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Replaying this yet again and I love the small little changes. The updated BG is real charming and being able to see the WDs in game is nice. I'm surprised you're able to do all this while still developing both Underswap and Mafiafell too and with the same level of quality too,i've been enjoying both just as much as this and seeing any of them get an update really brightens my day.

Welcome back for the replay! I'm glad you like the updates. :) 

I'm glad you're enjoying the other games so far! UF will always have a special spot in my heart so I want to keep polishing it as best as I can. 

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It's honestly been pretty fun seeing you improve and getting to see it show in this and your other works. I love your writing style cuz of how charming it is and I love the way you make the UI for these because they're all super pleasing to look at. TLDR,I like your stuff,enjoy you getting better and look forward to more!

;;; thank you~ I'll do my best to keep improving bit by bit with each update. 

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Hi! I don’t usually comment on things, but I found some typos so I thought I would be helpful and point them out :3

Page beginning with “It's narrower than any of the previous areas.” has “exponentially” spelled as “expotentially”      

Page beginning with “Oh my, that’s nice.” The wrong form of their is used in the sentence “Regular people going about there day” there -> their           

Page beginning with “That’s right… you took this paper.” The word “abdomen” is misspelled as “abodmen” and the last line spells “really” as “reall”         

Page beginning with “Wouldn’t that be nice” has “clicking” spelled as “cliking”        

Page beginning with “As you walk down the hallway, you admire the paintings.” The word “environments” is misspelled as “enviornments”. On the same page, “equivalent” is misspelled as “equivilant”            

Page beginning with “Toriel strides through the garden” has “feud” spelled as “fued.” On the same page, “believe” is spelled as “belive”         

Page beginning with “You think you hear the sound of someong choking in the background, but you can’t be too sure because it’s so faint.” someong -> someone        

Page beginning with “You are finally leaving the narrow cavern and at the end there's a large red flower” has “glistening” spelled “glsitening”       

On the Sans route, the page beginning with “The Snowflake is a white and blue themed comedy club” there’s a line that says “red a cat-like monster” instead of “a red cat-like monster.” In the same paragraph “waiter” is misspelled as “watier”

Page beginning with “You linger in the elevator” has “wipes” misspelled as “wips”         

Page beginning with “The castle is built into the cave walls” has “intricate” misspelled as “intriciate”        

This is everything I noticed, I’ll comment if I find more! :)

My tired eyes bless you. Thank you. ;;;




Page beginning with “It's narrower than any of the previous areas.” has “exponentially” spelled as “expotentially”   --> Corrected

Page beginning with “Oh my, that’s nice.” The wrong form of their is used in the sentence “Regular people going about there day” there -> their           --> Corrected

Page beginning with “That’s right… you took this paper.” The word “abdomen” is misspelled as “abodmen” and the last line spells “really” as “reall”         --> Both corrected 

Page beginning with “Wouldn’t that be nice” has “clicking” spelled as “cliking”        --> Corrected

Page beginning with “As you walk down the hallway, you admire the paintings.” The word “environments” is misspelled as “enviornments”. On the same page, “equivalent” is misspelled as “equivilant”         --> Corrected     

Page beginning with “Toriel strides through the garden” has “feud” spelled as “fued.” On the same page, “believe” is spelled as “belive”         --> Corrected 

Page beginning with “You think you hear the sound of someong choking in the background, but you can’t be too sure because it’s so faint.” someong -> someone        --> Corrected 

Page beginning with “You are finally leaving the narrow cavern and at the end there's a large red flower” has “glistening” spelled “glsitening” --> Corrected          

On the Sans route, the page beginning with “The Snowflake is a white and blue themed comedy club” there’s a line that says “red a cat-like monster” instead of “a red cat-like monster.” In the same paragraph “waiter” is misspelled as “watier” --> Both Corrected 

Page beginning with “You linger in the elevator” has “wipes” misspelled as “wips”      --> Corrected      

Page beginning with “The castle is built into the cave walls” has “intricate” misspelled as “intriciate”        --> Corrected



Ooooh thank you thank you thank you!! I really appreciate this so dang much. These corrects will reflect in the next update. <3

it seems like i fell for Papyrus ;)

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Replaying this for the 4th time. That storm bonus scene was hilarious and adorable at the same time, Sans is such a sweetheart. And that rivalry with Asriel ? I'm living for it. Can't wait for more. 

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Welcome baaack~ The storm scene was a lot of fun to write, I loved adding different reactions for each route. 

Asriel & Sans would make the best frenemies. 

