This was good enough that I feel compelled to say something.
I have to be honest, I'm in a weird place with MNF. I honestly almost quit MNF in the first 30 minutes, but ended up getting hooked enough to play through the content that was available at that time(I want to say this was around spring this year). I don't like it. It's meandering, it doesn't feel like the story is going anywhere, a lot of otherwise interesting characters feel tacked on and totally extraneous - to their own detriment and the detriment of the story - and it feels less like a story than a collection of events described flatly.
MNM indicates that you've grown tremendously as a writer, and you've really got your hands around this project.
MNM hit me in the ballsack almost immediately and kept punching. The story was gripping, the choices felt a little more meaningful than they did in MNF(which I understand was by design), the characters felt more well-rounded and I felt like this story is actually going somewhere - AND that you actually know where that is.
Without spoilers or trying to tell you how to write a story, I do think you're in danger here of doing the same thing with MNF - not keeping your eye on the ending, and not making difficult choices to move the story forward. Case in point, I honestly can't remember anything about the middle Daughter because we barely talk to her, and while the Cop subplot was excellent and tied to the greater narrative the Librarian felt extraneous - everything she said could have been narrated without any loss. As long as she's not "just one more fuckable side character" and doesn't generate a 2-hour subplot that doesn't go anywhere I don't think she's a BAD character, just a character who's (possibly, with what we currently know) unnecessary for the telling of the story.
All this is to say that I still really love this project. I want this story to come to a heartfelt, gut-punch ending that makes me lose my fucking shit like RDR2, and I want all of the feels along the way. I have a lot of confidence that you can pull this off and if the next public update keeps this pace I'll definitely look at joining your Patreon. I wish you absolute success and happiness, and for your creation to bring you as much joy as it will doubtless bring others. Good luck, kick ass, take names and dig into it - we're rootin' for ya man.
I like MNF but there are so many characters that it's hard to develop an attachment to any one character for me. It does tend to meander, but that doesn't bother me. Real life tends to meander too and I like the sensation that they're just going about their day forming these relationships.
MNM is already starting down that character overload path, for me. But the story seems more focused. I think it'll balance out better.
This is slowly becoming one of my favorite VNs(Besides My New Family) I'm instantly hooked on the storyline. Just please, PLEASE, dont destroy my soul and kill "her" off.
I'm really not good at commenting on things so I'll keep it short. You have a gift for storytelling. I've played both of yours and you have managed to make me care about the characters. Keep up the great work.
hello everyone and hello K7 I do agree with Some comments about the games that both are quite good Games my suggestion to you K7 is since you have made two updates for my new family maybe you should consider making two updates for my new memories and then work on one of your games at a time so you are not working too hard going back and forth between two games would you consider about putting up some teaser screenshots for both games just a suggestion
Honestly man, this is actually one of the best VNs I've played on itch, and if this first release is something to go off of, I have high hopes the rest of it will be absolutely brilliant. Keep up the good work dude!
hello everyone and hello K7 Have you decided if you are going to allow players who have my new memories on Steam are you going to allow them to play beta For my new memories ?
I finally had a little time to play this... Played it in one session, just couldn't stop myself! Another great story developing there, and the feels are almost as deep as MNF! There's only one thing that is giving me a bit of an uncomfortable feeling around the story direction, but I prolly shouldn't post that in here to not spoil anything! ;)
my suggestion for you K7 is that you work on one game at a time what I mean is work on MNM finish That update and then work on MNF instead of trying to work on both games at the same time
Ok so I am gonna be very blunt here, you have seriously nailed a Perfect Perfect Story here. Yes there are a few Grammar errors but honestly not that bad. An there's not really a lot of sex scene's but the story alone is just Great even without them. This is a True Master Piece and if this is the type of work you do. Hell I'd pay $25 or $50 a month for this. You have really outdone yourself. Keep up the work and I can't wait to see how it progresses.
