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When MC first gets it on with deoxys, in one of her lines, the "h" in "Earth" isn't encoded, so that if you try and decode it it spells "Eartf"

I probably should have copied and pasted the line, to make things easier for you but I didn't think of that at the time.

Though tbf, 99.999999% of players will probably never know any better 

How goes the game dev, any updates? 

I looked back at the pokemon lore and relized two things

1. Darkrai is either going to be misunderstood by the people around her due to her giving nightmares and is wishing to be understood or is an actually evil mfer because that's the two ways Darkrai gets interpreted  

2. Giritina bout to have immense mommy issues... there's no "or" that's just factual.

Who agrees with me that mew is the cutest in the game?

She is a lttle cutie, but I think MewTWO is still my favourite 

Speaking of which, I need to go back and rewrite her chapter 1 stuff to make it better, it's still pretty rough

You doing that for this update? 

If your going to go back and edit chapter 1 perhaps you can add leaf/green in? 

tbf idk how you would but just an idea. 

Gen 8-9 have some good legendary

GEN 7 gonna take very very long for him

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I mean ... MAYBE but that leads to the question about legendary Pokémon and their evolution lines which honestly I find a lil dumb. Like do we need Cosmoem or could we just do Cosmog? Do we need Meltan AND Melmetal? Do we need type:Null or would we just skip to Silvally? 

In my opinion, you could probably do reasonable cuts and lower it to 13 or even 10 if you put all the Tapu together which by that point it would probably be quicker.

I mean I started the convo bout gen 6 but gen 7 is SOOOOO far from now its not really worth contemplating even now. 

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i have a question does the game creator have a dm cuz i think i have completely figured out the best possible way to do gen six since theres only like 4 legends well three legends one mythic and like 9+ girls

p.s. gen six is my fave cuz of ashgreeninja and zygarde

Well first off there are 6 mons, three legends and three Mythics and second, gen 6 won't be for a loooooong while we still have 2 generations that are so large we are getting them in 2 part updates. 

If you have ideas for gen 6 feel free to air them out tho. I type in paragraphs all the time and haven't gotten shit on for it.... tho don't feel like you need to write a 10 page essay lmao

Chainsaw likes to hear peoples thoughts so shoot away. 

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hoppas part of gen 6 omg idk also volcanion are the 2 idk about well i knew volcanion and hoppa but didnt know they were part of gen six 

also besides those two i fell like best pairing and wut not will go as follows diantha and diancie, since zygarde has 2 main cell each cell will be pared with 2 of the team flare admins also zygarde should have all the forms exept base cuz come on hows that gonna work. the first cell u find will always be in 10% and second will always be in 50% once u have both u get access to 2 side quest one for the fivesome with the admins and the other to have sex with the complete form also for diantha u should have her gardivoir with her so like a three sum and afterwards u get access to a side quest for another threesome but her gardivoir is mega evolved also for the pyschic gym leader paring her with xerneas seem best and yveltal with korrina the fighting type gym leader and maby a threesome with her lucario with the same side quest thing as diantha and for serrena, shuana and the kalos queen u should have to do a pokemon showcase againts each and once they are defeated u can then do them and once u have defeated all of them i think i side quest for a foursome with all of them would be cool

edit: actualy parring hoppa with the pychic gym leader seem like a better idea i thought of xerneas first not knowing hoppa was part of gen 6

edit 2: serena shauna and the kalos queen (idk her name srry) are in the anime.

p.s. ive never played the games only ever watched the anime

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Ok so some notes. 

1. Its good that you acknowledged Zygardes unique attribute and trying to think of a way it would work. That's probably one of the challenges chainsaw isn't looking forward towards. I think complete form would basically be when the breed scene happens not a side scene. Pairing Zygarde with admin/scientists was actually what I was thinking also.

2. There is no kalos queen that's anime only so not going to show up most likely

3. Side scenes with mega evolved Pokémon makes sense since this would be the time tho threesomes with the human characters is ehhhh, having the humans lead to solo side scenes makes sense. 

4. Pokemon showcase is an anime only thing as well though I do know there is a beauty contest type thing in the game so perhaps something similar could be pulled with that tho who and what that will lead to is up in the air game Serena isnt necessarily the same as anime Serena 

I don't think Itch does DMs, at least not as far as I know.

