Great story so far, very engaging. I played Chapter 1 a while ago and really enjoyed the story. Now I've finally been able to pick it back up again and I'm working my way through the other chapters.
I would like to bring up that in chapter 2 (and possibly more, I haven't gotten that far yet), the game seems to be mixing up my relationship title to Petal with Rose/Chuck's father. For example, if I refer to myself as Petal's godfather, it refers to Rose's father as "godfather". Petal also refers to me as "father", but only in certain lines. This didn't seem intentional and I figured I'd let you know.
I'd love to help. It's much easier for me to assist you on Discord. You can get there through this link: Discord
It sounds like you have an older version of the game. The current build is 4.0.6 and it should have taken care of those issues. Can you tell me what version you're playing?
I understand if it makes you uncomfortable. It is a scary message. Unfortunately Android isn't as easy to work with as Windows or Mac. In order to move your saves from one build to another, the APK needs access to your files. Otherwise all the saves you make from one build won't carry over to the next because the game can't locate the saves because they don't have access to your files. It's a game built in Ren'Py, it doesn't collect any information or transmit any data. It's nothing malicious but if it makes you uncomfortable, I recommend playing on PC.
O.M.G. what a ending !!! i just hope she's on the *( THE PILL )* after that i had a feeling something like that would happen, but the teasing a writing the story was a nice touch, can wait to see how you top this chapter and what a good build up to it, not just here it is come get it, PUNN INTEDED !!! all i can say is good writing and WOOWWW !!!
Excellent chapter. I look forward to the final one and also seeing Bliss in action though I hope when you do Moment of Bliss that Petal isn't totally left behind. She is far too adorable. I'd love to see the relationship with her continue even after the vacation is over. Well done
You should really charge more for your work. Just finished Chapter 4 and it's incredible. The renders, the animations, the music... amazing. And good to know that your Patreon is back up again!
I can't replicate the error. Perhaps you could try using a different browser? If it's an issue with itch.io, you'll have to contact them to get it resolved. I only post my work here, I don't operate the site. I'm sorry you're having trouble. :-/
I would love a scene where Petal pee for her daddy. No bizzare but loving scene where hw takes on hes daughters pee would be worth many bucks. Anyhow, a great piece all trough and keep it coming.
So I am just wondering am I the only one who doesn't like moon personality she comes off really cold and unlikeable it just I would think it a bit better if wasn't arrogance/ mean
Moon will give us an additional perspective on the MC. Her game will be the third in the series. While I'm confident in my ability to change your mind about her if you play Over the Moon, I have divided the series into three parts because they're three separate styles. If there's a particular style you dislike, you can avoid it without missing the other styles from the other games. Thank you for playing.
sorry I forgot there name for a minute I actually talking about bliss not moon I just think that she really mean in video chat with any understanding or tenderness not that she as kind as petal but a little caring or at least understand could made a bit better
Bliss is a lot like Dallas. Tough on the outside, sweet on the inside. She's a bit of a tomboy. She'll play an important role in helping Chester grow his character. Again, you might not like her but that's why I'm splitting the games up. I bet if you give her a chance though, you'll enjoy her personality. She's going to be a lot of fun.
so what saying is we just haven't got chance to see her softer side cuz I got say video call did run me a bit the wrong in that it seemed that had no understanding what what motivation to give a better quality of life which I don't know like I said it kinda rub the wrong way
Very interesting choice to really deep-dive into the dynamic of this relationship. The character of Chuck was an unexpected addition, really not splitting hairs with his purpose in the story lol. I think it might have been cool to give Petal a real reason to be so self-concious, she really gives off "excessively hot nerd that nobody notices for some reason in a rom-com" vibes. Like an eating disorder could have created an interesting dialogue. Just would have helped me with my immersion a little, but I get that she has to be super hot for the purposes of the game. The fact that you stare the main issue of the taboo relationship so starkly in the face was enough to get my approval though. Great work!
