Perilous 2.0!

It's been eight months since I wrote Perilous, and needless to say, my writing has improved significantly since then. I figured the time had come to give Perilous an update... an update that is now complete!

Here's what's new:

• Updated prose for crisper feel
• Lengthened fight sequence - Ben is a much scarier foe now
• Reworked victory sequence subtly - should be more satisfying?

Let me know what you think, and if you want to see more short stories from this universe. Cheers!