Shame the game got discontinued. It had a great story and writing. I would have loved to see how the relationship would develop. I would have been willing to pay a lot because of the quality
It's a shame this game was so good I would have paid over $1,000 for more updates on this game I love the storyline I hate when games leave games unfinished such a beautiful fantastic storyline great artwork anybody that doesn't like this game can go fuck yourself because this game is fucking fantastic The shame that it was abandoned
who the hell said this is a bad game????? bro its a freaking almost perfect if you have contact with the creator do send him a message saying WE WANT the game to be completed please.
Go down some and you'll see some people who were very unhappy with this. Wish I did have something to contact him but he's gone from pretty much everything.
if you are reading this DEV, take your time and make this game what you want from a gamer to play it, don't give up please, and carry on. thank you for a wonderful game my fellow gamer.
Does anyone know any way I can get in contact with f_dot? I saw this game and am wondering if he would want to work on it again with me helping him out.
From what ive seen as ive looked around it seems like he has completely given up on it bc he felt too pressured and is longer making avns. I may be wrong but regardless this is a really good avn and personally i would very much like to see it continued
I know many stupid,dumb, totally clueless naive people but good sir you surpass every one of them,this MF dev was another one creating shitty avn,giving 2-3 early updates and then not realising anything for months,then go for rework or something and boom you got scammed and then these mfs moves on to creating NXT avn.
This avn was much more shitty,at least those other avn has something good in them to enjoy,from start this avn was a shit show, killing only good thing in game and letting bastards live,mc is greatest shit,who is worse then a pedophile,girls are slut who were tried to be shown as pure maiden,when that's not the case at all.
And story is pretty much fucked up,we are indeed saved,dude,and if you were his patreon,thank God for all the money you saved from this mf.
Dev said," I'm getting new job and unable to handle the pressure of creating avn anymore so i m leaving this avn,i m sorry folks"
Reality: "I don't know a damn thing about creating an avn,i just put my shit into an avn,i tried to make people stupid by giving effort in first realease,then i relaxed and start making shit to just say in future that I'm improving the avn and i will just sit and milk my naive patreons after that.Shit I'm getting more hate for my shitty avn then money i expected,i m Outta here fuck you cucks who supported me."
Thanks a lot loser dev for leaving this shit so called avn and pls don't go trying to make another in future at least do this good for all of us.
i Enjoyed it alot FDot and that ending though how are you going to leave us like that lol it was totally concerning and leaving us wanting more but overall i really enjoyed it and took my time going through it
Can't see a chapter 2 did you upload wrong file or am I missing something this v3.3 seems to be exactly the same as last version I downloaded which was 3.1?
You should come back man. Ignore the haters and keep going. I just want the mc and Olivia to have a kid together while he is with Mia and Ellie and Olivia in the end. This way they get the baby they wanted. I didn’t like how she didn’t wait for the mc but what’s done is done.
You know what dev, i appologize not for writing crap not for saying bad, bit appologize to you for all of this as in sense, it doesn't matter to you, i am the way i m, i don't take shit has soft heart but built around rough Just play avn not for sex not story but to see some virtual unrealistic romance, love that doesn't exist in irl, that i never got or expect in future, but happy for others, i spread hate here just for one reason because i love it, i loved this avn story first part felt like a complete wholesome, a guy steal cars, live and have fun with his buddy, fell in love with a girl, even with their differences they come together and mc supported her when they were having their child, left everything behind fir her, after their daughter their life was complete and fulfilling, then shit hit for some gang conflict and money laundering, innocent lily died, i cried fir real many did, then you made another good thing that you made mc take revenge on those bastard not enough but something i never got in any other avn, did everything he could, and as last resort to save his remaining family his wife Olivia and daughter he left town for good, just to keep them save i felt like a complete story of a true hero a really great avn, i didn't wanted anything else except for just two more renders in that part 1,mc coming back hugging Olivia, and his daughter and then story end, it could be greatest best avn, short but best,
I said bad thing for part 2,i m sure you agree it wasn't good,but i compared it to part 1 felt distorted,felt betrayed,felt why i had to play this,i could have just forgotten it,and remained in my memory that it ended in part with mc returning to his family,i know a fantasy bit it turned too bad,i hated you for this,for making me felt depressed alomst,i blubber shit on you,i regret it,since you might have felt bad for it,but i realise it wasn't on you,it was your story,you could write the way you wants it,
It was me who fell in love with a virtual character,it's story its plot,it was me who should be blamed for just living in Fantasy since real life isnt like that but far way my broken heart wasn't your concern but i shifted on you for my mistake
I sincerely apologise ti you,i will never say anything to anyone,i love seeing perspective and don't judge but i did to you,it's your story buddy write the way you want not the way people like,cheer up i m not going to comment any shit anymore,anywhere,i m sorry again.