Congratulations to you killer7 for reaching 10,000 from your patrons as I said before these are both very very great games keep up the great work maybe you could hire three people to work on my New family and three people to work on my new memories just a suggestion
I haven't fully deicded on that one yet but I will probably give you guys beta access there like I do with Sarah patrons, so after the Sabrina and higher tiers get the second beta you will get the first one on steam :).
I am just curious about MNF, do you do release simultaneously on both your Patreon and here? for example, when its ready to go live you post it both on patreon and on here at the same time. forgive my ignorance. I would also be more than happy to pay for MNF on steam if you ever take it there. You have done a huge amount of work on it so far, and more than happy to pay for it on steam! I am not a fan of Patreon due to their childish draconian measures and censorship.
I post public updates on patreon and here for My New Family, sadly I can't put the game on steam because of licensing issues ( I use something called Honey Select to make the renders for MNF, which is a game made by Illusion ).
thanks for your quick response. I think that the guys who make SL also use Honey select, at least that is what I am sure the dev said, would it be impossible to get the licensing, or would it be too cost preventative?
hello everyone and hello killer7 as for your question who would I pick between the main characters twin sister and and Anna”s sister I would personally probably pick Sabrina are you planning on bringing the lewd to any of the other characters as well also I do agree with what somebody posted about patron although those words I probably would not use to describe how I think about patron and I would definitely support if you brought any beta to steam for my new memories
Of course there will be a choice but there are no bad consequences if you go for both, you will only miss out on content if you don't go for one of them :D and maybe, will see how this unfolds in the story.
It has some "darker" elements but overall it's still very wholesome I would say. It has 100% no bad endings and will always leave you with a good feeling, though.
Hello everyone since both games are made by the same developer I would put in my new memories The lewd Part from my new family and put it in my new memories first off I would start my new memories with the Mc trying to fix his relationship with his second sister plus the author needs to be very careful when putting this on Patron because those in charge of patron don’t like the words lewd together with sister or daughter PS since The author is writing the script and making scenes for these scrips I would probably suggest writing half the script and then rendering half the scenes and then writing the rest of the script and then rendering the rest of the scenes that is just a suggestion for the author to think about
hello everyone and hello killer7 are you going to allow the player to try and fix the MC”s relationship with Jessica maybe the main character should take one of his daughters to the main characters other house to clean it and make preparations for the rest of his family to move there because we are now right now is warmer because summer is approaching PS is Sophie the only one not getting Lewd if so that is a little disappointing
I created an itch.io account just so I could comment here. I played and followed My New Family since like chapter 5. I thought that game was amazing but this is on another level. Can't wait for more of this game as it is easily my favorite visual novel.
Hello there, I wanted to know if I delete the apk now and then download it again when the new updates come, do I have to play over again of it will save my game even if I delete the apk now?
Great VN, but its a little annoying how everyone wants the PC to get his memories back but when questioned they refuse to tell you anything. (Wait) (That's for another day) (I cant tell you that yet) There's just more and more unanswered questions right now. Currently at the part where Lena and her daughter visit.
The problem your referring to , in which people keep telling him that they will give him information tomorrow, or later etc. Is actually the correct way of trying to help someone with amnesia. You simply can't rush someone into trying to remember something, it just doesn't work like that, because for a start it will usually mean nothing to him or her, and would make no sense to them because they have no frame of reference to remember by in the first place. By going slowly and patiently and at the person's own pace, things start to come back to them..overdo by giving to much information too soon, can actually do a lot more damage than people realize. some may never get their memories back, and often a person who has had amnesia actually tend to behave a lot differently than they originally did.
I just want to say thank you for making such a great game. Not all about the lewd scenes but a great story too. Pulls you in a makes you want to take your time not just fast click to get to the next event. Keep up the great work and I can’t wait for the next update on steam.
I can't tell yet, I will update you guys once I get closer to finishing the first ingame day. I took things very slow after the release because I have been pushing hard to get the first release out :).
Killer another great story as I had anticipated I will be trying to support on patreon when able as I really can't wait till this keeps chugging along, as I really can't get enough of the story. Every scene has been captivating again thank you for putting so much time in making enjoyable stories to read.