I'm steadily figuring out plans for Gen 6, but I'll take your suggestions into consideration, maybe they'll help me if I get stuck somewhere

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I was being a weirdo and attempting to predict the gen 5 pairings (some were pretty easy to see the line... but omg trying to draw lines for most are hard and trying to figure out locations on the Unova map are gonna drive me insane I pity you) and came across an idea for a side scene.  

Undella town is Cynthia's summer vacation destination so perhaps after getting pregnant by you, she goes to Undella to get away from public attention only to bump into you again ... and ask for seconds ;). Perhaps its only available if you got Arceus, breed Cynthia and then breed Caitlin. 

Frankly, Undella town seems like a breeding ground (tee-hee) of potential side scenes since you can literarily bump into the  Unova female gym leaders and elite four in Undella town and specifically the female ones. A bikini party of baby mommas imagine that. 

Also things that seem possible but also try-hard would be to change dialogue like Caitlin would point out seeing Cynthia pregnant before you even do her breed scene like with Karen and other changes associated with the Karen-Agatha stuff, perhaps changing Cynthia's second ship text depending on if you did the side scene or not like perhaps she is disappointed if you didn't do the side scene, and the most wild maybe not just her dialogue but image as well changes though that assumes we enter the pregnant sex tag. 

Just some ideas... also who are you working on now I assume you finished Shaymin lmao. 

(Addendum, Caitlin owns the villa Cynthia is in so instead of bumping into her Caitlin provides you access after figuring out you're the father, thus meaning THREE potential Cynthia ship dialogs, one where she is oblivious to the fact you were even there because you didn't breed Caitlin, one where she is disappointed you didn't come by to see her despite breeding Caitlin and the one you get for doing the side scene. This idea just keeps getting better.) 

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i thought cynthia was gen six champ

edit im dumb i forgot about diantha  their names are way to similar

Not trying to make you feel more dumb or anything but Cynthia is in the teaser images for chapter 4/gen 4/Sinnoh

ya i kinda relized that

Okay, I don't want to give too much away for a chapter I'm not even working on yet, but I will answer ONE of your predictions.

Cynthia WILL return for another round.


I'm just finishing Shaymin and Gardenia, it's been a little slow thanks to some distractions, after that I'll probably get to work on the Lake Guardians and Dawn

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the game is fun but i struggle with translating Deoxys so often

I mean, that was kind of the point

Understanding her was always meant to be tricky

i see

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Here is an idea, I did all the translations myself and with that hindsight you could try to make a document with a table like this

Starting Letter1234
AZYXW
BAZYX
CBAZY
DCBAZ
EDCBA

I won't do all of them but it should be a useful guide when translating her text, also if you find typos don't worry Chainsaw knows and I think is going to fix/has fixed them for the next update

Deoxys lingo for dummies
Starting Letter1234
A Z Y X W
B A Z Y X
C B A Z Y
D C B A Z
E D C B A
F E D C B
G F E D C
H G F E D
I H G F E
J I H G F
K J I H G
L K J I H
M L K J I
N M L K J
O N M L K
P O N M L
Q P O N M
R Q P O N
S R Q P O
T S R Q P
U T S R Q
V U T S R
W V U T S
X W V U T
Y X W V U
Z Y X W V

Decided to finish this sample chart, oh boy this took way too much time

Yeah you see why I recommended this be done in a google doc lol. But hey, you went even further beyond

will you upload to steam? 

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No. I don't think a parody porn game made with ai images using html is the type of game steam would allow, even for free. Steam has a set of guidelines and I don't this this game passes at all.

Nope, I'm sticking to Itch

Don't normally comment on games I try but felt I had to had for this.  Found this little gem on another site and give it a shot.  The effort put into this is impressive and I'm looking forward to the Sinnoh update.

One of my favorite parts of the game was I think in Kanto where you are dealing with Mewtwo's low self esteem issues alongside Mew due to the method of her creation.  Whilst we all know what the games for lol I did appreciate the humanizing nature of that part and do hope we get similar scenes like that.  I could imagine the issues Darkrai or Giratina could have.

