i see. maybe because i guessed 2 cosplays wrong? its kinda sad that the MC started rejecting her after that. she was my favorite girl :-( edit: oh now it seams i get another chance :)
Dude you are legendary, what a master piece eventhough its still under development. Amazing story , details of all the character (except MC's dick dude that looks like rubber)other than that ur game is so perfect not like porn and some other game with no story and strange character sex scenes
Hi! Thank you so much for this wonderful game! Very very detailed and well written. Loved it every second of it. Please take your time man, you are doing an awesome job! Thank you!!
i finished game and i can tell, that i love it so much. I love your work and i loved it from beginning to the end of this version.
Story is amazing written, i enjoyed every dialogue and characters too.
I can´t lie, i fell in love with Sophie haha. She is very cute and she love japanese culture. I loved scenes with her especially in karaoke bar and when she sang a song haha. I enjoyed scene, when i had to guess costumes from games. I was suprised, that Dead or Alive was mentioned there. ( Sophie was so cute as Maria Rose hahaha. ) It would be nice if there was more, that "little" games.
I can tell, that there is beautiful environment. I like that "japanese" style. You chose very well. There are so many beautiful things. Characters and their facial expresions and their temperament and differences. I think, characters are shown as real persons with their problems and i appreciate that so much.
When i played it for first time, Shinigami killed me and i asked myself: what did ? I started to play it again and then, she did not kill me. This is what is amazing at your work. It made me play again and change somenthing.
I have in my head so many things, what i want to tell you, but i don´t want to bore you haha. But i can thank you for the best MURMUR. You have talent to write beautiful story. Thank you again.
I have finished what there is of the story two days ago and, this is such a weeb thing to say but, I'm in love with Shinigami. In the sense that she will randomly pop in my mind many times a day and thinking about her feels so good. I don't recall having ever felt "in love" for a fictional character. She was extremely hot before, but her apology to Sophie and what it entails for the future of the story gave depth to everything that she ever does and it made me love her.
I'm awed at how you can make her seem so powerful, attractive, dominant, yet wholly realistic with a good heart that can subtly get hurt.
I'm also eager to see more of the power games between Kate, Helen and Liz.
Also, Sophie absolutely, brutally melted my heart! Which makes me feel guilty for gushing over Shinigami like that. Now I understand how useful and powerful a good date can be...
A small detail that caught my attention and that I like very much is that sometimes the characters' facial expressions are considered sufficient for an answer, and they truly are. Those expressions are also well made throughout the story. I appreciate the effort you have put on those.
I came to write all this because I had been pacing around, wondering how anyone can write characters that could cause such deep feelings as Shinigami and Sophie have done for me. What someone has to be like to be able to write these characters. I don't think I should expect an answer to that and my intention is only to show my appreciation for your work.
You are an amazing writer. Thank you so much.
I have also been wondering if there are any other stories you have written and wouldn't mind sharing!
Hello, and thank you very much for your kind words. They even made me tear up a little, haha. It was heartwarming to read. I had the experience of falling for a character from a visual novel, it was Lilly from Katawa Shoujo, so I think I understand you on this. And I'm glad that you liked my game to such an extent ^^
I don't really think I'm a good writer, to be honest, I'm just doing what I like. And trying to make characters I would like to tell a story about. I'm not a professional by any means, so I don't have any secrets or anything. And it's my first project like this, so I can't give you more for now, haha ^^"
And sadly work on the game takes a long time, since I'm trying my best to write, it's a slow process, just as rendering every line of text is. But you can always look for the progress at my patreon in the about section, or on my discord. And hopefully, you won't be disappointed with further updates~
Thank you again for your wholehearted message. Such feedback makes it all worth it.
That's funny, because your work reminded me of Katawa Shoujo. :) A friend recommended it to me and I expected absolutely nothing, and though I ended up caring for many of the characters, what struck me the most was that it gave me a desire to live.
Murmur reminds me of Katawa Shoujo because it has been giving me that same desire to live. I hope it doesn't sound bad, it's just like Sophie sort of said, I have a need to escape the mundane.
I actually didn't even consider that this could be your first project.
I will obviously be following your progress and waiting for updates! Cheers!
So I went back to play some of the previous parts, and I noticed that the office sex scene with Shinigami is now replaced with the blowjob scene now? Do the scenes vary based on the previous meeting choice of whether he answers he thinks she's beautiful or if he loves her? Or is it just the blowjob scene now?
