And that's twice I've ended a Rune update bawling my eyes out. Well done, absolutely brilliant. Excuse me while I try to go mend this hole in my heart until the next update.
"I press up against him, my smaller body fitting against his like a polaroid fits into a frame."
I looove this sentence sooo much! ^3^ it's VERY romantic and used so beautifully~! This is the best scene so far and written with such an artistic telling~ ^///^ #TeamRune
This is the best visual novel I have seen so far. The story is perfect, it tackles every situation that LGBTQ+ community can encounter in a great way and it doesn't rely on the "intimate" scenes too much. I love it and I'm looking forward to it' future updates :D
that rune rooftop art was such a breathtaking, lip-quivering, goosebumps giving---oh my god moment. like i did not expect him to look that GOOD damn. god i am not one of you're strongest soldiers .
Prince O' Sky did an amazing job as always for real.
PERMISSION TO SET IT AS MY PFP? I'm publicly simping for the next hour.
SPOILERS
THE BED ART CAUGHT ME OFFGUARD- i never choked on my drink while looking at something so exquisite . That such a beautiful moment, physical comfort really is amazing, i need some of that. I'm sorry for the way i am acting in this moment I am just a simple Rune...well maybe simple isnt the word but yea Im a Rune lover. That moment touched me, I figured rune was going through alot of things because hes one of those 'Perfect Boys' but in reality he has so much flaws (???) which i love about him. I love characters like that, always happy and seems perfect but isn't behind the smile. Im probably going to edit this later and expand on how i feel but right now im going to hold back. Also whats his coach address how dare he make me and Rune cry.
Crazy Theory: (but I think it's likely true) Torulf and Lake are having one-night stand sessions.
Lake and Torulf are currently in a friendly relationship (first introduced when he fetches Torulf's jacket for him).
Lake mentions that he met Torulf at one of the bars close to university (I'm not implying that something always happens at bars, but Torulf mentioned that he has a flat close to uni, and knowing he has a thing for "getting what he wants," he might have befriended Lake for those reasons. Idk might be a stretch.).
(Torulf Route) When you told Lake you're asking Torulf for the room stay, he replies with, "Torulf? Are you that close already? Well, I'm curious about his response," or something along those lines. Idk if it's a stretch but this might be implying to Lake's current perception of Arvo being straight.
When you came out to Lake, he mentions that he does things with other guys, but not only once.
While you were eating with him and Jorgen, he was texting someone, which Arvo didn't think much of.
In the middle of the night, when you woke up in Lake and Jorgen's room (Lake Route), you see him going out of the room and making sure that everyone's asleep (when he glances at you).
(Torulf Route) When you ask to stay with him, he cancels a plan, presumably with Lake, and ends up sleeping with you instead.
(Torulf Route) He mentions he wanted to spend the night with Lake and you at a bar in town.
(Torulf Route) Lake mentions that he plays VR at Torulf's place a lot, implying he'd been there on several occasions.
When you're staying with Lake and Jorgen, Lake invites Torulf into the room to plan the group bonding. He sits between you two and says he's lucky to have two cute cats between him (Implying that Lake's his type too). Lake protests and Torulf teases him about how his tail was touching Torulf's behind (or tail?) to which he blushes and shushes him.
Idk if I'm looking too much into this haha, but I'm really fixed on going through the Lake Route as my canon. I know Torulf's a no-strings-attached kind of guy, so I don't think Lake would find real happiness with him (refer to Lake's route about how Lake looks lonely and sad, as well as how Arvo perceives his body language). But that's just my opinion, so feel free to have yours too haha.
On that note, I'll give you all the love you need, Lake. So, you can stop searching for love in one-nights and come to me. 🥺🥺🥺
Thank you again for such a wonderful VN, Author! Keep up the good work! 💖 Also, permission to use Lake as my pfp please! 🥺
I'm glad I wasn't the only one thinking that, plus Lake does mention he likes two people. I mean I'm sure one of them is Arvo cause well y'know, and at first I was thinking maybe he's talking about Jorgen too, but then I can't help but think maybe it's actually Torulf. Although I will say with that conversation about polyamorous relationships I wouldn't be opposed if we're talking about Torulf >.> but I do like my lion boi.
