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War is coming
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux

https://itch.io/blog/909271/where-do-i-even-start-from

Back to War is coming, there actually isn't much to say, I'm just not too happy about some dialogues, especially in the first part of the game. The humor will be changed slightly and a lot of dialogues shortened since unneccesary. But my biggest issue was actually writing-wise. Whereas it would make sense for Amphion, Eirik, Ingrid and Eleri to go through personality changes, mood swings and inconsistencies, given they are teenagers, it does not make sense for adults like Cressida, who at the beginning shows her hostility towards Amphion because of his nature, then proceeds not to do the same with Eleri. That whole sequence needed a rewording, even Amphion's speech was too high and mighty for his personality and didn't even make too much sense in a real context. So yeah, Amphion will be even sassier, Haydan will still love women, but more like a 45 year old man rather than a child and Eirik... he becomes smarter each update, he's studied electrotechnics now.

I'm also planning to release an official trailer given the product is finished, it kinda deserves it.

Files

  • War is coming WINDOWS.rar 397 MB
    Mar 19, 2024
  • War is coming MAC OS X.rar 494 MB
    Mar 19, 2024
  • War is coming LINUX.rar 423 MB
    Mar 19, 2024
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