this game may be riddled with weird grammar and the occasional spelling error, but it manages to be absolutely hilarious anyway. When I noticed this visual gag, I burst out laughing
I'm just wondering if the headmaster it's gonna have it's own route? I know people probably hate him (with reason) but it would be kind nice if they could have a separated route without the son but with a similar beginning and star becoming like a sex only relationship that later on they start catching feelings or something like that
In my opinion any headmaster options I feel will end in like the bad end for Aidens route, Who knows maybe he will pop up here and there to tempt the main character away from your current routes... We will have to see when the Vn gets new routes but I like how ya think haha
This game is AMAZING, likely one of the best ive seen in a long time. The characters are charming and I love their interactions with each other. Especially the banter; all the lines are heccin hilarious ("You will not shackle me with your completely fair laws!!!!"). I also really like the chibi CGs that make transitions feel interesting. I'm excited to see the other routes and where the story will go. If I were made to offer a criticism, then I wish it would take some time to foreshadow and set things up a little more. I'm probably just being an idiot and missing some things, but for example, when Aiden revealed that he has a clone of himself, it felt a bit like it came out of left field (not that it ultimately bothered me). As a suggestion, sprinkling more obvious clues throughout the route such as having someone ask "how are you in two places at once" to make the reader more suspicious or making it more reasonable that he's capable of creating a clone by having him go into greater detail with his powers can help make it seem less random. Overall, however, this game is EASILY a 9/10 and I love what you've made so far! I can't wait for the next build
THIS GAME IS FUCKING AMAZING I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT THE CHARACTERS , THEIR SMUG REMARKS THE LORE EVERYTHING IS ABSOLUTLY PERFECT EASILY ONE OF MY FAVIORITE VNS SO FAR
I've got to give props to the comedy writing in this game. I had more than a few laughs playing through the current build - which is high praise from me as someone who finds comedy in VN typically cringe. Scribbles is my favorite so far. I love his brand of sass
I absolutely adore this VN. The artwork is definitely one of the best of my list. I like the idea of the story writing with interesting word choices and sound effects. The only problems right now are the phenomenal amounts of typos and the raw cut in some soundtracks then loop it. Those problems didn't kill the storytelling but sometimes it definitely makes it unintentionally funny. Anyway, I'm rooting for this VN to go off with a bang.
I absolutely LOVED playing this. It’s so well written and the humor is amazing. I’m also absolutely in love with the artwork. Easily one of the best visual novels I’ve ever tried and I am extremely excited for more.
Just finished the demo, and I can't wait for more Aiden already :D Really, stellar work, single chapter and it already promises to be one of the top VNs out there!
I love the premise, the characters' personalities, and the sex positivity in this VN! Not to mention the fantastic artworks too.
One major complaint though: there's a lot of typos and grammatical errors. I mean, a LOT. I would like to see that get cleaned up by the next update ^^
The vn is so amazing, I can't even describe how much I love all the characters!! Can't wait for the new update! Thank you so much for creating such a good vn♡
And I have question. Will there be a gallery for viewing CG's in future?
Excuse me, Can we translate this game into chinese? We want to get the creator's authorization to translate this game. I also send message to your twitter.Waitting for your response.
Sorry for my bad English. My English isn't very well.
Is dallans route out on patreon? I wanna get it but I dont want to get it if there is no new content tbh. Also is there a projected date if not out yet?
some slight spelling mistakes but it doesn't detract from the story, suggest proofreading a bit. i enjoyed the background art and the character designs from the character you play as to Haima as well as the plot of the visual novel the interactions between Aiden, Dallen and Tate are fun and enjoyable to read, overall a great story will be happy to see more when more chapters or paths get released
Omg i have never seen so much passion put into a game!! The artwork and story is incredible, will the vn be updated here on itch.io for free if there is enough support
not yet, patrons have voted that they want the whole route to be out and ready in the next update instead of releasing updates day by day, so it will take a while.
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this game may be riddled with weird grammar and the occasional spelling error, but it manages to be absolutely hilarious anyway. When I noticed this visual gag, I burst out laughing
He said next year for sure tho
Do you think the Doodle disappeared somewhere after the kiss of Cody and Aiden, because he was jealous of our main character to the tiger? 🤔
The Doodle will have its own route, right?
His name is Scribbles, but no, that was not the reason he disappeared :)
Yes, I know that's his name, but the translator translated it like this ╥﹏╥
never expected the "wonderful blue-haired woman" to be Jinx-
I'm just wondering if the headmaster it's gonna have it's own route? I know people probably hate him (with reason) but it would be kind nice if they could have a separated route without the son but with a similar beginning and star becoming like a sex only relationship that later on they start catching feelings or something like that
In my opinion any headmaster options I feel will end in like the bad end for Aidens route, Who knows maybe he will pop up here and there to tempt the main character away from your current routes... We will have to see when the Vn gets new routes but I like how ya think haha
So... i can aks about next the update coming this year or the next one? X3
Aka this december or in January?
Patrons might get it this month, public will be released next year for sure
Thanks X3.
