That's exactly how MC feels like to me, vague and yet sharp like so much of the story's own setting! I'm so happy you loved the story and characterization, as well as the art ❤️❤️ it is the culmination of so many people's kindness!
I'm so so happy you liked it, and thank you so much for your rating and comment. You've made me week much lighter and better Cibilka 💕
You're so sweet Osty-kun!! 🥺 Thank you so much for your high praise and if you ever find the energy to go on that long review... I'd love to hear it someday ❤️
Nevertheless, in spite of everything, you took the time and energy to comment and I'm extremely grateful. Thank you so much for reading 💖💕
Really enjoyed this game a lot. The writing, the interactions between the characters and how the MC really seemed to be molded based on the choices really made this a wonderful and immersive experience. I really can't wait to experience more.
I'm so glad you feel that way GameAg 🥺💕 I'm still figuring it all out, but I truly want the game to be reactive to your choices and the character interactions to feel complex! It's probably not so apparent in Chapter 1, but I hope to improve on it to be able to deserve your praise 💖💖 thank you so much again!
Waaa thank you for the high praise, TrotskyBoi!!! That means so much to me 🥹💖💕 and I've been waiting forever for someone to comment on it, I can't believe everyone just took it in stride! Once again, thank you so much 😭😭🫶
Really enjoyed this so far. My MC Eilam, which I chose for its meaning "forever" or "eternal", is a kind but reserved God with a slight bitter take on life. He's curious and tends to fail to adhere to social graces when his curiosity gets to him, as he has the gift of way to much knowledge and perception. (being Everlasting and Universal Eye) He has black hair with a blue streak in it, violet eyes, fair skin, and wears a style of clothes that no other being mortal or immortal wears. (and lots of black and dark blues and silvers in my mind) He never changes his appearance either, preferring to be exactly as described.
Though he's friendly and playful to those friendly to him, he's also quick to anger when disrespected or demeaned as an errand boy. He got mad and ignored Salv for not believing him when he trusted him with his glimpse of the universes pain, but otherwise does value his friendship. He sees the good in Ciocana, knowing what its like to be outcast for what you are. (And they share a spark for being cinical and snarky. poss future besties) But his heart is drawn to Luciel, who he desires to protect and get closer to. He's neutral to Alessi, lacking interaction. (but my guess is if she's mean to him, he'll be mean to her but also merciful in the end as he has a good heart. unless she hurts someone he loves...like his dads or Luciel)
While curious about everything, he's neutral towards humans since he always has to deal with the whiny ones in Lucidia. He does like his job as he enjoys helping others and solving problems, but he does hate dealing with to many people and the difficult ones. In that sense, he takes after Nero in being more of an introvert and needing some recharge time away. He also dislikes being around most of the other gods outside of his fathers, Luciel, Ciocana, and Salv.
Whether he'll side with divinity or mortals will depend on Alessi's reasoning and whether its enough to stir his sympathy, otherwise he's the type to protect those he loves and that currently consists of only a handful...all divine.
blue_shayde, I'm sorry I couldn't get to you any sooner! Things have just been so hectic 🥺
Thank you so much for telling me about your Eilam 💖💖 it still astounds me that people put such incredible thought behind their MCs, and that's just the highest form of love and flattery I can receive!
Ah, Salv 💔 despite caring for Eilam, I think they find it difficult to break away from some of their stubborn beliefs -- or at least, their stubbornness to look away from the truth.
Eliam is incredibly kind to sympathize with Cio, and oh--Luciel!! That would be such a sweet union ❤️ I do suspect Alessi will he very unkind to Eilam... but their mercy will be very surprising!
They most definitely take after Nero, who keeps his affairs away from mortals, and is fiercely loyal and protective to the things and people he cares about!
I think the conflict will then be doubly interesting for Eilam. I wanted there to be a conflict between wanting to stay loyal to your friends and family, and yet having to do that at the cost of potentially wronging the Universe and humanity.
Thank you so much again for telling me❤️❤️ it's incredible valuable to know about other people's MCs so I can tailor and keep in mind what dialogue choices to include to accommodate different personalities!
It's ok. Thanks for your thoughts. I find it hard to really roleplay and get into the mind of a character without having an idea of what my character is going to ultimately be. I'm not the self-insert type, so I love to flesh out a MC that has an initial format that can grow and develop with the story I've put them in. Eilam started out as my idea of a very wise but misunderstood God with a kind heart, who'd probably hang his head and stick to the wall like a typical wallflower. However...as your story went on...he became a bit more proud and his job in the underworld just reminded me of my retail job days. Thus...he now has a bit of that harsh cynical nature you tend to develop when you work retail jobs for to long. (anyone who's worked retail will understand the pain of dealing with idiots and entitled assholes)
I also love the idea of the God of Eternity and the God of Death as a pair. Leave it to a God of Eternity to have zero fear of a God of Death. Even though around Luciel, Eliam becomes less introvert and more simp. (Luciel deserves someone to love and be loved. Not being alone at a table during a feast. I wonder what the child of Death and Eternity would be...... Fate? Destiny? Rebirth? Probably Rebirth. Could be all three.)
And Eliam having this vast library like knowledge in his head, like the personal history recorder of the universe itself. I wanted to make him a fighter because he's definitely the protective type, but Perception and Knowledge were just to perfect for a God of Eternity. Somehow Eliam went from a kicked puppy in my mind to a prissy black cat that will hiss if you poke him the wrong way. But I like it. I'm looking forward to future development
Final thoughts...I totally adore his dads. And from the sounds of it, Alessi and Eliam are going to be like two stubborn cats fighting over floor space. He won't back down from kicking her ass...and seems like neither will she. Thus...I suspect we've got a good ol' fashion rivalry/frienemy relationship in the future here.
Sorry for another rant. I've always loved mythology, so I can get passionate when it comes to this sort of thing. xD
This demo is (pardon my french) absolutely fucking gorgeous. And not just the aesthetics- though the ui is probably some of the prettiest I've seen on twine. The beauty pervades even the text itself; the writing is lyrical and flowing, yet clear and crisp. If I had to use one word to describe the writing style of Uroboros, it would be ethereal. It is dreamlike, as though you're walking through someone else's hazy recollections. Yet, the text always manages to remain sharp and focused, never losing sight of the plot. The writing is always so easy to visualize, at a mere whim bringing in images of decadent halls and the shimmering night sky to the forefront of the readers mind.
And the choices. The sheer depth of choices we have, this early on, makes me squeal with glee and clap my hands with joy. There's such a wide range to choose from, allowing the mc to spring to life fully realized. MC isn't shoveled into an archetype, but instead is allowed to roam the world, feeling out each and every interaction they have. And you're never penalized by the game for choosing the "wrong" option whatsoever. If you want to be mean, be mean. If you want to be kind yet bitter (my MC, thanks for asking) you have the freedom to do so! Any combination under the sun is possible, and the game won't lock you out for having the 'wrong' mc.