Noooo, the game is soo good an dit just cut off like that with a plot twist.... Either way this game is very good and I hope you keep working on it! I have met many game creator who gave up on their project. I don't want this to happen here. Looking foward to the next update!
As a lesbian I was a little bit sceptic (of course) as the sex scenes mainly are about male on female.
But what could I say? I never thought I'd find so many interesting and different female protagonists in this game. They all have their stories and different to many other games of this genre. And for a change it is interesting to see that there are (finally) different sizes of boobs. This is one thing absolutely lacking in most other games.
I also think it was a very good decision to explain what happened to the main protagonist and also to give him special powers that explain why everyone around him gets so horny. It adds a nice touch and a bit of immersion and credibility to the story.
I can't wait for the next free release. :)
Could you explain a bit better? You say one of the characters kills you and ends your game ? Was thinking of trying this, but thats a little worrisome.
There is a bad ending, that can be achieved by having a bad relationship with a certain character. As of now, it's a bit easier to achieve than intended. As I said higher, I'm reworking this scene to be more forgiving. So if that concerns you, you can try the game on the next update.
What a great work...intro's interesting...( At first I thought that it was a isekai thingy but it's not ....for me it's good because that intro is probably overuse ...
your intro is great )+ Great artwork + Great Story with lots of twist = one of the best visual novel I've seen / played.. keep up the good work.... ^_^.
I am not getting bad endings but I do have some things greyed out. Early on, greeting Helen with a kiss, (pretty early in the game) or later the jealous Liz telling me to prove that i love her. (can't undress) All of the more daring items are greyed out.
Perhaps in the future we can add a points tracker. So I can see how many points I have. And then I'm the ones that could be greyed out it would say (requires x points) at the end.
is there a way to easily access pages above 30+? Im tryna see every ending but I'm also a chronic saver, other than that this game has been great to play during family bonding sessions
Omg so so good 😻 love the story so far and many parts just had me roflmao... Great work! Played on Google Pixel 4a (5G) and other than text size being a little small worked great.
If you have android 11, it might be a reason, because it wasn't tested on the 11th before. But otherwise, I have no idea. Never encountered this problem among the players, sorry.
A little heartbreaking to reach the end of the content for the current update VN aren't always captivating like this so the wait for the next update is definitely going to be suspenseful!
Regarding the half release issues, maybe it'd be possible to set up some kind of php login server to embed in the alpha releases? I'd hate to see such a promising developer lack the revenue to keep up such a wonderful passion project.
Anyways, absolutely loved the game and would 100% recommend, my only suggestion is actually for the players... If your device can, then go to your dev settings in your phone settings and force gpu rendering as well as 4xMSAA it might help to really improve the animations for VN's on mobile devices
Anybody else having problems with black screens during the NSFW Scenes. It is a problem I have been having with multiply renpy games as of late, even when downloaded from different sources as well as installing to different drives the problem isn't alleviated. Even if you yourself don't know how to fix if you could at least point in me the direction I need to go to get it fixed that would be great.
just to be sure, does the game finish right after liz's mom shows up for everybody? or is it just me? maybe i picked the wrong choice somewhere along the story idk i NEED ANSWERS :)
That's the end of 0.4 update, the current one is 0.5.
If you see a message that you rejected someone, then you will either need to pick the Shinigami help option or replay certain scenes to pick every girl, from your save files.
To the creator of this beautiful story driven game. You are awesome! At the moment I am pretty broke, but trust me, once I get the chance to buy your game full price I will do it! And support you on Patron too, of course. The little change in eye and lip movement are incredible and really add a lot to the characters. Thanks for giving me such a great time! Love love!
i want to know what's the name of the save file so i can keep it and delete the game at the moment and install it after an update(please tell it to me) thanks
This is the reply I've been waiting for, yessssss finally a game similar to the pc version, no more injustice to the androids, what a truly wonderful creation, thank you.
Oooff. What a cliff hanger. Now I can't wait for the next update. Lol.. keep up the great work, this is turning out to be a very interesting story. Not your typical one but twists and turns. It's great!
Oh my gosh the game is short but the music and story is great. I didn't encounter any problems when i played this on my android but the music is really great it matches with whatever the situation is. You can either be a romantic or lewd and for me the game is a bit of a slow-burn. I hope this game gets a lot of support because it's really good.
Why did shinigami sent me back in the menu? Did i pick the wrong choices? Do i have to restart? Cause im not playing this from the very beginning AGAIN.
You need to have more love points with Shinigami. And they depend on corruption points. Or if you're playing only the love points route, you need to have at least 2 love points with Shinigami.
