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Not me, hoping to see more of Cillian 🫣👉👈

Not me romancing Az'lean, and trying to end this peacefully...

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The way the relationships between these characters are written  made me tear up a little ngl, this was amazing

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I'm shipping MC with Az'lean, I don't care if he gonna kill me.
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real

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Um it skipped all the way to episode 3?? And it's done?? But what-

Is the issue that you can't play past chapter 3? Someone else has that problem and I'm still trying to figure out what causes that. Are you using an old safe file?

I'm not sure I'm pretty sure it's the new one.

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I was hoping for Lester to be a cutie but instead I got a damn leprechaun 😔😔😔

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Did you see what he looks like? Did i miss something?

He was described to be a short red head with a beard :,3

I can't play past the end of act 3, whenever I reach the end of act 3 there's no option to move on. I've tried uninstalling the game and reinstalling it but nothing is working. Does anyone know how to solve this?

Is there no button that says "End of Chapter 3 - Shapeless"? How does the scene end for you?

It says "This is the end of Chapter 3 and the current end of this demo. I advise you to save at this point if you haven't already. Thank you so much for playing!" and then their are links to the patreon and tumblr

That's very strange. It's been over half a year since that version of the game even existed. If you are downloading the game, the current file is called "MisplacedV6.2.zip", make sure that's the one you have. Have you tried playing in a browser? Also, are you trying to use an old safe file? If it's from before the release of chapter 4, it might just not work with the current version.

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hello i've just read all of the chapters over the last two days and this story is absolutely amazing!

one thing i'm curious about is that the "relationships" tab reads "The sight of your face sickens Lester" but i've always been polite to him? and whenever my character interacts with Lester he's also pretty chill, so i'm just wondering if maybe its a bug or i've done something to offend him and don't know.

Yes, that's a bug, unfortunately. I'll try to get it fixed. Thanks for letting me know!

OHH THATS A BUG?? I just thought he was into being degraded because when i was rude to him or ignored him it never went into the whole "he hates your guts" stuff. I hope that gets fixed but take your time

my save file died when the new chapter came out...

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I'm only on chapter two but I'm literally flabbergasted. This writing is so amazing?? Like everything is so wonderfully textured and just, wow.

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Chapter 6 is so heartwarming HUHUHU the Grahms and Vynn are the best 🥺

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Loved the update!

Glad to hear it!

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question, im still in the begining but from what i know thus far it honestly sounds like everyone mentioned would make an amazing friend group (like i said i havent even finished the first chapter so i dont kno if some crazy shit happens). So far it's giving me nostalgic feels of being young and having a close-knit group of friends who you always hang out with. my question though is can you have a good friendship with all of them and romance someone? currently, i want to romance Vynn cuz everything they say is the realest shit ever but the prince is so interested in everything and i want to have a close friendship but im not sure if thats a thing in this. if not thats fine, ill do two playthroughs and romance the prince but yk! just wondering! Also this is jaw-droppingly amazing btw!!! im in love with it and like i mentioned im only in the beginning so im super excited for whats to come

Thank you for your kind comment!

You can absolutely build strong friendships with multiple people and then romance one of them. The bigger problem is that not everyone will end up on the same side of the conflict in the end. Since you're only in the first chapter I won't say too much, just that trying to be friends with everyone might be more difficult than only caring about one person, but that doesn't mean it's not worth it.

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Az’Lean is my husband and I feel sooooo bad for taking the secretive route. I just know he’s gonna freak when my MC eventually comes clean and I’m not ready for that yet. 😭😭😭

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love the writing! so excited to see how this all plays out! thank you for creating this!

Thank you for your kind words!

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shocked I found a work that’s currently being worked on, I’m so used to abandoned wips. god I love you hahaha😌 

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Yeah, it's sad to see how rarely anything gets finished. It's not easy to keep working on something like this consistently, but I've been doing it for almost a year now, so I feel confident in my ability to actually complete the story.

