HIHI i was wondering if i can have permission to fandub this on my channel??? the writing of this game is awesome. the dialogue is nice and natural and miss' spiel at the end went HAAAARD i would obviously leave credits to u and ur team in the desc, and i can post the fandub in the comments here if u'd like !! my channel is @AjisaiVA on youtube ~
OMG YESSS of course!!! we would love that so much omg :')) it means the world to me that you like the dialogue π </3 keep us updated when you publish it!!
I'm stuck on the second crime scene, with 1 missing detail in the hotel room. I can't find anythingggggggg... The spot on the mirror looks suspicious, but I can't click it. Suggestiosn?
Try clicking around on the floor, if you haven't already found the stain by the coffee maker?
Edit: There's also the phone off the hook, a broken handle on a drawer, and a tilted lampshade, which are other slightly inconspicuous things, hope that helps haha
the character art & design in this is seriously so adorable... very interesting premise id really love to see it expanded on further someday ^_^ miss apologists rise up
uh no sorry im kinda bad at explaining stuff i mean like the very last room of the game where ellie gets explained what miss has been doingthe song in this room
i mean the song after this one thats for the scene right before i mean the song that plays when you have the choice to join miss at the end of the game sorry for making this so confusing i probably should have started with that and this would have made it much more clear of what scene i meant sorry again
Yeah, really gives me Aru (blue archive) vibes. Cool game, would be awesome if you could draw this out bit longer with more plot choices but its already pretty darn fun.
Its surprisingly well thought and constructed for a game made in such a short amount of time. I cant imagine myself making a game like this even in a month's time.
Awh that's so sweet! Part of the story was inspired from a plot idea Nii had long ago, but I think the pressure of the short time frame made us able to do a lot more haha
I think the game is perfect, taking in consideration how it was made in 72 hours. But if you ask for my opinion, i think i would've liked the game to be a little bit longer! (β β ββ βΏβ ββ β )
I was expecting to see more creepy stuff before we got to the big thing (Miss being a killer)!
I love how it was cute at first but it gets dark later.
(Spoiler]?)
when Miss Mentioned about society being corrupt its possible that there will still be lots of people still like miss To be honest. the idea of cleaning up crimes are kinda werid but still i love this game :>
Ahem excuse me while I think of a ship name..Ellis.
Anyway, this artstyle is pure eye candy and I really love it.
The storyline is amazing.
I just now realized that the 'What the melon' was a play on the MelonJam and I am sobbing at it because it sounded like when Gumball from TAWOG says 'What the what'
I love it when a game makes you think about morality, about how some morality might not be the best choice out of all of them! I have a lot more I want to say but it's like 1 am and my brain is shutting down. I hope to see more games like this!
YESS that's what i was going for !! i hope you slept well and i'm also hoping to put out similar games :)) i'm working on a more heartfelt game and a similar horror-ish game at the same time :D
mmh~!! I love this game so much with all of my heart, the art style and characters and everything is so adorable, literally made an account just to say how much I love this. please keep this up, I do not regret the money I spent on this and will definitely be following for any future projects <33
OH MY GOSH AAAHHHH that is so so kind of you !!!! your donation is 15% of our net worth HAHA this was like the best thing to happen to us in so long :') perhaps we'll make some sort of follow-up to the game because of this ahaskldghsa
I just loved playing this game! The build up to the final scene and the character depth mixed with the cute illustrations and games was amazing. Loved the twist!
AHH THANK YOU!! We really wanted the characters to have depth like you said (and the art too! The cover is actually Miss's hand on Ellie's cheek ;D), so I'm really glad you thought that!
I love the staggered shadows across the sprites in the big reveal scene. Very Very dramatic and cool. The story is fun too! A good amount of build-up the first two locations. Cleaning the rooms is relaxing despite everything
I love this game. It made me sad to learn about the room with the drawings. I wasn't expecting the end I thought it just would be a dead body but it was a lot more. The art style is so cute too. I really enjoyed this game and I plan to play more of your games! <3
AWWW that's so sweet of you!!! welcome to the itch community LOLLfeel free to rate this game or follow any of us, it would mean a lot (and your comment made our day!) :DD
i am in literal tears. you made one of the best horror games I've ever played and brought actual things that need to be known to light. as a little girl, some things were done to me that shouldn't have been done. and this gives me a small bit of comfort that others recognize that these things that are mentioned are serious things.
Ohh my gosh, your comment means the world to us :')
Since the very beginning, we wanted to make a game that would highlight things about the world that needed to be given attention. I hope you're doing better now; no one should have to go through things like those mentioned in the game, they're definitely serious topics (I was concerned I didn't handle them with enough care). But I'm happy you're with us now <3
and when the main character said it looked like her childhood bedroom in the second job i was REALLY suspicious that miss was going to end up being like, her older sister or her mom and taken revenge on the people who took her or something and the main character forgot her past. It couldve been a way that the story was taken but i love the way the story was.