Oooooo, I didn't know about that conversation he had about liking two different people, but yeah, I really believe this theory to be true. Speaking of polyamorous relationships, I can't really say I'm a fan. Though, no offense to those who are okay with that! So, knowing he had this relationship with Torulf rubbed me the wrong way, since I'm not really a fan of the tiger's personality too (Again, no offense to Torulf fans 😭). So yeah, I wanna pursue Lake exclusively. I really like my lion boi. 🥺
Yeah, it was heavy on my part, since I don't really like polyamorous relationships as well as the tiger (no offense to those who do like them tho!). But I really like my lion boi, so I'll still pursue his route. ✨ Mr. Author better not make it a "polyamorous or nah" choice at the end, cause I would absolutely be devastated. 🥺
Lake is best boi. You can't convince me other wise. Can I keep him? 🥺🥺🥺
Kudos to the Author for such an amazing job! The story was well written, and it was a nice change of pace to play something peaceful and wholesome (albeit the slight flirting, which I did also enjoy). Looking forward to more updates, especially for my adorable lion! 💖
Downloaded this virtual novel about a year ago. Played for 30 mins and stoped. But a month ago did another try. I like some routes - Lake's, Jorgen's, Rune's, Devon's and specially Klaus's. It's a pleasure to see such a good picture, very high quality. The music is awesome. Now this music is my favorite. Compositor is blessed, brilliant genius. My regards.
coz thats the exact theme of the game. its supposed to be something simple and peaceful. if you’re looking for some kind of jaw dropping, flaming hoop jumping or like totally shameless story, this is not the one you’re looking for. And I don’t think leaving “Nuh uh, don’t like” would be a good idea. its like someone waking in your face and looking at it and then say “Nuh uh, ugly.”
No one’s stopping you from leaving negative comments but you atleast need to justify or express why.
Just criticism is not healthy, try to make it constructive atleast.
We understand things differently. I think comments are for your emotions after playing a specific game, and ratings are for showing what you like or not in detail. You don't understand that this was my emotion after playing this for more than an hour with some short breaks, and after all this time I don't like this game. Comment = emotion. If I would think that comments are for "constructuive criticism", I would've posted something else.
Plus, no one says "you can only post constuctive criticism here, nothing else" before you post your comment. That thought also looks so simple to me, just try to understand that people think differently, it works with every person, meaning if most people think this way a different person don't have do think this way too.
Constructive criticism is what helps creative people evolve. You're right, you can absolutely come in here and just be a dick about an artist's freely public, carefully designed, creative project that is already a super niche, difficult genre that they've worked hard on, say "Eww, gross" and just leave.
The alternative however, is to maybe acknowledge what it actually was you didn't like, and to give the creator some food for thought, maybe some insight they might not have. There's a saying "Say something nice or don't say anything." and there's a reason that exists, it keeps people from just getting torn down over and over with no incentive to improve.
I'm not saying you're not allowed to dislike, or even hate it, totally your opinion. But a little clarification on what was that looked so simple about it would make a big difference for the artist, the other players, even you.
You're right, you can comment whatever you'd like. I feel like the amount of controversy surrounding your comment is a bit unnecessary, however, I would like to just point out that the reason people are upset is not because you didn't provide insightful feedback but because it was just a rude thing to say.
Since itch does not have a way to view public reviews, I’ll post it here:
First a confession: I ignored this VN back then because I wasn’t interested in deer furs but eventually, I decided I should play it for the sake of the story.
Now on to the main review.
Dawn Chorus.
A very sensual VN written with great care and mindfulness.
It felt like a breath of fresh air from the usual furry VN I played before that focuses more on hot characters you’ll drool over or a roller coaster ride of suspense and thrill. No. For me, it was all about feelings and connecting with people.
The VN itself despite giving you an option to choose a route (in a subtle manner) still allows you to bond with other characters in an intimate way. No event is not without a purpose nor felt like a filler. You can say it’s like a getaway, a therapy, a peaceful perfect world you can dive into and live in without the harshness of the outside world where you can float and relax.
Looking into technical writing, I felt that it wasn’t forced, it wasn’t too expressive, nor too strong. Simple words masterfully selected and manipulated to ensure the lightheartedness of each dialogues but still retains the deep feelings and emotions that one can understand without having to think.
I’d honestly recommend this to anyone who wants a wonderful vacation in a peaceful snowy covered lodge with wonderful people and a hearty meal for the soul.