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Yeah, Mewtwo's backstory always seemed pretty rough, anybody would have issues after that!

Darkrai won't be the same but Giritina... you'll have to wait and see

Looking forward to it.  Keep up the good work.

Is there any possibility to have Shadow Lugia as a side scene? I think she's really hawt~

I've got an idea to work her in, just need to figure out where to put her

Cool! Could have a little detour to the Orre region

I want to keep to just the regions from the main games, but I have now fully figured out my Shadow Lugia plan!

If you do the right thing to unlock her, she'll turn up on the ship at the end of Chapter 4 (When I get as far as writing that part anyway)

Neat, looking forward to seeing (and breeding) her!

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I just realized something funny. If you make it to Gen 6 your going to run into the issue of there being too many potential human girls to pair with legendarys to the point that instead of needing to pair Pokémon together, you may need to do that with the humans lol. 

Like you have the female player character, the rival, 4 gym leaders, 2 elite four members, the champion and 4 evil team admins* like sure you can cut the bug type gym leader but other cuts may be harder. I know this is nowhere near close enough to actually figure out rn but I find it funny. 

*they are very similar design wise so if you wanted to represent team Flare you could very easily squish them together into an wacky fivesome possibly just a thought not me trying to lead a direction ;)

Yeah Gen 6 is going to be... fun

I don't think I planned that far ahead in my notes, maybe I'll tie the extra humans to optional mons from previous chapters or even to previous humans if I have to

You can probably do some of the Kalos humans like you did with Erika, like, for example, idk: have Olympia deem you worthy once you've finished Valerie, Korrina and Viola's side scenes, that would be something.

Alternativly they could be tied to pseudo-legendaries

The pseudo-legendaries are set to be side scenes you get for being a completionist. Again this is an issue to be solved later because we are no where close to gen 6 .

That's been my assumption also but along with that perhaps grouping some of the human girls together could work like instead of having Serene and Shauna be separate humans just stick em together. They are canonical friends so they could be hanging out together when you bump into them. Or my very subtle hint that a fivesome with the Flare scientists would be appreciated wink ;) nudge.

But its also clear that cuts need to be made due to the lack of Legendaries like even in your own example that's 3 out of 6 Pokemon unless one of those 3 have their own special requirement. Again, issue to be solved later Gen 6 is not anywhere near being developed we still have Gen 5 after Sinnoh

I... actually forgot those scientist girls were a thing.

I already have a whole load of Humans for Gen 6 but now I want to try and add them in anyway!

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Yeah, it feels to me that one goal for this game is to represent the regions and the games within said regions, so having representatives of the evil team seem like requirements in my brain. The fact the Scientist girls are all similarly designed with that visor immediately said to me "oh you can do a large group scene with them."

Also while typing this comment I went and checked to see if you missed a villain team girl and found Ariana... god damn she hot.  Funnily enough Gen 4 is when they gave her a name.  

It'll have to be something like that, I've got plenty of time to figure it out though

1. I'm from Brazil and a big fan of your game, it's Very good.

2. How many and which mons and girls in gen 4 have you already made?

3. When, more or less, do you think v.4 of the game Will come?

4. I'm really looking forward to the next region.

Sorry If there is any error

1. Thanks, glad you're enjoying it! 

2. I've almost done 3 of each, currently working on Shaymin and Gardenia.

3. Probably not until June, I'll be splitting chapter 4 into 2 parts, so I can get the next update out quicker instead of making you guys wait forever.

4. Hope it'll be worth the wait!

Thank you, i was already dying tô know If It was longe before the next chapter arrived.

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Honestly, I would prefer that you take more time but launch each part fully ^^ And it's always worth the wait :3

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To be fair, these two next generations have a lot of mons even with the packaging of some together and removal of 1 in gen 4 that's still 11 scenes + humans + the ship stuff afterwards AND any of the side scenes that will be added into previous chapters. 

And for gen 5, assuming there will be a repackaging of some kind it will be at minimum 11 or 13 if no repackaging occurs + all the other features in the chapter. 