And the relationships we can have with the characters also makes me giggle and clap my hands like a toddler in a candy shop. There's no relationship points or values or anything like that; instead, you can craft your relationship with each character as you see fit, letting the game keep track of your attitudes and mannerisms. As another commenter said, there's no need to second guess whether declining a piece of bread will lead to a decreased relationship- this game says, 'fuck that!', and lets you decline the damned bread without losing anything whatsoever to the relationship. You can create actual, meaningful relationships in this game without agonizing over being stuck in Route Lock Hell.
I know that so far I've written what may amount to a whole ass essay, but this wouldn't be complete if I didn't have a whole mini rant about my wonderful little MC, Roselle the Imperishable, The Universal Eye, All Who Lasts Forever. (Whoo writing that was a dozy.) Kindhearted and outgoing, yet tactful and courteous; ever curious and open, yet keeps their secrets close to their chest. Charming, thoughtful, caring- they're a well of contradictions. When they were born, they were bathed in love from the Universe. Yet, after being cast aside by the gods, after being ridiculed and thought of as lesser, they now doubt the Universe's love towards them. It must all be a ruse, because how could this count as love?
They're pretty curious about everything- about how the wind flows, about the way the water laps against the beach, and most of all, about humans. They've studied human anatomy extensively, and was more than a little excited to dance with the humans at the festival! Yet, despite having a job that allows them to speak to humans on the daily, they, well...they hate it. They never let that show though; instead they go about their duties with their head held high, dutiful to their task. They would much rather travel and see the world, but for now they will stay in the afterlife, guiding souls to their destination. What good were they worth outside of this?
Roselle, while they are kind and loving, also has a well of bitterness inside of them that they try not to acknowledge, yet always manages to rise up unbidden. They love their fathers, yet in the same breath loathe the two for bringing them into the world, worthless and then tossed aside. They loathe Salvatore, due to pure jealousy. Salvatore, the miracle, the golden child, the beloved. They always attempt to act civil around her, and know that their loathing isn't justified, yet they loathe anyways.
One of the only deities that is uniformly on their good side, however, is Lucille, above all grateful to xem for giving them a chance when no one else would. Ciocana is amusing, funny and playful, yet also a (potential) friend in the making- outcasts are drawn to other outcasts, after all. And they are definitely looking at Alessi (and may help out with the rebellion. Idk, whichever route proves to be the most chaotic...cackling like a witch rn).
Now as this long winded rant falls to an end, I merely want to re-iterate my thoughts on this game: it's really fucking good. Like, really. Play it, replay it, and bask in the wealth of choices and the beautiful writing. Meanwhile, I will be banging my hands over and over again, waiting for chapter 2. Thank you so much author for making this incredible game!
You have no idea how many times I've read reread your comment. There is nothing more inspiring and beautiful to me than someone who receives your labor of love with so much love, too. Being able to resonate with someone is the impact that I've always dreamed to have, if there's one thing I must do; in a way, that's true eternity.
I'm so glad you could see what I was aiming for with the writing style! Simultaneously hazy, yet clear -- a waking dream, as said in the prologue. I can't even state my ecstasy in at least succeeding convey the way I wish my writing is read, even for just one person!
I've always found that one of the issues I had with IFs is having to play to fit a certain archetype perfectly. Sometimes, it feels like they punish me for responding differently than how I've characterized my MC until that point. That's not something I want to penalize people for, but rather reward -- to give them nuance, and not lock them out of options unless it's jarring or wildly illogical. I'm so happy you're really enjoying the depth of the choices so far, and I hope to continue that trend in the next chapters!!
Of course, another issue I found in other IFs is needing to say the perfect words, the perfect choices to gain the approval of my chosen romantic options. It's difficult to work with, because on one hand, I want to please the characters -- and yet, changing my character to fit the RO also feels like the RO can't love them honestly. This time around, I simply want to acknowledge MCs who agree and MCs whodisagree with them. I also can't help myself, since I love opposites attract!
Thank you so much for telling me about Roselle. Learning about other people's MCs is truly valuable information. It helps give me insight as to what matters to readers and their deities of eternity, and that helps me mold the IF's choices and direction much better to cater to both you guys and myself! I especially hope to cater to MCs with as much nuance as Roselle, who can be sweet and lovely, and yet bitter and jealous (rightfully or not so rightfully).
I can't even begin to explain how emotional this comment made me. Again, there is no higher honor than being seen. I can only hope to show it by hopefully marching your energy, which is why I delayed writing until I feel I could give a response that could do my feelings justice. Even now, it still doesn't feel enough -- and yet it'll have to do. You've singlehandedly forced me to write today, even for just a few minutes, because I desperately want to write the story that you say it is -- that someone could love as much as I do. ❤️❤️
Oh. Em. GEE!!! This game is so. Freaking. COOL!!!! Hellooo, there are GODS in here, like you're playing a literal god. You're useless but you still get to bully dead humans so I enjoyed it. There are also other gods that are Cute like the sunshine god. Have yuo ever seen that teletubbies baby face in the sun, that's what I mentally imagine them to look like (I kno there are drawings showing what they look like but I like to be using my IMAGINATION!!!!) There's also boss mommie god and daddy gods which I much liked. The writing is freaking great it has this whimsical tone which goes with the setting and you really feel like you are a god, but like a useless one. The demo ended in a cliffhanger so I'm a little bit angry thinking of complaining abt that. But it's still so yummy I think I won't and I look forward to reading MORE!!!!
(This was a silly little joke but my love for this game is not. I can't describe the experience of reading it in just words, but believe me when I say that it's well worth it. The whimsical, magical feeling that the writing inspires really helps to paint the world and unique situation you find yourself in as the god of eternity. There is so much freedom given with how you're allowed to interpret this story, to the point where some instances have completely different choices depending on how you've felt about something previously. You wouldn't realize it if you only play through it once, but gems like that just goes to show how much effort the author has put into making this as personal of an experience as possible, despite the fantastical setting. The only complaint I have is that I want more </3)
SDIFGJKLDFG TELETUBBIES BABY FACE?! 😭😭😭 well,. ,, , all the more power to you and your vivid imagination blablabuble,,,,,, don't cook again 🗣️🗣️💯💯🔥🔥
In any case, thank you so much for your compliments 🥺🥺 I know I asked you to do this as a joke, but I'm so glad that you wrote such genuinely nice things for it as well!! I truly write this for you and the others, and I hope that love comes across. The choices I made for this IF are defined by how much I wish this IF to be so personal to the audience and the people I care about.
