Posted April 12, 2024 by Demetos
I "tweaked" the end.
You can now chose which end you prefer.
a) break up
b) separation
c) staying together
I guess I am done now with the "story".
I might add/change some paths in the story... but nothing big.
I hope to find the time to add some more images.
For some scenes - probably not all - I would like to add other viewpoints... chapters 20 - 100 are nearly all from the POV of the boy.
I want to add some other perspectives.
So... it is not FINNISHED... but there main story "behind" the diary is...
The TWINE project now had about 320kB.
It is nearly all "story" there are no comments, or generated content.
I used very few macros for coloring... I guess the pure story-text would be around 300kB.
Every time... I read a part I discover spelling mistakes... it is magic.
I tried so much to improve and run spell checkers... it is so hard to find them all - espcially if you have written the text yourself... you are so blind sided... sorry for that...