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fr tho- the dynamic is flawless

How many endings are there? I can not tell.

Technically 13 right now

+2 Pap (True / Neutral Endings)

+2 Sans (True / Neutral Endings)

+2 Asriel (True / Neutral Endings)

+2 WD (True / Neutral Endings)

+2 Friendship (True / Neutral Endings)

+1 Grillby (True / Neutral Endings)

+1 Harem

+1 Judgement Hall Ending 

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Hey Grillby’s simps,i found something for ya ;)


(the drawing is from @ryt.3737 ,i hope ya‘ll like it as much as i do 😊)

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ahh, so handsome ❤️❤️

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Thanks for adding grillby ❤️ He became my 3rd favorite. And I haven't worked up the courage to play the Harem route yet 😀 but I'll definitely play it someday because I know it'll be worth it 😊

You're doing really well creating all these fangames all at once and they're really cool. I hope this doesn't end up harming your health... Be well 🌹

Happy to oblige whenever I can! I want this to be a comfort game. :)

Haha yes the harem route does require a certain level of. . . guts? A very bold MC hahaha

Making these games has made me really happy. It's one of the highlights in my day. :)

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absolutely loved this i've been craving undertale content lately and this is a goldmine's worth!! and it's soooo cute.. anyone know how to get the harem route tho? i wont rest till its achieved

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Start by choosing to say “eep“ when first meeting Sans,when you can choose to confess to Papyrus,tell him that you like him and Sans.Just keep going from then and meet Wingding whenever you can.You‘ll get him if you say you wish to see him in the locket as well.
Hope this helps :)

oooohh mybgod i just finished it and I'm LITERALLY blushing and giggling and twirling my hair TYSM !!! I LOVE UR WRITING

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oh my god this is so cute!! i love that there's so much to do, and so many points had me giggling and kicking my feet fr. hope there can be an asgore route one day (ilovehim) but 10/10!!

Thank you for playing!! I'm so glad I could make you happy. :)

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is there a chance to have a extra scene on grilby's route? :)

yes please 😫

YEEEES

Hope there is harem route with flowey in it too

or Grillby 😊🔥 (nice profile-pic btw)

Help, I've replayed this to romance Asriel because I was down bad for him in MafiaFell AND OH MY LORD HIS ROUTE HERE IS SO CUTE I AM SOBBING. I love the lil bonus scenes we have, it like, it's so damn soft I adore them (and the Judgment Scene? Please, I was nearly crying of laughter). I am very much looking forward to any updates or news about this and other IFs! I'm also grateful you continue to add more scenes despite it being technically complete!

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yesssssssssssss

romance the goat. he is best boy goat. 

Even if you don't romance him, he'll always support you. :) He's best friend material! And fluffy! And warm!

Thank you so much for replaying and commenting!!

Asriel best boy *absolutely sobbing* Asriel is hug shaped--

Also looking forward to any additions you add because my friend, amigo, you work hella fast in producing wonderful IFs. Not that I'm complaining but it's genuinely impressive.

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<33 Thank you!! I hope you enjoy future chapters / bonuses / games with best boy Azzy.

This update has been fun so far! a perfect pick-me-up in the midst of my cold. But I did notice a few times where the game used their instead of them

"no time to think any further. you break out into a sprint. you hear the spears whizzing through the air." when the kid defends you they use their 

"you want to linger. you want to draw it out. you want to spend more time with him." when mettaton is talking to you and papyrus he says their

"good. then let's begin. everyone ready?" mettaton says something like 'we'll use their to answer our questions'

"you feel strong enough to walk as soon as you smell the fresh air" sans says 'I judged their"

anyway, I'm excited to play the grillby route next!

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

Thank you for letting me know about the pronoun issues, I'll work on it in the next update. :)

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Alright,I’ll say it… the harem route is officially the number one for me.Number two is definitely Papyrus 🦴

I‘m so gonna make fanart of both ☺️😆

:D Glad you liked the extra route! Lookin' forward to the fanart!

i just saw the update, im trying to get the new endings and the new sence!

i think i got the harem ending, its with sans, gaster and papyrus right?

oh and im exited for swapfell thats work in progress!

i got grillbys ending, it was very nice!!! love the update!

Grillby‘s route has some heat to it,doesn’t it?

(Pun intended ;) )

Yeah!!! i like the spicy routs!

Is it only sans, gaster, and papyrus?

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i think so, i tried to romance everyone but it only ended in getting the skeletons.

nah, it's also asriel (flowey) and grillby 

oh okay ill try again! but can you tell me if there is enything spesific you did to romance them all?