Thank you so much again for humoring me.......... Carl 💕💕
A staggering amount of personality variations that allows you to cook up the most complex and interesting MCs your little heart could ever dream of. Angry Wet Cat (read: tsundere) options are very much available and readily received by the world within the game, so one can live their tsundere MC dreams to the fullest without having to worry about getting 34785 negative relationship points along the way. MCs intent on being the meanest, most ruthless piece of ice in the general vicinity are also welcomed.
Favorability meters? Relationship points? They don't exist here. Choices actually bounce off of non-MC characters to create interesting relationship dynamics instead of kicking you into Route Lock Jail. Unless you say something that's extremely opposed to their core morals, you're fine. The game won't kick you out for being mean, promise <3 Go wild with the variables. Be free.
And, no. You don't get negative relationship points for refusing a piece of bread. There are no relationship points. The game tracks the attitudes, opinions, and actions you express to the characters and bounces off of that. Refuse that bread. They won't mind. This is a safe space for bread haters. More bread for me, at least 😌🍞✨
— (If I sound a bit unhinged, I'm sorry <//3 this is a personal blurb I wrote for Uroboros while I was working on making actual different collections for my beloved IF games instead of tossing them all into one collection 💀 I figured I should post it here as well.)
Aspen, thank you again for such extensive praise!! 😭😭 I will work even harder to make sure that what you say is fully true in the next upcoming chapters — I want to accommodate even the wettest and angriest cat MC ❤️❤️ there is so much more to people than arbitrary dialogue choices you make and small decisions that largely don't matter in the long run. I've personally struggled so much to always say the right things so that my RO won't hate me, and that's an anxiety I definitely don't hope to encourage in readers for my IF!
I'm really glad you tok the time to recognize that! The SAFEST space for bread haters :) thank you so much for dropping this comment even though it was meant for your collection! (PS I totally checked it out!!)
I absolutely adore this, you do not even understand the extent of how much I love this.
The customization is awesome, being able to choose multiple pronouns & even change forms as we please is just so amazing I adore that.
The complexity of the choices & characters & how its not just superficial stats, which, I enjoy stat based games, but this is refreshing to say the least & it makes everything feel so much more real.
I love being able to choose if my character likes being touched as well, the amount of customization is just awesome.
The setting & little clues we get on the lore & the way it was executed, it all just makes this an amazing experience, even with only one chapter out.
I feel like I will become addicted to this game.
Edit: Before I forget, In profile, after ‘as befits’ rather than showing the pronoun it shows $mc_their
Thank you so much for your kind words!! I am so glad that you enjoyed the level of customization and the choices so much—what you're saying is what I strive to achieve, and while I can't say myself if I deserve your high praise... I'd love to be worthy of it and be confident of saying as much as well someday! ;O;
I will check into that bug, and again, thank you so much!!! This means the absolute world to me <3
saw luciel and immediately had to play this game. and now look where i am. writing fanfiction. oh my god.... ten minutes until i write more luciel fics amen. see you on discord 🫡
(on a different note. i love this game!! first one i've played and it's really fun! :D)
Oh Desatana, hi phobia!! 🥺🥺 I'm glad you like Luciel's portrait so much, and I loved your writing too!!! See you on Discord, and thanks so much for commenting and sending your love! 💕
Your writing is so fantastic. I absolutely love the amount of choices available to us for building our characters, not just superficial appearance choices, but actual personality choices! That feels so rare in IF. I also saw you mentioned you can be on good terms with the characters even if you disagree with them, that made me so happy! I'm always so excited to find a good story with choices and character interactions that don't rely heavily on stats.
🥺🥺🫂💕 Thank you so much for all your kind words, melkhiresa! I get emotional reading your comment because you say exactly what I hope to hear about the IF! You remind me that there are people see and acknowledge the small details, and that truly inspires me to keep holding myself to a high standard. I want to keep putting out work that makes you feel this way! Again, thank you so much for your kindness 🫶✨
😭😭 Thank you so much!! And you are absolutely not crazy at all... I'd love to hear them if you ever want to share them! Thank you so much for enjoying this 💕💕
I think it’s different bc the writing is phenomenal, I felt so immersed and the designs were all so beautiful!! The characters also had so much thought into them, it’s not everyday you find stories like this!I’m so excited to see the rest of the story! I will definitely follow its development!! ❤️
🥹... It feels weird to call you guys fans. I feel honored to be given the chance to be read and known, which is the most wonderful thing to ever happen to an author. Instead, I feel indebted to everyone who's given my story a chance and invested their time and effort into reading it.
Thank you so much for explaining 💕 while I feel I don't deserve such high praise, I trust that you mean it, and that means the world to me. Thank you so so much for giving me your kind words!!
I don't know what to say. Everything about this game is so beautiful. From how the story flows to pretty designs (the art is so PRETTY and the descriptions are so well detailed). I really love the interactions of the MC with the characters, and Its so well written that I want more of it 😭💗 Thank you for making this! Good luck on the upcoming updates.
GreenGummyFrog, you have similarly put me at a loss for words 😭💕 thank you so much for giving this game a try, and for liking the writing and design I worked hard for! I can't tell you how amazing and profound it is to be seen. I hope you will follow the next updates!! 🫶
Beautiful, beautiful game. The visuals, the writing, the characters — so many aspects of this game come together to create an incredibly immersive experience. The amount of variations available for the player are insane, and makes so much room for you to create complex and vivid MCs. 5 stars, 10/10, and I hope new readers will have as much fun as I am!
Aspen, thank you so so much for your kind words, it means the world to me!! 💕💕 I've rewritten this comment a few times, but I can never quite convey my appreciation in any way that expresses the full breadth of it. Even if I can't hope to show it properly, I've been, and am, extremely grateful for all the support you've given me so far. It's truly astounding. Again, thank you so much :)
Cause I'm not sure the best way to contact the creator about the website, I'll do it here. Salvatore's and Luciel's Heart/Personality section is the exact same, looks like Salvatore's was accidently copied straight up from Luciel's.
Damn.... i want more , when i played the demo i wanted more but now that i have played demo and chapter 1 ... i am addicted .waiting for the next time it updates .
Aaah, I'm glad you liked it so much!! 🫶 I'll be updating Chapter 1 soon with some additional choices, but hopefully I'll be able to write Chapter 2 without delay!
I don't know how to explain it... You did a great job, like the story and how it's portrayed (if it's confusing to read, understand that english is not my first language so.. sorry 😅).
I'm in love with this game, everything about it beautiful💓 the art style, the story, and all the characters can't get enough I replayed it like many times. So excited can't wait for more chapter!
??? I can't believe I didn't see this!!! Thank you so much ursweetalks, I am ecstatic to hear that you've replayed this so many times and haven't gotten sick of it 😭💕🫶 I hope you will continue to read it in the future! I'll be keeping you in mind -- I want to keep it fresh and interesting for you!