Needless to say these next chapters will have a lot of content so splitting it will get content out sooner, lets chainsaw take a break and not burnout and, allows for potential issues to be caught sooner rather then later such as image embed issues, typos and more.

if it makes you feel better gen 6 probably isn't going to be split lmao

This game's pretty solid, the only complaint I have is with the use of AI Art but hey, it's a F2P game without the usual microtransactions that come with it, I think the only reason why it's there is because you are probably not a good artist and you don't want to steal fanart so this is the closest thing we've got to visuals. Hey I'm not complaining, this game has potential even as a sexual parody of Pokemon.

I get what you mean, I don't like the idea of people making money on AI art since it is stealing from other artists, but my game is free so it doesn't seem like a problem to me.

The main reason I don't use fanart is because I might not be able to find images that fit what I want, but I can use the AI to make things like a Hyper-Pregnant Zapdos or a Cumflated Whitney.

I think you should use Yodayo or Civitai ai image generators, they are better at generating stuff, principally pokémons. The two of them use a point system, where you get a certain amount of points everyday to use on generating stuff. The problem is that if you are not familiar with how to use ai, it might need some time to learn.

If you ever use them, try the FurryRock model, it's the one that works really well with pokémons.

They have already made most of the images its the first thing done for updates. Besides that, using generators that limit the amount of generations one could do feels like it would hinder the process of trial and error needed to create satisfactory images. 

Also lil bit rude to imply he doesn't get how to use ai at this point like sure I have seen mistakes in some images like mewtwo's horns(?) becoming three and eyes being strange but clearly he's got enough understanding to make proper images. I mean he never promised ultra quality when we have his description being "I write low quality porn for my own amusement."

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I don't know where you saw that "rude" angle on my comment, but, i just said that, because i know which tools he's using and the tools i'm recommending, you will need to learn some new things, and go more in depth on how to prompt and use the resources you have available on what i recommended, i'm recommend him stuff because i mess with AI a lot.

I'll stick with what I've got for now,  it's free, fast, unlimited, and FREE!

Even if the quality isn't always that great, I can just generate over and over until I get something good

It's okay. If you have some free time, or something like it, it would be cool to mess with it, got some pretty good results using them.
But anyways, I'm just recommending some stuff because i really like your game. Keep doing the amazing work you're doing with it!

I just noticed something that I think you may have caught and fixed already while working on side scenes in chapter one but just in case... 

Mews text colour was updated from a hot pink to a more light pink that matches her skin colour and doesn't conflict with Mewtwos hot pink text. 

However you missed some instances of her text mainly one line at the start of the Daisy Oak breed scene and when you get briefed before your attempt to capture her by Maple. 

I hadn't caught those but now they're fixed!

Follow up, you said that there will be a week in May were you can't work on the game. I don't need to know why but what week will you be away and would that also stop you from answering comments? 

Also I'm curious if you have a rule on when a mon will be futa. The pattern established so far of having those with male gender ratio (partly or fully) be futa would be one I would follow personally because it actually will lead to plenty of futa scenarios just with that limitation, it wont distract from the primary kinks of the game and you wrote that futa's would be rare (tho gen 5 will test that lol) so you wouldn't want to overuse them. 

I'll be pretty busy in the real world from about the 15th to the 20th
But I should still be able to check in on the comments once a day

I don't have much of a plan going forward for who can be a futa, I'd prefer to keep it to Subs or Myths instead of the Main Legends, I might try and fit one in per chapter/generation
The only plan I have for sure right now, other than Heatran, is Glacier and Spectrier, but that needs me to get as far as Gen 8

Ah the horses I see where you are going with that. I will point out the remaining legends with the male gender ratios (all myths are labeled genderless from what I can see) 

Gen 5: The Forces of Nature (all three of them 100% male) 

Gen 6: None lmao

Gen 7: None again lmao

Gen 8: Urishifu (And the pre evolution but that's a whole different question for a different time)  (weird 87.5 male 12.5 female split) 

Gen 9: The Loyal Three (100%) and Terapagos (50/50)

Of course this requires you to make it all the way to Gen 9. 