Now you got it bro,I know the feeling really!I felt that too because I fell in love with Lily's personality but as shit hit the fan worse things happened,but that's what it is right?what is life without pain?,what is life without drama?, isn't it how it's always been? that's how real life is!,not because it's just a VN is they can't show some emotions anymore,life isn't perfect why would a game be,what was the difference?,Plus the story having a sour start just make the ending sweeter!I know it man,trust me I've been playing VN's for 3 years I played more games that are worse,this one is nah it's just pretty minor for me.Just let the story go on bro don't let your emotions take over, that's what real men do.
yup you are right there are worse story that is written poorly it isn't even written badly just felt upset where gane took a complete 180 turn mc,a loving man who fought gangs alone for bringing justice to the murderer of her love,really handsome though, leaving family for their better life,to a douchebag looking old man,who is just whinning about his life,corrupting a Lil massesuer girl,perving over a bartender,who is his best friend neice,and lusting over a loli girl,and doesn't giving a damn how his wife lived these past years not caring for her,just bitching about his own problems.yeah it has its flaws but biggest one was story started as something and character with time become bad,and mc worst possible,not bad avn not dev fault but definitely not my type of story.
It's okay, I understand you guys, but I don't want to let this story stay only in the heroes and violence.
I want this story to bring out how the family faces different things, whether it's happiness or pain, and in the end they can resolve their misunderstanding and hatred and live together forever.
And at the end of the story, the past people MC, Olivia, Lucas all learn to really grow up.
This is a story of watching the characters grow and change.
Yeah i understand,everyone grows it's part of life,but hope that grow for something better in future especially mc since till now he has become worse than a gangster,to a rapist,to a pedophile,to a complete sick pycho who makes me puke to play as, hope he grows even 1% better
nope not yet,and not going to,i already have trauma,which was my fault to indulge myself into avn, may it become better or best avn in future i ain't playing it ever again.whatever you end up with story in future of this avn for me it ended mc returning to his family and they lived happily as in part 1 itself,for me it's end their and i m happy with it.
That's the thing on you bro,you just focused on the bad parts,you don't know how to move,how could you possibly enjoy it if it's still not in the interesting part but you're already giving it up,give it a chance c'mon,if you don't like this kind of story which is really good,try F.I.L.F then,maybe you'll find your "Perfect" Incest shit there.I mean everything been perfect so far.
Wow the game is just...I'm still sad about what happened to Lily but a great story comes with a sad intro😭😞,I...really love how the Dev put an excellent job on making some emotion and feelings mixed in the story,it feels like you're also there in the Novel,I knew how it felt to lose someone you loved...to try new things,to love,and start a family...But it also teach us how to be the different version of us,sometimes we're how we are,but sometimes things change us...and losing someone is...painful.
But anyways about the story please, please,please try it out and support the Dev,why would you listen to someone's opinion if you haven't try it yourself, don't get fooled plus I assure you guys that there's no NTR nor cheating,I don't know what you guys find bad in the game...I mean it's obvious as a clear ocean that Ellie is MC's daughter and who the hell really think that Olivia cheated???,eh?Focus to the dialogue like how they say it "try to keep you blood in your head and not in to the other" might mess your head if you know what I mean HAHAHA looks like someone though there's some NTR and he keeps on saying bad reviews about the game,I don't know what he's problem is but it's better not to pay attention to that,because it looks like he didn't understand the plot of the story.
And about Mia,who you guys think a "slut/whore/bitch" welp I think you got it all wrong,what her side show is her defensive mechanism as you see she show everyone she's tough and dependent,you'll think that she's not as innocent as before maybe you guys are right but?Are you sure that, it's really the case???She said she have a boyfriend,but did you see one??? Who get fooled by this shit because it's clearly fake!!!, she's also virgin and it's obvious that only she knows how to talk but also inexperienced, bruh you guys don't pay attention.