Hello Erkang, thank you for reading, even though it is not your first language! I understand as English is also not my first language. I now have an option to change the choices to non-uppercase, but this will be available in the next update!
Here is the option in Settings.
Here's an example of what it will look like in the game.
If the font is too small after it's lowercase, I am also going to fix changing the font size of the choices. Again, it is not in the game just yet, but when I release the update, it will be!
!!! 🥹🫶 thank you so much Ninajuvia! I'm so glad you love the looking mechanic, and--wow, being called dear is always so so reassuring!! Thank you so much for enjoying what I made! 💕
This was so good!! Everything about it was so just so, so good! The designs, the characters, the story - I look forward to the see it develop even more :DD
thank you Siopao!!! I am glad you liked it so much, and I hope to continue to fulfill your expectations going forward 💕 P.S. my mom always said my face was as round as Siopao!
possible spoilers!!!! ohhh my goddddd.. at the 'the order of the Universe be defied' i got GOOOOOSEBUMPS WHATTT i love alll the characters theyre so interesting esp Ciocana, and omg i love my fathers sm here their dynamic is so cute i cant wait for more this is so good i love it<3
Eeeee glad you liked that line! I loved it as well when I was writing it!! <3 I am so glad you love the characters, but the dads have a special place in my heart! ;; Thanks for playing it and loving what I made! :)
i hope you take care of youreself. Mistyrious, stay hydrated and take frequent breaks bc life is simply tiring!! i hope something makes you smile and as happy as u made all of us with this piece of art<3
This is the sweetest comment I've got ♥️ thank you so much for looking out for me as a person, paradidemon, and I hope you take yourself just as you've asked me to do
omg I think waking up at 3 am is the best way to find a game LMAOO I’ve been doing this unconsciously and its always bring me AN AMAZING games to play. I love everything about this like I have no complaints even though im SUPER PICKY about ifs games. HOW 🥹🥹 omg I really look forwards to this. Ily Tysm for making this😔😭💕💕 and take care!!
!!! Thank you Moonmin! 🥹 As someone who's very picky about my IFs, one of my main motivations of writing this is trying to find the perfect IF for myself... if you can't find it, then make it! 💕
Thank you so much for taking the time to share your wonderful thoughts, and have an amazing day!! :)
I would really LOVE to make an IFs games but english is not my strong language yet. HAHAHH I need to practice more but I’ll get there someday. Right now I’m just browsing through and gather my inspiration and this is definitely one of them😭😭💕
And you’re right about that if you can’t find one make one LMAO
But I see many amazing IFs being abandoned or discontinued so that just make me want to make one and and like REALLY finished it.
anyway ty for replying 😭😭hope u have a nice day!! *Heart heart*
Jeez -- absolutely am in love with this story -- and it's just the beginning! The world-building, lore, MC/others (esp. dads!) relationship dynamics -- even the UI/theme -- adore it. :)
Super excited to see where you take it and how the story develops. Especially curious about how MC can evolve throughout the plot, being the deity of eternity or "forever" -- but having nothing in their domain.. but that is something and it can be overwhelming.. It's like silence being very loud. I won't jump into the philosophy of it, lol
Aww, I am so honored that you like everythnig!! ;; I am especially happy with the dynamic with thee dads!
And of course, please feel free to get a bit philosophical about it! I know people often play IFs for the romance, but I would love for other people to dissect the themes and symbols that I want to present. A silence that is loud definitely seems to fit what the deity of eternity is like! If you'd love to have conversation about this, I'd be happy to chat about it!
the world building!!!! the lore!!! i love everything about this!! lucien <3 salvatore <3 ciocana <3 alessi <3 and the dads!! i adore their dynamic with each other and the deity of eternity. one of the best demos ive had the pleasure and privilege of reading in a long time. wonderful prose and amazing cosmetics. such high quality
jujoebee, that is very high praise, thank you so so much!!! 🥺 I am glad you like all the characters, the writing, and the UI!! I hope my love for all of these things came through. Again, thank you again for appreciating these consciously and letting me know 💕
i really love this so far <3! I look forward to seeing more of it! :) just a quick question, is the gender customiseable atp? if so where was the option because i think i missed it
Thank you lavenderjelly! Yes, I somehow neglected to add gender—it never came up, somehow! I will have to add it into Chapter 1 in the future when it becomes relevant, or in the next chapter where I do suspect it will be relevant! Thanks for asking <3
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That's exactly how MC feels like to me, vague and yet sharp like so much of the story's own setting! I'm so happy you loved the story and characterization, as well as the art ❤️❤️ it is the culmination of so many people's kindness!
I'm so so happy you liked it, and thank you so much for your rating and comment. You've made me week much lighter and better Cibilka 💕
oh man this is so interesting
I'm glad you like, eggsoup!! 🫂💖💕
I could go on a very long review to display my newfound love and affection for this game... Or I could simply say that this a simply divine.
Considering I'm quite lazy, this is divine and I can't wait for more!
You're so sweet Osty-kun!! 🥺 Thank you so much for your high praise and if you ever find the energy to go on that long review... I'd love to hear it someday ❤️
Nevertheless, in spite of everything, you took the time and energy to comment and I'm extremely grateful. Thank you so much for reading 💖💕
i am s0 hooked, i can't wait for more chapters!
Thank you so much Kal, I'm super excited to work on them as well!! I hope you'll like them too <3
I honestly love Rafaele and Nero too much…
Waaa I love them too! <3
THEY’RE SO SWEET!!
Really enjoyed this game a lot. The writing, the interactions between the characters and how the MC really seemed to be molded based on the choices really made this a wonderful and immersive experience. I really can't wait to experience more.
I'm so glad you feel that way GameAg 🥺💕 I'm still figuring it all out, but I truly want the game to be reactive to your choices and the character interactions to feel complex! It's probably not so apparent in Chapter 1, but I hope to improve on it to be able to deserve your praise 💖💖 thank you so much again!
The game is fantastic and super well written, especially like how much meaning each customisation option has. Can't wait for more updates!
But I also have to mention that the default name if you want to make your own is Morbius. Almost fell out of my chair laughing 10/10 would morb again.
Waaa thank you for the high praise, TrotskyBoi!!! That means so much to me 🥹💖💕 and I've been waiting forever for someone to comment on it, I can't believe everyone just took it in stride! Once again, thank you so much 😭😭🫶
Really enjoyed this so far. My MC Eilam, which I chose for its meaning "forever" or "eternal", is a kind but reserved God with a slight bitter take on life. He's curious and tends to fail to adhere to social graces when his curiosity gets to him, as he has the gift of way to much knowledge and perception. (being Everlasting and Universal Eye) He has black hair with a blue streak in it, violet eyes, fair skin, and wears a style of clothes that no other being mortal or immortal wears. (and lots of black and dark blues and silvers in my mind) He never changes his appearance either, preferring to be exactly as described.
