what is the difference between paid and the demo? i finished act 1 and thought it would end at an earlier chapter, but i was able to play anyways. loved the game btw!!
The difference is that I'm stupid lmao! It seems I got confused with the files and uploaded the full version instead of the demo. Now it's all how it's supposed to be (I hope lol). The difference for you would be that the paid version lets you save your choices to later import them to Act 2.
Thanks for letting me know! I'm glad to know you enjoyed the... 'extended' demo xD
Thank you so much dor buying it! <3 That is the reason I added the option to buy it through Patreon too. I'd love to release it on Steam, but right now I can't afford to pay the fee, so hopefully in the future! :D
It's two in the morning here and I finally finished it! Been reading literally since this morning (or last morning?) and all I could say is, PLEASE CONTINUE IT I CANT LIVE WITHOUT THEM ANYMORE ;(((
To be completely honest I was a bit skeptical because the cover was quite... random? no offense of course, it was just a perspective of someone who hasn't read the story yet, but when I clicked on the page, I was freaking surprised to find a whole character design for the RO??? All of them too??? Like WOW and I tell myself I'm playing this JUST to test it out whether it's good or not....
But look at me now, almost twenty hours later, typing this review even though I'm dying to have some sleep already.
I really couldn't wait for another update, I'm fr will wait forever for you to update, this is going into one of my most favorite IF's EVER and you'll be one of my fav creators too fr fr! I really enjoyed the game, like really, really, really enjoyed it, so thank you for making such a masterpiece! I literally cried at many scene, like the last game they had or when I saw the option to approach the uncle-nephew pair at the party crossed out, like I cried so bad, I could save them if only I choose different option ;(
I'm playing Omar's route today so I'll play another route and switch up some options so that I get a different path, but that's for when I wake up later, I'm so excited! :> Though, can I ask if there's another intimate encounter like the one with Omar in another RO's path just this far? Or is it only available in Omar's route?
Anyway, I hope wherever you are, you'd always be safe and happy, please keep up the good work, I love em so much! ;)))
Omg, thank you so, so much for this wonderful message!! <3. I am beyond happy to hear that you gave this story a chance, and even more to know that you ended up liking it! Really, I have no words to express my gratitude :’D.
To answer your question, only Ada/Omar has an intimate scene for now. The others, with the exception of Leire/Luca and the mysterious figure, will have their own spicy scenes in the future ;). And as for the cover, no offense taken! To be honest, I usually prefer simple designs, and this one is a bit too flashy for my usual tastes, but it was the only one that convinced me from all the options I came up with, and I’ve grown fond of it with time xD.
I hope you have fun and enjoy the next route you choose, hopefully with less tears! From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much again for the message and for putting a big smile on my face today! <3
Lolol im just saying (only on chp2/3(one of those i forget)) but with how much they seem to be dismissing my MCs honesty about thwir dreams, lol, i have a feeling there will be consequences for this lolol.
Lmao! Yeah, from MC's point of view, something clearly doesn't add up! But in Rayco/Gara and Albert/Lavina's defense, the dream visitor is not what they seem ;).
I have concerns about Omar route, what happened with the Omar route? I am actively pursuing him and choosing every scene with him. My MC relationship status with him is "care," but somehow when my MC chooses the option "I want more than just fun with you, Omar," he rejects us and questions, "Since when?" I was confused about that because my MC is so obvious with her interest in him, but he disregards it easily. I know he has a lot of issues, especially with his past, but still, it hurts. So I just want to clarify: is there any romance route with him or only fling/fwb? If he is only interested in a physical relationship, I will restart to move on to another love interest who wants both.
Don't worry, he is a full RO and you're on the right path. Every RO has its own dynamic, and Ada/Omar's is fwb to lovers. Right now, Ada/Omar doesn't feel anything romantic for the MC, they are just physically attracted to them, and what you choose in chapter 9 determines how they'll behave towards the MC from that point on (whether they keep flirting or try to keep their distance sentimentally speaking to not hurt the MC further), but I assure you that there will come a point where those feelings will inevitably change, and Ada/Omar never shy away from expressing themselves openly. When they start to fall for the MC, they'll say so without a problem.
May all stars and Gods smile upon you, this story shall be blessed with divine might!
I absolutely adore the writing, the characters, the scenes, the careful way every sentence and scene flows with the music and the choices feel so natural.
