galaxy ballerina

Hi, I played the game and I adored it!

I really enjoyed how striking everything was: first, the artistic direction was absolutely GORGEOUS, and I'm definitely getting the artbook (hehe, it's soon my birthday, I can treat myself...). The writing was very nice and very fluid, with a lovely style.

The story and character-writing reminded me of the one I see in online short comics, which was really striking with the way you presented your visual novel! I adored the way you handled the character-writing to display both our insecurities and what we project onto others, in a very nuanced and yet striking way. You really nailed everything, and the game managed to get rid of superfluous details while still polishing the core of what it wanted to communicate about collaboration and understanding enriching us more than rivalry. I would describe it as a crystal clear sound, echoing beautifully in an pure white room, giving it meaning through its melody.

Congrats on making it, it was a gorgeous experience!

P.-S.: I hope my post-scriptum won't feel inappropriate, but I saw the awful rating an equally awful user gave you, and I actually am the developer of one of the games they mentioned, When The Wind Blew You Away. I am SO sorry for their review, and they were objectively wrong in comparing our two games, as we did make very different story-telling decisions. Their review says nothing about the objective quality of your game, it only reveals their entitlement and their lack of literacy. I also wanted to highlight that I completely disapprove comparing games like that, because, just like what you told in this game, I value union, harmony and collaboration, rather than rivalry and competition. You were right to block them.

Beautiful and sweet to see all the ways the story could unfold.
Lovely message that resting and embracing fellow artists leads to good opportunities 

Small aside but wish there was a full screen option for browser, I think itch has a checkbox that allows you to permit full screen!