Though he's friendly and playful to those friendly to him, he's also quick to anger when disrespected or demeaned as an errand boy. He got mad and ignored Salv for not believing him when he trusted him with his glimpse of the universes pain, but otherwise does value his friendship. He sees the good in Ciocana, knowing what its like to be outcast for what you are. (And they share a spark for being cinical and snarky. poss future besties) But his heart is drawn to Luciel, who he desires to protect and get closer to. He's neutral to Alessi, lacking interaction. (but my guess is if she's mean to him, he'll be mean to her but also merciful in the end as he has a good heart. unless she hurts someone he loves...like his dads or Luciel)
While curious about everything, he's neutral towards humans since he always has to deal with the whiny ones in Lucidia. He does like his job as he enjoys helping others and solving problems, but he does hate dealing with to many people and the difficult ones. In that sense, he takes after Nero in being more of an introvert and needing some recharge time away. He also dislikes being around most of the other gods outside of his fathers, Luciel, Ciocana, and Salv.
Whether he'll side with divinity or mortals will depend on Alessi's reasoning and whether its enough to stir his sympathy, otherwise he's the type to protect those he loves and that currently consists of only a handful...all divine.
blue_shayde, I'm sorry I couldn't get to you any sooner! Things have just been so hectic 🥺
Thank you so much for telling me about your Eilam 💖💖 it still astounds me that people put such incredible thought behind their MCs, and that's just the highest form of love and flattery I can receive!
Ah, Salv 💔 despite caring for Eilam, I think they find it difficult to break away from some of their stubborn beliefs -- or at least, their stubbornness to look away from the truth.
Eliam is incredibly kind to sympathize with Cio, and oh--Luciel!! That would be such a sweet union ❤️ I do suspect Alessi will he very unkind to Eilam... but their mercy will be very surprising!
They most definitely take after Nero, who keeps his affairs away from mortals, and is fiercely loyal and protective to the things and people he cares about!
I think the conflict will then be doubly interesting for Eilam. I wanted there to be a conflict between wanting to stay loyal to your friends and family, and yet having to do that at the cost of potentially wronging the Universe and humanity.
Thank you so much again for telling me❤️❤️ it's incredible valuable to know about other people's MCs so I can tailor and keep in mind what dialogue choices to include to accommodate different personalities!
It's ok. Thanks for your thoughts. I find it hard to really roleplay and get into the mind of a character without having an idea of what my character is going to ultimately be. I'm not the self-insert type, so I love to flesh out a MC that has an initial format that can grow and develop with the story I've put them in. Eilam started out as my idea of a very wise but misunderstood God with a kind heart, who'd probably hang his head and stick to the wall like a typical wallflower. However...as your story went on...he became a bit more proud and his job in the underworld just reminded me of my retail job days. Thus...he now has a bit of that harsh cynical nature you tend to develop when you work retail jobs for to long. (anyone who's worked retail will understand the pain of dealing with idiots and entitled assholes)
I also love the idea of the God of Eternity and the God of Death as a pair. Leave it to a God of Eternity to have zero fear of a God of Death. Even though around Luciel, Eliam becomes less introvert and more simp. (Luciel deserves someone to love and be loved. Not being alone at a table during a feast. I wonder what the child of Death and Eternity would be...... Fate? Destiny? Rebirth? Probably Rebirth. Could be all three.)
Luciel: Wait...we're already talking children? o_o
Eliam: At least three! <3
And Eliam having this vast library like knowledge in his head, like the personal history recorder of the universe itself. I wanted to make him a fighter because he's definitely the protective type, but Perception and Knowledge were just to perfect for a God of Eternity. Somehow Eliam went from a kicked puppy in my mind to a prissy black cat that will hiss if you poke him the wrong way. But I like it. I'm looking forward to future development
Final thoughts...I totally adore his dads. And from the sounds of it, Alessi and Eliam are going to be like two stubborn cats fighting over floor space. He won't back down from kicking her ass...and seems like neither will she. Thus...I suspect we've got a good ol' fashion rivalry/frienemy relationship in the future here.
Sorry for another rant. I've always loved mythology, so I can get passionate when it comes to this sort of thing. xD
This demo is (pardon my french) absolutely fucking gorgeous. And not just the aesthetics- though the ui is probably some of the prettiest I've seen on twine. The beauty pervades even the text itself; the writing is lyrical and flowing, yet clear and crisp. If I had to use one word to describe the writing style of Uroboros, it would be ethereal. It is dreamlike, as though you're walking through someone else's hazy recollections. Yet, the text always manages to remain sharp and focused, never losing sight of the plot. The writing is always so easy to visualize, at a mere whim bringing in images of decadent halls and the shimmering night sky to the forefront of the readers mind.
And the choices. The sheer depth of choices we have, this early on, makes me squeal with glee and clap my hands with joy. There's such a wide range to choose from, allowing the mc to spring to life fully realized. MC isn't shoveled into an archetype, but instead is allowed to roam the world, feeling out each and every interaction they have. And you're never penalized by the game for choosing the "wrong" option whatsoever. If you want to be mean, be mean. If you want to be kind yet bitter (my MC, thanks for asking) you have the freedom to do so! Any combination under the sun is possible, and the game won't lock you out for having the 'wrong' mc.
And the relationships we can have with the characters also makes me giggle and clap my hands like a toddler in a candy shop. There's no relationship points or values or anything like that; instead, you can craft your relationship with each character as you see fit, letting the game keep track of your attitudes and mannerisms. As another commenter said, there's no need to second guess whether declining a piece of bread will lead to a decreased relationship- this game says, 'fuck that!', and lets you decline the damned bread without losing anything whatsoever to the relationship. You can create actual, meaningful relationships in this game without agonizing over being stuck in Route Lock Hell.
I know that so far I've written what may amount to a whole ass essay, but this wouldn't be complete if I didn't have a whole mini rant about my wonderful little MC, Roselle the Imperishable, The Universal Eye, All Who Lasts Forever. (Whoo writing that was a dozy.) Kindhearted and outgoing, yet tactful and courteous; ever curious and open, yet keeps their secrets close to their chest. Charming, thoughtful, caring- they're a well of contradictions. When they were born, they were bathed in love from the Universe. Yet, after being cast aside by the gods, after being ridiculed and thought of as lesser, they now doubt the Universe's love towards them. It must all be a ruse, because how could this count as love?