Having an issue with installing the android version. Whenever I attempt to install it, it just says "app not installed". Anyone else having this issue?
Is anyone else having an issue with downloading new version? Every time I try - and been trying since yesterday - get a message from google drive that 'too many people have downloaded this recently'. I wasn't too bothered the first few times, since new update ofc lots of people will download, but this is starting to get rather irritating tbh.
Idk what this error is, never seen it before, but I've added Mega links to the full version here. Until itchio will update my maximum file sizes. Then I will upload update directly on this site.
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is it intentional that we are forced to chose the second option there?
No, her point is to low
i see. maybe because i guessed 2 cosplays wrong? its kinda sad that the MC started rejecting her after that. she was my favorite girl :-(
edit: oh now it seams i get another chance :)
The cosplays were from actual games. In the case you didn't know.
Dude you are legendary, what a master piece eventhough its still under development. Amazing story , details of all the character (except MC's dick dude that looks like rubber)other than that ur game is so perfect not like porn and some other game with no story and strange character sex scenes
Haha, thank you ^^
Hi! Thank you so much for this wonderful game! Very very detailed and well written. Loved it every second of it. Please take your time man, you are doing an awesome job! Thank you!!
<3
hello,
i finished game and i can tell, that i love it so much. I love your work and i loved it from beginning to the end of this version.
Story is amazing written, i enjoyed every dialogue and characters too.
I can´t lie, i fell in love with Sophie haha. She is very cute and she love japanese culture. I loved scenes with her especially in karaoke bar and when she sang a song haha. I enjoyed scene, when i had to guess costumes from games. I was suprised, that Dead or Alive was mentioned there. ( Sophie was so cute as Maria Rose hahaha. ) It would be nice if there was more, that "little" games.
I can tell, that there is beautiful environment. I like that "japanese" style. You chose very well. There are so many beautiful things. Characters and their facial expresions and their temperament and differences. I think, characters are shown as real persons with their problems and i appreciate that so much.
When i played it for first time, Shinigami killed me and i asked myself: what did ? I started to play it again and then, she did not kill me. This is what is amazing at your work. It made me play again and change somenthing.
I have in my head so many things, what i want to tell you, but i don´t want to bore you haha. But i can thank you for the best MURMUR. You have talent to write beautiful story. Thank you again.
Thank you, I'm glad you liked my game to such extent <3
I have finished what there is of the story two days ago and, this is such a weeb thing to say but, I'm in love with Shinigami. In the sense that she will randomly pop in my mind many times a day and thinking about her feels so good. I don't recall having ever felt "in love" for a fictional character. She was extremely hot before, but her apology to Sophie and what it entails for the future of the story gave depth to everything that she ever does and it made me love her.
I'm awed at how you can make her seem so powerful, attractive, dominant, yet wholly realistic with a good heart that can subtly get hurt.
I'm also eager to see more of the power games between Kate, Helen and Liz.
Also, Sophie absolutely, brutally melted my heart! Which makes me feel guilty for gushing over Shinigami like that. Now I understand how useful and powerful a good date can be...
A small detail that caught my attention and that I like very much is that sometimes the characters' facial expressions are considered sufficient for an answer, and they truly are. Those expressions are also well made throughout the story. I appreciate the effort you have put on those.
I came to write all this because I had been pacing around, wondering how anyone can write characters that could cause such deep feelings as Shinigami and Sophie have done for me. What someone has to be like to be able to write these characters. I don't think I should expect an answer to that and my intention is only to show my appreciation for your work.
You are an amazing writer. Thank you so much.
I have also been wondering if there are any other stories you have written and wouldn't mind sharing!
Hello, and thank you very much for your kind words. They even made me tear up a little, haha. It was heartwarming to read. I had the experience of falling for a character from a visual novel, it was Lilly from Katawa Shoujo, so I think I understand you on this. And I'm glad that you liked my game to such an extent ^^
I don't really think I'm a good writer, to be honest, I'm just doing what I like. And trying to make characters I would like to tell a story about. I'm not a professional by any means, so I don't have any secrets or anything. And it's my first project like this, so I can't give you more for now, haha ^^"
And sadly work on the game takes a long time, since I'm trying my best to write, it's a slow process, just as rendering every line of text is. But you can always look for the progress at my patreon in the about section, or on my discord. And hopefully, you won't be disappointed with further updates~
Thank you again for your wholehearted message. Such feedback makes it all worth it.
That's funny, because your work reminded me of Katawa Shoujo. :) A friend recommended it to me and I expected absolutely nothing, and though I ended up caring for many of the characters, what struck me the most was that it gave me a desire to live.