I'm just wondering in the future updates, is there any chances of hitting my therapist? I found her more attractive than Ana, especially without her glasses during our sessions.
Hmm this is very weird cuz its not the first time it happens to me, at the moment to end the download it says forbbiden and doesnt let me download the apk. I have tried Chrome and the default Samsung browser, idk why it happens... Killer, do you have any advices? This is really pissing me off tbh.
Thanks before hand
(I know its not your fault, im just asking in case you have the solution (for some reason) )
It's usually the phone blocking .apk downloads for "safety". If it still doesn't work you could try using the mega links on my discord, they should work if you give the app permissions.
I have the solution, run into this problem with almost every single game on here. DO NOT close the browser tab after it starts downloading, wait for the download to complete then close the tab. If that doesnt fix it you have some unblocking features to do.
Like everyone else, I have to give you a big thumbs up for this. Superb storyline, done really well. Laugh, smile, romantic, horny, sad, you go for the emotions and nail it pretty much every time. Love the characters too, whilst nobody stands out to me yet on a par with Lucy from MNF, (Sabrina and Anna are definitely close though,) its still very early days. Also love the quality of the artwork.
Sorry to say I spotted the twist at the end of the prologue almost as soon as the characters were introduced, but that didnt lessen my enjoyment at all.
I also agree completely with your philosophy of storyline before lewds, the storyline is what makes your work special, I would read it even without the artwork. Not saying the images arent nice, they are, but I can find lewd pictures in loads of places on the web. Context is what elevates the whole.
MNF and MNM are absolutely in the top few Visual Novels Ive looked at so far, exactly what I want.
One request though, I want to support both games on Patreon, but cant stretch to the Full Package, would you consider adding a tier merging the Lucy and Sarah tiers? (Maybe call it the Fan Service tier and have the thumbnail for it a picture of them both together.)
i just bought this on steam early acess, i only hope that each chapter is being worked on as quickly as possible. From the little I played..my god, wow, give us more!
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This was good enough that I feel compelled to say something.
I have to be honest, I'm in a weird place with MNF. I honestly almost quit MNF in the first 30 minutes, but ended up getting hooked enough to play through the content that was available at that time(I want to say this was around spring this year). I don't like it. It's meandering, it doesn't feel like the story is going anywhere, a lot of otherwise interesting characters feel tacked on and totally extraneous - to their own detriment and the detriment of the story - and it feels less like a story than a collection of events described flatly.
MNM indicates that you've grown tremendously as a writer, and you've really got your hands around this project.
MNM hit me in the ballsack almost immediately and kept punching. The story was gripping, the choices felt a little more meaningful than they did in MNF(which I understand was by design), the characters felt more well-rounded and I felt like this story is actually going somewhere - AND that you actually know where that is.
Without spoilers or trying to tell you how to write a story, I do think you're in danger here of doing the same thing with MNF - not keeping your eye on the ending, and not making difficult choices to move the story forward. Case in point, I honestly can't remember anything about the middle Daughter because we barely talk to her, and while the Cop subplot was excellent and tied to the greater narrative the Librarian felt extraneous - everything she said could have been narrated without any loss. As long as she's not "just one more fuckable side character" and doesn't generate a 2-hour subplot that doesn't go anywhere I don't think she's a BAD character, just a character who's (possibly, with what we currently know) unnecessary for the telling of the story.
All this is to say that I still really love this project. I want this story to come to a heartfelt, gut-punch ending that makes me lose my fucking shit like RDR2, and I want all of the feels along the way. I have a lot of confidence that you can pull this off and if the next public update keeps this pace I'll definitely look at joining your Patreon. I wish you absolute success and happiness, and for your creation to bring you as much joy as it will doubtless bring others. Good luck, kick ass, take names and dig into it - we're rootin' for ya man.
I wholeheartedly agree!
