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Spoiler alert, this is an after story comment!

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That is to be expected from a comment section, but saying anyway w<)

I confess that for some chapters I wanted to strangle both main characters multiple times, in specific in the beginning of their relantionship; 

While thinking the moments they spent together were adorable I also kept wondering "When are they going to talk about their relationship?"

And then when the MC questioned if they were moving too quickly and Angel said he felt a sparkle I wanted to jump down at his throat.

I am not someone that believes in love at first sight. "Love at first sight" can be explained as in romantic attraction is something that can be triggered instantly much like sexual attraction or other reactions like fear and anger; but the attachment of love, only comes through work and a lot of time. 

The feeling that comes from infatuation on one hand feels amazing and on the other hand it's as fragile as a strand of hair.

But the thing is, that is something that can actually happen. As in... Two people that believe in it can meet each other, and if the "spark" happens, they can very well start a relationship in the first few days. (Getting Anna flashbacks from Frozen-..)

What I personally use to judge how good a visual novel is to me is based on its realism, on the underlying rules of the world of the visual novel.

By which I mean, I know that anthro animals don't exist in real life, but it is a rule in the world of this story, so having walking and talking animals is realistic in this context.

What I'm getting at is that, it's not as if they declared to be boyfriends after the first sex scene, they slowly began to act more like boyfriends, only later on calling each other by cute names and stuff like that..~

It does feel like how it would go like when these type of people meet.

So, despite my, um... Homicidal urges, I really liked reading the visual novel! 

Multiple times I laughed along out loud, I cried with the MC when he was telling Angel about what happened with his parents... And my god-

I think I had a romantic orgasm myself the second time they made love, it had no business being that good- o  o)

So, I'm looking forward to new updates!


A side note, I do wonder if the speed of their relationship will be addressed more or be left like that. I should say that since love at first sight is a shot in the dark, there are cases in which you end up with someone highly compatible that eventually turns into true love; the chances are very small, but it can happen.

So I wouldn't really be disappointed if it wasn't addressed anymore. On the other hand... I would love if they actually realized that it was risk they took, talk about it, leading to character development and then continue their relationship from then, stronger than before! 


But like I said, I don't really mind either way, I just want to keep on reading. w<)

Thank you!! w^)/

wow! Definitely one of the greatest and detailed reviews! 🥰 It's a treasure to find these kind of comments!✨🙌 

It's very fulfilling knowing this story can detonate all that feeling train! 💖💖(And just you wait for what's coming next😋)

Indeed, it's a very unusual love story process  I guess 😅

You bet there's more coming up! Next build will have high quality sprites! (Gonna make a post about soon)

Greetings from Mexico, and sowy if you find some very dumb grammar mistakes 😅 Every build I find new ones to correct in the previous chapters. Still learning how to compose phrases and stuff 😅😅

Wish you a horny day buddy! 🥰🔥😋🙌

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Thank you! I'm feeling excited already- wo)

Oo, greetings from Brazil! ^)/

Brazilian Portuguese is very similar to spanish, so everytime a character spoke in spanish I still understood like 95% of what they were saying; 

Funny how I had this exact thought around the third time:

"Americans are not going to understand a single word of what they're saying, are they? w<)"

If you did made any mistakes, then at least I didn't notice, so they probably weren't that serious! 

You too~! •w-)

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Hehe and even with that, Damian's Spanish is kind of a slangy spanish from northern Mexico, but anyway, all non-english dialogues are not supposed to be super important(?) 😅 Like, it might also get understood just for the context 🤭 greetings from here to Brazil! I always feel like I understand a big part of portuguese too! (And would like to understand even more!🥰)

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I wonder if we can somehow tame xiao into a big softie since he might be a tsundere type.. XD

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JAJAJAJAJAJAJJA 

Only time will show 🤔

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Damien is the best imo, his body type is perfect. If he ever got a route and was a bottom, that would be very very nice. But yeah looking forward to seeing how this keeps going 💪


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mmmmmm Damian as bottom....😋💦💦💦

Hahaha I'm definitely not biased, but I agree 100% 🤭 💦

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Mannnn i want to see xiao belly 😤😤

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you bet is big and soft pillow!💖🤭

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I think we should have a dedicated google document for typo and grammar mistake reports

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That would be helpful 😅 you can also take screenshots if you find something and send on Twitter;) these kind of corrections are GOLD 🙌🥰

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Can I date Chuck?

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hello! Currently in the game, not. Maybe when the game is complete there could be routes, but it will be a lot of work to do 😅 

Good news is, Chuck is actually inspired on a bro and his fursona 🤭 please go say hi to @ippsja on Twitter ;p he has a super sexy voice!

Ari
need more
when release?