Murmur reminds me of Katawa Shoujo because it has been giving me that same desire to live. I hope it doesn't sound bad, it's just like Sophie sort of said, I have a need to escape the mundane.
I actually didn't even consider that this could be your first project.
I will obviously be following your progress and waiting for updates! Cheers!
is there a significant difference between the compressed 1GB file and the full 4.1GB file?
The quality of images is different.
So I went back to play some of the previous parts, and I noticed that the office sex scene with Shinigami is now replaced with the blowjob scene now? Do the scenes vary based on the previous meeting choice of whether he answers he thinks she's beautiful or if he loves her? Or is it just the blowjob scene now?
There are 3 different outcomes for that scene based on your choices, mostly how many lewd points you have with other girls.
Ohhh, ok, interesting, thanks
Oh, just out of curiosity, what is the third scene besides the two I mentioned?
The third option is when she just stops because you have fewer lewd points than she wanted. BJ scene is the best outcome in this case.
Damn I feel the pain of the people waiting for updates but greatness takes time to develop. Play other VNs or just watch porn until then lol
When will the new update be around? Or when?
When I'm done working on it.
Gottem
Noooo, the game is soo good an dit just cut off like that with a plot twist.... Either way this game is very good and I hope you keep working on it! I have met many game creator who gave up on their project. I don't want this to happen here. Looking foward to the next update!
Thank you! It takes pretty long to do something decent, but I'm working on it!
When is Next Update? Bought game from Itch.io and Love the game But 3 Months and No Up date??
You can keep track of how progress is going on my patreon.
Ok
have This Game Breast Expansion?
When the next update vro? It's been 3 months
When it will be ready. You can always see the progress bar at my patreon.
Ahh yes no ntr me likey
Ah yes, I couldn't tell just by reading your username. Me likey
My 5 Star Review:
As a lesbian I was a little bit sceptic (of course) as the sex scenes mainly are about male on female.
But what could I say? I never thought I'd find so many interesting and different female protagonists in this game. They all have their stories and different to many other games of this genre. And for a change it is interesting to see that there are (finally) different sizes of boobs. This is one thing absolutely lacking in most other games.
I also think it was a very good decision to explain what happened to the main protagonist and also to give him special powers that explain why everyone around him gets so horny. It adds a nice touch and a bit of immersion and credibility to the story. I can't wait for the next free release. :)
Thank you, I'm working on it ^^
WTF THE MF SHINIGAMI KILLED ME
Seems like you haven't had enough love points with her. But I will rework that scene to be more forgiving in the next update.
please do i was doing so well
Could you explain a bit better? You say one of the characters kills you and ends your game ? Was thinking of trying this, but thats a little worrisome.
There is a bad ending, that can be achieved by having a bad relationship with a certain character. As of now, it's a bit easier to achieve than intended. As I said higher, I'm reworking this scene to be more forgiving. So if that concerns you, you can try the game on the next update.
What a great work...intro's interesting...( At first I thought that it was a isekai thingy but it's not ....for me it's good because that intro is probably overuse ...
your intro is great )+ Great artwork + Great Story with lots of twist = one of the best visual novel I've seen / played.. keep up the good work.... ^_^.
Ty, ty (°◡° )
Bro you are awasome. Keep up the great work!
Thank you <3
Has the game finished ?
In development, just like 0.5 suggests which is less than 1.0
İ keep getting bad endings what İ am doing wrong and why some options greyed out?
You probably have low love/lewd points count, with Shinigami especially
How can İ increase it though İ got no chance for the most part
Doing different choices
I am not getting bad endings but I do have some things greyed out. Early on, greeting Helen with a kiss, (pretty early in the game) or later the jealous Liz telling me to prove that i love her. (can't undress) All of the more daring items are greyed out.
You need a certain amount of points to unlock choices
Perhaps in the future we can add a points tracker. So I can see how many points I have. And then I'm the ones that could be greyed out it would say (requires x points) at the end.
is there a way to easily access pages above 30+? Im tryna see every ending but I'm also a chronic saver, other than that this game has been great to play during family bonding sessions
Just press the arrow on the right side of the number 30 and you will get to endless pages of saves.
0.5 ending feels like I've stepped into a rancor's den naked with my bare hands as sole weapon. And then I poked the rancor because I was bored.
I like the game though, and I look forward to the next updates.
Edit: The bit with Helen before that is no doubt my favorite, heh.