I like MNF but there are so many characters that it's hard to develop an attachment to any one character for me. It does tend to meander, but that doesn't bother me. Real life tends to meander too and I like the sensation that they're just going about their day forming these relationships.
MNM is already starting down that character overload path, for me. But the story seems more focused. I think it'll balance out better.
This is slowly becoming one of my favorite VNs(Besides My New Family) I'm instantly hooked on the storyline. Just please, PLEASE, dont destroy my soul and kill "her" off.
Otherwise its awesome and I can't wait for more.
Concept is straight up fire in the name of Harman I wish you success
I'm really not good at commenting on things so I'll keep it short. You have a gift for storytelling. I've played both of yours and you have managed to make me care about the characters. Keep up the great work.
hello everyone and hello K7 I do agree with Some comments about the games that both are quite good Games my suggestion to you K7 is since you have made two updates for my new family maybe you should consider making two updates for my new memories and then work on one of your games at a time so you are not working too hard going back and forth between two games would you consider about putting up some teaser screenshots for both games just a suggestion
I agree with you. I would hate for My New Family to just stop being made without a conclusion, just because he is working on My New Memories.
Honestly man, this is actually one of the best VNs I've played on itch, and if this first release is something to go off of, I have high hopes the rest of it will be absolutely brilliant. Keep up the good work dude!
hello everyone and hello K7 Have you decided if you are going to allow players who have my new memories on Steam are you going to allow them to play beta For my new memories ?
I finally had a little time to play this... Played it in one session, just couldn't stop myself! Another great story developing there, and the feels are almost as deep as MNF!
There's only one thing that is giving me a bit of an uncomfortable feeling around the story direction, but I prolly shouldn't post that in here to not spoil anything! ;)
LOVING IT!
my suggestion for you K7 is that you work on one game at a time what I mean is work on MNM finish That update and then work on MNF instead of trying to work on both games at the same time
That is going to be the plan most likely :D
When is the next update, please tell us. Love your game so much
Honestly one of the best NSWF VNs in Development right now. Keep it up!
Ok so I am gonna be very blunt here, you have seriously nailed a Perfect Perfect Story here. Yes there are a few Grammar errors but honestly not that bad. An there's not really a lot of sex scene's but the story alone is just Great even without them. This is a True Master Piece and if this is the type of work you do. Hell I'd pay $25 or $50 a month for this. You have really outdone yourself. Keep up the work and I can't wait to see how it progresses.
This was so good! I cant wait for the nest release
Hey,when the next update available for public?Can't wait to see it.
Wow it was pretty long for a first release that was pretty awesome.. I hope the next updates will be just as long
That is the plan :)
Congratulations to you killer7 for reaching 10,000 from your patrons as I said before these are both very very great games keep up the great work maybe you could hire three people to work on my New family and three people to work on my new memories just a suggestion
being i own this vn on steam, will you give us beta access there please like most devs do? thanks
I haven't fully deicded on that one yet but I will probably give you guys beta access there like I do with Sarah patrons, so after the Sabrina and higher tiers get the second beta you will get the first one on steam :).
thank you, i really appreciate it!
I am just curious about MNF, do you do release simultaneously on both your Patreon and here? for example, when its ready to go live you post it both on patreon and on here at the same time. forgive my ignorance. I would also be more than happy to pay for MNF on steam if you ever take it there. You have done a huge amount of work on it so far, and more than happy to pay for it on steam! I am not a fan of Patreon due to their childish draconian measures and censorship.
I post public updates on patreon and here for My New Family, sadly I can't put the game on steam because of licensing issues ( I use something called Honey Select to make the renders for MNF, which is a game made by Illusion ).
thanks for your quick response. I think that the guys who make SL also use Honey select, at least that is what I am sure the dev said, would it be impossible to get the licensing, or would it be too cost preventative?
hello everyone and hello killer7 as for your question who would I pick between the main characters twin sister and and Anna”s sister I would personally probably pick Sabrina are you planning on bringing the lewd to any of the other characters as well also I do agree with what somebody posted about patron although those words I probably would not use to describe how I think about patron and I would definitely support if you brought any beta to steam for my new memories
You can pick both actually, Sabrina and Lena, you don't have to decide :).
ok but still a Choice would be not a bad idea, Also are any of the other character”s getting any lewder as well ?
