Rohan (like in my case), and you lie to the director and say you did, MC will recall Rohan's dead body in the text as if he'd killed him, when Rohan is actually fine and well and on the ship.
The other thing I found really weird was speaking about Rohan with the Director after lying about killing him, she describes what he look like, etc. However, considering this is the director, and Lance literally just scanned Rohan's ID when he came on board, AND found IVI with him, surely the lie would completely fail as she'd already know Rohan was on the ship? I mean, the Director would surely have already been informed, by Lance, of the fact that someone who was NOT a Scytha operative had IVI in their possession, and the ID of that individual was that of Rohan. Unless Rohan is using a fake ID, which is pretty probable (although the MC could probably speculate or come to that conclusion, to make it clear to the player), but that still wouldn't stop the Director from being informed of, and wanting to know the reason for, IVI being in the possession of someone in your entourage, rather than in your head.
Anyway, on tenterhooks for what comes next. More sexual tension with Rohan, and maybe some payoff for it? :D
so - something I could definitely make clearer in the writing - the Project is a sub-operation within Scytha, and a lot of the wider company aren't aware of it. Lance wouldn't have clearance to know about specific projects, especially not one like Hadea, so he wouldn't know IVI exists - all he knows is that Rohan's got something high-tech and shady and xe's cagey about what it is. as far as he's concerned, his job is to take you all into custody. and yes, Rohan's very much using a fake ID👀
as for the dead body bug, I'll try to hunt that down, thank you! and I'm glad you enjoyed the game<3
I like it, but I have some questions.
In the chapter 4, if you decide to call to your organization and lie about R, you describe R's name and appearance in details. Is that a bug or that's what suppose to happen?
Also, if you get a "vaccine shot", you get an "Unexpected token" error.
yes, that's supposed to happen - if you killed Rohan and lied about it, there's no reason to lie about xir appearance; if you left xem alive and lied about it, the operative is basically fishing for information about xem from the director, and not really planning ahead.
Thanks for the reply.
Love Nash and Raxha 😍❤️. And the new alien seems interesting.
I swear to God you are trying to kill me with these endings to updates. Nooooo like come on man. I hated this so much.. not really i loved it but fuck it. Lmao this is too good and now i got cliffhangers on cliffhangers. It's so sad 😭🤣
The update was fantastic! I cannot wait for more! One thing I did notice is when coming back to the shuttle after choosing not to go after the sniper the text seemed a bit confused. Came back with Ki-Ha and Joia but then the next page had me asking where they were. And when asking where Raxha was on the page after that the response to that question was "yes we should get Skylar..."
Spoilers below! Probably....and might be a long ass comment sooo prepare yourselves!
First of all, i enjoyed the update a lot , your writing is great like always, and i enjoy reading it a lot.
I enjoyed the scenes with Rhaxa a lot, whether i chose to be a dick or not, and found interacting with him very amusing.
I really enjoyed how you made keeping R alive rewarding, by making them suffer, and Nash gained a lot of points in my book for using them as bait! And R Can bet their butt I'm not taking pity on them in the slightest. I tried to be nice to them but it didn't sit well with pretty much any fiber of my being......guess I'm not the forgiving type of person.....oh well!!!👀
And all the bravado R keeps, telling us to kill them, seemed to have gone out the window but that's understandable, what isn't is them thinking that Nash would care enough about their safety, considering they ruined their friends life and possibly ended it, along with theirs no matter who we choose to call.
And I'm starting to believe more and more that IVI might have become a permanent part of our fooked up brain, in an attempt to stay sentient? Or to stop her self from being separated from us by R. Either that or we're having phantom feelings and are too used to having her in our heads
Oh and i found a typo, after the choice to lunge at R when we get on the ship at the last few, it says "more to more" i forgot what was being said to be honest....
In conclusion great update, and keep up the great work bud!👍👀
GOD DAMN IT. CLIFF HANGERS. WE GET CRUMBS OF PAIN AND SUFFERING AND THEN WE GET A CLIFF HANGER. I HATE IT HERE. (I don’t I love this If I’m just way too emotionally invested at this point.)
The ROs are Nash, Rohan, Leanna, Ki-Ha, Rhaxa, and Imxa (who hasn't been introduced yet - she appears in the coming update!). Leanna is only romanceable by female or nonbinary operatives, and Ki-Ha is only romanceable by male operatives :)