I really enjoyed the demo! Niel's abilities are so interesting and it would be fun to see where it would go. Thank you for sharing this with us, and good luck on your future projects!
omg i just saw that the "quit??" button turns into a red "DONT LEAVE ME" button when u hover ur pointer over it. BRO THATS SO CREATIVE WHY AM I FAN GIRLING OVER THIS
Hey, I was wondering, I only started today, and it looks so GREAT! I saw it was a demo and was really wondering if you would finish it? I already love the characters personnalities so I would be really sad if it was never finished, you know?
this demo was sm fun to play and i absolutely love the art. im sad that you dont want to continue this projects but if you make any mote games ill defintley check them out
I had a lot of fun playing this (as someone who has amassed many fictional crushes) and this was quite the adventure! The art is beautiful, first of all, and I love how the scariness isn't outright gore fest but classy and in a way. I will have a playthrough of it up soon, I hope you enjoy it!
I don't know why I always download these games at night but I somehow find myself doing so, now I'm scared and had to just save it for tomorrow, haha well if it isn't the consequences of my actions! So far it's very interesting and I had tried out the different choices to a certain extent.
AAAA I LOVE ALL OF YOUR PROJECTS!! all of the storylines is really amazing~ especially this one i really like Niel's design and really curious about the story behind him. i also made some quick sketches of him in the cafe, i hope you will continue the project in the future but do please take care of yourself and remember to rest ^^
I really enjoyed this demo and would definitely recommend checking it out. Genuinely disturbing at times. Great story, beautiful art. I'm really looking forward to the full release. Thank you to the creator for an entertaining time 😊
i really enjoyed this demo!! won't get too spoiler-y but parts of it genuinely creeped me out ;-; .. i saw you said you had dyslexia and that's the reason for the spelling mistakes, but don't worry, i could still understand what you meant while reading!! plus, you could easily get a friend or someone online to volunteer to spell-check for you for free!! anyways, i really look forward to seeing more of this game but i sincerely hope it isn't the cliched "turns out it was all the MC's mental illness" trope xD ..
It's really hard to write with my dyslexia and sometimes the comments make me think it's unreadable so I'm glad it's somewhat understandable :b. The volunteer proof reader is a good idea, but I'd feel really bad if since I can't pay them :,). And thank you so much for enjoying my game! More creepy bits to come! (Also I have a strong dislike to the 'it was all because of the MC's mental illness trope' so don't worry ;b)
it's reassuring to hear that someone else dislikes that trope xD and don't worry, the text was fully readable and understandable to me, and didn't hinder my enjoyment at all!! i really enjoyed this demo :D!! plus, lots of people really wouldn't mind volunteering, but if you really feel guilty then maybe you can offer beta testing so they're technically getting something out of it (except it's early access to content instead of payment)?? just an idea!!
the game is really fun and good so far, but since the text is in similar colors to its' background its kinda hard to read, other thank that and spelling errors its a good game!
this is really good so far! i really like the artwork, its super cute! i do hope that in later versions the ui might be updated though, the font is super small for the buttons on the bottom of the text boxes, and speaking of them, the text boxes also look a little lacking in my opinion. there are also a good amount of spelling errors that need to be fixed, and maybe having volunteer proofreaders or beta testers could help with that. i do like whats here so far though like i said! nial is really cute and i would love to see more of him! <3
Thank you so much for the feedback! Unfortunately I have no money to pay proof readers or beta testers ;-;. I've tried to learn a little more about gui, and stuff, so hopefully it's up to standard when I update it lol :,)
sorry for the late response! but, as someone else offered, there are probably people willing to do proofreading or beta testing for you for free, if you set up a discord server for your game development there would probably be people willing to do so in there! but i also understand if you dont want to have people do that sort of work for free, as it is still legitimate work.
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omg i just saw that the "quit??" button turns into a red "DONT LEAVE ME" button when u hover ur pointer over it. BRO THATS SO CREATIVE WHY AM I FAN GIRLING OVER THIS
okay. I KNOW ur not sure if you're gonna continue this, BUT IMA NEED U TO CONTINUE THIS '`o'`
like im so in love w this game im def gonna save this for later just in case u decide to continue it!!
TYSM FOR MAKING THIS GAME OMG ILY ^333^
BRO WHEN IT SHOWED THE APP AND ONE OF THE REVIEWS SAID "lily is so hot i wanna have her babies" CAUGHT ME SO OFF GUARD WHATTT
I love this game so much it gave me so many chills Please continue the game
Hey, I was wondering, I only started today, and it looks so GREAT! I saw it was a demo and was really wondering if you would finish it? I already love the characters personnalities so I would be really sad if it was never finished, you know?
same...
10/10 would play agian
i fu*king love him
this is literally one of my fav games I love your work please keep it up! (and make sure to take your time and to rest pelase <3)
this demo was sm fun to play and i absolutely love the art. im sad that you dont want to continue this projects but if you make any mote games ill defintley check them out
hope there's a full version...this is a masterpiece...salute to the creator
Ofc
I played this for my YouTube channel, if you'd like to check it out in another tab then follow this link!
thank you for playing my game! Loved your play through <333
this was super freaky lol... it really creeped me out. Also Liam and his stickers are suuuuper cute <3
🤍LOVE THIS GAME🖤
I had a lot of fun playing this (as someone who has amassed many fictional crushes) and this was quite the adventure! The art is beautiful, first of all, and I love how the scariness isn't outright gore fest but classy and in a way. I will have a playthrough of it up soon, I hope you enjoy it!