They're pretty curious about everything- about how the wind flows, about the way the water laps against the beach, and most of all, about humans. They've studied human anatomy extensively, and was more than a little excited to dance with the humans at the festival! Yet, despite having a job that allows them to speak to humans on the daily, they, well...they hate it. They never let that show though; instead they go about their duties with their head held high, dutiful to their task. They would much rather travel and see the world, but for now they will stay in the afterlife, guiding souls to their destination. What good were they worth outside of this?
Roselle, while they are kind and loving, also has a well of bitterness inside of them that they try not to acknowledge, yet always manages to rise up unbidden. They love their fathers, yet in the same breath loathe the two for bringing them into the world, worthless and then tossed aside. They loathe Salvatore, due to pure jealousy. Salvatore, the miracle, the golden child, the beloved. They always attempt to act civil around her, and know that their loathing isn't justified, yet they loathe anyways.
One of the only deities that is uniformly on their good side, however, is Lucille, above all grateful to xem for giving them a chance when no one else would. Ciocana is amusing, funny and playful, yet also a (potential) friend in the making- outcasts are drawn to other outcasts, after all. And they are definitely looking at Alessi (and may help out with the rebellion. Idk, whichever route proves to be the most chaotic...cackling like a witch rn).
Now as this long winded rant falls to an end, I merely want to re-iterate my thoughts on this game: it's really fucking good. Like, really. Play it, replay it, and bask in the wealth of choices and the beautiful writing. Meanwhile, I will be banging my hands over and over again, waiting for chapter 2. Thank you so much author for making this incredible game!
Over the Moon,
You have no idea how many times I've read reread your comment. There is nothing more inspiring and beautiful to me than someone who receives your labor of love with so much love, too. Being able to resonate with someone is the impact that I've always dreamed to have, if there's one thing I must do; in a way, that's true eternity.
I'm so glad you could see what I was aiming for with the writing style! Simultaneously hazy, yet clear -- a waking dream, as said in the prologue. I can't even state my ecstasy in at least succeeding convey the way I wish my writing is read, even for just one person!
I've always found that one of the issues I had with IFs is having to play to fit a certain archetype perfectly. Sometimes, it feels like they punish me for responding differently than how I've characterized my MC until that point. That's not something I want to penalize people for, but rather reward -- to give them nuance, and not lock them out of options unless it's jarring or wildly illogical. I'm so happy you're really enjoying the depth of the choices so far, and I hope to continue that trend in the next chapters!!
Of course, another issue I found in other IFs is needing to say the perfect words, the perfect choices to gain the approval of my chosen romantic options. It's difficult to work with, because on one hand, I want to please the characters -- and yet, changing my character to fit the RO also feels like the RO can't love them honestly. This time around, I simply want to acknowledge MCs who agree and MCs who disagree with them. I also can't help myself, since I love opposites attract!
Thank you so much for telling me about Roselle. Learning about other people's MCs is truly valuable information. It helps give me insight as to what matters to readers and their deities of eternity, and that helps me mold the IF's choices and direction much better to cater to both you guys and myself! I especially hope to cater to MCs with as much nuance as Roselle, who can be sweet and lovely, and yet bitter and jealous (rightfully or not so rightfully).
I can't even begin to explain how emotional this comment made me. Again, there is no higher honor than being seen. I can only hope to show it by hopefully marching your energy, which is why I delayed writing until I feel I could give a response that could do my feelings justice. Even now, it still doesn't feel enough -- and yet it'll have to do. You've singlehandedly forced me to write today, even for just a few minutes, because I desperately want to write the story that you say it is -- that someone could love as much as I do. ❤️❤️
Thank you again, Over the Moon! 💕 :)
Oh. Em. GEE!!! This game is so. Freaking. COOL!!!! Hellooo, there are GODS in here, like you're playing a literal god. You're useless but you still get to bully dead humans so I enjoyed it. There are also other gods that are Cute like the sunshine god. Have yuo ever seen that teletubbies baby face in the sun, that's what I mentally imagine them to look like (I kno there are drawings showing what they look like but I like to be using my IMAGINATION!!!!) There's also boss mommie god and daddy gods which I much liked. The writing is freaking great it has this whimsical tone which goes with the setting and you really feel like you are a god, but like a useless one. The demo ended in a cliffhanger so I'm a little bit angry thinking of complaining abt that. But it's still so yummy I think I won't and I look forward to reading MORE!!!!
(This was a silly little joke but my love for this game is not. I can't describe the experience of reading it in just words, but believe me when I say that it's well worth it. The whimsical, magical feeling that the writing inspires really helps to paint the world and unique situation you find yourself in as the god of eternity. There is so much freedom given with how you're allowed to interpret this story, to the point where some instances have completely different choices depending on how you've felt about something previously. You wouldn't realize it if you only play through it once, but gems like that just goes to show how much effort the author has put into making this as personal of an experience as possible, despite the fantastical setting. The only complaint I have is that I want more </3)
I FREAKING CHOKED ON MY WATER WHILE READING YOUR COMMENT 💀
If I die and become a useless god, it's on you! (Jk)😭⚰️
SDIFGJKLDFG TELETUBBIES BABY FACE?! 😭😭😭 well,. ,, , all the more power to you and your vivid imagination blablabuble,,,,,, don't cook again 🗣️🗣️💯💯🔥🔥
In any case, thank you so much for your compliments 🥺🥺 I know I asked you to do this as a joke, but I'm so glad that you wrote such genuinely nice things for it as well!! I truly write this for you and the others, and I hope that love comes across. The choices I made for this IF are defined by how much I wish this IF to be so personal to the audience and the people I care about.
Thank you so much again for humoring me.......... Carl 💕💕
A staggering amount of personality variations that allows you to cook up the most complex and interesting MCs your little heart could ever dream of. Angry Wet Cat (read: tsundere) options are very much available and readily received by the world within the game, so one can live their tsundere MC dreams to the fullest without having to worry about getting 34785 negative relationship points along the way. MCs intent on being the meanest, most ruthless piece of ice in the general vicinity are also welcomed.
Favorability meters? Relationship points? They don't exist here. Choices actually bounce off of non-MC characters to create interesting relationship dynamics instead of kicking you into Route Lock Jail. Unless you say something that's extremely opposed to their core morals, you're fine. The game won't kick you out for being mean, promise <3 Go wild with the variables. Be free.
And, no. You don't get negative relationship points for refusing a piece of bread. There are no relationship points. The game tracks the attitudes, opinions, and actions you express to the characters and bounces off of that. Refuse that bread. They won't mind. This is a safe space for bread haters. More bread for me, at least 😌🍞✨
— (If I sound a bit unhinged, I'm sorry <//3 this is a personal blurb I wrote for Uroboros while I was working on making actual different collections for my beloved IF games instead of tossing them all into one collection 💀 I figured I should post it here as well.)