So many emotions, so much happiness and angst in one sitting.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!! What a great way to start my morning with this lovely message ^^. I am beyond happy to know you're enjoying this story, and also honoured to be receiving these wonderful words! Your support means a lot to me, and I hope the joy this project brings continues throughout the rest of the series.
Thank you very, very much for the comment, I'm very grateful for it ^^. Wishing you a fantastic day ahead, and sending much love your way, kind stranger :D!
Ahhh, I just finished reading chapter 8 and I just can't!! BE SILENT!! It's very interesting and so dramatic!! Q___Q
And all the ROs are just aaaah, everyone is simply unique and interesting in their own way! However, I decided to give my heart to Luca!! :D (although I will definitely read all the other routs later too)
Thank you so much for your work, I will look forward to continuing! And I also have a question: will this IF be released in Steam? I would love to buy it there!! Q___Q
O mg, thank you so, so much for this wonderful message!! I am beyond happy to know you’re enjoying the story! You’ve chosen a good RO, indeed. Leire/Luca’s dynamic is one of my favourites and I can’t wait to show more of them in Act 2, and especially in Act 3, hehe :D.
To answer your question, for now I’m thinking on just using this page, since once you pay (or donate, actually) the amount that’s asked, you’ll have access to download the game in any format and it will be linked to your account. So, for example, you play on PC but for some reason you want to change to mobile for another route. Here, you wouldn’t need to pay for the game again, and I think that’s a pretty good advantage. But in the future? Yes, of course I’d love to release it on Steam and Play Store and Apple Store! These last two I’m not worried about because I have seen that the Monaca platform works pretty well to convert Twine games into mobile apps (and it's something I'll have to do anyway to release it here), but Steam seems a bit more complicated. I don’t know if Monaca would work to convert a HTML file into something that Steam would allow to be released on their platform, and if not, I don’t know of any other tool.
TL;DR, this game will be available for purchase here on itch.io. Maybe on Steam, Apple Store, and Play Store in the future, but it’s not my priority for now unless I discover a tool to make it work on Steam.
Thank you once again for the comment! I hope you have a fantastic day :D
Oh, I hope you will be able to fulfill your plans for a release on different platforms! q_q
In my country, there is no way to pay on this site now, so I buy all the IF (including many of them on Twine and Choice of Games) in Steam, so I hope that in the future you will be able to do it, anyway, good luck with the work again!! UwU
Thanks, I hope so too! And wow, that's a shame, I didn't know it was restricted in some countries :S. I have seen Twine games that have been released on Steam, so if I manage to find a good tutorial it shouldn't be that complicated... I hope, haha! Fingers crossed!
The ROs are all monogamous, so no polyamory there.
There will be some scenes of jealousy in the future that I have planned, both coming from the MC or the ROs depending on the route you're reading. But it will be a very minor thing and will not change the dynamic nor the romance.
And about the love triangle routes, I did think about doing at least one (more specifically Leire/Luca with Rayco/Gara) but I quickly discarded the idea because of how much work it would take. I'd have to create a whole new route just for that, add even more variations, choose scenes between them and how the other feels about it, the different endings, etc.
It's just too much for my first game. There's already enough drama in the story and in each route to add even more lol. I rather focus on each of them individually and let the players experience the romances to the fullest without a third person in the mix.
Wonderful game! i usually dont comment but i just had to.. When the mc is in the blue coyote underground place and gets to choose a person to chat with, i chose luca. and then we get to pick our preferred animal. ofc i choose cat. and then our reasoning for choosing a cat is that THEYRE EASY.? REQUIRE LESS ATTENTION. gorl i am crying like no no no those are all the worst reasons to pick a cat. it just threw me off because it seems like sort of an apathetic reason. no hate or anything especially towards a piece of work that obviously took so much time and love it just sent me into a mini coma of sadness ;; (srsly tho i love luca) .... (and cats....)
Hahahaha no worries! I gotta be honest, I really, really don't like cats >.<. Not that I hate them or anything like that, but I'm very afraid of them, something that makes people who know me laugh because I have one (or more like my brother has and I'm just stuck with them lol). For that scene I asked people who do love cats and those were the responses I got so... yeah xD
I love this story... As I use a screen translator I have to interpret some things, but I still love it a lot... Thank you so much for taking me out of my boredom💕💕💕.
And if you see any errors here... Well, it's because my English is very basic😅.