We won't be touching on feminization. A Petal Among Thorns does have light femdom but not the traditional kind. A Moment of Bliss will have heavier elements of femdom. I can't explain too much for spoiler reasons but Bliss is definitely more intense.
That's all cool. I'm not great with visuals, but if I build the narrative, would you be willing to collaborate on a project? I was really impressed with the interactivity. (I'm teaching myself how to use the Ren'Py engine right now, actually
Starting a project like this is a big commitment but it can be extremely rewarding. I certainly encourage giving it a try. Unfortunately, I have years worth of projects that I'm invested in so I won't be looking for any partnerships for a while. With all the tools available today though, you can learn how to construct exceptional visuals. I personally use Daz for all my posing and animating. I wish you luck in your endeavors.
Really amazing work you've done so far. I would definitely rate this in my top 5 of the many dozen VN's that I have checked out. Keep up the amazing work. Can't wait to see more
I must admit you did an excellent job with this game. The narrative and graphics are just WOW. I love your art style. I can say it's the best graphics quality I have seen recently. Don't give up on this project and everything you are working on. Compared to other similar game / story makers, you are simply top quality. This story reminds me of my life story, not in this type of relationship and not in the same age difference (I was then 34 and she 19), but it brings back memories. Oh it does... :) So do a good job and don't let the fans wait. Regards.
Thank you, sedacred! It's been a journey but after two years of working on these things, I've reached a level of quality I'm happy with. And from here, I hope to get even better! I appreciate your support.
I loved avalon and am really enjoying Petal as well. Great writing, as usual! I kind of wish Petal was a step daughter, but understand it wouldn't be quite as Forbidden! Dialogue between characters is great - really enjoy your work!!
The story is amazingly engaging I actually was suprised and outraged with what happened to chuck in his past and I found it difficult to play this just for the pleasure of the mature content. I did find few times where the dialog was off because of an extra word being thrown in but they were far and few between that it didn't bother me at all and it kind of fit because when your having a charged conversation it makes sense that you won't always talk in perfect english. The art is top notch I thought because it was a ren'play that it would be a little clunky but to my suprise it was beautifully done all the way through. I know that every time the relationship took another I felt I was actually taking that step with the characters. The use of mostly first person perspectives for the main character really added the the ability to be immersed in the story. I look forward to seeing this story continue and even the sequel that is talked about in the ending scene of chapter 3. You did an amazing job on this story and I know that you said this is an experament of your and that your trying something new with story but you did such an amazing job so far with this that I wouldn't have been able to tell if. For those who are looking for a casual story driven spicy game this is definatly worth a try and don't worry if your not to big into the taboo side of fetishism because the whole story basically says that they are two fully grown adults and so it shouldn't matter. So far this game is a 10/10 and only getting better.
love this story, and the artwork of the characters too, a fan of digital novels like this but id say this is one of the best ones,so far iv'e read many.
Hey, Lockheart. Just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story. I first discovered Avalon a few months ago, and absolutely fell in love with the characters and their stories, so I was already excited to see Petal's story. As other's have already stated, it's been sweet and endearing and the characters feel like real people that I would love to meet on the street one day and strike up a conversation with. You have done a wonderful job and I am looking forward to the next chapters.
Thank you, toddlerv! The story should get much more interesting as we proceed forward. Especially A Moment of Bliss, the sequel. We'll see a lot more of the story open up as we bring in some new characters to the mix. I appreciate the praise and I'm going to keep working hard to bring you more great stories. :-)
Thank you very much. This has been a very good experience thus far. My wife and I have been trying to have kids for so long yet after we read a petal among thorns up to volume 3 we actually started roleplaying, a bit of domination (from both sides) and we are expecting twins. We were glued to the screen wanting to know what happens next. We also started naked yoga a few months ago and. Your novel is really the reason that we are expecting. I am sorry we could not buy the novel finances are low because we are saving for our kids future. You made our marriage more of a pleasure. I'm 44 my wife 28 yet she said with this novel I am 30 years old again. Though we only have two sounds from the novel (swallowing & jumping in the pool) it does not really matter. I thank you. You are the best!! Fans to the end.