All you do is judge even though it's not yet revealed in the story if Ellie is Lucas daughter,plus there's no way like literally no way Olivia will let Lucas touch her,did you forget how irritated she gets every time Lucas is near,and in the latest chapter "IT IS REVEALED THAT LUCAS STILL LOVE OLIVIA BUT WHAT DID A GOOD FRIEND DID?" HE FUCKING FORGET ABOUT HIS FEELING FOR HER,WHY????,BECAUSE HE CARE FOR MC!!!HE CHOSE FRIENDSHIP OVER LOVE!!!,why can't you get that?Like really?!how stupid are you????
Wow,the game is really great I enjoyed playing it and the dialogue and story are pretty fun interesting and engaging,if you want to try it out just go for it and please READ THE DIALOGUES CAREFULLY,so you won't be an hardstuck bitch who keeps on replying to other review because he thought there's some NTR and CHEATING involved,what a dumbass looks like he didn't pay attention to the details and dialogues,I don't want to spoil anything but if you stupid hardnuts,think that Olivia cheated on MC you should go back to kinder maybe practice how to read and process some information properly,cause I don't think so that someone cheated on another nor another dick involve here.Oh just a friendly advice you can use some Walkthrough so you won't end up being dumb as shit.
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Shame the game got discontinued. It had a great story and writing. I would have loved to see how the relationship would develop. I would have been willing to pay a lot because of the quality
Such a great game and story wroth a happy ending not like this, pls come back!
It's a shame this game was so good I would have paid over $1,000 for more updates on this game I love the storyline I hate when games leave games unfinished such a beautiful fantastic storyline great artwork anybody that doesn't like this game can go fuck yourself because this game is fucking fantastic The shame that it was abandoned
I really want it to continue. I can only hope that he will come back and finish this good work.
I want him to come back and continue the game, there are many people who want it to end.
same just finish it i hate cliff hangers
Waiting for next update....
Please Soon 🙏🙏🙏
He got a bit of bad criticism and unfortunately quit
who the hell said this is a bad game?????
bro its a freaking almost perfect
if you have contact with the creator do send him a message saying WE WANT the game to be completed please.
Go down some and you'll see some people who were very unhappy with this. Wish I did have something to contact him but he's gone from pretty much everything.
why the hell would they play an adult game and complain about it ??? if its not their cup of tea then don't drink it
if you are reading this DEV, take your time and make this game what you want from a gamer to play it, don't give up please, and carry on.
thank you for a wonderful game my fellow gamer.
Does anyone know any way I can get in contact with f_dot? I saw this game and am wondering if he would want to work on it again with me helping him out.
From what ive seen as ive looked around it seems like he has completely given up on it bc he felt too pressured and is longer making avns. I may be wrong but regardless this is a really good avn and personally i would very much like to see it continued
If you can find a way please let me know as I would also like to help out
Is this still an ongoing project or has he shut it down
I hate to say, but the Discord is gone as is his Patreon....
This had great potential, sorry to see it has been abandoned.
Guess the Elden Lady strook again....
Patreon is cracking down on incest. His subscribestar appears to still be active
I know there's a lot of assholes in the comments, but this truly is a great game and I do hope that you will continue it.
I know many stupid,dumb, totally clueless naive people but good sir you surpass every one of them,this MF dev was another one creating shitty avn,giving 2-3 early updates and then not realising anything for months,then go for rework or something and boom you got scammed and then these mfs moves on to creating NXT avn.
This avn was much more shitty,at least those other avn has something good in them to enjoy,from start this avn was a shit show, killing only good thing in game and letting bastards live,mc is greatest shit,who is worse then a pedophile,girls are slut who were tried to be shown as pure maiden,when that's not the case at all.
And story is pretty much fucked up,we are indeed saved,dude,and if you were his patreon,thank God for all the money you saved from this mf.
Dev said," I'm getting new job and unable to handle the pressure of creating avn anymore so i m leaving this avn,i m sorry folks"
Reality: "I don't know a damn thing about creating an avn,i just put my shit into an avn,i tried to make people stupid by giving effort in first realease,then i relaxed and start making shit to just say in future that I'm improving the avn and i will just sit and milk my naive patreons after that.Shit I'm getting more hate for my shitty avn then money i expected,i m Outta here fuck you cucks who supported me."
Thanks a lot loser dev for leaving this shit so called avn and pls don't go trying to make another in future at least do this good for all of us.