LOL omg i wrote that line & i didn't even realize!! Initially, it was supposed to be #fffdcf ("a pale banana yellow"), but then i changed it to a cross between red & red velvet (#c70a0a) because of little red riding hood! (Ellie was supposed to be a sort of rebirth of little red riding hood :D)
But overall, THANK YOU !! We're glad you enjoyed ππ
The art style in this game is adorable and just overall amazing, I also love the background art, especially in the end with the gore! The overall storyline of this is amazing and adds up. It gives off Gurokawaii vibes and I absolutely love it!
The only thing I suggest is a bit more of the cleaning mini-games or story line interactions so the player can interact more. Other than that this game is amazing and I highly suggest it!
AHH this is so sweet thank you !! i've forwarded your compliments to our artists :DDD
since this game was made for a 72 hour jam, we don't really plan on expanding it any further. but your feedback is still invaluable, and we're super glad you enjoyed!! π₯°π₯°
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Ahhh! Super fun! I loved the little cleanup parts, and the storyline rocks! You made this in 72 hours?! How?! Itβs absolutely amazing! Art!!!
THANK YOUU :DD!! To answer your question, we stayed up... haha.... I had the most atrocious sleep schedule ever TT
HIHI i was wondering if i can have permission to fandub this on my channel??? the writing of this game is awesome. the dialogue is nice and natural and miss' spiel at the end went HAAAARD i would obviously leave credits to u and ur team in the desc, and i can post the fandub in the comments here if u'd like !! my channel is @AjisaiVA on youtube ~
OMG YESSS of course!!! we would love that so much omg :')) it means the world to me that you like the dialogue π </3 keep us updated when you publish it!!
The art style and designs were absolutely amazing!
me and my friend voice acted this game today like it was some sorta vivsiepop show till we got to the srs part-
kinda fun ngl
AWWWW that's so cuute!!! when i wrote it i also imagined little voices HAHA
I'm stuck on the second crime scene, with 1 missing detail in the hotel room. I can't find anythingggggggg... The spot on the mirror looks suspicious, but I can't click it. Suggestiosn?
Try clicking around on the floor, if you haven't already found the stain by the coffee maker?
Edit: There's also the phone off the hook, a broken handle on a drawer, and a tilted lampshade, which are other slightly inconspicuous things, hope that helps haha
A Dona foi GIGANTE nesse jogo, pois eu ajudei ela com prazer depois de descobrir quem eram as vΓtimas dela
the art style makes my brain go weeeeeeee
the character art & design in this is seriously so adorable... very interesting premise id really love to see it expanded on further someday ^_^ miss apologists rise up
OMGG i literally LOVE the art style. And why is Miss kinda...
miss is SERIOUSLY kinda ...
Just played this in less then 5 hours. Im proud of myself >:3
Anddddd I became a murderer!
YAYY !!!
where would i find the song in the reveal room?
do you mean the minigames? if so i think that's https://youtu.be/BpKiOSVA6-g
uh no sorry im kinda bad at explaining stuff i mean like the very last room of the game where ellie gets explained what miss has been doing
the song in this room
ah! that's here:
i mean the song after this one thats for the scene right before i mean the song that plays when you have the choice to join miss at the end of the game sorry for making this so confusing i probably should have started with that
and this would have made it much more clear of what scene i meant sorry again
it's the same song! it's on loop haha
also the spider mansion soundtrack is so good, where can i listen to it? lol
IT ISS we have all the music linked somewhere i forgot where tho ^^'; spider mansion soundtrack is here though: https://youtu.be/mi0AsVfD3es
T H A N K β Y 0 U
NPP <3
i just realized i gave you the link to the cutscene music; the music during the dialogue/after the cutscene is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MnZytg9Om8s&ab_channel=DOVA-SYNDROMEYouTubeOfficial !!
72 hours!? DAMN. THAT IS SO FAST! I COULD NOT DO ANYTHING THAT QUICKLY Y'ALL ARE GODS
HELPP thank you so much !!! so glad you enjoyed :DDD
i got blinded when i opened this T-T awwa
!! OH NO WHY
my lighting was on all the way so it was bright
Miss is officially my favourite character i ever seen in a fictional setting. Massive Yandere energy
AYYYY we love miss !!!
Yeah, really gives me Aru (blue archive) vibes. Cool game, would be awesome if you could draw this out bit longer with more plot choices but its already pretty darn fun.
It was made in 72 hours so unfortunately we couldn't make it too long, but we hope to expand on it sometime in the future!!
