Posted April 11, 2025 by The Naughty Captain
I have spent the whole week working on the script for scene 32. I wrote a lot. Way too much. I wrote about 6500 words this week and it is way over what I aimed for this scene. The scene is now almost 10k words long, which is 4k words too many. I'll have to trim it down somehow. I always have trouble editing down my stuff as I'm reticent to cut content out. However, this isn't the first time I have to go down that road. I considered keeping it whole but that wouldn't be wise. I think it's better to remove some content and postpone it to a later scene. As said, I want to aim for 6kish words. Which would require about 200 shots to illustrate it properly.
So 40% of the scene has to go. That's a lot. Most of the scene is in between draft 1 and draft 2 state, which means I also still have some refinement and some rewriting to do. I do think, however, that I can get it done in a couple of days worth of work. With a bit of luck, I can get to cutting the scene by Wednesday and start posing by Thursday.
I also have some work to do on Scene 31, like post-processing and some more coding. I'll see what I do first once I'm fully done with the writing.
So... A lot of work ahead, but we are making some good progress.
The quick sum up :
You can follow my progress on this Trello board.
Thank you for your support!
The Naughty Captain