It's only the gasters. 

okay thanks for the clarification!

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I beg your pardon? author? HAREM??????????????? (Interesting...*creepy tom laugh)

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listen listen listen I HAD TO OKAY like

it simply had to be done. 

Hell yeah 😆

Just hope we‘ll get to have a harem during Mafiafell aswell (or atleast Grillby 😅)

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I couldn't stop crying after finishing the game, very heartwarming story! Your writing is sooooo great! Great game!

Thank you!! I'm happy my story could warm your heart. :)

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I have played this so many times and I love it! It was heartbreaking, bittersweet and AHHH! SO many other words I could describe this game and your other works! It's just so amazing!

hehe thank you thank you!! I'm so pleased you like it. Appreciate the comment as well!

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very well written! heartwarming and adorable, your writing lends itself to this style very well :)

Thank you kindly! :) 

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I LOVE YOUR GAMES SO MUUUUUUCH OMG they've been getting me through college because it's been so tough as of late and every time I feel stressed I come and play all your games again. I LOVE YOUUUU. You're doing this world such a huge favor by making fun games like these.

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THANK YOU!! I'm so happy they could help you through college, I know that's such a stressful time. I'm so sorry it's been tough, and I hope things get easier soon. :(

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i think napstablook could be cute! i can never do romance with alphys or undyne becouse they are with eachother, i feel like im trying to ruin thier relationship. but im more exited for mafiafell too be complited, tho do what you find fun!

Yes, any Undyne/Alphy route would have to be a poly since I ship them too hard. :) Thank you for playing!

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i got one thing to say about his game.



im not reading allat

Then you ain‘t worthy of commenting on this masterpiece 😤

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Bro, your a fucking they them and you dare reply to me?! Thats actually surprising for a lgbtq supporter. See I would cook the shit out of you but I really dont feel like it so the best you can do is kill yourself you undertale shipping piece of shit.

Looks like someone’s cranky today;

Go cry about it bitch 😊🖕

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Sorry,had to leave cuz my girlfriend wanted to cuddle the whole time and hid my phone.I am back now 😊.So

First:Only whiny little bitches with dildos in their ass like you for example are trying to get me mad with hilarious insults like this 

Second:From the way ya responded i assume that you‘re single and don’t have friends at all

Third:Even “We must answer for our sins.“ had better stuff to say than you and he‘s an asshole i dealt with about a month ago.Yeah,go ahead and scroll down until you find i—— oh yeah I forgot;You’re too lazy to even read that 🤣🖕

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Bro no way you used first second and third, this is not Ela class dumb ass and I prob got more friends then you bitch ass pussy ass dumb ass fatherless ass 1 year ass Lgbtq supporting ass nigga. The person moaning your name was the 3 year old in your basement you pedophile. And im not gonna cry ab it, im gonna enjoy the reply's from you and this bitchy ass fan base. 

Pretty funny how you described your life ngl 🤣🤣🤣🤣

bro is 2 mad

lmao who hurt you both ? Why come here in the first place ?

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This was an amazing game! I have replayed it several times and seen all the different routes (I think lol). I really want to see more of this game if you ever add "extra stories" to the endings, I also kind of wish that Papyrus had a "Judgement Hall Reaction" and for the scene to also be in the friendship ending and San's ending, if possible, as well. I just thought the scene was cute and hilarious. I know you said you wanted to maybe have more people available to date like Undyne, but I was thinking maybe Chara could be an additional character? I think it would be interesting to see how that would play out. Overall amazing work, I'm officially a fan now. <3

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Hi! Thank you very kindly, I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to try out the different routes. I'm happy to say that more routes are now added to the game with another bonus scene. :) 

I don't plan to add Chara as a route character at the moment, but we'll see once I'm done with the other requests. 

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Wow this was really good I'm still playing I just wanted to share my thoughts, I'm not a big Undertale AU player/Fan but this was really good I enjoyed the writing and the choices

Thank you so much!

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Damn that was good, didnt get the ending because of one very vague thing, maybe you could hint to certain endings ingame? I loved the game, but that was so infuriating to realise after i had already deleted that save for room. I'll love to see it develop, keep going at it! 

Thanks for playing it! The transition screens between the chapters should provide hints, and I have uploaded a walkthrough if that helps: https://darkpetal16.itch.io/if-underfell/devlog/504345/complete-walkthrough

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As I said before, great game

-The the boy, pixelboii

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Thank you! :D

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Found something once again

oops that'll be fixed in the update. Thank you!

