Posted October 11, 2023 by Staghorn
Those of you who have looked through the PDF may have noticed that some of the editing has been... well, the kindest word I have for it is "absent". This has been a big reason why the update has taken so long - seeing all the errors you've left in your paid product is an excellent way to kill your motivation to work on it further. After taking a break and reassessing it, I've recently found the motivation to do some proper copy editing along with the know-how needed to do it right. While this version may still require a tweak or two, it's finally of a quality that I'm happy with. Expect better writing, far fewer typos and grammatical errors, and an important new element - PDF bookmarks!
The next step of the process is making it fit for DriveThruRPG - that is to say, making it fit to print. Expect a few more updates for the book and its supplements to accompany it. Even if there aren't any mental health-related delays, you can still expect it to be a bit longer before you'll be able to get your hands on a physical copy.
Anyway, I'd recommend anyone who's purchased the game to download this version of the book and delete the last one - seriously, it's better in every way.