I'm glad you're enjoying it, Hein! Congratulations on the twins. That's going to be an incredible journey. Thank you for playing and I'll try to have the next part out as soon as possible. :-)
I just played through all 3 chapters in nearly one sitting. It was absolutely enthralling! All I could think about all day was clocking out of work and continuing the game. I stayed up all night playing it. Music is wonderful and complimented each scene perfectly. Petal's character is crazy good, and her conversations, her dialogue, the way she teases and dances around topics is very artfully done, and really brings her to life very effectively. If there is any small con to be found, the MC sometimes comes off tropey or cringy, but still his character is leagues better than what you typically find in entertainment of this subject matter. What a stellar experience and I just want to play through it over and over again. Can't wait for chapters 4 and 5 and the sequel. Instant loyal fan.
It's always wonderful to hear praise from a fan. I appreciate it, Metaldiceman. I'm going to try to get a progress report out on Monday to update everyone one the progress of Chapter Four. Thanks again!
First of all really awesome novel! I tried the first 2 chapters and loved it! I bought the 3rd chapter and started over, but now Petal won't use the name I chose for her to call me. I tried changing it in the names and relations, but she still just says dad. The name I chose did work before I installed the 3rd chapter, any help would be appreciated.
To clarify she uses what I want when being intimate, but not what I want when she addresses me normally. Also this is on the android download, haven't tried it on PC yet.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! This latest release has been an interesting experiment. I removed the censorship, which means I hardcoded in that the MC is Petal's father. I hadn't realized how many people don't like that and prefer the option to choose. I'll add back in the option to choose the relationship titles in the next update. I apologize, Kamaralyn.
I see lol! I had her say Daddy since it seemed cuter that way, so didn't really know it was censored :). Enjoying the second play through either way. No need to apologize, keep up the great work! Looking forward to what's to come!
Also the art is beautiful and the music choices are spot on :)!
So, yet another review for anyone on the fence about whether or not this novel is worth their time, let alone an actual price. Let me give a brief preface before beginning. I never read visual novels. I have always disliked them. I prefer more interactivity personally. 90% of the time I immediately pass a game over if it's classified as a visual novel. I honestly have no idea how I ended up on this page. I can only assume I did something wonderful to someone somewhere in my life, and this is my reward.
This story is a magnificent piece of fiction. It manages to be erotic without being vulgar. It's sweet without being sappy. It's appealing without being pandering. Every moment is heartwarming and engaging. The protagonist is both relatable and understandable. Petal is a character you feel is a real person, with a real personality, and real desires. You feel the struggles of the characters and their desire to continue exploring their new reality in every frame. You feel compelled to continue, every day in the story being a wonderful new experience. Which is precisely what this novel is. It's not a mere series of pictures solely designed to stimulate, it's not just a story, it's an experience.
This is the only game I have ever paid for on Itch.io. It is certainly the only visual novel I've ever enjoyed (I did try many before deciding I disliked the genre). This is the only time I have ever created a profile on a site, ANY site, for the sole purpose of leaving a review. I did that because I felt so very much compelled to encourage others to take this journey. You will not regret it.
Thank you, Jotunheim551! This was an incredibly warm and encouraging review. I sure appreciate it. One of my main goals within my art is to write about lovable people that are easy to bond with. A major problem with porn these days is that it's often stale, bland, and flat. Romance, teasing, build up, and anticipation are important aspects of sex often missed in nearly every industry. When you bring these aspects into a story, you can greatly enhance the experience for the reader. I take great care to sculpt my characters to be actual people you'd want to engage with in real life and not just some random pizza man bringing a one-topping pie with extra sausage.