Of course there will be a choice but there are no bad consequences if you go for both, you will only miss out on content if you don't go for one of them :D and maybe, will see how this unfolds in the story.
When is chapter2?
You mean Chapter 1. Will have a better estimate once the first beta is out :).
There is no ETA yet on the next update for my new memories if you want to play a beta you have to support the developer of this game on patron
Im just getting to the game and i was wondering is this game entirely wholesome except some of the memories?
It has some "darker" elements but overall it's still very wholesome I would say. It has 100% no bad endings and will always leave you with a good feeling, though.
Hello everyone since both games are made by the same developer I would put in my new memories The lewd Part from my new family and put it in my new memories first off I would start my new memories with the Mc trying to fix his relationship with his second sister plus the author needs to be very careful when putting this on Patron because those in charge of patron don’t like the words lewd together with sister or daughter PS since The author is writing the script and making scenes for these scrips I would probably suggest writing half the script and then rendering half the scenes and then writing the rest of the script and then rendering the rest of the scenes that is just a suggestion for the author to think about
The game is not available on patreon.
hello everyone and hello killer7 are you going to allow the player to try and fix the MC”s relationship with Jessica maybe the main character should take one of his daughters to the main characters other house to clean it and make preparations for the rest of his family to move there because we are now right now is warmer because summer is approaching PS is Sophie the only one not getting Lewd if so that is a little disappointing
When are you planning on releasing an update for My New Memories?
read update my new family he tells everyone progress on both game.
i loved the easter egg from my new family
I created an itch.io account just so I could comment here. I played and followed My New Family since like chapter 5. I thought that game was amazing but this is on another level. Can't wait for more of this game as it is easily my favorite visual novel.
Hello there, I wanted to know if I delete the apk now and then download it again when the new updates come, do I have to play over again of it will save my game even if I delete the apk now?
You should probably get the save files before deleting the apk.
Alright I got save files, Thanks!
WIll you be adding a gallery at some point? Seems like it would be easier to hook up the sooner you do it.
Will be included in the first update. Steam version already has it since updating that one is easier :).
I really wanted an opportunity to support you so I bought your game on steam cause I really enjoyed your games. Thank you so much for making them.
Great VN, but its a little annoying how everyone wants the PC to get his memories back but when questioned they refuse to tell you anything. (Wait) (That's for another day) (I cant tell you that yet) There's just more and more unanswered questions right now. Currently at the part where Lena and her daughter visit.
The problem your referring to , in which people keep telling him that they will give him information tomorrow, or later etc. Is actually the correct way of trying to help someone with amnesia. You simply can't rush someone into trying to remember something, it just doesn't work like that, because for a start it will usually mean nothing to him or her, and would make no sense to them because they have no frame of reference to remember by in the first place. By going slowly and patiently and at the person's own pace, things start to come back to them..overdo by giving to much information too soon, can actually do a lot more damage than people realize. some may never get their memories back, and often a person who has had amnesia actually tend to behave a lot differently than they originally did.
K7 got this spot on.
You are a wonderful story writer. Please continue.
I just want to say thank you for making such a great game. Not all about the lewd scenes but a great story too. Pulls you in a makes you want to take your time not just fast click to get to the next event. Keep up the great work and I can’t wait for the next update on steam.
quick question is every character going to be romanceable
quick question when is the next update just wondering dont feel pressured you take your time
I can't tell yet, I will update you guys once I get closer to finishing the first ingame day. I took things very slow after the release because I have been pushing hard to get the first release out :).
alright thanks for the info
Killer another great story as I had anticipated I will be trying to support on patreon when able as I really can't wait till this keeps chugging along, as I really can't get enough of the story. Every scene has been captivating again thank you for putting so much time in making enjoyable stories to read.
