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This was a beautiful game! I saved the world on my 24th loop, but went back because Esteban and got the ending I wanted on the 25th! I managed to save Suzette as well, and the ending genuinely made me close to tears. Thank you so much for making this amazing game!

The thing I struggled with the most was working out how to find the gem - I knew that was the one piece I was missing, and I knew a few of the choices I would need to make, but it took me a while to do so. I almost thought it would be impossible to get the ending I wanted and use the gem, so I'm glad that it was :)

The other thing I like is the protagonist's determination, but also the fact that they can just give up in some loops. It really helps to add some realism to the character's actions. 

Overall, I simply adored this! Again, thank you so much for this masterpiece.

OOOOOOOUGH.

it was such a beautiful game..... I honestly didn't expect it to be so expansive. there's still so much I haven't seen. I decided to

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marry Suzette, and vanquish the monster after our wedding. this was so good and ill def replay.

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I cried at this game. Multiple times. And I'm really not the type to cry easily actually- It's such an amazing game. The lore is so interesting, currently at my 30th lifetime, I keep discovering new informations and improving my comprehension of the characters. I cried so many times because of Esteban and his doomed fate, whatever I did he kept dying, protecting the city because it appears as his only future and destiny to him and the brief sentence describing his last fight always makes me cry. That and the little paint we do on his grave. Or the fact that Suzette is locking eyes with us before turning to dust. All of their lore.

And I may be a tiny bit desperate because I love all of the babies so, so much and seeing them encountering the same fate over and over again is really slightly killing me. And also because I don't know yet how to get that little piece of information that I need to save everyone for the first time

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The true ending is intentionally allowing the war to take place just so you can have a pillow fight with Myka.

Jokes aside, I loved this story. It's so interesting going back and replaying the first loop and realizing how tired Jo is and how much work they did behind the scenes with saving Suzette and warning the generals. It's also kinda ominous if you take the History path on the first loop and Jo isn't there. You really feel their absence. It makes you think that at some point Jo had to have blown up the damn to find the ancient word (unless they found some other way). I really wish I could go back to that original Jo and tell them about the the corrupted land. Or at the very least be able to heal the corrupted land with new Jo. Getting Jo to remember would've been the most cathartic ending in my opinion. But at the same time Jo did choose to stay in the life that they did so it would be unfair to pull them out of that.

Although I think it could work if you found a way to back to the original loop. Like if there was an ending where you brought Mr Pent to the tower and he let you reset the stone to its original state with both your memories and Jo's memories in tact. I would just love to see Jo makes snide remarks about how "Shocking" my choice is until it sinks in that I actually remember and then we both solve all the problems together.

I think the highlight of the entire story for me was blowing up the dam with Myka and seeing her reaction to the witch monster.

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Ok, I may need help because I'm stuck trying to find the word for protect while on Esteban’s route. But somehow I end up saving Suzette and stopping the war with Jo but after that I'm lost

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I found this game between my bookmarks. I remember playing it for half an hour two years ago but then I must've lost the tab or simply forgot (my mind wanders quickly)

After eight loops I finally managed to stop the comet and lead the people together with Esteban. He's the best <3

I'll be playing around some more to see what else I can achieve

I've spent like 2 hours playing and I just finally got the good ending with Jo and Suzette and I'm so happy????

played ~30 times and got all of the gethame endings and the jo endings.... i love to save the world and all my friends....

i don't know how to block spoilers so please do not read the rest of the comments if you don't want to be spoiled SPOILERS HERE

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I'M SO HAPPY WITH THE ENDING I GOT !!! i burned the papers so suzette could never become the monster, i banquished Veris so the land would stop being poisoned, I ran away with Esteban to the South to recover the land, the war never happened, and i got the phoenix gem so I could save the world. thank you SO SO MUCH for writing this AMAZING story! I've played this game a few times but I never got to finish it because the game was crashing/my computer wasn't saving the files. But today I finally sat down and finished it, and it was definitely worth the wait. I played a new major/a new initial friend for each round, so I ended up saving the world after 6 loops, but I kept playing afterwards because I wanted to save Suzette. Then, when I saved her, Gemma mentioned that she thought that the south was being poisoned because of us, so I wanted to stop the war. Then I got the option to run for the hills, and then I kept looping because i wanted to meet everyone there. Then, I got the option to continue south, and after I met Moretti and confirmed that the land was poisoned, I got the option to go with Esteban and do some illegal shenanigans to save the land, and save the world! This is a FANTASTIC story, you are a FANTASTIC writer, and thank you so much for everything!

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Awesome. Saved everyone and got the myka ending :)

Good stuff! I've gotten the Suzette and Myka endings, as well as the cake-fryer and smith non-endings, but are there also a Gemma and Moretti endings? And, if so, how?

It took me 30 times but i got it and loved it

I am a minor questing page sent here by a princess.

This story is good! I can't believe I got sucked into it so much looking for the answer, going 32 loops for it.

The first few runs made me go "protecc Suzette" because she was my first waifu, which led to predictable consequences. I kept at it for what seemed like ages, but never could find an answer in the 1x runs.  Part of it also made me suffer Bernkastel-disease where I became numb to Suzette's plight after failing again and again.

When I started talking to other people, worlds opened up, but I was still missing the key piece to save the world. Bernkastel-disease got a lot more stronger in the 2x runs as I started dating even the guys, everyone, just to try and find the answer to saving Suzette, eventually bumping into the FRIENDSHIP route without the keyword. Then everything fell into place.

