Getting close. Need to subtract. Planning to begin line edit on the 25th or 26th

Spent today making edits as per comments from discord members. Very appreciative of all the help! Things are really taking shape now, I feel like a beginner handler would be able to use this. Looking at subtractive edits and making crucial details clearer. Everyone has been a big help! I'm going out for the evening and I might look at this later or I might just take the night for my brain.