Lightly Revised Edition

After looking over UPbtAGG[AE] in a bit of preening "hey look at what I did in a week", I found some things that I couldn't excuse even as I promised that I wasn't going to go for perfection with the project.

So, after some soul-searching about whether or not it was in keeping with the spirit of the project to fix anything at all, I finally opted to do some fixes.  I hope the goblins of "low self-confidence" are having themselves a good laugh at my caving in on that.

• Fixed some unfinished sentences
• Fixed some awkward sentences
• Fixed some Moves that made no sense in the context of other Moves developed later in the process