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Heyoo! Currently working on a big revamp ! Every character will look more detailed and high quality! The release was scheduled for this June but I got a bit excited and made even more details than planned😅

With all that, next public build should be ready within the first week of July, with new chapter and revamped characters! 🤩🥰 Wish you a nice and hornee day! 😋🤭

please release the chapter 21 earlier  Aaaaa

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heyoo! Currently working on a big revamp on all characters! Everyone is gonna be HD and will look even better!✨✨

You bet the wait is gonna be worth it!😅 💪💪🥰🥰

bunger king!!!

bunger? 😅🤭

😅🤭😅🤭😅🤭😅🤭😅🤭😅🤭😅🤭😅🤭BUNGERERRRERer

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Man this game is really, REALLY GOOD!!

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WOOF!!! ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥✨✨🙌🙌🙌

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just finished playing the new update now that exam season is over and I gotta say...


Xiao is kinda winning me over with his dorky yet believable character, he feels like a real person with real problems haha

I love his new chapter, It gives him more personality rather than just a grumpy teddy bear <3

watch out angel, a new challenger approaches hehe >:3c

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heyoo thanks for the review😘

It's wholesome hearing your opinion on Xiao 😋

Let's see what that stubborn panda will have for us later🤭

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Happy birthday amigooo // u w u //

Thank you for this brilliant chapter <3

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🥰🥰😘😘

When will be the next update?

Hewoo! It's scheduled to be around April 30th- May 2nd! ;)

Can't wait AAAAAAA

😅😅 working on it 🙏💪🤭🥰

不好意思,請問會繼續更新中文翻譯嗎?

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Hello bro!

As the previous Chinese translation was a volunteer work from Parrt, I'm not sure if he will be available to translate again, sorry 😞

Still, I'm planning on make translations, but once the game is finished, just that I don't know exactly how much more time that will take 

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我非常喜歡您做得遊戲,但我想最影響遊玩優質遊戲的往往是語言上的問題,我很期待往後的翻譯優化😁😁😁

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I love the game so far, the music, art simple, and stories pretty awesome i never playing furry vn like this before it's like touch my heart every scene and stories keep going to good works >w<
i wish there is more umm date beside with Angle i want with that big sexy coach polar bear too >w<
I LOVE CHUBBY SO MUCH!!
ohh also keep it up with that move pics like gif everytime sex scene i never seen like that in other furry game ^^

UWUFFF feeling blessed by your words bro!🥰🙏🙇💖😘

There will be more big chubby guys coming up 🥰🥰🥰

You are welcome hehehe ^^
ooh nice i hope that would be Rhino or Boar :3
also i love chuck design ^^
Hybrid Bull and wolf :3

Nice uwu you know, chuck is actually a nice bro! I made his fur Sona inspired on his super sexy voice!

Hello, question. Will there be multiple routes? Will there be more than one character to date?

Currently it is planed to be one linear route, as in Adastra for example.

As for how many characters we'll be able to date....spoiler alert... Let's say things could get spicy as our main character keeps interacting with the cast 🤭

Oh...though I really like Angel I really hate for him to leave on vacation 

Awe, kinda saddens me the idea of cheating but I suppose I'm here for the story/smut

Chapter 20 whenn?!!

hewooo! Chapter 20 will be released to the public within 4 weeks ;)

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I don't know if I asked this before, but I wanted to know if the game will have any other translations like Spanish.

I really want to, but it's convenient that it's finished first 😅

Oh I get it I'll be looking forward to it

are any of the routes finished?🥲

I'm need to first finish one route 🤣

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dang ok am trying to look for a vn with at least on route finsihed. i dowloaded your game and i like it so far

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UWUFFF 💖🔥💖🔥🥰

Oooooh, what a nice surprise to come back to after months of being busy, I'll enjoy playing this ehe, thanks for the great update Ari!

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UWUFFF! Hope it was worth the wait 💦💦🤭

I LOVE THE BEAR BROTHERS ALREADY

uwuuuuu they big and hamsom 🥰❤️

i would ask for a threesome but that's just immoral haha

not in the "non-cannon" universe 😏😍😘

I LOVEEE ZADDY ANGEL SOO MUCH <3<3!!!!

UWUWUWUUUU 💖🔥💖🔥💖🔥🤪

KEEP SLAYYING BESTIIEE 💅💅!!!!

yaaasss 💖🔥💖🔥💖

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a cena mais fofa do jogo🐶🐶

🤭🥰🥰🥰😘

Parabéns incrível

New update was great I hope to continue seeing this masterpiece, I don't know if I'm sad when it ends or happy because I get a hug from a certain someone lol

Awwww now sending you more bear hugs bro! 🤗

I accept with pleasure 🤗

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hello buddy! Thanks for your words, they mean the world!!! 💖🥰✨ The next public update will be up within the next 3 days! There's just a pending work to get finished for patrons 😅

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😘🙏🙇🙇🙇😅🥰💖

I love this VN, all characters are so much adorable and handsome guys and I just cant leave it without say something about it n.n! 