Your review has given me inspiration to work even harder. I'll make sure Chapter 4 is exceptional. Thank you again!
i dont know what made me buy porn like whyy i never payed for it i hate reading i swear to jesus christ i pressed the spacebutton so quickly i probaly made some record but now about the game thats the first porn related item i bought im 22y/o i dont even have buyers remorse
the game looks stunning the story is probably too ^^ the 2.70 euro i payed was so worth it espacialy woring for my money i know how hard it is to get somebody to apreciate your work
im sorry i didnt pay more next time i will (if you stop teasing ) xD
Lol! I'm glad you enjoyed it. A good Adult Visual Novel is more than porn, it's an experience. You build a bond with the characters so the sexy content is much spicier. In fact, Adult Visual Novels can often be so wonderful to experience that you get addicted and want to try out other AVNs. Soon enough you're sucked into a community of fun, wholesome, and interesting people who you build friendships with. :-)
It just each lewd game I play Christianity always seem or reieveing of a joke I mean Jesus whore it hurt I know that I should play lewd game to begin with but these dogs just make feel worse
If you're referring to the joke about Jesus being an attention whore, it wasn't so much a jab at religion as it was just silly banter between a professional comedian and his daughter. I wouldn't read too much into it. I wasn't trying to advocate for or against any religion. :-)
Okay it just a lil over the top I guess it doesn't help most lewd games poke fun at it a alot I but I thank you taking the time to address this bc not sounds like a brat but that did hurt a bit
Great Game! But since the newest update she has to be my daughter. Will it be able to change like in the first Version or is this a part of the novel and can't be change?
I know it's jarring for some people but the censorship confused a lot of people because they weren't sure what the relationship was supposed to be. The allure of the game is supposed to be the taboo aspect. If we get enough complaints about the titles, we'll change it back so you can name them whatever you want. We'll add yours to the list. We have seen a decent number of people wish for the old system back so we'll see. Thank you for your feedback, KercoAbi!
I recommend starting over from the beginning because there are some changes to the game. If you don't want to read through Chapters 1 and 2 again, you can fast forward through the game with Ctrl very quickly to get to Chapter 3.
You can find all my work on my itch.io page. My first completed game is Avalon and I have a few other side projects I worked on but never completed that you can also find here. That's all I've done so far. Thank you for your interest. :-)
I wanted to say great on this petal game I have enjoyed very much not many focus on single retionship this way and I do enjoy singaleular one when they well told
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A real diamond in the rough! Everything just clicked. Maybe we were meant to each other????
Fantastic story. You can bet your left nut I'll be here for all your future projects.
does it include chapter 1, 2 and 3?
Yes, every release has all previous Chapters.
Wow! All 4 chapters fits in 1 gb?! Great job! The game is very good.
Update please bro
Chapter 5 should be out around the end of February or early March. :-)
Very large time shit
bruh the game is listed for free... You want more frequent updates then support the creator and chip in if You don't like it then move on.
My man!
Great story so far, very engaging. I played Chapter 1 a while ago and really enjoyed the story. Now I've finally been able to pick it back up again and I'm working my way through the other chapters.
I would like to bring up that in chapter 2 (and possibly more, I haven't gotten that far yet), the game seems to be mixing up my relationship title to Petal with Rose/Chuck's father. For example, if I refer to myself as Petal's godfather, it refers to Rose's father as "godfather". Petal also refers to me as "father", but only in certain lines. This didn't seem intentional and I figured I'd let you know.
I'd love to help. It's much easier for me to assist you on Discord. You can get there through this link: Discord
It sounds like you have an older version of the game. The current build is 4.0.6 and it should have taken care of those issues. Can you tell me what version you're playing?
HOLY GOD!!
Chapter 4...Damn. I will definitely be investing to you hard work. Can't wait for more.
I understand if it makes you uncomfortable. It is a scary message. Unfortunately Android isn't as easy to work with as Windows or Mac. In order to move your saves from one build to another, the APK needs access to your files. Otherwise all the saves you make from one build won't carry over to the next because the game can't locate the saves because they don't have access to your files. It's a game built in Ren'Py, it doesn't collect any information or transmit any data. It's nothing malicious but if it makes you uncomfortable, I recommend playing on PC.