Waiting for that X3.
second christmas let's gooooo
Dear author of this masterpiece, can I ask for the names of all the music playing in the game? 👉👈
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This game is AMAZING, likely one of the best ive seen in a long time. The characters are charming and I love their interactions with each other. Especially the banter; all the lines are heccin hilarious ("You will not shackle me with your completely fair laws!!!!"). I also really like the chibi CGs that make transitions feel interesting. I'm excited to see the other routes and where the story will go. If I were made to offer a criticism, then I wish it would take some time to foreshadow and set things up a little more. I'm probably just being an idiot and missing some things, but for example, when Aiden revealed that he has a clone of himself, it felt a bit like it came out of left field (not that it ultimately bothered me). As a suggestion, sprinkling more obvious clues throughout the route such as having someone ask "how are you in two places at once" to make the reader more suspicious or making it more reasonable that he's capable of creating a clone by having him go into greater detail with his powers can help make it seem less random. Overall, however, this game is EASILY a 9/10 and I love what you've made so far! I can't wait for the next build
Also where do i find aidens song ost?
Ty
it's actually unfairly, practically incongruously beautiful wth
THIS GAME IS FUCKING AMAZING I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT THE CHARACTERS , THEIR SMUG REMARKS THE LORE EVERYTHING IS ABSOLUTLY PERFECT EASILY ONE OF MY FAVIORITE VNS SO FAR
I love this game and those picture of character，and i love tateeeee
中文翻译什么时候能有呢？
11/30有了
似乎并没有找到11/30的
I love this! Hopefully we can choose Scribbles for Romantic Interests + Sex Scenes. Need more of that Top Domination :D
Scribbles is one of the routes so that is pretty much guaranteed, the question is will we get it before or after Tate
When is the next update?
Based on the last post asking this around 2 weeks latest
thank you for the answer
Alright then what about now?
hai 12 days future person i just wanted to say no update
1. twelve days isn't two weeks
2. I said around two weeks
3. this prediction was "Based on the last post asking this" not exactly straight from the author
Het is there a version for windows for he new build?
this is definitely my favourite vn out of all the ones I've ever played. i love it so much!!!
Hi, second chapter will be have a Russian translate by exgames?
I've got to give props to the comedy writing in this game. I had more than a few laughs playing through the current build - which is high praise from me as someone who finds comedy in VN typically cringe. Scribbles is my favorite so far. I love his brand of sass
I absolutely adore this VN. The artwork is definitely one of the best of my list. I like the idea of the story writing with interesting word choices and sound effects. The only problems right now are the phenomenal amounts of typos and the raw cut in some soundtracks then loop it. Those problems didn't kill the storytelling but sometimes it definitely makes it unintentionally funny. Anyway, I'm rooting for this VN to go off with a bang.
I absolutely LOVED playing this. It’s so well written and the humor is amazing. I’m also absolutely in love with the artwork. Easily one of the best visual novels I’ve ever tried and I am extremely excited for more.
when da next update im wating owo
Less than a month away!
Just finished the demo, and I can't wait for more Aiden already :D
Really, stellar work, single chapter and it already promises to be one of the top VNs out there!
Is it the same release date for patrons? (I'm in Wild fur tier if that makes a difference)
Patrons (from Wild Fur and above) get it earlier
Thanks for answering, really looking forward to seeing it.
I love the premise, the characters' personalities, and the sex positivity in this VN! Not to mention the fantastic artworks too.
One major complaint though: there's a lot of typos and grammatical errors. I mean, a LOT. I would like to see that get cleaned up by the next update ^^
The best visual novel I've ever read :3
Aiden is my bias, love him, hate his dad tho
Dude raped a student (the mc) , I can see why Aiden hates him
To be fair, he only does anything if you consent, if you don't, it only gets to threats, but I can definitely see people hating him still :)
The vn is so amazing, I can't even describe how much I love all the characters!! Can't wait for the new update! Thank you so much for creating such a good vn♡
And I have question. Will there be a gallery for viewing CG's in future?
Glad you liked it! :3
Yes, there will be! but before designing it I would like to finish all the main chapters first.
I'm happy it'll all be released in one update, rather than tiny 4 month ones.
I`m soooo excited for Dallan route also loveeee the game keep up the good workk you have my full support !!
Excuse me, Can we translate this game into chinese? We want to get the creator's authorization to translate this game. I also send message to your twitter.Waitting for your response.
Sorry for my bad English. My English isn't very well.
is there update soon?
The creator's plan is to release entire routes in one go so it's probably hard to predict a release date.
oh i see thx for info
Is dallans route out on patreon? I wanna get it but I dont want to get it if there is no new content tbh. Also is there a projected date if not out yet?
I think he said that it isn't out because the patreon wanted to get in a whole instead of day by day.
alright thanks, any word on an eta
some slight spelling mistakes but it doesn't detract from the story, suggest proofreading a bit. i enjoyed the background art and the character designs from the character you play as to Haima as well as the plot of the visual novel the interactions between Aiden, Dallen and Tate are fun and enjoyable to read, overall a great story will be happy to see more when more chapters or paths get released
Omg i have never seen so much passion put into a game!! The artwork and story is incredible, will the vn be updated here on itch.io for free if there is enough support
Thank you for the kind words :3 and absolutely, if the updates come out on Patreon, sooner or later they'll come here too.
This game is already so good so far! Can't wait to see what comes next
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Can you like, elaborate?
Love the game! isn't the classic school romance, playing much VN but this is in my top 5!
When is the next update for the public
Is the newest build out on Patreon?
not yet, patrons have voted that they want the whole route to be out and ready in the next update instead of releasing updates day by day, so it will take a while.
Tate a favorite truly 😎
I like it and can't wait for next chapter/update.
Wonder who's next?
I am practically itching for the new updates and what's to come...
Hi! Is a fantastic VN. I LOVE IT!