I am in love with your work !! It's really incredible, your writing is beautiful and made me experience all the emotions. I eagerly await for the next chapters !! ;)
(sorry if i don't express myself well, i don't speak English very well)
could you possibly see if you can add some options to turn down the background music? or mute them in general? i often have a video playing in the background but there's no options to do so sadly enough!
That's because you either don't meet the requirements or you've already picked the option. For example, there's an option in chapter one in the tavern keeper or the doctor's route that, depending on if the MC believes or not in the gods, you can or cannot choose.
Hahaha! I decided to delete that feature because I think it takes away part of the charm of playing interactive novels, but I understand the struggle :') That's why I always save before making any choices in these types of games xD
Aww, I'm very happy to hear that! :D I'm glad you love Luca! Leire/Luca's romance dynamic is one of my favourites and I have a lot of scenes for them in mind that I can't wait to put in the story.
In the LI info it probably would have just been easier to just use they/them pronouns since they could be male or female 💀 and would just be faster than typing "she/he" or "his/her" just unnecessary struggle
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what is the difference between paid and the demo? i finished act 1 and thought it would end at an earlier chapter, but i was able to play anyways. loved the game btw!!
The difference is that I'm stupid lmao! It seems I got confused with the files and uploaded the full version instead of the demo. Now it's all how it's supposed to be (I hope lol). The difference for you would be that the paid version lets you save your choices to later import them to Act 2.
Thanks for letting me know! I'm glad to know you enjoyed the... 'extended' demo xD
Bought the game after enjoying the demo... excited to try the full version!
Thank you so much for the huge support! Happy reading <3
I love your game so much but unfortunately I can't buy it here. Does it come to Steam too?
PS: bought it over Patreon <3
Thank you so much dor buying it! <3 That is the reason I added the option to buy it through Patreon too. I'd love to release it on Steam, but right now I can't afford to pay the fee, so hopefully in the future! :D
anytime, thank you again for the link in your Patreon and I'm happy I did buy it :D
It's two in the morning here and I finally finished it! Been reading literally since this morning (or last morning?) and all I could say is, PLEASE CONTINUE IT I CANT LIVE WITHOUT THEM ANYMORE ;(((
To be completely honest I was a bit skeptical because the cover was quite... random? no offense of course, it was just a perspective of someone who hasn't read the story yet, but when I clicked on the page, I was freaking surprised to find a whole character design for the RO??? All of them too??? Like WOW and I tell myself I'm playing this JUST to test it out whether it's good or not....
But look at me now, almost twenty hours later, typing this review even though I'm dying to have some sleep already.
I really couldn't wait for another update, I'm fr will wait forever for you to update, this is going into one of my most favorite IF's EVER and you'll be one of my fav creators too fr fr! I really enjoyed the game, like really, really, really enjoyed it, so thank you for making such a masterpiece! I literally cried at many scene, like the last game they had or when I saw the option to approach the uncle-nephew pair at the party crossed out, like I cried so bad, I could save them if only I choose different option ;(
I'm playing Omar's route today so I'll play another route and switch up some options so that I get a different path, but that's for when I wake up later, I'm so excited! :> Though, can I ask if there's another intimate encounter like the one with Omar in another RO's path just this far? Or is it only available in Omar's route?
Anyway, I hope wherever you are, you'd always be safe and happy, please keep up the good work, I love em so much! ;)))
Omg, thank you so, so much for this wonderful message!! <3. I am beyond happy to hear that you gave this story a chance, and even more to know that you ended up liking it! Really, I have no words to express my gratitude :’D.
To answer your question, only Ada/Omar has an intimate scene for now. The others, with the exception of Leire/Luca and the mysterious figure, will have their own spicy scenes in the future ;). And as for the cover, no offense taken! To be honest, I usually prefer simple designs, and this one is a bit too flashy for my usual tastes, but it was the only one that convinced me from all the options I came up with, and I’ve grown fond of it with time xD.
I hope you have fun and enjoy the next route you choose, hopefully with less tears! From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much again for the message and for putting a big smile on my face today! <3
Lolol im just saying (only on chp2/3(one of those i forget)) but with how much they seem to be dismissing my MCs honesty about thwir dreams, lol, i have a feeling there will be consequences for this lolol.
Lmao! Yeah, from MC's point of view, something clearly doesn't add up! But in Rayco/Gara and Albert/Lavina's defense, the dream visitor is not what they seem ;).