Aspen, thank you again for such extensive praise!! 😭😭 I will work even harder to make sure that what you say is fully true in the next upcoming chapters — I want to accommodate even the wettest and angriest cat MC ❤️❤️ there is so much more to people than arbitrary dialogue choices you make and small decisions that largely don't matter in the long run. I've personally struggled so much to always say the right things so that my RO won't hate me, and that's an anxiety I definitely don't hope to encourage in readers for my IF!
I'm really glad you tok the time to recognize that! The SAFEST space for bread haters :) thank you so much for dropping this comment even though it was meant for your collection! (PS I totally checked it out!!)
I absolutely adore this, you do not even understand the extent of how much I love this.
The customization is awesome, being able to choose multiple pronouns & even change forms as we please is just so amazing I adore that.
The complexity of the choices & characters & how its not just superficial stats, which, I enjoy stat based games, but this is refreshing to say the least & it makes everything feel so much more real.
I love being able to choose if my character likes being touched as well, the amount of customization is just awesome.
The setting & little clues we get on the lore & the way it was executed, it all just makes this an amazing experience, even with only one chapter out.
I feel like I will become addicted to this game.
Edit: Before I forget, In profile, after ‘as befits’ rather than showing the pronoun it shows $mc_their
Angie,
Thank you so much for your kind words!! I am so glad that you enjoyed the level of customization and the choices so much—what you're saying is what I strive to achieve, and while I can't say myself if I deserve your high praise... I'd love to be worthy of it and be confident of saying as much as well someday! ;O;
I will check into that bug, and again, thank you so much!!! This means the absolute world to me <3
saw luciel and immediately had to play this game. and now look where i am. writing fanfiction. oh my god.... ten minutes until i write more luciel fics amen. see you on discord 🫡
(on a different note. i love this game!! first one i've played and it's really fun! :D)
Oh Desatana, hi phobia!! 🥺🥺 I'm glad you like Luciel's portrait so much, and I loved your writing too!!! See you on Discord, and thanks so much for commenting and sending your love! 💕
i promise i'll write more when i see something that catches my eye!!! i've been wanting to try my hand at writing my mc + luciel
amen 🫡
Your writing is so fantastic. I absolutely love the amount of choices available to us for building our characters, not just superficial appearance choices, but actual personality choices! That feels so rare in IF. I also saw you mentioned you can be on good terms with the characters even if you disagree with them, that made me so happy! I'm always so excited to find a good story with choices and character interactions that don't rely heavily on stats.
Can't wait to read more of this ❤️
🥺🥺🫂💕 Thank you so much for all your kind words, melkhiresa! I get emotional reading your comment because you say exactly what I hope to hear about the IF! You remind me that there are people see and acknowledge the small details, and that truly inspires me to keep holding myself to a high standard. I want to keep putting out work that makes you feel this way! Again, thank you so much for your kindness 🫶✨
Absolutely amazing!!! Can't wait for the part 2! 😭💗
Also, I already have my eyes set on Luciel 😳👀
I'm crazy for already making up cute scenes between my character and Luciel. 😭
😭😭 Thank you so much!! And you are absolutely not crazy at all... I'd love to hear them if you ever want to share them! Thank you so much for enjoying this 💕💕
This is absolutely beautiful, it’s way different from any other game I played. I can’t wait for the next chapter and keep up the amazing work!! ❤️
🥹🥹💕 I am so glad to hear you liked it!! I am so interested in what you think is different about it! I hope you'll continue to follow its development 🫶
I think it’s different bc the writing is phenomenal, I felt so immersed and the designs were all so beautiful!! The characters also had so much thought into them, it’s not everyday you find stories like this!I’m so excited to see the rest of the story! I will definitely follow its development!! ❤️
Also I love your interaction with your fans!! It’s so nice that you reply back to all of us!! Very sweet 💞
🥹... It feels weird to call you guys fans. I feel honored to be given the chance to be read and known, which is the most wonderful thing to ever happen to an author. Instead, I feel indebted to everyone who's given my story a chance and invested their time and effort into reading it.
Thank you so much for explaining 💕 while I feel I don't deserve such high praise, I trust that you mean it, and that means the world to me. Thank you so so much for giving me your kind words!!
I don't know what to say. Everything about this game is so beautiful. From how the story flows to pretty designs (the art is so PRETTY and the descriptions are so well detailed). I really love the interactions of the MC with the characters, and Its so well written that I want more of it 😭💗 Thank you for making this! Good luck on the upcoming updates.
GreenGummyFrog, you have similarly put me at a loss for words 😭💕 thank you so much for giving this game a try, and for liking the writing and design I worked hard for! I can't tell you how amazing and profound it is to be seen. I hope you will follow the next updates!! 🫶
Beautiful, beautiful game. The visuals, the writing, the characters — so many aspects of this game come together to create an incredibly immersive experience. The amount of variations available for the player are insane, and makes so much room for you to create complex and vivid MCs. 5 stars, 10/10, and I hope new readers will have as much fun as I am!
Aspen, thank you so so much for your kind words, it means the world to me!! 💕💕 I've rewritten this comment a few times, but I can never quite convey my appreciation in any way that expresses the full breadth of it. Even if I can't hope to show it properly, I've been, and am, extremely grateful for all the support you've given me so far. It's truly astounding. Again, thank you so much :)
Cause I'm not sure the best way to contact the creator about the website, I'll do it here. Salvatore's and Luciel's Heart/Personality section is the exact same, looks like Salvatore's was accidently copied straight up from Luciel's.
Thanks for letting me know Fizel <3 I'll fix it! 💕
The artwork of the ROs is bloody ✨ gorgeous ✨...I can't take my eyes off it 🫡
🥺💕 I love the portraits so much, too! Thank you so much :)
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Damn.... i want more , when i played the demo i wanted more but now that i have played demo and chapter 1 ... i am addicted .waiting for the next time it updates .
Aaah, I'm glad you liked it so much!! 🫶 I'll be updating Chapter 1 soon with some additional choices, but hopefully I'll be able to write Chapter 2 without delay!
WOHOO let's go .. Btw Great work creator if you couldn't tell it from my comment XD ,I absolutely loved it
😭😭🥹💕💕💕 OMG aaaa thank you so much!!
I don't know how to explain it... You did a great job, like the story and how it's portrayed (if it's confusing to read, understand that english is not my first language so.. sorry 😅).
It's okay if your first language is not English, neither is mine! I understand you perfectly. Thank you so much for trying my game out! 🥺💕
I'm in love with this game, everything about it beautiful💓 the art style, the story, and all the characters can't get enough I replayed it like many times. So excited can't wait for more chapter!