That's generally how it goes.
Will the new update roll out soon?? I really want to play it very badly
When is version 4.0 coming on here?
When will chapter 3 update come
any femdom in this game and character name, please?
or dominating personality female character name
i Enjoyed it alot FDot and that ending though how are you going to leave us like that lol it was totally concerning and leaving us wanting more but overall i really enjoyed it and took my time going through it
Can't see a chapter 2 did you upload wrong file or am I missing something this v3.3 seems to be exactly the same as last version I downloaded which was 3.1?
Where did you get your download link?,maybe it's a different one?
0.3.3 is a hotfix update to 0.3.1.
0.3 version is Chapter 2.
I see so when i go new game should there be ch0, ch1 and ch2? or is ch1 actually counted as Ch 2?
When you're through the Chapter 1 will automatically enter the Chapter 1.
You cannot select Chapter 2 in a new game.
You should come back man. Ignore the haters and keep going. I just want the mc and Olivia to have a kid together while he is with Mia and Ellie and Olivia in the end. This way they get the baby they wanted. I didn’t like how she didn’t wait for the mc but what’s done is done.
Hate to spoil it for you but if you read into the context clues you'll see that she did wait for him. Dev was dropping hints in the comments here.
man u should come back this game is so good compared to other novels
please come back and finish the story , we miss you .
You know what dev, i appologize not for writing crap not for saying bad, bit appologize to you for all of this as in sense, it doesn't matter to you, i am the way i m, i don't take shit has soft heart but built around rough Just play avn not for sex not story but to see some virtual unrealistic romance, love that doesn't exist in irl, that i never got or expect in future, but happy for others, i spread hate here just for one reason because i love it, i loved this avn story first part felt like a complete wholesome, a guy steal cars, live and have fun with his buddy, fell in love with a girl, even with their differences they come together and mc supported her when they were having their child, left everything behind fir her, after their daughter their life was complete and fulfilling, then shit hit for some gang conflict and money laundering, innocent lily died, i cried fir real many did, then you made another good thing that you made mc take revenge on those bastard not enough but something i never got in any other avn, did everything he could, and as last resort to save his remaining family his wife Olivia and daughter he left town for good, just to keep them save i felt like a complete story of a true hero a really great avn, i didn't wanted anything else except for just two more renders in that part 1,mc coming back hugging Olivia, and his daughter and then story end, it could be greatest best avn, short but best,
I said bad thing for part 2,i m sure you agree it wasn't good,but i compared it to part 1 felt distorted,felt betrayed,felt why i had to play this,i could have just forgotten it,and remained in my memory that it ended in part with mc returning to his family,i know a fantasy bit it turned too bad,i hated you for this,for making me felt depressed alomst,i blubber shit on you,i regret it,since you might have felt bad for it,but i realise it wasn't on you,it was your story,you could write the way you wants it,
It was me who fell in love with a virtual character,it's story its plot,it was me who should be blamed for just living in Fantasy since real life isnt like that but far way my broken heart wasn't your concern but i shifted on you for my mistake
I sincerely apologise ti you,i will never say anything to anyone,i love seeing perspective and don't judge but i did to you,it's your story buddy write the way you want not the way people like,cheer up i m not going to comment any shit anymore,anywhere,i m sorry again.
Now you got it bro,I know the feeling really!I felt that too because I fell in love with Lily's personality but as shit hit the fan worse things happened,but that's what it is right?what is life without pain?,what is life without drama?, isn't it how it's always been? that's how real life is!,not because it's just a VN is they can't show some emotions anymore,life isn't perfect why would a game be,what was the difference?,Plus the story having a sour start just make the ending sweeter!I know it man,trust me I've been playing VN's for 3 years I played more games that are worse,this one is nah it's just pretty minor for me.Just let the story go on bro don't let your emotions take over, that's what real men do.
yup you are right there are worse story that is written poorly it isn't even written badly just felt upset where gane took a complete 180 turn mc,a loving man who fought gangs alone for bringing justice to the murderer of her love,really handsome though, leaving family for their better life,to a douchebag looking old man,who is just whinning about his life,corrupting a Lil massesuer girl,perving over a bartender,who is his best friend neice,and lusting over a loli girl,and doesn't giving a damn how his wife lived these past years not caring for her,just bitching about his own problems.yeah it has its flaws but biggest one was story started as something and character with time become bad,and mc worst possible,not bad avn not dev fault but definitely not my type of story.