*Spoiler*
I have concerns about Omar route, what happened with the Omar route? I am actively pursuing him and choosing every scene with him. My MC relationship status with him is "care," but somehow when my MC chooses the option "I want more than just fun with you, Omar," he rejects us and questions, "Since when?" I was confused about that because my MC is so obvious with her interest in him, but he disregards it easily. I know he has a lot of issues, especially with his past, but still, it hurts. So I just want to clarify: is there any romance route with him or only fling/fwb? If he is only interested in a physical relationship, I will restart to move on to another love interest who wants both.
Don't worry, he is a full RO and you're on the right path. Every RO has its own dynamic, and Ada/Omar's is fwb to lovers. Right now, Ada/Omar doesn't feel anything romantic for the MC, they are just physically attracted to them, and what you choose in chapter 9 determines how they'll behave towards the MC from that point on (whether they keep flirting or try to keep their distance sentimentally speaking to not hurt the MC further), but I assure you that there will come a point where those feelings will inevitably change, and Ada/Omar never shy away from expressing themselves openly. When they start to fall for the MC, they'll say so without a problem.
Is it the same case with Rayco? I'm having a bit of trouble increasing his as well
The dynamic, you mean? With Rayco/Gara is very different, something like forbidden love. In chapter 9 they talk about it.
So no intimate scenes? Just making sure i didnt !miss n e scenes
Not yet, but they'll come with time. Don't worry, you won't miss a single scene of the romance route!
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Thanks for reporting it! These errors have already been fixed. Have a great day! <3
Thank you so much for spotting this and letting me know! It has already been fixed ^^ I hope you keep enjoying this game, have a great day! <3
Woohoo awesome! You have a great day as well.
Love you, love you, love you!
May all stars and Gods smile upon you, this story shall be blessed with divine might!
I absolutely adore the writing, the characters, the scenes, the careful way every sentence and scene flows with the music and the choices feel so natural.
So many emotions, so much happiness and angst in one sitting.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!! What a great way to start my morning with this lovely message ^^. I am beyond happy to know you're enjoying this story, and also honoured to be receiving these wonderful words! Your support means a lot to me, and I hope the joy this project brings continues throughout the rest of the series.
Thank you very, very much for the comment, I'm very grateful for it ^^. Wishing you a fantastic day ahead, and sending much love your way, kind stranger :D!
Ahhh, I just finished reading chapter 8 and I just can't!! BE SILENT!! It's very interesting and so dramatic!! Q___Q
And all the ROs are just aaaah, everyone is simply unique and interesting in their own way! However, I decided to give my heart to Luca!! :D
(although I will definitely read all the other routs later too)Thank you so much for your work, I will look forward to continuing! And I also have a question: will this IF be released in Steam? I would love to buy it there!! Q___Q
Thanks again!!
O mg, thank you so, so much for this wonderful message!! I am beyond happy to know you’re enjoying the story! You’ve chosen a good RO, indeed. Leire/Luca’s dynamic is one of my favourites and I can’t wait to show more of them in Act 2, and especially in Act 3, hehe :D.
To answer your question, for now I’m thinking on just using this page, since once you pay (or donate, actually) the amount that’s asked, you’ll have access to download the game in any format and it will be linked to your account. So, for example, you play on PC but for some reason you want to change to mobile for another route. Here, you wouldn’t need to pay for the game again, and I think that’s a pretty good advantage. But in the future? Yes, of course I’d love to release it on Steam and Play Store and Apple Store! These last two I’m not worried about because I have seen that the Monaca platform works pretty well to convert Twine games into mobile apps (and it's something I'll have to do anyway to release it here), but Steam seems a bit more complicated. I don’t know if Monaca would work to convert a HTML file into something that Steam would allow to be released on their platform, and if not, I don’t know of any other tool.
TL;DR, this game will be available for purchase here on itch.io. Maybe on Steam, Apple Store, and Play Store in the future, but it’s not my priority for now unless I discover a tool to make it work on Steam.
Thank you once again for the comment! I hope you have a fantastic day :D
Oh, I hope you will be able to fulfill your plans for a release on different platforms! q_q
In my country, there is no way to pay on this site now, so I buy all the IF (including many of them on Twine and Choice of Games) in Steam, so I hope that in the future you will be able to do it, anyway, good luck with the work again!! UwU
Thanks, I hope so too! And wow, that's a shame, I didn't know it was restricted in some countries :S. I have seen Twine games that have been released on Steam, so if I manage to find a good tutorial it shouldn't be that complicated... I hope, haha! Fingers crossed!