??? I can't believe I didn't see this!!! Thank you so much ursweetalks, I am ecstatic to hear that you've replayed this so many times and haven't gotten sick of it 😭💕🫶 I hope you will continue to read it in the future! I'll be keeping you in mind -- I want to keep it fresh and interesting for you!
我期待着完整版，并感谢您的辛勤工作。但是，对于第一语言不是英语的人来说，选项中的大写很难阅读，以后是否有可能修改。
Hello Erkang, thank you for reading, even though it is not your first language! I understand as English is also not my first language. I now have an option to change the choices to non-uppercase, but this will be available in the next update!
Here is the option in Settings.
Here's an example of what it will look like in the game.
If the font is too small after it's lowercase, I am also going to fix changing the font size of the choices. Again, it is not in the game just yet, but when I release the update, it will be!
Thank you again so much for your interest!!! :)
非常感谢，我相信这将是一部伟大而优雅的电影。
This is too beautiful! Also, when the demo ended I felt a bit unprepared because I was to engrossed. Hehehe 🤩
Aaaah thank you so much Tookie!! :) <3 I am so glad you like the visuals of it!
OMG OMG THIS IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! Everything looks gorgeous too!! omg
AAAA thank you so much themmythe!! 🥹💕 You sound like a beautiful person!
This is fantastic, love the lore and the text info mechanics you have in place. I can’t wait for more, you’re doing fabulous dear.
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!!! 🥹🫶 thank you so much Ninajuvia! I'm so glad you love the looking mechanic, and--wow, being called dear is always so so reassuring!! Thank you so much for enjoying what I made! 💕
That was EXTREMELY fun. Excited for more!
Im so glad you thought it was fun, ninja_of_orthanc!!! Thank you so much for giving it a chance! 🫶💕
This was so good!! Everything about it was so just so, so good! The designs, the characters, the story - I look forward to the see it develop even more :DD
thank you Siopao!!! I am glad you liked it so much, and I hope to continue to fulfill your expectations going forward 💕 P.S. my mom always said my face was as round as Siopao!
5 Michelin stars, 5/5 uber rating, 5 amazon stars and 100000/10 stars of my personal bias
🫶💕 I can't believe I'm getting 5 stars from a certified, professional IF reader, Destroyer of Worlds, Master of Choices, Harbinger of Thirst
possible spoilers!!!! ohhh my goddddd.. at the 'the order of the Universe be defied' i got GOOOOOSEBUMPS WHATTT i love alll the characters theyre so interesting esp Ciocana, and omg i love my fathers sm here their dynamic is so cute i cant wait for more this is so good i love it<3
Eeeee glad you liked that line! I loved it as well when I was writing it!! <3 I am so glad you love the characters, but the dads have a special place in my heart! ;; Thanks for playing it and loving what I made! :)
i hope you take care of youreself. Mistyrious, stay hydrated and take frequent breaks bc life is simply tiring!! i hope something makes you smile and as happy as u made all of us with this piece of art<3
This is the sweetest comment I've got ♥️ thank you so much for looking out for me as a person, paradidemon, and I hope you take yourself just as you've asked me to do
ofcourse<3
This was a wonder to read. It’s been a long time since I’ve felt this immersed. Thank you. :)
What an honor!! I am sure there are many IFs out there, so I am doubly thankful you feel that way! 💕
omg I think waking up at 3 am is the best way to find a game LMAOO I’ve been doing this unconsciously and its always bring me AN AMAZING games to play. I love everything about this like I have no complaints even though im SUPER PICKY about ifs games. HOW 🥹🥹 omg I really look forwards to this. Ily Tysm for making this😔😭💕💕 and take care!!
!!! Thank you Moonmin! 🥹 As someone who's very picky about my IFs, one of my main motivations of writing this is trying to find the perfect IF for myself... if you can't find it, then make it! 💕
Thank you so much for taking the time to share your wonderful thoughts, and have an amazing day!! :)
And you’re right about that if you can’t find one make one LMAO
But I see many amazing IFs being abandoned or discontinued so that just make me want to make one and and like REALLY finished it.
anyway ty for replying 😭😭hope u have a nice day!! *Heart heart*
Ahh!!! If you ever make one, please let me know! I would love to see what you make!! 🫶
Jeez -- absolutely am in love with this story -- and it's just the beginning! The world-building, lore, MC/others (esp. dads!) relationship dynamics -- even the UI/theme -- adore it. :)
Super excited to see where you take it and how the story develops. Especially curious about how MC can evolve throughout the plot, being the deity of eternity or "forever" -- but having nothing in their domain.. but that is something and it can be overwhelming.. It's like silence being very loud. I won't jump into the philosophy of it, lol
Can't wait to see where this goes!
Aww, I am so honored that you like everythnig!! ;; I am especially happy with the dynamic with thee dads!
And of course, please feel free to get a bit philosophical about it! I know people often play IFs for the romance, but I would love for other people to dissect the themes and symbols that I want to present. A silence that is loud definitely seems to fit what the deity of eternity is like! If you'd love to have conversation about this, I'd be happy to chat about it!
Thank you so so much for your interest <3
Great game with an interesting setting and actually characters making want to know more about them.
I can't wait to read more about the story and met the last RO.
People play this game it's a little gem !
Aww, I am glad you feel intrigued to know more about the characters! 🥹 I hope to deliver the next update to you soon! Thank you so much 💕
Give more! I must show mortals that I no care or hate them!
I will try my best! :) 💕
This is so good! I love it so much. The writing is so fantastic and it adds to the atmosphere so well ;0; I can't wait for more.
(Curse me for already wanting to write fic of this lmaooooo)
Shin Ikeru, thank you for liking my writing!! 🥺 And oh my goodness, if you ever do write a fic, please do let me know!! I would be over the moon! 💕
the world building!!!! the lore!!! i love everything about this!! lucien <3 salvatore <3 ciocana <3 alessi <3 and the dads!! i adore their dynamic with each other and the deity of eternity. one of the best demos ive had the pleasure and privilege of reading in a long time. wonderful prose and amazing cosmetics. such high quality
jujoebee, that is very high praise, thank you so so much!!! 🥺 I am glad you like all the characters, the writing, and the UI!! I hope my love for all of these things came through. Again, thank you again for appreciating these consciously and letting me know 💕
i really love this so far <3! I look forward to seeing more of it! :) just a quick question, is the gender customiseable atp? if so where was the option because i think i missed it
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Thank you lavenderjelly! Yes, I somehow neglected to add gender—it never came up, somehow! I will have to add it into Chapter 1 in the future when it becomes relevant, or in the next chapter where I do suspect it will be relevant! Thanks for asking <3
ah ok! Thank you so much <3
the player character's gender presentation isn't able to be set as of yet. only the ROs
The writing is great and the UI is so pretty!
I'm glad you liked so much. cooperative_rat, I worried about them both greatly! :)