Its surprisingly well thought and constructed for a game made in such a short amount of time. I cant imagine myself making a game like this even in a month's time.
Awh that's so sweet! Part of the story was inspired from a plot idea Nii had long ago, but I think the pressure of the short time frame made us able to do a lot more haha
This game is adorable, totally about a cute maid!!
Jokes aside, loved the plot twist, and the art too!~ ദΰ΅ΰ΄¦ΰ΄Ώ ΛΝΜκ³ΛΝΜ )β§ 8/10
awwa thank you !! is there anything we can do to make it better? :0
I think the game is perfect, taking in consideration how it was made in 72 hours. But if you ask for my opinion, i think i would've liked the game to be a little bit longer! (β β ββ βΏβ ββ β )
I was expecting to see more creepy stuff before we got to the big thing (Miss being a killer)!
awh i get that !! nii and i are thinking of making a minor follow-up so people can still clean the last scene if they want loll
hope that we see that soon sometime before october!! :D
I love how it was cute at first but it gets dark later.
(Spoiler]?)
when Miss Mentioned about society being corrupt its possible that there will still be lots of people still like miss To be honest. the idea of cleaning up crimes are kinda werid but still i love this game :>
ooo yes i didn't think of that :0
we thought the idea was pretty cool actually LOL idk tho it'd all be underground
I LOVED IT!! So cute :3 (I knew that there was a tiny darkish side) ;3 Best game, gonna recommend this to my cousin :3
AWW THANK U SM !!
This game is so wonderful!! I love the art so much too, it's adorable <3 (at least until the ending lol!)
hahah art at the ending is still adorable ofc !!
I know for a fact I got the "good" ending in my heart. How could I refuse my ladyboss boots the house down queen Miss.
Anyways really pleasing art style, nice plot!
Miss did nothing wrong
MISS IS SO QUEEN ENERGY FR !!! and thank you, we're happy you enjoyed !! :DD
i know this is a vn but i enjoyed the cleaning bits and wish there were more (the characters are so pretty omg girlfriends)
aww yeah maybe there could be more in a dlc ! glad to hear you enjoyed it :DD
(the characters are so so pretty !!! girlfriends FRR)
ending really surprised me, i didn't expect to have the choice of joining up at all!
REALLY i'm glad we included it then !! we were pretty concerned that the ending would be cliche so :')
Ahem excuse me while I think of a ship name..Ellis.
Anyway, this artstyle is pure eye candy and I really love it.
The storyline is amazing.
I just now realized that the 'What the melon' was a play on the MelonJam and I am sobbing at it because it sounded like when Gumball from TAWOG says 'What the what'
ANYWAY IM RAMBLING
GAME:10/10.
ARTSTYLE:1000/10.
STORYLINE:9.7/10.
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!11!!!111!!!!!1!!!OOH i didn't even think of a ship name!! ellis is cuute :00 and YEAHH NII IS AMAZING
i haven't watched tawog but "what the melon" can be anything you want it to be ! :D
ooo what made storyline lose those .3 points π
Oh, well the storyline isn't bad at all, the score I gave is based on purely personal preference since I don't usually play games like this<3
oooh ok!! THANK YOU for your feedback!!!
AHAHAHA SO REAL LOL
Investing at 1 bajillion downloads !!11!!1!
we've got 2 bajillion !!!!1! is that enoughg ??!!
can i say girlfriends?
HELL YEAH !!!! (lowk why we specified they were both adults/of similar ages HAHA)
I love it when a game makes you think about morality, about how some morality might not be the best choice out of all of them! I have a lot more I want to say but it's like 1 am and my brain is shutting down. I hope to see more games like this!
YESS that's what i was going for !! i hope you slept well and i'm also hoping to put out similar games :)) i'm working on a more heartfelt game and a similar horror-ish game at the same time :D
that was the best sleep of my life but yeah i really enjoyed everything from that! I'll definitely have my eyes out for later projects!
this game is my new addiction
omg AWW that's so nice ππ it's a bit of a short game though :'D
as short as it is it's really well made I hope to see more if there's anything in the future
there's like a 2% chance, we've been thinking about it !! π
wow i love is all so much!!! ngl for once in cheering for the atagonist
REALLL !!! but ig the antagonist in this case could've been the guy miss was with? (trying to avoid spoilers lmaoo)
yea true
Probably going to check out the other endings <33 love this !!
