Act II

woooooah act 2 is doooone!

10 new chapters, ~20,000 more words! as such the base price has been increased to $4.

new act starts at "Take It Off (Corey Enemy Club Mix"

act 1 has also gone through a pretty significant edit. mostly this is just punctuation, punching up the language and sentence structure, making sure the blocking of some scenes makes sense, that sort of thing. if you don't want to re-read it, the important changes are:

• Chapters now include the date so that it's easier to tell how much time has gone by
• mentions of Mike's ex girlfriend have been updated to include her name
• ms kidnapper no longer counts Mike's strikes. Instead she says "Mine". The description of performing the strikes has been updated to include her chanting something while she does it.
• a paragraph has been added to the beginning of 9 - Blow

act 2 includes portions of colored text. the colored text isn't required to understand what's happening, but it does enhance things. in the epub version, since not all e-readers will support colored text, colored text is also bolded.