The game is so cute, the characters even more, the artstyle EVEN MORE, I just gotta say something...

There were some times where... I would have chosen something else for the protagonist to do, I love the VN I watched, but I would also love to be able to play it u.u 

I just dont understand at all... Why we cant do anything in the VN? I mean, for example, I would choose... I wanted to choose Doodle for that shower game as my partner, but I cant, I mean, I love Chuck too, but Doodle... sjdkajsdkashdasjs

As you can see, personally, I prefer guys like Damian, or Doodle, even over guys like Angel, but he is still such a cute bear ngl.

(I DONT HAVE ANYTHING FOR DOGS I SWEAR TWT)

Back to the topic, i was wondering, why there is nothing we as players can do/choose as the protagonist?

Dont get me wrong, I dont want to demand anything (especially because I know how complicated it can be to create a game like this) I just wanted to give my opinion about one of my favorite VNs. 

Anyways, I love it, I just cant wait to get more updates!... But ill be patient uwur 

P.S: Im from México too, maybe thats why I just love Damián so much, I cant with that Rottweiler xd

Holiii hehe si también soy de México ;p

La vdd si le he querido poner cositas así de opciones por aquí y por aya pero  efectivamente, es más complejo hacer rutas y decisiones 😅😅😅

En algún punto quiero empezar a ponérselos, pero por ahora trataré de concretar mínimo una línea de historia 😂🤣

El siguiente parche está a ~1 semana de ser liberado!🥰

Saludines desde saltillo, Coahuila! 

NO ME ESPERABA QUE ME RESPONDIERAS EN ESPAÑOL AAAAAA ME MUERO

Ejem~

No puedo esperar a la siguiente update,  y todavía falta una semana u.u namás haces que me emocione jsakjskjs

Gracias por responder jeje, saludos desde Monterrey, NL, se te quiere uwur

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I love this vn so much :D  / Me encanta este Vn

I wouldn't mind if the protagonist and Angel had an open relationship with other characters jeje ..
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I think the game should have a gallery, there so many CGs in this game, so will be better to replay the scenes.

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Bro I literally love this vn wtfffff❤❤❤❤❤

uwufff!!! 💖💖💖

There will be more content upcoming by the end of this month 🙏✨✨💖

About 4 more CGs spreader along the game and new chapter 😊

Omg real!!11!1!111 so cool

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omg this is so cute, i think it was worth the wait.

Uwufff! 💖 So sweet! 🙏🙇💖🥰

Damn, so soon? OvO

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When you gotta suck daddy bear, you gotta do it 🤭😅😋

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I think Chapter 16 will be so horny // owo //

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not just 16.. uwu owó ewe

Happy new year!

h0rny new year! 🤭😋

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Best outcome to a bad situation that I've ever seen.

pfhahaha! 😂😂I wish all my bad situations ended some sort of what happened here 🤭💖✨💕

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YES, man, same! 

Im in love with your game! But mostly in love with Angel!

I enjoy reading these, and have been through a multitude of VNs... Your work is art incarnate! Fantastic development, characters are relatable and loveable... and the music.... I need the soundtrack as a playlist!

Is there potentially a list (outside of the credits) where I could find it on Spotify? Or even just a downloadable file for it? I'd really like to just listen to the music on the daily :)

Your work is amazing, Angel is amazing, and you are amazing! Thank you for everything!!

Hewooo brooo thanks for your words they mean a lot to me! 💖✨💕🐳💦💦💦

I'll try to figure out something, probably in the mean time it could be a link to Google drive or something alike, maybe in the future the game will allow us to hear the soundtracks in a certain screen from the main menu😋

For now I'll try to bring the next update before December ends😬🤭🙈😅

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A Google Drive would even be fantastic! The music selection would just be terrific while I'm studying over course books in college or relaxing during the day. It has just the right melody to fit many uses 😁

Count on that ;3 lemme just finish this next build within some days ;d

Heyo! finally got some time to sit down and gather the files in folders ;3
here it is, all audio from Heat Source ;d
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1iAAffY7yj63LRLeS41fnJRbVSR2PJ74C?usp=sha...
you can tell me if there's any trouble with anything ;d
nice dae! uwu

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Hey AriGuardian, You did a great job with this vn.. 

it left me wondering tho.. 

*potential spoilers ahead*

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I feel e little confused when angel suddenly refer to the mc as love and the mc ended up refering angel as his boyfriend because I didn't see any love confession before that, oh well maybe it is just me and my thick skull not noticing any subtlety or something along the way.. The story is interesting, I'm not complaining really.. 