O.M.G. what a ending !!! i just hope she's on the *( THE PILL )* after that i had a feeling something like that would happen, but the teasing a writing the story was a nice touch, can wait to see how you top this chapter and what a good build up to it, not just here it is come get it, PUNN INTEDED !!! all i can say is good writing and WOOWWW !!!
Thank you. I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it. I'm working extra hard on the last Chapter and then the next game should be even wilder.
I downloaded v.4.0.5 and it launches but I can't seem to access the new chapter/s. What am I doing wrong
Please contact me on my Discord for assistance. I can't diagnose from here. I need some information to help you proceed. https://discord.gg/S6AtPA2
I seem to be unable to change her from addressing me as "Guardian"
Yeah I am having the same issue, the customisation of the names and relationships isn't working?!
Are you on Android and have you started from a saved point?
Same here, and yes. Was fine till I saved now it is default and I cannot change it.
Please contact me on my Discord for assistance. I can't diagnose from here. I need some information to help you proceed. https://discord.gg/S6AtPA2
Excellent chapter. I look forward to the final one and also seeing Bliss in action though I hope when you do Moment of Bliss that Petal isn't totally left behind. She is far too adorable. I'd love to see the relationship with her continue even after the vacation is over. Well done
Petal will still be a big part of Chester's life. That will never change. :-)
You should really charge more for your work. Just finished Chapter 4 and it's incredible. The renders, the animations, the music... amazing. And good to know that your Patreon is back up again!
I can't download the new version. It takes me to the itch.io homepage when I attempt to pay.
I can't replicate the error. Perhaps you could try using a different browser? If it's an issue with itch.io, you'll have to contact them to get it resolved. I only post my work here, I don't operate the site. I'm sorry you're having trouble. :-/
It seems like a VPN was causing an issue. Disconnected from the VPN, and the site behaved correctly. Thanks for the reply.
I would love a scene where Petal pee for her daddy. No bizzare but loving scene where hw takes on hes daughters pee would be worth many bucks. Anyhow, a great piece all trough and keep it coming.
Please give the discord link to join
You really have a nice game. When next update is coming make it more faster. Make the sex low and make the romantic scene high.
So I am just wondering am I the only one who doesn't like moon personality she comes off really cold and unlikeable it just I would think it a bit better if wasn't arrogance/ mean
Moon will give us an additional perspective on the MC. Her game will be the third in the series. While I'm confident in my ability to change your mind about her if you play Over the Moon, I have divided the series into three parts because they're three separate styles. If there's a particular style you dislike, you can avoid it without missing the other styles from the other games. Thank you for playing.
sorry I forgot there name for a minute I actually talking about bliss not moon I just think that she really mean in video chat with any understanding or tenderness not that she as kind as petal but a little caring or at least understand could made a bit better
Bliss is a lot like Dallas. Tough on the outside, sweet on the inside. She's a bit of a tomboy. She'll play an important role in helping Chester grow his character. Again, you might not like her but that's why I'm splitting the games up. I bet if you give her a chance though, you'll enjoy her personality. She's going to be a lot of fun.
so what saying is we just haven't got chance to see her softer side cuz I got say video call did run me a bit the wrong in that it seemed that had no understanding what what motivation to give a better quality of life which I don't know like I said it kinda rub the wrong way
Um having issues finding discord u got a link?
Here you go.
Very interesting choice to really deep-dive into the dynamic of this relationship. The character of Chuck was an unexpected addition, really not splitting hairs with his purpose in the story lol. I think it might have been cool to give Petal a real reason to be so self-concious, she really gives off "excessively hot nerd that nobody notices for some reason in a rom-com" vibes. Like an eating disorder could have created an interesting dialogue. Just would have helped me with my immersion a little, but I get that she has to be super hot for the purposes of the game. The fact that you stare the main issue of the taboo relationship so starkly in the face was enough to get my approval though. Great work!