This is the best visual novel I ever played. I can't say how much emotions I get just from looking at these characters. Will definitely wait for future updates.
Hey. Have you ever wondered about Boosty page? Since i live in Russia and due to the current circumstances i can't pay my Patreon membership anymore... Is there any ways to get new Rune update without using Patreon?
this is an absolutely amazing game and all of the characters are super loveable ^w^ especially Jorgen in my personal opinion, also, are you planning on doing everyones story to completion eventually and/or giving everyone "fiesty" scenes? xD
If I were to see this as a movie A24 would produce it. It's very arthouse-y and I can already see the high contrasted shots of empty spaces. Mikko and the MC on the ground playing with music while animated squiggles appear over their bodies as the music overtakes them. A slightly red-tinted shot of Torulf flirting with the MC, all while closing the gap between the two of them.
I love the artistic flair. I love everything about this fucking game. If I had cash I would support the shit out of this game. But I don't so take this comment to perk up your life.
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And that's twice I've ended a Rune update bawling my eyes out. Well done, absolutely brilliant. Excuse me while I try to go mend this hole in my heart until the next update.
"I press up against him, my smaller body fitting against his like a polaroid fits into a frame."
I looove this sentence sooo much! ^3^ it's VERY romantic and used so beautifully~! This is the best scene so far and written with such an artistic telling~ ^///^ #TeamRune
It made me cry and happy at the same time and the art at the end was so good best updat ever Rune is the best.
imo this is the best updated yet. love Rune
One of the BEST and I mean THE BEST VN I have ever played, and the recent update made me cry lol
This is the best visual novel I have seen so far. The story is perfect, it tackles every situation that LGBTQ+ community can encounter in a great way and it doesn't rely on the "intimate" scenes too much. I love it and I'm looking forward to it' future updates :D
That update made me cry lol, i love it so much!
All the art was amazing!
The Rune update is outstanding!!
that rune rooftop art was such a breathtaking, lip-quivering, goosebumps giving---oh my god moment. like i did not expect him to look that GOOD damn. god i am not one of you're strongest soldiers .
Prince O' Sky did an amazing job as always for real.
PERMISSION TO SET IT AS MY PFP? I'm publicly simping for the next hour.
SPOILERS
THE BED ART CAUGHT ME OFFGUARD- i never choked on my drink while looking at something so exquisite . That such a beautiful moment, physical comfort really is amazing, i need some of that. I'm sorry for the way i am acting in this moment I am just a simple Rune...well maybe simple isnt the word but yea Im a Rune lover. That moment touched me, I figured rune was going through alot of things because hes one of those 'Perfect Boys' but in reality he has so much flaws (???) which i love about him. I love characters like that, always happy and seems perfect but isn't behind the smile. Im probably going to edit this later and expand on how i feel but right now im going to hold back. Also whats his coach address how dare he make me and Rune cry.
You'd have to ask Prince about that, she's on Twitter!
Fighting the urge to delete this monstrosity , I was really too caught in the moment and spoke too much.
I agree with every part lol, that was an amazing update
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Crazy Theory: (but I think it's likely true) Torulf and Lake are having one-night stand sessions.
Idk if I'm looking too much into this haha, but I'm really fixed on going through the Lake Route as my canon. I know Torulf's a no-strings-attached kind of guy, so I don't think Lake would find real happiness with him (refer to Lake's route about how Lake looks lonely and sad, as well as how Arvo perceives his body language). But that's just my opinion, so feel free to have yours too haha.
On that note, I'll give you all the love you need, Lake. So, you can stop searching for love in one-nights and come to me. 🥺🥺🥺
Thank you again for such a wonderful VN, Author! Keep up the good work! 💖 Also, permission to use Lake as my pfp please! 🥺
…holy shit
Go ahead, sure c:
And thank you!
Thank you, too! ✨
I'm glad I wasn't the only one thinking that, plus Lake does mention he likes two people. I mean I'm sure one of them is Arvo cause well y'know, and at first I was thinking maybe he's talking about Jorgen too, but then I can't help but think maybe it's actually Torulf. Although I will say with that conversation about polyamorous relationships I wouldn't be opposed if we're talking about Torulf >.> but I do like my lion boi.
