FIRST DRAFT PREVIEW: it's happening!

Hello! At this point, probably everyone who sees this is going to be someone I specifically linked it to; the first draft is UP and ready for beta-reading. I'd love to get your feedback on the following:

• Is there anything that should be clarified more?
• Does the character creation process feel fun?
• What themes do you feel like come through?
• Did I do something stupid like make a typo or forget to finish a sentence? (I know about the appendix,,,)
• Does anything feel like it doesn't fit/is disjointed with the rest?

If you have comments, you can contact me via how I got in touch with you in the first place or leave comments here! Either's fine.