Sure. Your story seems somewhat incomplete and confusing. To improve, consider expanding the narrative, focusing on the narrative, plot and backstory. For examp - With each pizza slice eaten, paranormal activities unfold, leading to a quest to find all scattered slices to avoid being eaten by a pizza monster. The environment evolves with every found slice, becoming surreal and populated with paranormal phenomena. If all slices are consumed, the protagonist wakes as if from a dream, with an empty pizza box as a haunting reminder of the ordeal.Enhance the game by improving the visuals and audio, altering the protagonist's apartment, and introducing minor conflicts and obstacles. This will intensify the game, making it more engaging and thrilling, with a clear plotline and purpose.
This is just an example. The game will be the same but much more intense, it will have a purpose and a meaning with a plot. Such a game will be much more interesting to play and the gameplay will be exciting. I hope this helped, and I wish you success in your work :)
yo i found a glitch,if you take the last item you need to take,then open the door and walk backwards to the table(you need to walk backwards instead of turning around because if you turn around the door will auto close) and place the last item,the door will be open,if you go outside the game will jumpscare after a copule of seconds but the game wont stop after the jumpscare,and you can see the red guy endlessy walking,btw the red man walking endlessy isnt consestient to happen
This scared me so bad LOL it got me right when I wasn't expecting it to, which is the No. 1 thing I look for in good horror games. Thanks for the fun experience!
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THIS WAS REALLY GOOD
thats what you get for ordering pinapple pizza
I LIKE RAMEN BETTER
The setting and models are great, but the storytelling and narrative design needs work
Hey thanks for the comment. Do you think you could further explain what you did not like about the storytelling and narrative design?
Sure. Your story seems somewhat incomplete and confusing. To improve, consider expanding the narrative, focusing on the narrative, plot and backstory. For examp - With each pizza slice eaten, paranormal activities unfold, leading to a quest to find all scattered slices to avoid being eaten by a pizza monster. The environment evolves with every found slice, becoming surreal and populated with paranormal phenomena. If all slices are consumed, the protagonist wakes as if from a dream, with an empty pizza box as a haunting reminder of the ordeal.Enhance the game by improving the visuals and audio, altering the protagonist's apartment, and introducing minor conflicts and obstacles. This will intensify the game, making it more engaging and thrilling, with a clear plotline and purpose.
This is just an example. The game will be the same but much more intense, it will have a purpose and a meaning with a plot. Such a game will be much more interesting to play and the gameplay will be exciting. I hope this helped, and I wish you success in your work :)
Creepy red guy was stalking me the whole time😭
very good really, you made a good job!!!
Great game, hade so much fun playing it, cant wait for more!:)
COME CHECK OUT MY GAMEPLAY IF U WANT
Dude how do i know how to get the tape ? and it was shorter than i expected , has potential.
Hey what do you mean? The Player says it in the dialogue and the objective also tells you to get a movie!
my friend,
told me that i just need to have snacks after i placed the three it stayed the same objective
yo i found a glitch,if you take the last item you need to take,then open the door and walk backwards to the table(you need to walk backwards instead of turning around because if you turn around the door will auto close) and place the last item,the door will be open,if you go outside the game will jumpscare after a copule of seconds but the game wont stop after the jumpscare,and you can see the red guy endlessy walking,btw the red man walking endlessy isnt consestient to happen
Thank you for reporting! Will be fixed in the next update!
Pineapple pizza, horrifying.
I just got done playing it and my throat hurts so bad from screaming at the end...
Better Call Butt
I love the game! Pizza Butt better look out for my one star review though.
Man, this game is awesome. I love the PSX style, I'd probably learn how to make games to do this style lol.
Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
Loved It!
Cool game!
Thank you!
laugh a lot
love it
love the game！
Scariest part was the fact we ordered 3 pineapple pizzas lol. Wasn't expecting that ending, thank you for making this!
bro I should have never answered the door, nice little scare
nice game!
scawwy :(
ye
Never order Pineapple pizza lmao
Aside from NEVER ordering from there again... Where is my pizza? :P
Très court mais j'ai bien aimé j'avoue !
Please add "vsync - on" setting, i don't need 300+fps that use a lot of my gpu usage for this kind of game, cheers
Was That the Devil?
like it
un compa se cago de miedo xddddddd
pica windolws not like sori
Nice game. I enjoyed it.
That's why you never order this pizza.
I loved the style and fun, please do more!
Definitely a fun game. The atmosphere was on point and the jumpscare got me good!!! I loved it!! It's the first game on my Two Scary Games video.
This scared me so bad LOL it got me right when I wasn't expecting it to, which is the No. 1 thing I look for in good horror games. Thanks for the fun experience!
I play your game at 01:10:40 in this video:
Played this game along with two others and loved how short and creepy it was lol, play it for yourself if you want a quick scare!