This game is amazing, what are the chances of getting some femdom feminization scenes?
Hey tproject,
We won't be touching on feminization. A Petal Among Thorns does have light femdom but not the traditional kind. A Moment of Bliss will have heavier elements of femdom. I can't explain too much for spoiler reasons but Bliss is definitely more intense.
Thanks for your support!
That's all cool. I'm not great with visuals, but if I build the narrative, would you be willing to collaborate on a project? I was really impressed with the interactivity. (I'm teaching myself how to use the Ren'Py engine right now, actually
Starting a project like this is a big commitment but it can be extremely rewarding. I certainly encourage giving it a try. Unfortunately, I have years worth of projects that I'm invested in so I won't be looking for any partnerships for a while. With all the tools available today though, you can learn how to construct exceptional visuals. I personally use Daz for all my posing and animating. I wish you luck in your endeavors.
Thank you so much for your time I'll look into Daz. I'm excited to see what you release in the future!
Um how hard to make characters and such? I suck and art mostly but I kind wish I sucked at it less
It's like any other skill. The more you do it, the better you'll get at it. It's much more possible than it seems at first but it does take practice.
Really amazing work you've done so far. I would definitely rate this in my top 5 of the many dozen VN's that I have checked out. Keep up the amazing work. Can't wait to see more
Thank you! I appreciate the praise. And we're so close to the next release now. I'm exciting to show everyone.
I must admit you did an excellent job with this game. The narrative and graphics are just WOW. I love your art style. I can say it's the best graphics quality I have seen recently. Don't give up on this project and everything you are working on. Compared to other similar game / story makers, you are simply top quality. This story reminds me of my life story, not in this type of relationship and not in the same age difference (I was then 34 and she 19), but it brings back memories. Oh it does... :) So do a good job and don't let the fans wait. Regards.
Thank you, sedacred! It's been a journey but after two years of working on these things, I've reached a level of quality I'm happy with. And from here, I hope to get even better! I appreciate your support.
It's really a great game you have. Make the update fast.and reduce the sex scean. And make sure there will be lot of romantic scene.
I loved avalon and am really enjoying Petal as well. Great writing, as usual! I kind of wish Petal was a step daughter, but understand it wouldn't be quite as Forbidden! Dialogue between characters is great - really enjoy your work!!
its okay now i think found a way to get it to work.
Excellent storyline and dialog; superb quality renders. Looking forward to more of Lockheart's work on this story (and others)!
The story is amazingly engaging I actually was suprised and outraged with what happened to chuck in his past and I found it difficult to play this just for the pleasure of the mature content. I did find few times where the dialog was off because of an extra word being thrown in but they were far and few between that it didn't bother me at all and it kind of fit because when your having a charged conversation it makes sense that you won't always talk in perfect english. The art is top notch I thought because it was a ren'play that it would be a little clunky but to my suprise it was beautifully done all the way through. I know that every time the relationship took another I felt I was actually taking that step with the characters. The use of mostly first person perspectives for the main character really added the the ability to be immersed in the story. I look forward to seeing this story continue and even the sequel that is talked about in the ending scene of chapter 3. You did an amazing job on this story and I know that you said this is an experament of your and that your trying something new with story but you did such an amazing job so far with this that I wouldn't have been able to tell if. For those who are looking for a casual story driven spicy game this is definatly worth a try and don't worry if your not to big into the taboo side of fetishism because the whole story basically says that they are two fully grown adults and so it shouldn't matter. So far this game is a 10/10 and only getting better.
love this story, and the artwork of the characters too, a fan of digital novels like this but id say this is one of the best ones,so far iv'e read many.
Hey, Lockheart. Just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story. I first discovered Avalon a few months ago, and absolutely fell in love with the characters and their stories, so I was already excited to see Petal's story. As other's have already stated, it's been sweet and endearing and the characters feel like real people that I would love to meet on the street one day and strike up a conversation with. You have done a wonderful job and I am looking forward to the next chapters.