YAYY there's an easter egg if you want to skip to the end of minigame 2! (go to the about screen and click the very lower left corner)
OMG ILL CHECK IT OUT TYY <333
YEAHH NP HEHE
mmh~!! I love this game so much with all of my heart, the art style and characters and everything is so adorable, literally made an account just to say how much I love this. please keep this up, I do not regret the money I spent on this and will definitely be following for any future projects <33
OH MY GOSH AAAHHHH that is so so kind of you !!!! your donation is 15% of our net worth HAHA this was like the best thing to happen to us in so long :') perhaps we'll make some sort of follow-up to the game because of this ahaskldghsa
I just loved playing this game! The build up to the final scene and the character depth mixed with the cute illustrations and games was amazing. Loved the twist!
AHH THANK YOU!! We really wanted the characters to have depth like you said (and the art too! The cover is actually Miss's hand on Ellie's cheek ;D), so I'm really glad you thought that!
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=mxWd9hZgG9k
Gameplay is easy and I love their chemistry!
Thank you so much for playing!! Your commentary is so fun to hear <33
I love the staggered shadows across the sprites in the big reveal scene. Very Very dramatic and cool. The story is fun too! A good amount of build-up the first two locations. Cleaning the rooms is relaxing despite everything
YESS credit to nii for designing & drawing the end scene, and effixs for the locations !!! we're happy you enjoyed <333
I DIDNT EVEN GET TO CLEAN UP THE MURDER SCENE!!!?!???!??!??!?!!?!??!?!?!!!?!
LMAOAOO maybe in a dlc !?! πππ
better be >:/
HAHA we're not planning on expanding this game any more but we might have a change of plans in the future !?
war will be started if you dont lemme clean up the murder scene
LMAOOO maybe we'll release a paid dlc on steam then?
my reaction fr HHAHAHAHHA like WHAT 1!!!!??!?!?!?!!?!???!??!??
SORRY ... 72 HOUR JAM SO .......
me kinda person right here, I AM STARTING AN ARMY!!!!
I love this game. It made me sad to learn about the room with the drawings. I wasn't expecting the end I thought it just would be a dead body but it was a lot more. The art style is so cute too. I really enjoyed this game and I plan to play more of your games! <3
this is so sweet!!!! ππ haha we knew the ending might seem pretty expected so we did try to make it more surprising :D
wait isnt the room with drawings pretty obvious /nm
I thought they were just kidnapped I didn't expect it to be the other thing
made a whole account just to say that i love this game (^_^Κβ‘Ζͺ)
AWWW that's so sweet of you!!! welcome to the itch community LOLLfeel free to rate this game or follow any of us, it would mean a lot (and your comment made our day!) :DD
i am in literal tears. you made one of the best horror games I've ever played and brought actual things that need to be known to light. as a little girl, some things were done to me that shouldn't have been done. and this gives me a small bit of comfort that others recognize that these things that are mentioned are serious things.
Ohh my gosh, your comment means the world to us :')
Since the very beginning, we wanted to make a game that would highlight things about the world that needed to be given attention. I hope you're doing better now; no one should have to go through things like those mentioned in the game, they're definitely serious topics (I was concerned I didn't handle them with enough care). But I'm happy you're with us now <3
if that was your goal, you completed it perfectly. and to end on a lighter note, i would absolutely without hesitation go with miss ha-ha
HAHA #1 miss fan!!
and when the main character said it looked like her childhood bedroom in the second job i was REALLY suspicious that miss was going to end up being like, her older sister or her mom and taken revenge on the people who took her or something and the main character forgot her past. It couldve been a way that the story was taken but i love the way the story was.
Oh mann that's a twist I didn't think of :00 I guess I'm glad it didn't go that way!
SAME LOL
Ok but the fact that Ellie's favourite colour is the colour of blood tho π nice detail
Overall I love the story, and especially the art! Yeah not a critic so uh basically game me like
what was the color name
LOL omg i wrote that line & i didn't even realize!! Initially, it was supposed to be #fffdcf ("a pale banana yellow"), but then i changed it to a cross between red & red velvet (#c70a0a) because of little red riding hood! (Ellie was supposed to be a sort of rebirth of little red riding hood :D)
But overall, THANK YOU !! We're glad you enjoyed ππ
wow my favorite character has the same fav color XD
REALLYY omg that's crazy LOL
The art style in this game is adorable and just overall amazing, I also love the background art, especially in the end with the gore! The overall storyline of this is amazing and adds up. It gives off Gurokawaii vibes and I absolutely love it!
The only thing I suggest is a bit more of the cleaning mini-games or story line interactions so the player can interact more. Other than that this game is amazing and I highly suggest it!
AHH this is so sweet thank you !! i've forwarded your compliments to our artists :DDD
since this game was made for a 72 hour jam, we don't really plan on expanding it any further. but your feedback is still invaluable, and we're super glad you enjoyed!! π₯°π₯°
this game was so cute aaaaaa >w< !!!11
THANK YOU!!! you're so cute toooo :DD