Oooooo, I didn't know about that conversation he had about liking two different people, but yeah, I really believe this theory to be true. Speaking of polyamorous relationships, I can't really say I'm a fan. Though, no offense to those who are okay with that! So, knowing he had this relationship with Torulf rubbed me the wrong way, since I'm not really a fan of the tiger's personality too (Again, no offense to Torulf fans 😭). So yeah, I wanna pursue Lake exclusively. I really like my lion boi. 🥺
Oh wow, that makes a lot of sense actually. But it kinda ruins Lake for me cuz I really like him >w<
Yeah, it was heavy on my part, since I don't really like polyamorous relationships as well as the tiger (no offense to those who do like them tho!). But I really like my lion boi, so I'll still pursue his route. ✨ Mr. Author better not make it a "polyamorous or nah" choice at the end, cause I would absolutely be devastated. 🥺
Lake is best boi. You can't convince me other wise. Can I keep him? 🥺🥺🥺
Kudos to the Author for such an amazing job! The story was well written, and it was a nice change of pace to play something peaceful and wholesome (albeit the slight flirting, which I did also enjoy). Looking forward to more updates, especially for my adorable lion! 💖
Please come home, Lake 🥺
Downloaded this virtual novel about a year ago. Played for 30 mins and stoped. But a month ago did another try. I like some routes - Lake's, Jorgen's, Rune's, Devon's and specially Klaus's. It's a pleasure to see such a good picture, very high quality. The music is awesome. Now this music is my favorite. Compositor is blessed, brilliant genius. My regards.
Its very rare to see such a good virtual novel.
I hope author will continue Klaus's route.
Was scrolling through my gallery and realized I did not get the 5th illustration, can anyone tell me how to get it?
It's Mikko leaning into Arvo, I'm pretty sure you have to do the Mikko route to get it.
Thank you! I got a full gallery now thanks to your help
Congration! Have you played the new update yet though? There's a new photo on the Rune route.
Can't wait till the next Rune update! Also i love this game so much.
Nuh uh, don't like.
my brother in christ then why are you here
It looks so simple... I played this game and I don't like it, that's why I left a comment.
coz thats the exact theme of the game. its supposed to be something simple and peaceful. if you’re looking for some kind of jaw dropping, flaming hoop jumping or like totally shameless story, this is not the one you’re looking for. And I don’t think leaving “Nuh uh, don’t like” would be a good idea. its like someone waking in your face and looking at it and then say “Nuh uh, ugly.”
No one’s stopping you from leaving negative comments but you atleast need to justify or express why.
Just criticism is not healthy, try to make it constructive atleast.
We understand things differently. I think comments are for your emotions after playing a specific game, and ratings are for showing what you like or not in detail. You don't understand that this was my emotion after playing this for more than an hour with some short breaks, and after all this time I don't like this game. Comment = emotion. If I would think that comments are for "constructuive criticism", I would've posted something else.
Plus, no one says "you can only post constuctive criticism here, nothing else" before you post your comment. That thought also looks so simple to me, just try to understand that people think differently, it works with every person, meaning if most people think this way a different person don't have do think this way too.
Constructive criticism is what helps creative people evolve. You're right, you can absolutely come in here and just be a dick about an artist's freely public, carefully designed, creative project that is already a super niche, difficult genre that they've worked hard on, say "Eww, gross" and just leave.
The alternative however, is to maybe acknowledge what it actually was you didn't like, and to give the creator some food for thought, maybe some insight they might not have. There's a saying "Say something nice or don't say anything." and there's a reason that exists, it keeps people from just getting torn down over and over with no incentive to improve.
I'm not saying you're not allowed to dislike, or even hate it, totally your opinion. But a little clarification on what was that looked so simple about it would make a big difference for the artist, the other players, even you.
You're right, you can comment whatever you'd like. I feel like the amount of controversy surrounding your comment is a bit unnecessary, however, I would like to just point out that the reason people are upset is not because you didn't provide insightful feedback but because it was just a rude thing to say.
Bjørn come home I need you ok but jokes aside I've replayed his route a total of 8 times since the last time it was updated I am STARVING.
Believe me, I'm dying for more Bjørn content too. Working on it right now!
Since itch does not have a way to view public reviews, I’ll post it here:
First a confession: I ignored this VN back then because I wasn’t interested in deer furs but eventually, I decided I should play it for the sake of the story.
Now on to the main review.
Dawn Chorus.