It's okay, I understand you guys, but I don't want to let this story stay only in the heroes and violence.
I want this story to bring out how the family faces different things, whether it's happiness or pain, and in the end they can resolve their misunderstanding and hatred and live together forever.
And at the end of the story, the past people MC, Olivia, Lucas all learn to really grow up.
This is a story of watching the characters grow and change.
Yeah i understand,everyone grows it's part of life,but hope that grow for something better in future especially mc since till now he has become worse than a gangster,to a rapist,to a pedophile,to a complete sick pycho who makes me puke to play as, hope he grows even 1% better
Have you tried to play Chapter 2? I explained a lot about the inner workings of the MC there.
What I want to say in chapter 1 is that the MC has just returned to the city, and there are many people with familiar and unfamiliar mentalities.
nope not yet,and not going to,i already have trauma,which was my fault to indulge myself into avn, may it become better or best avn in future i ain't playing it ever again.whatever you end up with story in future of this avn for me it ended mc returning to his family and they lived happily as in part 1 itself,for me it's end their and i m happy with it.
That's the thing on you bro,you just focused on the bad parts,you don't know how to move,how could you possibly enjoy it if it's still not in the interesting part but you're already giving it up,give it a chance c'mon,if you don't like this kind of story which is really good,try F.I.L.F then,maybe you'll find your "Perfect" Incest shit there.I mean everything been perfect so far.
u r working on a new update right?? When will new update roll out?
5/5 Keep up the good work!!!
Wow the game is just...I'm still sad about what happened to Lily but a great story comes with a sad intro😭😞,I...really love how the Dev put an excellent job on making some emotion and feelings mixed in the story,it feels like you're also there in the Novel,I knew how it felt to lose someone you loved...to try new things,to love,and start a family...But it also teach us how to be the different version of us,sometimes we're how we are,but sometimes things change us...and losing someone is...painful.
But anyways about the story please, please,please try it out and support the Dev,why would you listen to someone's opinion if you haven't try it yourself, don't get fooled plus I assure you guys that there's no NTR nor cheating,I don't know what you guys find bad in the game...I mean it's obvious as a clear ocean that Ellie is MC's daughter and who the hell really think that Olivia cheated???,eh?Focus to the dialogue like how they say it "try to keep you blood in your head and not in to the other" might mess your head if you know what I mean HAHAHA looks like someone though there's some NTR and he keeps on saying bad reviews about the game,I don't know what he's problem is but it's better not to pay attention to that,because it looks like he didn't understand the plot of the story.
And about Mia,who you guys think a "slut/whore/bitch" welp I think you got it all wrong,what her side show is her defensive mechanism as you see she show everyone she's tough and dependent,you'll think that she's not as innocent as before maybe you guys are right but?Are you sure that, it's really the case???She said she have a boyfriend,but did you see one??? Who get fooled by this shit because it's clearly fake!!!, she's also virgin and it's obvious that only she knows how to talk but also inexperienced, bruh you guys don't pay attention.
Thank you... Well, a lot, very lot.
All you do is judge even though it's not yet revealed in the story if Ellie is Lucas daughter,plus there's no way like literally no way Olivia will let Lucas touch her,did you forget how irritated she gets every time Lucas is near,and in the latest chapter "IT IS REVEALED THAT LUCAS STILL LOVE OLIVIA BUT WHAT DID A GOOD FRIEND DID?" HE FUCKING FORGET ABOUT HIS FEELING FOR HER,WHY????,BECAUSE HE CARE FOR MC!!!HE CHOSE FRIENDSHIP OVER LOVE!!!,why can't you get that?Like really?!how stupid are you????
Wow,the game is really great I enjoyed playing it and the dialogue and story are pretty fun interesting and engaging,if you want to try it out just go for it and please READ THE DIALOGUES CAREFULLY,so you won't be an hardstuck bitch who keeps on replying to other review because he thought there's some NTR and CHEATING involved,what a dumbass looks like he didn't pay attention to the details and dialogues,I don't want to spoil anything but if you stupid hardnuts,think that Olivia cheated on MC you should go back to kinder maybe practice how to read and process some information properly,cause I don't think so that someone cheated on another nor another dick involve here.Oh just a friendly advice you can use some Walkthrough so you won't end up being dumb as shit.