Crown of Ashes and Flames

chapter 2 doesn't exist for me even though i've updated :(

i read the ch2 update that you released 11 days ago. but it also says you updated 1 day ago .. is that a legit update (since my saves are gone *sad face*) or is it the same new update from 11 days ago? asking so i can avoid an all cry fest again. that beginning gets me every fckn time lol and it is only 8:30am lol every time im a blubbering mess lol

It's okay, I don't need my heart anyway 🥹 BUT AAAA I REALLY HOPE MC WILL BE HAPPY 😭

Loved the new chapter! Following you on Tumblr and can't wait for more. Thank you for sharing with us 💕

I’ve noticed choosing either of these 2 choices for Hunter 

 Has this bug appear on the next page 

 I also want to say your story has me totally hooked, and I can’t wait to see more 🥰 (especially with that juicy cliffhanger with Luceris 🔥🤭)

looks like i found my new obsession :p its soooo good, i feel blessed to be able to read this haha

Hey, so I am liking the story style. Would it be okay if I used it for mine? I am terrible at coding things like css and yours is gorgeou

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO It ended D: IT was so good I love it! I want to hug the mc and tell them it will get better I just want them to be happy Q,Q

This is a pure gem, i love it! I can't wait for the next chapters!

I'm only on the first chapter so far, but Iove this so much. The story is a interesting, the writing is chef's kiss. The prologue made me sob. I'm so angry at the situation, everytime someone opens their mouth I fanna swing at them. The injustice and frustration feels very real. 😭 but anyway shsh I know it's gonna be a great journey! (It's also my first interactive game, so thank you for setting the bar high!!)

Edit: Okay, I read the second chapter and all the characters are so good!! I can't choose which one I wanna interact with more! 

i love this so muchhhhhhh, it was so full of emotions ahhh, good job and very well written! i wanted to ask tho, how many chapters will this have? and when will thhe next  chapter come out_:D

NEED MORE D:( 

anyway the story so good! wishing for more interactions with Helios bc he is my cute lil patootie :3

This is truly one of my most highly anticipated WIPs! The story begins with an absolutely heartbreaking event, and the author, Coeur, doesn’t skim over the resulting emotional devastation. The two available chapters (and prologue) focus on world building and developing an MC with intense emotions/motivations, while introducing the key ROs in a way that feels natural to the cadence of the story. It is a WIP, so there are some unpolished bits, but I am really looking forward to this IF’s development! The creator has a clear voice and a powerful story to tell, and I really think they have what it takes to make this one of the greats. <3 

I truly love this whole game so far. I'm making my character not trusting anyone (expect for my queen fadiya <3). Maybe it's my trust issues seeping into the game LOL. 

The play got me messed up. Should I regret burning the dead queen room? Most likely yes. But it was very satisfying. And future character can deal with actions and let present self have their moment. 

This game had me up sobbing at 3 am </3

THIS WAS SO GOOD AHHHH I WANNA EAT IT I LOVED ITTTT

After having the game recommended to me by a friend, I intended only to skim through it. However, upon reading it and discovering a fresh new chapter, I felt compelled to express my admiration to the author.

To begin, I find the premise of the story to be quite intriguing. Refreshingly, it avoids the common clichés found in many similar works. The level of mystery present from the outset is enough to engage the reader without overwhelming or confusing them.

The characters are well developed, and their interactions are both complex and diverse. Despite being only a 9-year-old, the young protagonist maintains the decorum and pettiness befitting of royalty. However, the occasional reminder of their youth leaves the reader with a nuanced and relatable character.

The overall writing style is poetic and eloquent, carrying the story along like a gentle breeze. It is easy to lose oneself in the world created by the author.

In short, I found this story to be highly enjoyable and believe that it has great potential. I eagerly anticipate further updates from the author and would like to offer my kudos for their excellent work. I also want to apologise for such a lengthy comment. I'm really passionate when it comes to expressing what I liked about this type of work and wanted to show my excitement. I will also have to admit my friend has friend has found a hidden gem. (If you see this, no, you didn't. lmaoo).

I just found this and omg im crying (／_;)/💕💕

The update was wonderful, I cried a few times and the characters are so wonderful :D (Lancelot as dad figure, I love that so much x3) and the RO's are amazing, thank you so much <3

Thanks for updating! Loved the update and Vincent <3

What a Beautifull story you write 😊🥰

I fall in love with your story omg😇

Vincent <3 that is all. Lol no, I really love it so far :o and what an ending! I can't wait for chapter 3. This is one of my favourite IF games! 

This is really good! i really enjoyed playing it! tho i have run into a problem, i can't seem to write my own name? i couldn't in the character creator but, the problem comes mainly since i decided to stay with Hunter, Heilon and Vincent during the festival and i can't continue.. Any idea as to what i can do to fix this? XD

I love this story! Poor MC tho. :(

I personally blame the sister as much as Luceris. Gonna give her lil talk when I meet her.

Oh my God!!!!!! It's back, I cannot believe it! Can't wait to play the second chapter. I'm sure it's as good as the previous one and the Prologue.

So many emotions in your writing, I love it. Can't wait for chapter 3. 5/5 

Lmao raise your hand if the hatred you feel for Luceris burns hotter than the fiery pits of hell~  I’m only half joking. If this man was dying of thirst and I had a glass of water, I would smile, look him in the eyes, and pour every last drop into the ground. Great story, exceptional writing. :)

AHHHH YOU DID IT AGAIN IM HOOKED ONCE MOREEE

chapter 2 was so beautiful, your writing is beautiful, the characters are beautiful THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD

AAAA I JUST LOVE YOUR WRITING SM!! Every moment is full of emotions for me, and i enjoy that sm!

If i may offer stylistic adive: divide your long sentences into smaller ones to help with pacing for reading. F.e., you have sentences with 5-6 clauses, they easily can be split into 2-3 sentences.

First of all, great story.

Second of all, Luceris is a sick bastard and I'm going to kill him.

is there a dark setting? The white ones suck the eyes right outta my head.

This was a terrific story! The prologue and chapter 1 was great — can't wait for the next chapter (but take your time!) ⸜(*ˊᗜˋ*)⸝💛

The story is so good! I love this, keep it up! <3

omg the things I’ll do to play this for the first time again,, this was beautiful!

Can’t wait for chapter 2, keep it up 👍 you’re absolutely amazing :DD

Please don't say that I'm the only one because every time I come here, I look at this IF and think, "Now that's what a masterpiece looks like" 😮‍💨✨.

I'm sorry, like mate? 

You can't possibly not adore this 😭

I loved the demo, you're a amazing writer and i really look forward to see where the story goes :)

NO I NEED MORE

And what tha hell was that in the end i want to refuse >:(

Good game by the way

Ps: i wish i could just ignore or punch people when they talk about your familiy

Kinda like they are talking about your dead family you know and most of them are just rude so violence is tha wae