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vynn my beloved... excellent new chapter

Thanks!

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wow. I was rarely so immersed in a story here. Even the worldbuilding got to me ! Also, glad this is being currently worked on ; I might have not survived had this been abandoned... I want to know what's next !!
I'm totally into this. Great work !

Thank you for your kind words! Seeing comments like this one really keeps me motivated :)

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I was legitimately annoyed when it ended so soon. Well done! Love the story, the characters, and I look forward to seeing where it goes!

Thank you!

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This story is truly gripping, it was interesting seeing how the stats changed while the mc hides their natur. And i truly cant wait to see if i'll acually be able to bring peace and unity

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This is great!! I'm loving the story so far, you're an awesome writer!!

Aww, thank you!

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THIS IS FANTASTIC. I'm aromantic and there being a queerplatonic option in this game genuinely makes me so happy. I'm going for Vynn right now and the way they're written is EXCELLENT. Overall the writing style is gorgeous and I'm genuinely so invested in the story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

might I ask which game u are speaking about?

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LESTER

Lester, a half-sprite. He is a servant at the castle and hides in plain sight, much like you.
You and Lester have grown close. You managed to win him over.

Guess who managed the cat person :D

Congrats!

How do you get closer with Lester?

Um, be civil with him. He'll find you less annoying lmao

how to get that? i only managed to get his interest

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This is by far the most creative interactive story I've ever seen :) Bravo, you got me hooked! 

Aww, thank you!

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the writing is sooo good<3 I've never finish this type of game cuz i got bored easily but this one I'm hooked.

 just wanna ask, how many chapters do u plan to make?I'm so looking forward for more.

take ur time tho 

Thank you! Right now, I'm planning for it to be somewhere between 15 to 20 chapters long.

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Im so obsessed with this game that I've started making fanart sos

I love to hear that, that's like the highest honour

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Wow this was so immersive! I played all through until Chapter 5 in one sitting. I have a particular preference, but I appreciate that there's no easy solution to the moral dilemma at the heart of the story.

The worldbuilding is fantastic. I can't wait to learn more about the history--in particular the origin of the kingdom and more about the belief systems.

I also love the simple but pretty design; it's very easy on the eyes.

Thank you for creating this <3 Looking forward for more!

Thank you so much for your very kind comment! Glad to hear you enjoyed it :)

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love this! jsyk at the end of chapter 5 after a certain event u have the option to seek out reassurance from someone and its implied u get the choice of who, but the only option is az'lean? keep up the great writing <3

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I think it depends on who you are close with. I got Vynn and Az'Lean. I'm very close with Vynn and somewhat close with Az'Lean and never talk with the others beyond necessary,  I assume that's why.

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oh ok! that might be it. it gave a sort of summary of why i might go to each character and i hadnt spent much time with az'lean compared to thianne so i wasnt sure if it was an oversight or something else!

Yes, it depends on how close you are to them. It's possible to get Thianne as an option, but she's more difficult to get close to than Vynn and Az'Lean for example.

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That's so surprising. I absolutely adore Thianne so I somehow managed to get her as an option.

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I started crying. But all in all this story is amazing and can't wait for the next chapter.

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eeeee i love this game!!! it's like one of the best storytelling games i've ever played, even if it's just a demo! rrr it's so good im going rabid but i have one thing:
I wish we could go back if we dont like our choice instead of just going along with it or restarting. but love the game!!

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very neat writing and cute character...vynn my baby

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Uh oh, it was definitely some timing to catch up on this story in time for chapter 5 :D

I'm really enjoying this, though! I like how the characters feel like their own fully-fledged people, and how there's no neat solution for the core conflict. I also especially love the way you're handling the mental health aspects!

Thank you for your hard work, I look forward to the next chapter! (Might jump on the Patreon one of these days, tbh)

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Thank you for your kind comment, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it! It's very important to me that the characters feel real, and not just like romance archetypes, so it makes me extremely happy to know that that comes across in my writing.

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