A very sensual VN written with great care and mindfulness. It felt like a breath of fresh air from the usual furry VN I played before that focuses more on hot characters you’ll drool over or a roller coaster ride of suspense and thrill. No. For me, it was all about feelings and connecting with people.
The VN itself despite giving you an option to choose a route (in a subtle manner) still allows you to bond with other characters in an intimate way. No event is not without a purpose nor felt like a filler. You can say it’s like a getaway, a therapy, a peaceful perfect world you can dive into and live in without the harshness of the outside world where you can float and relax.
Looking into technical writing, I felt that it wasn’t forced, it wasn’t too expressive, nor too strong. Simple words masterfully selected and manipulated to ensure the lightheartedness of each dialogues but still retains the deep feelings and emotions that one can understand without having to think.
I’d honestly recommend this to anyone who wants a wonderful vacation in a peaceful snowy covered lodge with wonderful people and a hearty meal for the soul.
Me reading the update list:
Don't worry, I didn't forget about him c:
i am in love with Mikko
thats kind of gay bro ngl
:3
:3
whats the sauce for your PFP?
i commissioned it from a website its my oc
This is the best visual novel I ever played. I can't say how much emotions I get just from looking at these characters. Will definitely wait for future updates.
Omg I can't figure out what the second illustration is! Please somebody help me 😭
It's Arvo putting on a sweater that Rune lends him
So I need to do Rune's route?
Yeah, look for the key with him.
What Furrys can you date
Except Travis. Travis is special. Don't be like Travis.
Seriously, don't be like travis, he is probably the only dislikeable character in this game
Better to say a "language" instead of "tongue". ^^"
I'll try to do that in the next release, thanks!
Is the main menu supposed to look like this in 0.2.1? It looks a bit broken.
It broken bro
Will there ever be a Travis route? He looks cute AND owns a Vita!
i want one too 😭
Has anyone elses saves been deleted. I had like 12 pages of saves, (I save at every choice) and now I have half of 1. I'm confused?
I think it's just you
Queston. How can i get Klaus's route? He kinda mysterious and i kinda like him
Do Devon's route, but don't offer to help with the telescopes.
Hey. Have you ever wondered about Boosty page? Since i live in Russia and due to the current circumstances i can't pay my Patreon membership anymore... Is there any ways to get new Rune update without using Patreon?
ой как неожиданно и приятно увидеть кого-то из России🥰
Такое удивление, будто русские не могут играть в фурри-новеллы без пиратского перевода🌚😂
в основном перевод и ждут, мне их даже жалко, столько контента упускают конечно, перевод tennis ace они как минимум три года ждать будут бедные😭
честно говоря впервые слышу об этой новелле, поэтому ничего сказать не могу(
YESSS DADDY DEVON, WAIT FOR ME!!!!!!
If I could recommend something, is have much more saves. I want to do every possible path bbut I've run out of saves on day 2
Devon is so cute and charming
how do i get the 5th illustration?
Pretty sure its part of the Mikko/Bjorn route where youre listening to music in Mikko's room and you choose to move closer to him?
Yep, it is just checked
Finally an update about my favourite character !
Devon is easily in my top 5 FVN characters ever, I really love how his character is written
Too bad the update is kinda short but at least we had some progression in our relationship with him (at this point I just want to hug him so bad)
I've been waiting for Devon's update for so long, God, finally
thank you for your work!!
I love everything about this vn omg-
Though I'm curious, are we gonna see any new Bjorn content any time soon? :))
this is an absolutely amazing game and all of the characters are super loveable ^w^ especially Jorgen in my personal opinion, also, are you planning on doing everyones story to completion eventually and/or giving everyone "fiesty" scenes? xD
This is just a guess, as I'm not a dev, but considering that 3 characters already have scenes, I'd say yes.
If I were to see this as a movie A24 would produce it. It's very arthouse-y and I can already see the high contrasted shots of empty spaces. Mikko and the MC on the ground playing with music while animated squiggles appear over their bodies as the music overtakes them. A slightly red-tinted shot of Torulf flirting with the MC, all while closing the gap between the two of them.
I love the artistic flair. I love everything about this fucking game. If I had cash I would support the shit out of this game. But I don't so take this comment to perk up your life.
hola disculpa por mi idioma pero quería informar de este problema.
esta persona re subió tu juego y esta cobrando por el
Translation: hello, excuse me for my language, but I wanted to inform you about this problem.
This person re-uploaded your gane and they're charging for it.