This vn makes my heart flutters and melts all over the place.. I literally can't hold myself from giggling like a highschool girls when they gossips about their super crush awesomeness whenever everything get sweets and romantic.. 

and whenever it happens, my soul was just like "Sh*t oh no.. nononono...... NO!!t-this is too much... Just what the hell am I getting myself into??... I'm way too bitter and sour for this..... this gonna hurt my bitterness and sourness a lot aaaarh!!......... "

*few minutes later, still reading with sparkling eyes, amusement and butterfly all over the place* "Wha?? uh... Cough cough a-aherm......B-but please  don't stop reading cuz I..... Uh.... I... I kinda love it I suppose...... I like how the bear treat the MC...."

*also a few chapters later* "Ugh I.. I can't take it anymore.... too much sweetness!!.... I-I'm dying but I need this in my life!!..... Aaaaaaaaaaaa I'm confused with my feelings.... ugh f*ck it! I don't care anymore, I love this vn!! and I love that angel bear a lot.... he's PRECIOUS!!!! I need to know what's going to happen next!"

haha sorry it may sounds cringeworthy but it's just how I feel eh (>.<)9

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oh my.. no, please don't feel cringe or anything alike, this is like one of the best replies! I swear I started crying from your sweetness not even half way it 😭😭😭💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

Thanks for your time writing all of it, it means the world to me! 😭❤️💖🥰

And yeah, seems like there are relationships that don't start with official words,  they just.. flow (?) 😅 I know that might not be the usual way things are done, but I also know they do can start like that🤭😏🥰

I will continue bringing more content!, Hopefully next chapter will be done by around the 24th ;)

Pd.: Your name matches perfectly the vibes you give, thanks for existing🥰💖✨

Ooooo.. I see what you mean now... it's going to make things even more interesting eh? I'm so excited XD

Aww shucks.. you gonna make me blush (>///<)  I'm just glad if it makes you feel happy and more motivated hehe.....

Keep up the good work boy~ You are awesome!

uwufff!! 🙈💖✨😋🤔💪🥰

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This game is amazing but who think angel has another partner in this lol

i'm at chapter 10 probably, and....

This Angel bear is really an utopian guy, I personally don't wanna let go and am willing to give up everything just to be with him.

😭💖💖💖💖🙌✨✨✨ my heart is melting asdfghasdfg 💖

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Why not? since the first meeting, MC has been treated with exclusive warmth. Then the next day, the sacred union between two lovebirds happened and no other name but "Love" heard all the time. What's more, Angel is the son of an extraordinary hotelier. What more can one would ask?
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I tried to start this game I love it but every time I do it says this

CI'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

Exception: Line with id chapter1_712daa3f appeared twice, at game/chapter1.rpy:5 and game/chapters1-16.rpy:5.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "/Users/mac/Documents/Untitled Folder/heat-source 2/HeatSource.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/bootstrap.py", line 274, in bootstrap

    renpy.main.main()

  File "/Users/mac/Documents/Untitled Folder/heat-source 2/HeatSource.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/main.py", line 490, in main

    renpy.game.script.load_script() # sets renpy.game.script.

  File "/Users/mac/Documents/Untitled Folder/heat-source 2/HeatSource.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/script.py", line 297, in load_script

    self.load_appropriate_file(".rpyc", ".rpy", dir, fn, initcode)

  File "/Users/mac/Documents/Untitled Folder/heat-source 2/HeatSource.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/script.py", line 809, in load_appropriate_file

    self.finish_load(stmts, initcode, filename=lastfn) # type: ignore

  File "/Users/mac/Documents/Untitled Folder/heat-source 2/HeatSource.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/script.py", line 427, in finish_load

    self.translator.take_translates(all_stmts)

  File "/Users/mac/Documents/Untitled Folder/heat-source 2/HeatSource.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/translation/__init__.py", line 169, in take_translates

    n.filename, n.linenumber))

Exception: Line with id chapter1_712daa3f appeared twice, at game/chapter1.rpy:5 and game/chapters1-16.rpy:5.

Darwin-19.6.0-x86_64-i386-64bit x86_64

Ren'Py 7.5.1.22070801

Sun Nov  6 13:58:17 2022

hello bro! You might need to delete your previous version and install it again! Sorry for this, the code was updated for better. n.n'

Hope you are doing well!

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I have some ... Thoughts... About chapter 14. Strong thoughts. 

It's not respect someone decision to say that and literally the next thing you say is trying to dissuade said decision. Mar has all the right to not even look in his parents direction after what they had done, he also should not have to lie about it, especially to the person that is supposed to be his boyfriend and the person that said that was going to respect.his.decision. 

I know , this feel like a rant, but it just rubs me the wrong way... 

Besides that, it was a really nice update, I still have to catch up to the chapter 16, but I waited a while for this update, and I shall savor it.

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agreed, that's not quite the best move from our MC. Of course, this will lead to other thingies in the future. We will see what he does about it🌛💫✨

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chuck is definitely my favorite

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