I will say that even though I did warn about overdoing the futa, I'm not opposed to making the Forces of Nature all futa when the time comes to it not just because the gender ratio logic but if you were to go past gen 5,  in gen 8 there is Enamorus, the fourth Force of Nature who is 100% female which could provide a fun writing angle. Don't feel forced to have to put a futa in each chaptor tho write what you feel. 

I'd say the ones you mentioned would make sense to go futa

Im sure I can come up with something for gens 6 and 7

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3 Small questions:

1. Which mon/mons are you working on now? 

2. What are some side scenes you have added? (Don't need to disclose all, gotta keep some surprises :) )

3. I gave the idea of moving one of the sub legends to the second part (The Lake Guardians specifically) to balance the content split between the two halves (6/5 compared to 7/4) was wondering what you thought of that.  

1. Shaymin

2. I'll give you a hint "Did you know..."

3. I might leave Heatran until the second half, the Lake Guardians might be getting put together but there's still three of them, I'd rather get that extra work done sooner

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1. Cool

2. I get it ;)

3. Understandable it would be easier to just get them done And I can also see a reason as to why because Heatran is on the Battle Zone so you could have it be closed for some reason

Hello! First of all, love the work that you've done here. I just have one itty bitty issue on my end. The text color of dark blue (used for Latios, Suicune, and others) is kind of difficult for me to make out properly on a black background. Might just be a me issue, but I would appreciate it if the text for those characters were just a bit lighter so that I can properly read the text without highlighting it each time. Keep up the great work!

I haven't seen any issues so it might be that your brightness is too low

There's only so many color options in Twine
(unless I start using those color code things, but why type FFC0CB when I can type PINK)

I've been trying to avoid the darker blues for that exact reason, I'll see if I can make them a little brighter but I won't promise anything.

I've had the issue to, I have to highlight the text to read it. It blends in too much with the dark background

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How do you feel about your game being on porn games hub

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Someone asked this before, Chainsaws answer was basically the game isn't for money so if a site is going to use it, its not a real bother. (Edit: I just looked at the site and they technically credit Chainsaw lol but the comments seem to feel positive about the game... ones a little strange tho I won't repeat it here but if one were to check they can see what I mean. Also now I'm curious how many plays/visits the game has gotten on itch since porngameshub claims 87k visits. I've never really trusted the numbers on those sites even on the more credible ones like gamcore) 

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I forget exactly how, but there's a way you can look at a site's web code, and usually you can find random number generation code on such things. Most commonly on shopping sites that tell you how many people are 'looking' at an item to try and pressure you into buying it. The vast majority of the time, the number is just spat out by a random number generator.

According to my analytics, PokeBreeder has had 193k visits here on Itch

PGH now says 98k, but I have no clue if that's accurate or not

Also I was more asking on how they felt on their game gaining popularity

I think i said this on the other comment about this

Seeing my work turning up in other places must mean it's good enough to be shared around, so I think it's pretty cool!

you have an eye for quality 

I'm fine with my work being shared, kinda freaked out by the depression/suicide conversation going on in the comments over there...

Yeah that's certainly a real heavy topic to suddenly show up in comments. Hope things turn out positively.

i think this is a pretty cool game and can't wait for the next update. p.s. does anyone  know when the next update will be or have a estimate of when it will be? 

If you look at the FAQ it explains that it will be done when its done. Its hard to actually do an ETA when there are a lot of factors like what's going on with stuff outside of making the game or potentially an idea that has alot of complexity to it (Deoxys). The one real thing I can say because I'm not the creator is that hopefully the gap between the Hoenn update and the next update is shorter then the gap between Johto and Hoenn updates due to Sinnoh being split into 2 parts

I try not to give estimates in case I end up getting delayed, but I will say that the next update probably won't come out until June.

I there's going to be about a whole week in May where I won't be able to work on it at all

i have a question , is arceus going to be harder to capture? something like 3 lives and a lot of different mechanics mixed? , like combat at one part a maze in the next and trivia at the third, and if you fail even one theres no way to capture arceus until the end where theres a second chance thats a little more easy, and that only appears if you have all pokemon? 