You know what? Even though I didn't end up on an ending with Suzette (I'm pretty sure the story allows you to fix her), the ending still warms my heart. It's an ending that I chose and worked hard for. Thank you for writing an awesome story!

I was also sent by a princess!

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Pick history and try bonding with Suzette before the ball. You should know what to do by then!

Afterwards, steal the gem and tell her the truth.

Took me eight loops to save the world. I kept playing because I felt that there was so much more in the world on offer, and there was. I had saved the world, but had I *seen* the world? The city of beginnings is only a small facet of a larger picture, and the enemy not as you would expect.

20 loops to finish the damn book, lol!

One thing though. If you do get to loop in the company of someone else, why not have them loop too? Seems like an exponential level of tracking, I suppose?

Got through the Myka end in eight loops. The worldbuilding is really neat and I quite enjoyed the mechanics.

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Wow, this was amazing! I definitely didn't expect this in the beginning.

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I got really frustrated around the 15th cycle, I was stuck. After a break I had an epiphany though, and got it done by the 18th!

After that I've been trying to find a way to both save Suzette and romance Myka. I guess it's just not possible.

The MC, Jo and Suzette trio is really cute, but if I have to choose it'll always be my beloved Myka.

So anyway, great game!  Definitely one of my favorites. I loved figuring out this puzzle. Thanks for making it available for free!

I actually was able to romance Myka and save Suzette, so it is possible!!
And even if I loved the the world version with Jo and Suzette, I'm very happy with my route with Myka as well!

This was amazing??? I've played it before, and this second playthrough holds up. I ended up accidentally romancing Myka on my last life, but it felt really correct even though I hadn't been doing it on purpose. I think my first time I went for Jo? I still want to go for Esteban and Suzette eventually, too (Gemma is great but has killed me like, a lot).

I'm curious, is there a MC/Jo/Suzette end? I noticed those characters can hang out as a trio an awful lot, but I've never managed to thread the needle on it.

This is a shockingly heartbreakingly good game. It’s so hard saving everyone and not causing any disasters in the process!

It’s positively wonderful, though I’ve not yet unlocked the puzzle of how to prevent the war and save everyone :-(

WTF I THOUGHT I HAD SOMETHING WITH ESTEBAN

Those sensitive artist types… 

yeahhh😫😫

This game is absolutely amazing but i'm really clueless on how to saved the world lol, but the game is really good! I'm down bad for esteban baby <3

He’s a good lad! 

this game made me cry. like badly lmfao. i believe i was on life 17 when i saved the world, but went back for 18th to get with esteban. suzette is happy, everyone is happy. i go out to visit everyone out of town, and seeing mc happy after how exhausted she was for so many lives make me so happy and just wow,

Ah, I’m so glad!!

I saved the world on my 6th life, but my mad gal went back again. She's gonna get her perfect ending.

She can do it! 

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I DID I DID IT I DID IT I DID IT

Just took me 28 lifes!!!!

My poor friends, my poor Estevan, my poor Jo, my dearest Micah.

I loved every single one of them in many ways

I felt my very own sanity going down with my MC mind, When i talked to the characters and they didn't knew me, was heartbreaking.

That's a wonderful game and you're one of my dearest authors, This made me taste billions of lifetimes at once, and gosh I loved it so much, i love it, i love it, i love it, even if it got into down sometimes


The options where MC just accepts death or spend it with a loved one wrenched me good, The fact that we help Esteban paint again is amazing, truly, though i regret i couldn't stay with him in the time i got to "stay" i was too afraid to go back again

28, very nice!!! Thank you for investing so much into living those lives with the protagonist. 

Took me 20 but made it eventually! Absolutely wonderful game and now I'm hooked on checking all of the possible endings. Thank you author! :)

Thank you! 20 is a great run 

It took me 13 lives to stay! I was so connected to the character I wanted to figure it all out with as little do-overs as possible huhu. It tugged at my heart when I read new additions pertaining to the exhaustion of having lived so much. I’m so happy with the epilogue. The character deserves the slow, easy, quiet life for sure.

Thank you for the experience(s)!!

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I’m so glad it resonated with you!! The protagonist deserves so much peace by the end, yes!

IM CRYING im in my 25th run and i'm so close, I just dont know ow to get the word for protect for the comet T0T and I'm determined to be with Esteban, still an amazing game, I just want everyone to be alive and well LOL

omg omg nvm i did it!! I got to the 'stay' ending IM STILL CRYING this was written so well I love Esteban oml 

good job!!!!

I love to telling Myka "I love you", sometimes I explodin dam just for that line.

End with her at beach are already best ending, imho.

Ah, I love that ending! 

Holy shite it took me 32 lives to reach the end (mainly cause i was taking my time and doing multiple runs that were all basicly the same..) but.. wow that was absolutely fantastic and i absolutely love the option to say "im sorry" at runs that were really close 8/10 game (cause it can get a bit repetitive with it being a time loop and all)

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I FUCKING DID IT WOOO!!!!!!!!! SLAY 

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S L A Y !

This game is amazing T>T Can anyone tell me how to go with Myka to the lake though? I'm trying to find the word for the gem and I've already rerun so many lives already :'>

If you learn archaic from Mister Pent and then go to the lake, that should do it (let me know if not because that’s a bug!). To get Myka to go to the lake with you, I believe you need to hang with her at the lab instead of going to the ball— you can suggest it then I think, if you tell her about the time loops. But to be honest it’s been years since I wrote this! 

when i hang out with her at the lab and tell her about the time loops, the option to take her to the lake never comes up D:

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If I’m remembering the intended design right, that sounds like a bug! I’ll see if I can fix that up sometime!

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