Thank you so much for playing my game (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) I’m a big fan of your channel <33
I loved it! The concept is cool and it creeped me out more than i expected lol
It's a very good game and it's understandable so don't worry that much <3 Thank you for your hard work!
omg this is so great! I hope you make a full version!
i loved the game!!
i wish there would be a full version in the furure!
I don't know why I always download these games at night but I somehow find myself doing so, now I'm scared and had to just save it for tomorrow, haha well if it isn't the consequences of my actions! So far it's very interesting and I had tried out the different choices to a certain extent.
This was way creepier than I thought it would be, haha. Good luck on whatever you do next!
I hope you continue this, it was really good! <3
well yeah this is awesome major ddlc vibes love our yandere ai
I'm I the only one who can't play:((((
wahhhhh this is so cuteeeeeeeee!!! I hope it gets continued because Nial is just so...🥺
ok but this game is so creepy though BUT I STILL LOVE IT
UGHHH i cant believe this is only the demooo i love this so much :<
Quick question. Is the player only able play as a girl in this game? Is the MC gender-neutral? or can the player choose there gender?
This game uses gender neutral pronouns for the player :)
AAAA I LOVE ALL OF YOUR PROJECTS!! all of the storylines is really amazing~ especially this one i really like Niel's design and really curious about the story behind him. i also made some quick sketches of him in the cafe, i hope you will continue the project in the future but do please take care of yourself and remember to rest ^^
OMG THANK YOU your art is amazing (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) <3<3<3 I’m really happy you like my games!
THIS GAME GOT SCARIER WHAT THE FUCKKKKK
HELP IM SHITTING MYSELFFFF
i love this game sm aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I really hope you finish this game! I love it!
I love the creepiness, the conflict, all is amazing! I hope you decide to continue this game :)
Yes.
(P.s: I'm working on my own visual novel and it was inspired by this but not the exact same thing just some of the things are similar!"
I really enjoyed this demo and would definitely recommend checking it out. Genuinely disturbing at times. Great story, beautiful art. I'm really looking forward to the full release. Thank you to the creator for an entertaining time 😊
Omg thank you for playing my game! This version is extremely unfinished so sorry for any errors 🥲
Please don't be so hard on yourself, you have done an amazing job and should be proud of yourself ☺️
IKLOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
NOT the cliffhanger TT I can't wait for more. I hope everyone was able to put two and two together near the end. I really enjoyed it overall.
i really enjoyed this demo!! won't get too spoiler-y but parts of it genuinely creeped me out ;-; .. i saw you said you had dyslexia and that's the reason for the spelling mistakes, but don't worry, i could still understand what you meant while reading!! plus, you could easily get a friend or someone online to volunteer to spell-check for you for free!! anyways, i really look forward to seeing more of this game but i sincerely hope it isn't the cliched "turns out it was all the MC's mental illness" trope xD ..
It's really hard to write with my dyslexia and sometimes the comments make me think it's unreadable so I'm glad it's somewhat understandable :b. The volunteer proof reader is a good idea, but I'd feel really bad if since I can't pay them :,). And thank you so much for enjoying my game! More creepy bits to come! (Also I have a strong dislike to the 'it was all because of the MC's mental illness trope' so don't worry ;b)
it's reassuring to hear that someone else dislikes that trope xD and don't worry, the text was fully readable and understandable to me, and didn't hinder my enjoyment at all!! i really enjoyed this demo :D!! plus, lots of people really wouldn't mind volunteering, but if you really feel guilty then maybe you can offer beta testing so they're technically getting something out of it (except it's early access to content instead of payment)?? just an idea!!
That's a really good idea! I'm not sure who would be willing to be a beta tester, but I'll ask around! Thank you
the game is really fun and good so far, but since the text is in similar colors to its' background its kinda hard to read, other thank that and spelling errors its a good game!
Thank you! I'll change the colors so it's easier to read :)
this is really good so far! i really like the artwork, its super cute! i do hope that in later versions the ui might be updated though, the font is super small for the buttons on the bottom of the text boxes, and speaking of them, the text boxes also look a little lacking in my opinion. there are also a good amount of spelling errors that need to be fixed, and maybe having volunteer proofreaders or beta testers could help with that. i do like whats here so far though like i said! nial is really cute and i would love to see more of him! <3
Thank you so much for the feedback! Unfortunately I have no money to pay proof readers or beta testers ;-;. I've tried to learn a little more about gui, and stuff, so hopefully it's up to standard when I update it lol :,)
hey if you want could do it for free
sorry for the late response! but, as someone else offered, there are probably people willing to do proofreading or beta testing for you for free, if you set up a discord server for your game development there would probably be people willing to do so in there! but i also understand if you dont want to have people do that sort of work for free, as it is still legitimate work.