(i know its more than 1 question but i wanna know if arceus being the god of pokemon is going to be harder)

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Arceus is going to have a barrier for entry (collect all the mains) and the one chance as every Mythical does but I doubt there will be a second chance if you fail (Unless you use saves but who would do that :) ). Arceus does have a reginal human partner as well so I doubt it will be a Pokemon that simply comes back later in a different update. As for the actual content of the capture, I wouldn't know but your idea of it being a mix of most of the mechanics used so far feels fitting for scale and I'm going to assume was Chainsaws plan. Just know the next update is split and Arceus is being added in the second part. 

I was planning to do a difficult quiz, but I like the idea of her having a quiz AND a battle, she is supposed to be GOD so it would make sense if it was harder to get her

But there won't be a second chance outside of save scumming

it said updated 5 days ago was it a fix?

I think that was me adding the Forms question to the FAQs
I didn't realize that Itch would count that as an update

I LOVE the regi designs but they've shown SEVERAL times that they are sentient in the games they can refuse to obey your commands and regiges Pokedex entries say he created SENTIENT life and they are OBVIOUSLY sentient in the anime

... this is a porn game where you create a harem of legendary pokemon to breed, all of them listen and do what you ask because you are their master. 

The regis also do stuff of their own volition in the game with the ship scene when the trios all jump into your bed. The regis show up and offer to get into the bed of the MC after asking but the MC didn't go "I need to go order the regis to get into my bed" they just showed up and asked. 

I think you need more evidence that they are not sentient other then just saying they aren't. 

I'm pretty sure the Regis don't have big ol' tiddies in the games/anime either

There's going to be differences in what's canon and what I write
It's unavoidable

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Hey there, just gonna a couple of things about this stupid-ass game:
One: Headcanons, mostly about this game's MC:

1. LPB's MC over here is kinda like Issei Hyoudou from High School DxD in terms of general character: both are escapist characters who are naughty-minded perverts with a heart of gold. Just that MC is more, subdued, about his perversions (or at least, doesn't flaunt it like something under his sleeve) compared to boob-lover McGee over there. 

2. LPB's MC is also, pretty blunt, given that most of his encounters with Legendaries under Maple's request tend to begin with "hello, I am here to make children with you." from the fella.

3. MC's mom and Professor Maple go way back as friends from elementary who took different career paths but still kept in touch with each other. Probably the reason why a normal Pokemart employee is even called at Maple's lab (aside from the half-Ditto thing).

4. Despite Professor Maple's kinship with MC's mom, MC himself never really got to see Maple all that often, "she's probably busy with lab and science shit" he often said to himself, which is probably the reason why he never even heard of Maple's life outside of her scientific contributions, like having a husband.

5. His general attitude with the whole "gotta breed all dem Legends" thing is a mix of attempted professionalism (trying and failing to convince himself and others that he's just doing this under the request of his mom's friend to preserve legendaries), genuine excitement (seeking out his world's equivalent to Gods is excitement in on itself), and some of his own dirty thoughts into the mix (Lust is a sin, duh) 

And two: A bit of support, can't wait for the Sinnoh update bro, given that I feel like it's gonna be a beefier content update compared to the Hoenn update.

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Okay, lets see what kind of answers I can make up here!

1. MC is absolutely an unashamed pervert, but is self aware enough to realize when and where he should let that side of him show, people usually see him as being a fairly normal (if slightly eccentric) guy, that's before they get to know him anyway.

2. I don't know if I'd call the MC blunt, he can use tact when he has to, it's just that most parts of his adventure don't call for it, so he finds being straightforward easier.

3. Maple and the MC live in the same small town (think Pallet Town but slightly bigger), it's the sort of place where everyone knows everyone, so Maple and MC's Mom would probably know each-other, but they wouldn't be exceptionally close.

4. Maple is pretty reclusive when she's focused on her work, before the events of the game, MC only really knew her as "The hot scientist who lives nearby", it doesn't help that MC usually only pays attention to T&A so wouldn't have bothered learning about her home life.

5. MC like to act like a scientist and does genuinely believe in Maple's cause, but there's no hiding the fact that he's in this for the thrills, both in the adventure and in the bedroom, Maple considers him an Asset (and lover if you boned her), not a researcher.


The update is going fine, I think I'll go through with the plan to release it in two halves.
Half of Sinnoh will actually be as much content as the game had on its initial release, plus that will cut down on the wait for you guys!