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is pregnancy going to be a thing in a future update?? just got this and looking forward to playing the current versio
If it will, then for the last parts of the game
This game is very good, I will wait for the update for the next chapter :)
I'm working on it ^^
Omg so so good 😻 love the story so far and many parts just had me roflmao... Great work! Played on Google Pixel 4a (5G) and other than text size being a little small worked great.
Glad you liked it
Doesn't start on Android sadly
What phone do you have?
Galaxy s9 plus i dont know why but all it does is showing me the start screen stretched bigger than my screen but nothing happens
If you have android 11, it might be a reason, because it wasn't tested on the 11th before. But otherwise, I have no idea. Never encountered this problem among the players, sorry.
Aint got android 11 but no problem i'll try to fix this somehow
Crazy awesome game
A little heartbreaking to reach the end of the content for the current update VN aren't always captivating like this so the wait for the next update is definitely going to be suspenseful!
Regarding the half release issues, maybe it'd be possible to set up some kind of php login server to embed in the alpha releases? I'd hate to see such a promising developer lack the revenue to keep up such a wonderful passion project.
Anyways, absolutely loved the game and would 100% recommend, my only suggestion is actually for the players... If your device can, then go to your dev settings in your phone settings and force gpu rendering as well as 4xMSAA it might help to really improve the animations for VN's on mobile devices
Thank you ^^
Are the Honey Select character cards available somewhere?
No, I'm not sharing cards anywhere.
Anybody else having problems with black screens during the NSFW Scenes. It is a problem I have been having with multiply renpy games as of late, even when downloaded from different sources as well as installing to different drives the problem isn't alleviated. Even if you yourself don't know how to fix if you could at least point in me the direction I need to go to get it fixed that would be great.
just to be sure, does the game finish right after liz's mom shows up for everybody? or is it just me? maybe i picked the wrong choice somewhere along the story idk i NEED ANSWERS :)
That's the end of 0.4 update, the current one is 0.5.
If you see a message that you rejected someone, then you will either need to pick the Shinigami help option or replay certain scenes to pick every girl, from your save files.
Nvm i figured it out, thanks for the help tho, really enjoying this game so far :)
To the creator of this beautiful story driven game. You are awesome! At the moment I am pretty broke, but trust me, once I get the chance to buy your game full price I will do it! And support you on Patron too, of course. The little change in eye and lip movement are incredible and really add a lot to the characters. Thanks for giving me such a great time! Love love!
Thank you for enjoying it ^^
i want to know what's the name of the save file so i can keep it and delete the game at the moment and install it after an update(please tell it to me) thanks
If you're using android then "Android/data/RenPy/MurMur-#numbers".
If you're on PC then you don't have to bother, it's in your AppData.
Just played this yesterday. Love the story so far!
is there any difference between pc version and android version? or are both identical?
No difference. Android version made for android users to play.
This is the reply I've been waiting for, yessssss finally a game similar to the pc version, no more injustice to the androids, what a truly wonderful creation, thank you.
Look up JoiPlay on the appstore and thank me later:D
Oooff. What a cliff hanger. Now I can't wait for the next update. Lol.. keep up the great work, this is turning out to be a very interesting story. Not your typical one but twists and turns. It's great!
Oh my gosh the game is short but the music and story is great. I didn't encounter any problems when i played this on my android but the music is really great it matches with whatever the situation is. You can either be a romantic or lewd and for me the game is a bit of a slow-burn. I hope this game gets a lot of support because it's really good.
Why did shinigami sent me back in the menu? Did i pick the wrong choices? Do i have to restart? Cause im not playing this from the very beginning AGAIN.
You can look for walkthroughs, and use your previous saves.
Well about that, the only save i have is with the first time meeting sophie
The shinigami send me back to the main menu. What did i do wrong?
You need to have more love points with Shinigami. And they depend on corruption points. Or if you're playing only the love points route, you need to have at least 2 love points with Shinigami.
It lives! Lets go!
Having an issue with installing the android version. Whenever I attempt to install it, it just says "app not installed". Anyone else having this issue?
What's your android version?
Is anyone else having an issue with downloading new version? Every time I try - and been trying since yesterday - get a message from google drive that 'too many people have downloaded this recently'. I wasn't too bothered the first few times, since new update ofc lots of people will download, but this is starting to get rather irritating tbh.
Idk what this error is, never seen it before, but I've added Mega links to the full version here. Until itchio will update my maximum file sizes. Then I will upload update directly on this site.
Mega seems to work fine, thanks for that. Was getting annoyed with that message :)