Thank you, toddlerv! The story should get much more interesting as we proceed forward. Especially A Moment of Bliss, the sequel. We'll see a lot more of the story open up as we bring in some new characters to the mix. I appreciate the praise and I'm going to keep working hard to bring you more great stories. :-)
Thank you very much. This has been a very good experience thus far. My wife and I have been trying to have kids for so long yet after we read a petal among thorns up to volume 3 we actually started roleplaying, a bit of domination (from both sides) and we are expecting twins. We were glued to the screen wanting to know what happens next. We also started naked yoga a few months ago and. Your novel is really the reason that we are expecting. I am sorry we could not buy the novel finances are low because we are saving for our kids future. You made our marriage more of a pleasure. I'm 44 my wife 28 yet she said with this novel I am 30 years old again. Though we only have two sounds from the novel (swallowing & jumping in the pool) it does not really matter. I thank you. You are the best!! Fans to the end.
I'm glad you're enjoying it, Hein! Congratulations on the twins. That's going to be an incredible journey. Thank you for playing and I'll try to have the next part out as soon as possible. :-)
I just played through all 3 chapters in nearly one sitting. It was absolutely enthralling! All I could think about all day was clocking out of work and continuing the game. I stayed up all night playing it. Music is wonderful and complimented each scene perfectly. Petal's character is crazy good, and her conversations, her dialogue, the way she teases and dances around topics is very artfully done, and really brings her to life very effectively. If there is any small con to be found, the MC sometimes comes off tropey or cringy, but still his character is leagues better than what you typically find in entertainment of this subject matter. What a stellar experience and I just want to play through it over and over again. Can't wait for chapters 4 and 5 and the sequel. Instant loyal fan.
It's always wonderful to hear praise from a fan. I appreciate it, Metaldiceman. I'm going to try to get a progress report out on Monday to update everyone one the progress of Chapter Four. Thanks again!
First of all really awesome novel! I tried the first 2 chapters and loved it! I bought the 3rd chapter and started over, but now Petal won't use the name I chose for her to call me. I tried changing it in the names and relations, but she still just says dad. The name I chose did work before I installed the 3rd chapter, any help would be appreciated.
To clarify she uses what I want when being intimate, but not what I want when she addresses me normally. Also this is on the android download, haven't tried it on PC yet.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! This latest release has been an interesting experiment. I removed the censorship, which means I hardcoded in that the MC is Petal's father. I hadn't realized how many people don't like that and prefer the option to choose. I'll add back in the option to choose the relationship titles in the next update. I apologize, Kamaralyn.
I see lol! I had her say Daddy since it seemed cuter that way, so didn't really know it was censored :). Enjoying the second play through either way. No need to apologize, keep up the great work! Looking forward to what's to come!
Also the art is beautiful and the music choices are spot on :)!
So, yet another review for anyone on the fence about whether or not this novel is worth their time, let alone an actual price. Let me give a brief preface before beginning. I never read visual novels. I have always disliked them. I prefer more interactivity personally. 90% of the time I immediately pass a game over if it's classified as a visual novel. I honestly have no idea how I ended up on this page. I can only assume I did something wonderful to someone somewhere in my life, and this is my reward.
This story is a magnificent piece of fiction. It manages to be erotic without being vulgar. It's sweet without being sappy. It's appealing without being pandering. Every moment is heartwarming and engaging. The protagonist is both relatable and understandable. Petal is a character you feel is a real person, with a real personality, and real desires. You feel the struggles of the characters and their desire to continue exploring their new reality in every frame. You feel compelled to continue, every day in the story being a wonderful new experience. Which is precisely what this novel is. It's not a mere series of pictures solely designed to stimulate, it's not just a story, it's an experience.
