Posted September 05, 2025 by The Naughty Captain
I apologize for the lack of updates in the last few weeks. I was unable to access Itch and couldn't post my updates outside of Subscribe Star.
I still can't walk properly, but I got enough mobility back to ditch the wheelchair, climb up those stairs, and return to my desk. Which means I can work pretty much normally again, and that is a relief.
I started the week by reviewing the things I wrote during the past two weeks.
I still think that scene 34 is good. It's 5600 words long, and it says everything I wanted.
Scene 35, however, is far from okay. Probably because I was quite feverish while I worked on it, most of the script is bad. I don't know why I spent so much time writing and rewriting some parts of it. I can't see what I was aiming for anymore, and the script was simply going nowhere. So I trashed everything and restarted from scratch. It's not yet complete, but it's already much better. I wrote about 3200 words, and I think I'm mostly halfway done with it. I think that one of the main issues of the first versions of the script was that I was going for a sad Kelly scene. And we already had many of these. I originally planned for her to get happier and healthier during day 7, but maybe she can already start her transformation. That's what I'm going for, and I think it feels far better than my original plan. She's not her happy self yet, but at least she has stopped crying. She is ready to move forward.
Next week, I hope to finish writing scene 35, and then go back to cutting scene 34 and start posing it. I should have all the necessary assets ready, and all the sets have already been worked on.
The quick sum up :
You can follow my progress on this Trello board.
https://store.steampowered.com/app/2994790/Summer_Scent/
Thank you for your support!
The Naughty Captain