Glad to help you 😌

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sweet jesus this game is amazing, i've just finished the friendship version of the true ending and after a brief intermission i'm gonna start the romance ones!!

the story telling and worldbuilding of this game is just so...incredible, so vivid, so immersive. i actually got goosebumps during some parts.

you can really tell how much effort and care has been put into this game, thank you so much for creating it <3

Thank you!! I'm so happy someone enjoys the friendship route, that was the main route I built everything else off of so I'm very proud of it. 

I'm very grateful you played my game and left a kind comment, thank you so much!


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This game is amazingly well made, the story is intriguing, some of the choices are funny, and everything here is “Do something or not”, because this game has a lot of things to explore. What makes this game even better, everything is so described, we can know how and what the character is seeing/feeling.

The romance thing is so wholesome (I choose Flowey)

After I got the ending, I couldn’t restart, I’m on the chrome version btw.

I would give a note of 9/10 Since I couldn’t restart, I could give a total score, I would love to explore more of the romances, my next objective is romancing Sans, or probably (???).

Thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this story. I hope to keep adding to it with each update. 

Flowey's romance is definitely one of the two most wholesome routes available! He was so sweet to route.

Yeah the RESET button on the passage is missing a variable in coding. It will be fixed in the update. The RESET button on the UI (the menu on the side) should work though.

Good luck in your next routes! Hope you like the upcoming update as well. :) I will be adding in two more routes. 

Thank you for telling me that there was a reset button on the side, I forgot that this menu exists, now I can explore way more than I could, thank you.

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Can we PLEASE bitchslap Sans for killing us so many damn times?!He owes me strawberry cobbler; a lot of it!

hahaha noooo poor sans, so unforgiven hahaha

haha i already forgave him,atleast he ain‘t too bad of a brother in law 😅 (when the men in real life are just seein‘ me as a piece of meat,i‘ll stick to my darling Papyrus😊)

Also just noticed you‘ve got a new profile-pic!It looks nice 😊👍

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I can't even process, the writing are so damn good, and I can't--- why are you so good?! I can't wait for you to make other au's!! Keep up the good work!

:D! Thank you! I'm having a lot of fun working with the other AUs too but this one always has a special spot in my heart. 

Ikr! underfell is always be my fav!

LOVE IT SMMMMM

TYTYTYTY

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Ok, this is an absolutely incredible game, I haven't played an Undertale fangame that was this good in a long time. I adored it, it made me feel so many things, I could see myself a lot in the character too and I adored the rest of the Underfell characters (although Sans was a dick- but I forgive him I guess lol). I especially loved your take on Gaster for this AU, people usually depict him as Sans and Papyrus' father, so seeing him as the older brother rather than their parent really threw me off at first but I liked it in the end anyway (also, his personality, just the right amount of fucked up and hurt, no comments). I really look forward to the updates but no pressure! In the meantime I will replay this game a thousand times and also try out that other Mafiatale you made, hope it's as good as this one! Thanks for making this game at all honestly, this was awesome! (Even if you mainly made if for yourself).

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thank youu! I'm so glad you could feel yourself in the characters and you were able to enjoy this game. 

(Sans is indeed a dick hahaha) 

WingDing was a lot of fun to write! 


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I have the draft for the next update done. I'll start editing it this weekend and hope to post next week. :) 

Thank you very very much for your kind words!

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HHHRR I love this, i love this alot, I enjoyed all the endings they were absolutely charming :), wish there were more games like this out there.

thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank you!!! and me too haha

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I just finished completing the "True happy ending" and i just want to say that it was SOOOO GOOODD. I love it sm <3. The fluff, the plot, the everything was just *chef's kiss* and yes yes yes a million times yes pleaseee do a mafiatale one. That would be so awesome! :D

Thank you so dang much!! I'm grateful you played my game and left a comment, and I'm happy you enjoyed the true ending. Mafiafell is already in the works and up to chapter 4. :) 

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If this coment gets atleast 5 upvotes i‘ll buy this golden heart locket and post a pic of me wearing it 

you're getting close!

i‘m buying it now,hope it‘ll arrive soon 😆

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I wonder what Papyrus thinks about the fact that we‘ve been judged by his own brother :0

I think I messed up something, bc there is only ,,you are broken" and ,,restart" and I was trying the restart but nothing •́⁠ ⁠ ⁠‿⁠ ⁠,⁠•̀

Should I Jeep trying?

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Hi!

There is another way to Restart. There is an arrow at the top right of the game (mobile or desktop). If you click on that you can open the UI. There is a Restart button at the bottom. 







Congrats on finding the Judgment Hall ending. :)

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