Sweet. I'm pretty curious and excited about what shit you're gonna bring to the table when it comes to the Sinnoh update (well, aside from just adding Sinnoh's legendaries and teasing Unova after the player's done with it) being a two-parter, but given the legends and myths located in that region alone (14 bro, 9 of which being legends and 5 being myths), I'd say it's fairly justified to make it a two-parter. Like, I'm curious about what Sinnoh Part 1 and 2 are gonna be about.

Part 1 is going to be the Sub Legends and Mythicals (except one)

Part 2 will be the Main Legends and the remaining Myth, along with the ship section afterwards

Both updates will include extra side scenes too

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Do the lake guardians count as sub or main Legendary's? They do play central roles in the games main story unlike the sub legends we have seen so far. 

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Im going by what Serebii says (I think I made a joke about that early on in the game)

So they're counted as Subs, main Legends are mostly the ones on the game boxes

Also I'm putting the Lake Guardians together since they're so freaking identical that I don't see any point in separating them!

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I will note chainsaw isn't planning to do Phione making it 13 but that fair because Phiones mythical status has been challenged by Gamefreak themselves (Edit: Also to avoid confusion the "except one" and "remaining myth" isn't about Phione, its Arceus)

Hey man loved all the new side scenes that you put in the early regions, great way of increasing replayabilty. Hows the next update btw?

Next update is steadily getting done, I've finished 2 Mons and their matching Humans, added a handful of side scenes too!

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Possibly unintentional, but why does it have futa in the tags?

Nvm, now i know (still wish the mc could have female pronouns tho)

Yeah, it's only Latios right now but there will be others

Making the MC a Futa would require a major rework so... not happening I'm afraid

how are you gonna handle arceus' different plate forms

This is when giving legendary Pokémon forms became a big thing with Gamefreak so might as well round all the form questions by asking bout Giritina's forms. 

I assume that because the different forms are canonically meant to be one for the distortion world one for the real world she looks strange when attempting the capture her, then look more normal once taken to the real world. Thats an idea at least.

They'll probably get used for side scenes, that's pretty much going to be my plan for all alternate forms

I added the Forms question to the FAQs now

are you making shaymin evolve to its sky form or have two Pokémon 

Sky form will probably be a transformation that I'll use for a side scene, but she'll mostly stay in her regular form

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Typo Report Breaking News

A fairly simple mistake but a hard one to notice

Rayquaza breed scene

"...you hadn't noticed because you were too busy trying not to fall of of her while keeping..."

Edit: Even more breaking news 

coke on the brain eh

Kyogre Lugia ship scene 

"Dignity?! I saw you drooling on the floor after Rayquaza kncoked you out!"

Thanks and... fixed!

Are you actually gonna add every legendary and mythical Pokémon from every gen If so good luck with that and are you gonna do the same plan for regiggias with your current arceus plan

I'm hoping to get them all if I can

Regigigas... will require something to unlock, it should be easy enough to figure out though.

I don't know why but I keep remembering how giratina abducted people in the anime movie now I'm imagining it with giratina's wing/tentacles dragging him by the pants as he claws the ground.

Palkia: The town goth has left the house.

Giratina: Bring me the country loving farm boy/

*Dialga dragging in a tied up mc*

MC: NO NO LET ME GO I DON'T WANNA!

I'm imaging that clip of Spongebob being dragged into the kitchen

No! I want to live!
I WANT TO LIVE!

Maybe I can work a scene like that in somewhere

oh Idea giratina is the last one the mc breeds before you meet arceus since you need the other legendaries everytime  the mc is constantly getting the feeling of being watched every time he is by a mirror or water that is not rippling (since giratina needs a reflective surface to drag people to their world from the anime)

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Arceus is a mythical so technically they are a one attempt non-required pokemon. Also Rayquaza so far has been the only legendary that has had a legendary barrier to entry. Perhaps Arceus could require the main legendarys to attempt but depends mainly on what Chainsaw wants. Also the anime isn't a main source Chainsaw uses often, I asked for a lil scene/dialogue with Rayquaza about Deoxys due to their connection in the anime but didn't end up happening ... I think I might not have tested it the right way.  (This comment makes me sound like a nerd glasses emoji type of guy lol) (Edit: I just checked it was there :) if you want to see it you need to get Rayquaza before leaving to get Deoxys )

I actually meant to write a Rayquaza & Deoxys scene, but I forgot...

