Revisiting the Crypt

I am currently preparing to table at CAKE, Chicago Alturnative Comic Expo, in August and decided to give this adventure a bit of a sprucing up. I want to have a bunch of adventure pamphlets to sell at my table so not only did I need to reformat CoA but I had to edit and add more content to it. As a 1-page adventure, I think it did its job, but as a physical pamphlet I wanted it to be more robust. Having both sides of the page to work with allowed me to explore the lore behind the crypt more thoroughly and even let me add some info about the land around it. I think the Green Priests make more sense now and the main conflict is clearer and more compelling. I left the older version available so if you want to see the difference between the two you can. I'd love to hear from those who bought the first version what you think of it and the updated one.