Chapter 8 in one word was outstanding. I just loved the progression and I honestly I am obsessed with all of the characters 💞💞
Thank you so, so much!! :') It was a challenging one to write, so I'm very happy to know you like it! Thanks for the comment! <3
oml the art of rayco and gara are just...
Hopefully that's the good kind of speechless haha!
it is😫
Are there love triangles or polyamory or jealousy?
The ROs are all monogamous, so no polyamory there.
There will be some scenes of jealousy in the future that I have planned, both coming from the MC or the ROs depending on the route you're reading. But it will be a very minor thing and will not change the dynamic nor the romance.
And about the love triangle routes, I did think about doing at least one (more specifically Leire/Luca with Rayco/Gara) but I quickly discarded the idea because of how much work it would take. I'd have to create a whole new route just for that, add even more variations, choose scenes between them and how the other feels about it, the different endings, etc. It's just too much for my first game. There's already enough drama in the story and in each route to add even more lol. I rather focus on each of them individually and let the players experience the romances to the fullest without a third person in the mix.
Wonderful game! i usually dont comment but i just had to.. When the mc is in the blue coyote underground place and gets to choose a person to chat with, i chose luca. and then we get to pick our preferred animal. ofc i choose cat. and then our reasoning for choosing a cat is that THEYRE EASY.? REQUIRE LESS ATTENTION. gorl i am crying like no no no those are all the worst reasons to pick a cat. it just threw me off because it seems like sort of an apathetic reason. no hate or anything especially towards a piece of work that obviously took so much time and love it just sent me into a mini coma of sadness ;; (srsly tho i love luca) .... (and cats....)
Hahahaha no worries! I gotta be honest, I really, really don't like cats >.<. Not that I hate them or anything like that, but I'm very afraid of them, something that makes people who know me laugh because I have one (or more like my brother has and I'm just stuck with them lol). For that scene I asked people who do love cats and those were the responses I got so... yeah xD
I love this story... As I use a screen translator I have to interpret some things, but I still love it a lot... Thank you so much for taking me out of my boredom💕💕💕.
And if you see any errors here... Well, it's because my English is very basic😅.Thank you so much for this lovely comment! It truly makes me very happy to know you love this story, and I hope you continue to enjoy it :D!
is the </div> thingy a bug?
It is indeed a bug. Thank you for spotting it! It'll be fixed in the next update :)
I am in love with your work !! It's really incredible, your writing is beautiful and made me experience all the emotions. I eagerly await for the next chapters !! ;)
(sorry if i don't express myself well, i don't speak English very well)
Thank you so much! It makes me happy to know I managed to get all those emotions across through my writing :D
OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!! I'm so glad I was able to find this IF!
Thank you so much! It means the world to me :D I hope you continue to enjoy it <3
could you possibly see if you can add some options to turn down the background music? or mute them in general? i often have a video playing in the background but there's no options to do so sadly enough!
Of course! This is something I've wanted to add for a while but I never get it to work properly. I'll see if I can add it for the next update!
Why are some of the options crossed out? Like, the one I want to do isn't available
That's because you either don't meet the requirements or you've already picked the option. For example, there's an option in chapter one in the tavern keeper or the doctor's route that, depending on if the MC believes or not in the gods, you can or cannot choose.
I would have loved a back option- because how much I loved to not mess my choices ! ;-;
Hahaha! I decided to delete that feature because I think it takes away part of the charm of playing interactive novels, but I understand the struggle :') That's why I always save before making any choices in these types of games xD
That's what I was doing but I did a mistake and erased my save ! ;-;
Oh, no! D: That's very unfortunate. It has happened to me too quite a few times and it's such a frustrating moment :(
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!!! Honestly best by far, personally love Luca
Aww, I'm very happy to hear that! :D I'm glad you love Luca! Leire/Luca's romance dynamic is one of my favourites and I have a lot of scenes for them in mind that I can't wait to put in the story.
Thank you so much for the comment! <3
In the LI info it probably would have just been easier to just use they/them pronouns since they could be male or female 💀 and would just be faster than typing "she/he" or "his/her" just unnecessary struggle
Yeah, you're probably right haha! But I don't mind, it doesn't bother me to type it like that so it's fine :D