I'll get that done ready for the next update!

Actually my current plan is that you'd need Dialga, Palkia, AND Giritina before you can attempt Arceus.

I like the watching through reflections thing, and you gave me a better plan to set up Giritina's section!

yeaaaahhhhhh

any chance you add a scene where the mc is fucked in the ass by someone?

None, not really my thing
I like femboy butts, but that's as far as that kind of content will go

will you add missingno? just curious as i think it would be interesting to see how it goes

Already planning to put her in, I won't go into details but she will get in eventually

It has been about 2 weeks since you talked about starting work on chapter 4 I think that's fair enough to ask how the actual update is going so far? 

Going a bit slowly, real life keeps getting in the way
But it's starting to speed up now

Well that's good to hear. I hope none of the real life stuff is anything too serious :) 

Nah, nothing serious, but nothing I could ignore either

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Funny idea I had if you're gonna try the half and half update. If you click on a non finished mon/human, the path is blocked by a Snorlax. 

It could be for that or this is another side scene idea but Gen 1 has only 4-5 slots according to your rules so don't want to waste too many. 

The Side Scene limit isn't set in stone, it's just a vague guideline for myself

I think I'll just close off the links for scenes I haven't written, but I like the idea of a Snorlax side scene!
A sleepy BBW blocks the path!

Tonight on Typo Report 

Two typos for the price of one scene!?!

Phoebe breed scene: 

You grin awkwardly as you lower Phoebe's feet to the floor, you warn her that she's absolutily pregnant and will absolutily 

The fact this was repeated makes me worried you should check any other instance of absolutely 

This has been the Typo Report

Thanks again!

I checked and it looks like those were the only absolutilys
I think I've found a way to spell check the whole thing but it's going to be time consuming...
Either way, I always appreciate the reports!

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on the note of side scenes I would like to see the pseudo legendary pokemon for each region like Dragonite being added to chapter 1 and Tyranitar in chapter 2 Salamence in 3 and so on. 

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Already been requested and already being planned!

A somewhat random thought, but I wonder now that side scenes are a thing and plenty of ideas have been pitched, do you have some sort of rule for how many side scenes you would add to previous chapters per update? 

I think it would be nice to have some side scenes serve as like mini updates between the big chapter updates to perhaps tide some people over while waiting for the new region. Some people were becoming a lil impatient near the release of V3 so.  

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I don't have any aprticular limit to side scenes, I guess as long as there's less of them than there are Legendarys in the region then that's fine
I'm mostly relegating them with the idea that only iconic (or commonly R34'd) Mons will get side scenes

I suppose I could try and do a mini update when Sinnoh is half done to help bridge the gap
I'll have to block off the stuff I didn't do yet so nobody gets stuck in an empty page

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Do you mean like adding the finished half of Sinnoh or adding in side scenes?  Im not sure what you mean by needing to block off stuff. I kind of like how the regions drop as one big package but perhaps this is me just showing my lack of knowledge in developing a twine/html game

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Adding the half finished Sinnoh, just adding in the side scenes wouldn't be much of an update since there'd only be a handful of them
I'd have to lock off chapter 4 and remove a lot of images from the files to make sure none of the chapter 4 images are left in
It would be easier to just do a half-update and close off the links to Legends/Humans that I haven't written yet
It would give more content too since it would be 5 (maybe) Mons/Mans along with any side scenes I'll have written by then

Alright, I get that I did see some images in the download versions gallery clearly meant for future updates. Maybe you should poll other people on if they think this method for updates is better or not.

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I know it's a few generations down the road for Pokémon, but could you maybe add a variant of either ash greninja or greninja yeah, its a starter Pokémon but from my knowledge it's a fan favorite. understandable if its not in the kalos region since it's not legendary

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I can put Greninja in as a Side Scene, maybe I'll make reference to Ash Greninja somehow?

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