Hey Killer7, how are you doing?
Can you have sex with Morgan? also, FANTASTIC game!
Yes, Morgan is going to be lewdable in the future!
Okay, I appreciate it! Have a great day! :)
And are Olivia and Sophie lewdable as well?
And does it matter if Morgan is trans? Can you still have sex with her? or does Morgan have to be not Trans?
You can have sex with Morgan when she is trans, but the sex will be different. Sophie will be lewdable as well, Olivia will probably not be lewdable.
Thank you! There are no better VN's than the ones you make. Honestly. Have a great and safe day! :)
Oh, and the Lucy and Pelican references are good. xDD
Hmmm... Wouldn't Olivia be a logical one though, given the daddy complex she obviously has? Anyway, your story, your choices! ;)
yeah, i agree man. and i hope he does that but i'm not getting my hopes up.
Hey killer7 👋
I'm just wondering in the future updates, is there any chances of hitting my therapist? I found her more attractive than Ana, especially without her glasses during our sessions.
Dr. Rosenberg will be lewdable, yes. But don't you dare call her hotter than Anna :(.
Glad to hear that HAHAHAXD
Klasse Arbeit hast du hier geleistet muss man einfach sagen
MNM ist jetzt bei mir auf Platz 1
Und ich hoffe das es auch betas geben wird wie bei MNF deswegen unterstütze ich dich jetzt auf Patreon im Sabrina Level
Kanns kaum erwarten das es weiter geht
Mach weiter so für mich bist du der beste in Sachen VN :)
Danke für die netten worte :) Die betas sind genauso geplant wie für My New Family ^^ Danke auch für den support!
Hmm this is very weird cuz its not the first time it happens to me, at the moment to end the download it says forbbiden and doesnt let me download the apk. I have tried Chrome and the default Samsung browser, idk why it happens... Killer, do you have any advices? This is really pissing me off tbh.
Thanks before hand
(I know its not your fault, im just asking in case you have the solution (for some reason) )
It's usually the phone blocking .apk downloads for "safety". If it still doesn't work you could try using the mega links on my discord, they should work if you give the app permissions.
It worked from your discord, thanks!
I have the solution, run into this problem with almost every single game on here. DO NOT close the browser tab after it starts downloading, wait for the download to complete then close the tab. If that doesnt fix it you have some unblocking features to do.
Dowloaded it from the discord server, but will use your advice for other ocasion, thanks.
you made a another masterpiece keep up the good work don't overwork yourself take it nice and slow 5 out of 5 stars
love it cant wait t o see more and where it goes keep uo the good work
Like everyone else, I have to give you a big thumbs up for this. Superb storyline, done really well. Laugh, smile, romantic, horny, sad, you go for the emotions and nail it pretty much every time. Love the characters too, whilst nobody stands out to me yet on a par with Lucy from MNF, (Sabrina and Anna are definitely close though,) its still very early days. Also love the quality of the artwork.
Sorry to say I spotted the twist at the end of the prologue almost as soon as the characters were introduced, but that didnt lessen my enjoyment at all.
I also agree completely with your philosophy of storyline before lewds, the storyline is what makes your work special, I would read it even without the artwork. Not saying the images arent nice, they are, but I can find lewd pictures in loads of places on the web. Context is what elevates the whole.
MNF and MNM are absolutely in the top few Visual Novels Ive looked at so far, exactly what I want.
One request though, I want to support both games on Patreon, but cant stretch to the Full Package, would you consider adding a tier merging the Lucy and Sarah tiers? (Maybe call it the Fan Service tier and have the thumbnail for it a picture of them both together.)
Thank you again.
I will add a tier like that starting in July :) Thank you for the kind words!
Hey Killer 7 i love this series, your writing is wonderful and i love the lucy easter egg i hope to read more from both of your stories
i just bought this on steam early acess, i only hope that each chapter is being worked on as quickly as possible. From the little I played..my god, wow, give us more!