This is the only game I have ever paid for on Itch.io. It is certainly the only visual novel I've ever enjoyed (I did try many before deciding I disliked the genre). This is the only time I have ever created a profile on a site, ANY site, for the sole purpose of leaving a review. I did that because I felt so very much compelled to encourage others to take this journey. You will not regret it.
tl;dr buy the damn game.
Thank you, Jotunheim551! This was an incredibly warm and encouraging review. I sure appreciate it. One of my main goals within my art is to write about lovable people that are easy to bond with. A major problem with porn these days is that it's often stale, bland, and flat. Romance, teasing, build up, and anticipation are important aspects of sex often missed in nearly every industry. When you bring these aspects into a story, you can greatly enhance the experience for the reader. I take great care to sculpt my characters to be actual people you'd want to engage with in real life and not just some random pizza man bringing a one-topping pie with extra sausage.
Your review has given me inspiration to work even harder. I'll make sure Chapter 4 is exceptional. Thank you again!
i dont know what made me buy porn like whyy i never payed for it i hate reading i swear to jesus christ i pressed the spacebutton so quickly i probaly made some record but now about the game thats the first porn related item i bought im 22y/o i dont even have buyers remorse
the game looks stunning the story is probably too ^^ the 2.70 euro i payed was so worth it espacialy woring for my money i know how hard it is to get somebody to apreciate your work
im sorry i didnt pay more next time i will (if you stop teasing ) xD
Lol! I'm glad you enjoyed it. A good Adult Visual Novel is more than porn, it's an experience. You build a bond with the characters so the sexy content is much spicier. In fact, Adult Visual Novels can often be so wonderful to experience that you get addicted and want to try out other AVNs. Soon enough you're sucked into a community of fun, wholesome, and interesting people who you build friendships with. :-)
You are officially my first purchase on this site. Love the game.
Thank you! I'm excited to bring the full story to fruition. Your support goes a long way and I appreciate it! :-)
Um can't also why one reglion get picked on just wondering
I'm sorry, I'm having trouble understand. Are you asking me why a religion gets picked on? How do you mean? Can you rephrase the question?
It just each lewd game I play Christianity always seem or reieveing of a joke I mean Jesus whore it hurt I know that I should play lewd game to begin with but these dogs just make feel worse
If you're referring to the joke about Jesus being an attention whore, it wasn't so much a jab at religion as it was just silly banter between a professional comedian and his daughter. I wouldn't read too much into it. I wasn't trying to advocate for or against any religion. :-)
Okay it just a lil over the top I guess it doesn't help most lewd games poke fun at it a alot I but I thank you taking the time to address this bc not sounds like a brat but that did hurt a bit
Great Game!
But since the newest update she has to be my daughter.
Will it be able to change like in the first Version or is this a part of the novel and can't be change?
I know it's jarring for some people but the censorship confused a lot of people because they weren't sure what the relationship was supposed to be. The allure of the game is supposed to be the taboo aspect. If we get enough complaints about the titles, we'll change it back so you can name them whatever you want. We'll add yours to the list. We have seen a decent number of people wish for the old system back so we'll see. Thank you for your feedback, KercoAbi!
Okay I ask stupid question why two for each device?
I'm not sure I understand the question. Can you rephrase?
there seems to two links for same download
Oh, yes. It's the same file. I just give a mirror site to download from in case people don't or can't download from MEGA.
o okay I usually run into a problem when it's not mega
I tried to load a save from ch 2 but I just get an error message and it starts from the beginning. Any ideas?
I recommend starting over from the beginning because there are some changes to the game. If you don't want to read through Chapters 1 and 2 again, you can fast forward through the game with Ctrl very quickly to get to Chapter 3.
Have u made any other games?
You can find all my work on my itch.io page. My first completed game is Avalon and I have a few other side projects I worked on but never completed that you can also find here. That's all I've done so far. Thank you for your interest. :-)
I wanted to say great on this petal game I have enjoyed very much not many focus on single retionship this way and I do enjoy singaleular one when they well told
This game is absolutely fucking BEAUTIFUL. Your writing is godlike. THANK YOU!